Five detailed descriptions of 800-word compositions

The narrative of 1.800 words must have five detailed descriptions. As the saying goes, "Taishan does not refuse fine soil, so it can become high; Rivers and seas do not choose trickle, so they can be deep. " 360 lines, no matter what you do, the details determine success or failure!

What are the details? It's those seemingly ordinary but important things. The success or failure of a thing is often the result of some small things. Small things often play an important role. A detail can lead you to your destination, or you can suffer failure. Everything is made up of countless small details, and every detail is very important. Like a chain, there are countless iron rings. No matter which hoop is broken, the whole chain is useless.

"Don't be a little good, don't be a little evil." This was left by Liu Bei to his son. It is said that the success or failure of things in the world often lies in the details. Who would have thought it would be the details that make you stand out and the details that make you lose?

Why do apples fall from trees? Newton therefore discovered the law of universal gravitation; Why does the lid jump off when the water boils? Watt therefore invented the steam engine ... these things are perfectly normal in our eyes, but those scientists can find the details we ignore. Which of those great inventions and discoveries was not discovered by their careful observation of the details of life? Different people will find different details about the same thing in their eyes. Details are everywhere in life. Only those who are good at discovering details can become strong in life.

"Hemu was born in a milli; Nine-story platform, starting with tired soil; A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. " It can be seen that any success is inseparable from the details. A chain, the weakest link determines its strength; A barrel, the lowest place determines its capacity; And a person's worst personality determines its development!

There are many people who want to do great things in China today, but too few people are willing to do small things. It should be noted that great achievements are fascinating, but they are made up of many inconspicuous details. Only by doing every detail well can we achieve great things. We can only succeed if we change our impetuous and unsophisticated habits, be down-to-earth, start with small things and pay attention to details.

But attention to detail is not that simple. It needs you to pay attention to them all the time, because the details will not be in front of you, it needs you to discover, to discover. So, please remember: details determine success or failure. Only by grasping every detail can we get closer to success!

A 2.800-word narrative must have five details. On the day when I wanted to draw details, my heart was shocked.

The rain outside the window is sparse, and I look at the gloomy sky in the faint rain and fog. A drop of rain turns biological dust into wisps of light smoke, which blend and flow in the hazy drizzle. In the faint smoke, the most sincere and flawless touch buried in the bottom of my heart emerges in front of me like a movie.

It was a gloomy rainy day, and all the pedestrians in the street hurried away. The willows on the roadside drooped with sparse leaves and bowed their heads, which seemed insignificant in the biting rain. I stood under the eaves to shelter from the rain and stared at the gray sky quietly.

Suddenly, a beggar in rags caught my eye. He was wearing patched rags, and his unkempt hair was soaked by the rain. His black eyes are full of wrinkles, and his thin and rough face after the world is like a desolate Gobi, lifeless. Her bare feet were bruised and she limped on the cold road. It's like

He suddenly stopped and looked down-it was an old and shriveled can, which clicked in the wind and quietly stuck on the smooth and shiny road. He was dazed, paused, gradually bent his thin back, stretched out his withered hand like a branch, and picked it up carefully. He clutched the jar tightly in his hand. He walked forward seriously. He saw the dustbin and his eyes showed relief. He gently and solemnly put it in the dustbin, and then dragged his thin body with satisfaction and gradually disappeared into the hazy rain curtain.

The air seemed to solidify, and my mind was suddenly shocked. Looking at the incomparably tall body and the incomparably pure mind, tears gradually filled my eyes, full of eternal admiration and emotion.

That day, my heart was shocked. My life has also been shocked. He, a beggar in the rain, will always be a bright light in my heart. His heart is more like the rising sun that shines forever, rising bit by bit and illuminating my heart.

3. The composition describes 800 words in detail, and the description process does not exceed 5 minutes. Detail description is the golden key to make the characters alive.

"Character" is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, neither personalized nor vivid, and the whole article appears dry, boring and lacking in appeal. If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details.

Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images. Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives, characters will lose their flesh and blood, and there are no details. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene." As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances."

The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details. In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. " The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger its indisputable", and then think deeply about the national inferiority?

