How to treat the plot design of the cartoon "Mountain Opening"?

"Mountain Opening" is a cross-border comic, and the protagonist begins his adventure in a cabin that is about to break up. In the face of this killing chaos, the protagonist has two choices: one is to rob his wife of money and food to be the king of carefree mountain, and the other is to give his blood to fight against heroes all over the world and strive for fame.

The plot design of this cartoon can be evaluated from the following aspects:

First of all, the plot is novel, with a small house as the background. The protagonist travels through troubled times and owns a small house that is about to break up. This setting is both innovative and full of suspense.

Secondly, the plot conflicts strongly, and the protagonist faces two choices, which makes the plot more exciting.

However, the dialect burden in the plot may make some viewers feel uncomfortable, which is also a place that needs to be improved.

Generally speaking, the plot design of Kaishan is innovative and attractive, but the language expression needs to be improved.