Appreciation of Chinese Text Multi-angle Detail Writing

Words are like elves. As long as you make good use of them, they will have unexpected effects. Therefore, whether speaking or writing, we should make good use of words. As long as you can use it accurately and flexibly, it will make your language glow with vitality and brilliance. Below, I will share a multi-angle appreciation of Chinese, hoping to help you!

A multi-angle detailed appreciation of Chinese text 1 text "Remember the Shuanglong Cave in Jinhua" is a travel note, mainly about "Shuanglong Cave". Especially in the fifth paragraph of the text, when writing "pores" from the outer hole to the inner hole, the author writes "pores" very specifically from different angles.

Let's start with the situation of the ship: first, explain that this hole can only accommodate the next ship. Then he wrote, "What about a boat? Two people lie on their backs side by side, just right, there is no room for a third person. It is such a boat. " If the author only says "pores are very small", it is very abstract, making it impossible to imagine what it looks like; Only such a boat can write holes, so that the degree of holes can be concrete and influential.

First, write from the entrance and exit of the ship: In order to make the hole as big (wide) as the ship, the author further writes from the entrance and exit of the ship: "The two ends of the ship are tied with ropes, and the workers of the management office push into the inner hole and pull the rope inside, and the ship goes in; The worker at the outer hole pulled another rope and the boat came out. " Why can't the boat go in and out freely? Why should it be pulled with a rope? Because the "pores" are small, the boat will hit if it is a little crooked!

Thirdly, from the supine writing of "I": In order to make the pores as big (high) as the boat, the author once again talked about how to "lie" on the boat: "I lay on my back alone with curiosity, thinking that there was no place from the back of my head to my shoulders, hips and heels that didn't stick to the bottom of the boat, so I just said" ‘OK' "and the boat moved slowly." Take the supine demonstration of "I" to illustrate that the boat is small-the "pores" are small.

Fourth, write from the feeling of "I": Finally, the author also wrote his personal experience of entering the pores, so that everyone can realize the tiny pores: "The eyes are dim, but I can still feel the mountains on the left and right sides seem to be squeezing me. I also feel that if I raise my head a little, I will definitely break my forehead and scratch my nose. " When the author writes about the feeling of being there, the people we read will naturally feel there. "Porosity" left us a small, concrete and profound impression.

Porosity and Multi-angle Appreciation of Chinese Text The second Kong Yiji is a novel in Lu Xun's novel collection Scream, and it is also the hero of the novel. This novel is the second vernacular novel written by Lu Xun after Diary of a Madman before the May 4th Movement. This novel describes that Kong Yiji, as a scholar who has not been admitted to a scholar, lacks practical skills and only knows pedantic "learning" such as "how to write the word fennel in fennel beans". He lost his dignity as a man and became the object of ridicule in the pub "Xianheng Hotel". Later, his leg was broken because he stole books. According to the content of the novel, because his surname is Kong, others gave him a nickname, called "Kong Yiji", which comes from the semi-understood word "Shangdaren Kong Yiji" on red paper. The novel exposed some social problems at that time-the imperial examination system created a large number of scholars who only knew how to drill old paper piles and had no practical business skills. The novel portrays Kong Yiji as a ridiculous and pathetic figure at the bottom, exposing the indifference between people.

Kong Yiji is the second vernacular novel written by Lu Xun on the eve of the May 4th Movement after Diary of a Madman. This novel describes a scholar who has not been admitted to a scholar. He lost his dignity as a man and became the object of ridicule in the pub, thus exposing the social problems at that time.

(1) This novel chooses a unique angle, and is written in the tone of the first person "I", a boy of 12 years old, which makes the whole text authentic and has a strong appeal. "Children's words are unbridled", a boy of 12 years old, looks at all people and things without prejudice and scruples, so his writing is relatively free, which is convenient for expressing the author's cold and warm thoughts and feelings. I am both a bystander and a participant. From a child's point of view, he is a cartoon character who is extremely incongruous with his surroundings, writing about happiness and sadness, and it is more sad.

(2) At that time-1918 The feudal imperial examination system has been abolished, and the social environment in which Kong Yiji lived no longer exists. And the story of the characters can't be unfolded. Stories written 20 years ago can better express the theme, thus "attracting medical attention".

(3) The first two paragraphs describe the environment of the characters' activities-Xianheng Hotel, and then let the protagonist Kong Yiji appear. The advantages of this arrangement are: ① The characters move in a specific environment, and the story unfolds in a specific environment. In this way, the full text is compact in structure and concentrated in plot. (2) Such a snobbish, cold and hypocritical social environment renders a cold social atmosphere for us, which indicates the inevitability of the tragedy of the characters. Such a social environment with serious class opposition has laid a strong foundation for the appearance of Kong Yiji, a man who wears a "gown" and stands and drinks.

(4) What is written here is the situation of drinking countless times. The author takes several typical examples from life to write, which not only saves pen and ink, but also depicts the characters and expresses the theme. (5) If a paragraph is used to describe the death of Kong Yiji, it would be too plain and frank, leaving no room for readers to ponder. Then, the depth and breadth of the theme will be seriously affected.

White Goose is an article by the writer Feng Zikai. In the article "White Goose", the author focuses on the characteristics of white geese-arrogance. When I first brought this goose home, I left a preliminary impression of "arrogance" from its posture of "stretching its head and neck" and "looking around". Then, the whole article is guided by the transition section of "Goose's arrogance is more reflected in its cry, gait and eating", which describes the goose's "serious and solemn" tone, "grandstanding" gait, "three eyes and one board" and "careful eating" in detail. The author is good at using comparative methods to highlight the characteristics of geese. A series of contrasts are used, which are very vivid and make people feel that they can hear their voices and see their shapes.

In addition, the author is also good at using irony to express his feelings. For example, the author's love for geese can be seen by using seemingly derogatory words such as "our goose owner", "tired" and "full of pride".

Learning this article, first, leads us to experience interesting and lovely animals and feel the author's care and love for life; The second is to experience the author's characteristic writing method and feel the humorous language style of the author in reading.

The key point of learning this lesson is to understand how the text writes the arrogant characteristics of white geese. The difficulty in learning is to understand the author's love for geese from those seemingly derogatory words.