Not only China writers, but also foreign writers. For example, Balzac's Eugenie Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gilded cross to his lips and asked him to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture and tried to hold the cross in his hand, which cost him his life." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the detailed description that makes the characters lifelike, and the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.

Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical. It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life. Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent". In Dublin's dark coffee room, Joyce looked coldly at wandering prostitutes, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses, which shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever. Capture the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine!

4. About the details of the 800-word composition, "If you don't accumulate steps, you won't be Fiona Fang; Without a trickle, you can't become a river. " Throughout the ages, details often determine the fate of a person, a group or even a country. In life, a small detail can also determine your personality and habits.

Soviet astronaut Gagarin stood out from many candidates, becoming the first person in the world to go into space and the first person to see the whole picture of the earth from the universe. Gagarin became the first man in space because he had to take off his shoes before entering the cabin, and other astronauts ignored this detail. It can be seen that a small detail determines a person's fate. "Success has details, and failure has details." In life, I often ignore the details. Although these details have not caused great disasters, they have also left me a profound lesson. Yesterday, I bought a new ecological fish tank at home. I can't wait to see the growth of aquatic plants in the fish tank, and I can't help but speed up my homework. When I finished copying new words, because I didn't see the strokes of the word "D" in the book, I mistakenly wrote the word "Japan" on the head of the word "D", which led to a "good" in my homework and was awarded by informed criticism.

There was once a king of England, Richard, who lost his throne because of a few small nails in a desperate battle with his opponent, Henry, Earl of Richie. In the morning before the decisive battle, if Richard III could instruct his groom to take every nail seriously; Before the decisive battle, if Richard III could personally check whether the horse nail was nailed, it would not have caused such disastrous consequences. It can be seen that a small detail not only determines the fate of an individual, but also often determines the fate of a country. It also happened in my class: since the school launched the evaluation of "Healthy Mobile Red Flag", my class was awarded the honorary title of "Satellite Star" almost every week. One day, however, the "healthy flowing red flag" missed our class because we ignored a piece of waste paper in the lawn when cleaning the big health area. 1% negligence may lead to 100% failure.

"Taishan does not refuse fine soil, so it can become high; Details are crucial to success, and the meaning of an article will change because of a word or a word; Tall buildings will collapse because of a section of steel bars; The ship will be destroyed because of a part; Scientists will cause the spacecraft to deviate from the orbit because of a decimal point ... details! Details! Details! Let us always remember that "details make great things!" "

Wang Jie: Wang Jie always eats like a lady, even though he has a steamed stuffed bun in his hand.

Look! Wang Jie gently touched the bottom of the steamed stuffed bun with her three white and round fingers, smiled and talked to the opposite person, nibbling like a chicken pecking rice. It took a long time to wipe out a steamed stuffed bun that was not too big. Perhaps feeling a little thirsty, she slowly picked up the toilet paper put aside, wiped the fingertips of three fingers who had just taken the steamed stuffed bun, then held the rim of the bowl with both hands, cocked her little finger and ring finger, slightly opened her red lips and took a sip slowly.

Feeling my eyes, Wang Jie turned around, gave me a slight smile, and put the bowl back carefully. After eating slowly for a while, she was the last in the class, but she was in no hurry. She took out a new paper towel and wiped her mouth, then slowly left with a plate.

Zhang Hong: If Wang Jie is a lady, then Zhang Hong is a chivalrous woman. Every time Zhang Hong eats, it's like a war. After the second delay, he seems to be "game over".

Although the school steamed bread is not big, it is not small, but the steamed bread in Zhang Hong is half as big as it. The spoon doesn't stop, and the spoon is sent to the mouth. My cheeks are full of food and I tremble from time to time. Besides, the two apples on my cheek look a bit like squirrels eating.

Because you are in a hurry to eat, you will inevitably choke. Zhang Hong is always busy pouring bowls into his mouth with one hand, and punching his chest with the other hand. After a gust of wind swept the clouds away, the plate was clean, leaving only some soup. After eating, Zhang Hong strode away eagerly with a plate.

Grade three: Gopher Head (Wu) (This article comes from the original composition library:).

6. I like the idiom "Father loves mountains" best. Some people say that my father loves books because he is heavy. Some people say that fatherly love is the sea, because it is deep and wide; Some people say that fatherly love is a lily because it is warm, but I want to say that fatherly love is like a mountain! My father is a farmer to the core.

He has no profound culture, no rich income, only a kind heart and only a mountain of love for his children. In my impression, my father is always unsmiling and almost harsh.

When other people's children were still listening to stories in their father's arms, I began to read and write under his supervision; While other people's children are enjoying their father's care, I have already started washing socks and cleaning the room. Sometimes, I always wonder if my father really loves me or if I am not his own. It was not until that year that I really completely denied my absurd idea.

I just entered the third grade of primary school that year. Once I took money to the store to buy a pen. Maybe it was the negligence of the aunt in the shop. After she took the pen I wanted, she forgot to collect the money and took something from others.

I looked at the money in my hand and a strange idea flashed through my mind. I slipped out of the shop quickly with a pen. When I got home, I was happy to show off my "cleverness" to my sister. Suddenly, with a bang, I felt burning pain on my face, and my father's five fingerprints were clearly printed on my face.

I looked at my father in panic and said nothing. Tears of disappointment welled up in my eyes. At that moment, I only felt endless hatred for my father and ran into my room. I don't know how long it took, but my father stood at the door and whispered to me, "Will you return the money to others tomorrow?" I can give you anything you want, but I just can't steal it! "Say that finish, turned around and slowly bent down to go out.

I suddenly woke up like a dream, only to understand my father's good intentions. From then on, I learned to be honest.

With the growth of age, my father's requirements for me are getting higher and higher. Therefore, after I violated school discipline or made mistakes, my father always refused to forgive me, which made me always uneasy.

However, when I encounter difficulties in my study, my father always patiently tells me to be patient, careful and earnest. When I encountered setbacks in my life, my father warned me that "failure is the mother of success" and "how can I see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain". Under my father's inculcation, I become mature and strong day by day! On the eve of the senior high school entrance examination, when I told my father the news of the upcoming senior high school entrance examination, my father didn't seem so strict as before, but said calmly, "The senior high school entrance examination is a major event in your life. You must have confidence in yourself and believe that your efforts will eventually pay off! " The faint words, without any color, stirred ripples in my heart, showing my father's deep love for me! Now, I am writing my new life with the pen in my hand! In the process of maturing day by day, I have deeply realized.

7. The details describe the old man selling hemp balls in 800 words.

Selling hemp balls, selling hemp balls ... "This damn peddling woke me up from my dream again. Needless to say, it's half past five, and it's still half an hour before I should get up.

Somehow, just recently, there was an old man selling hemp balls in our family. He starts selling at 5: 30 every day, whether on weekdays or weekends. Whether it is sunny, windy or rainy, it will not give in. Every day, he disturbs my good dreams. I should get up at six o'clock. At this time, he woke me up and made me afraid to sleep. When I got up, I didn't think of it. I had to toss and turn in bed and wasted half an hour, not to mention how uncomfortable it was. For this reason, I hate this hemp ball very much, and I get a headache and upset when I hear this peddling. I don't know how many times I scolded him in my heart.

However, until one day, my opinion of this old man selling hemp balls suddenly changed.

It was a sunny Sunday morning, and I was woken up by the hateful peddling as usual. I covered my head tightly with a quilt and didn't want to mention how cruel I was to the old man. It's hateful to have such a rest day and not let people sleep late. Suddenly, amid the harsh hawking, there came the crowing of larks, which was crisp and sweet, and my heart could not help moving. I can't sleep anyway. I might as well go out and see the scenery in the morning, see what kind of old man this is and what kind of craftsmanship he has, just lift the quilt and put it on quickly.

I took some change and walked out of the house. Hey, it's a nice day today. The sky is blue and the sun is shining, and my heart suddenly opens up. I followed the hawking to find the old man selling hemp balls, and I saw an old man surrounded by a large group of children from a distance. I thought, no wonder peddling comes every day, business is good. I took a few quick steps.

8. Composition describing the details of the characters, 800 words of my father.

My black hair is mixed with a few white hairs. My face is a little black, but my eyes are bright. That's my father.

Dad is forty years old, but he is still childlike.

When I learned to play yo-yo by accident in the fourth grade, I bought one and finished my homework and went home to play.

At this time, my father saw that I was having such a good time and even wanted to give it a try. He said to me, "Son, lend your father a play." So, I handed the yo-yo to my father. Dad couldn't play at first, and the ball was always out of control. He didn't learn it after a long time. Dad looked worried, so I said to him, "Wait until the yo-yo slides to the bottom, and then pull it up." Dad tried several times and learned several tricks such as "sleeping" and "walking the dog"!

The more dad plays, the more addicted he becomes. The more he played, the more interested he became. He doesn't want to put it down for the time being. Mom looked at dad's playful look and said, "It's 40 years old, and my son is almost 12 years old, but he still looks like an old urchin!" !

""Ha ha ... "There was a burst of happy laughter at home.

Dad not only has a childlike innocence, but also takes his work seriously.

A few days ago, my father installed a computer in his office, which contained many games!

I really want to have fun. It happened that my dad was going to the office today, so I quickly asked my dad for permission. Unexpectedly, he said to me sternly, "How did you learn to take advantage of the public at an early age?" I ran into my room angrily, slammed the door hard and shouted at my father's back: "stubborn old man!" "

"I didn't expect my father to never come back after he left, so I had to go to bed.

I woke up in the middle of the night and went to the toilet. I saw the light in the study on. It turned out that my father was writing materials, and the wastebasket beside the desk was full of sweat. He found me, looked at my bloodshot eyes and said, "Hurry to sleep, there will be a class tomorrow." I know my father's stubborn temper, so I have to say, "Dad, go to sleep quickly." I went to bed.

However, I can't sleep for a long time. The moon, walking in the sky, the stars, blinking naughtily, while my father is still writing that material.

I'm proud that I have a conscientious "child's play" father.

9. I urgently need a detailed composition. The northwest wind roared and the snow on the road rolled.

Although it is early spring, the weather is still very cold. She, leaning against a poplar tree at the school gate, was as motionless as snow sculpture.

The sudden ringing of the bell. Her dim eyes sparkled with longing.

A group of children, singing, walked out of the school gate without her son; Another group of children talked and laughed and set foot on the road without their son ... The figure was sparse, scattered and gone. The creaking iron gate locked the silent campus.

She was dizzy and could hardly stand up. She stumbled over and held her hands tightly on the iron fence. "For what?" An old man in a message came out with a democratic face.

"bright! My little light! " Like breathing, like crying. "School is over."

"Know the way ..." She murmured in a low voice with glassy eyes, lowered her head feebly, slowly released her hand, and took out a candy wrapped tightly with body temperature from the pocket of a long-breasted cotton-padded jacket: "Uncle, please ... give it to the child." "What's your name?" "Wang Xiaoliang."

"What grade and class?" "Today, just after my eighth birthday." "I asked what grade and class."

The old man is getting impatient. "Oh ... maybe ..." She shook her head again.

The old man looked at the neurotic woman strangely. "Who the hell are you?" What he answered was the tears in his eyes and the back that hobbled away. The old man sighed in confusion and seemed to understand something.

In the afternoon, this bag of candy finally reached Wang Xiaoliang in Class Two, Grade Two. The child was very surprised. I haven't tasted this favorite toffee for a long time.

His little hand rubbed his clothes back and forth, thought about it, and respectfully sent one to each child, two to his good friends and five to his teacher. "Eat!" He shouted and jumped happily, even throwing off the prostitute with his mouth open.

The students shared the joy with him in the laughter of hip-hop. Only the teacher quietly turned around ... After school, Xiao Liang was still immersed in joy and skipped home. Suddenly, he stopped and felt the candy left in his pocket, and a sense of fear came upon him.

He seemed to see it again: now mother raised her slender eyebrows and whispered something in her father's ear. Dad grabbed a stick and came up to him angrily. He looked blankly, not knowing what to do.

He patted his pocket hard, but it was bulging at first sight. He lowered his head, sucked his fingers, thought for a long time, and looked around. He quickly buried the sugar in the snowdrift by the side of the road and specially inserted a small stick.

Xiao Liang slept soundly and sweetly that night. He dreamed that his old mother came back with a smile, and now her mother is hanging her head and leaving. I'm so happy.

Next day, Xiao got up early. As usual, he emptied and rinsed the bedpans of the whole family first, then washed rice, added water, poked fire, sat in the pan, and then slipped out with a cold steamed bread on his back.

He wants to finish his candy quickly. I don't want to. Overnight, the ground temperature rose, the ice and snow melted, syrup and snow water mixed together and penetrated into the earth.

On the wet ground, there are some crumpled candy paper and small sticks as marks. Xiao Liang blinked and couldn't help rolling down tears.

He squatted on the ground sadly and looked blankly. After a while, I couldn't help reaching out my chapped little finger, picking up some dirt and putting it on the tip of my tongue-he smiled again: that dirt, My Sweetie's.

10. Composition "Details" 800 words In life, details are everywhere. The fastening and loosening of a button on a suit, whoever hangs up first and sits left and right, all show a kind of grace and self-restraint. Similarly, the details in the narrative text, with a little dyeing, can also shine with exquisite beauty.

First of all, use details to describe and enrich the theme.

Mr. Lu Xun once commented on the details: "Looking closely at a carved aperture and a painting foundation, though small, the income is clearer, and then it is extended to all, and it feels more and more practical." If the details can be processed and refined according to the needs of the theme, the significance will be more abundant. For example, as written in Medicine, human blood steamed bread changed from bright red to black, and finally, "there was a white gas in the burnt skin, and the white gas dispersed, which was two halves of white flour steamed bread". It not only implies the process of Yu Xia from being killed to being eaten, but also implies the profound meaning that the revolutionary's blood was wasted because of the ignorance and numbness of the masses.

For another example, in Kong Yiji, the hotel owner repeatedly said "Kong Yiji still owes nineteen dollars". This language detail not only shows the low position of Confucius in people's minds, but also vividly depicts the social world at that time.

Secondly, the characters are portrayed through detailed description.

A successful detailed description, like a wonderful close-up, can play a role in amplification and expansion, and can

Show the most essential part of the character's spiritual world and highlight the character's soul. For example, in The Biography of Were Su Wu, it was repeatedly written that Su Wu was holding a "scepter":

"Holding festivals to send Xiongnu envoys", "Pasting sheep on the Han Festival" and "lying down, reeds fall down".

The Han Festival, originally an ordinary thing, has become the indomitable spiritual symbol of Su Wu after careful description and repeated rendering by the author.

Another example is Liu Qing's History of Entrepreneurship, which describes the details of Liang Shengbao paying for noodle soup:

He burped, took off the pin in his cotton-padded jacket pocket and took out a small red cloth bag. He carefully opened the red cloth bag and a layer of written paper on the dining table, then took out the pieced together RMB, took out a five-cent ticket and paid for the noodle soup.

A series of action details here show Liang Shengbao's cautious character, supplemented by "pin", "red bag" and "manuscript paper" can better show his frugality and carefulness.

Others, such as language details, the voice of "master" in "Hometown" evokes the hierarchical concept in his mind; Dress details, Kong Yiji's tattered gown shows his shabby and lofty; Looking closely at the details, Liu Hezhen revealed her inner kindness and sincerity with a smile.

Third, promote the development of the plot with the help of detailed description.

As we all know, public security personnel never let go of a clue when solving a case; Because from these details, you can often make a major breakthrough. As long as it is thrown properly, pebbles can also stir up a thousand waves. For example, the detail of "cold" in "Chen Huansheng goes to town" is carefully constructed by the author. Just think, if Chen doesn't catch a cold, it's hard to see Secretary Wu. Without secretary Wu, how can he live in a high-class room for five yuan a night? Without a superior room, how can Chen Can have a series of boring performances? How can he go back and show off to the villagers? Throughout the whole article, the detail of "cold" naturally sent Chen Huansheng lying on the bench in the station to the senior room, which not only showed the personality of the characters, but also made the story develop unexpectedly and even changed the fate of the characters.

Of course, don't add details at will. It needs careful excavation and design to shine brilliantly.