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-Appreciation of life

Life, a prose poem with profound philosophy, is insatiable and intriguing.

Life is a realistic topic as well as an abstract one. Taking "life" as the topic is a bit vague, and it is inevitable that there will be a feeling that the tiger eats the sky and its mouth is hard. Life, a pithy essay, is effortless, cleverly chooses the angle, explains the true meaning of life in simple terms. This angle is the result of the author's ingenuity, thick and thin.

Taking the importance of water to people and the sweetness of water as a metaphor, the author put pen to paper and made a breakthrough. In the first two paragraphs of the article, the different ways of drinking water, whether with a golden cup, a clay cup or a hand, are just different, and water is equally important to all people and any life. The third, fourth and fifth paragraphs of the essay, starting from the above meaning, write that only tired travelers, farmers and shepherds can appreciate the sweetness of water and the importance of water to life. In sharp contrast with the three, four and five stages of nature, it is pointed out that people who live comfortably without labor will never realize the sweetness and importance of water and the true happiness and happiness of life. The last natural passage reveals the true meaning of life from the topic of water: no matter who has never tasted hunger and thirst, he doesn't know what the real taste of life is.

In this article, the author did not fully explain the true meaning of life, but only touched it, making it far-reaching, which can be described as ringing the bell, lingering sound, mellow, meaningful and thought-provoking.

Yes, do you know anything about life? Do you know the real taste of life? Life is the unity of gain and loss, naivety and maturity, pain and happiness, shallowness and profundity, confusion and understanding, failure and success, suffering and happiness. If you want to have "gains", you must have "losses"; If you want to have happiness, you must have distress; If you want to be profound, you must experience shallowness and dare to reflect shallowness; If you want to understand the soul, you must experience confusion; If you want to succeed, you must experience and be brave enough to bear the failure; If you want to be truly happy, you must go through the hardships of life ―― this is the inspiration given to us by the article Life, and this is the philosophical thinking of error correction that the article Life shows us. Mencius said that "born in sorrow, died in happiness" is also the same truth.

Some articles make people never tire of reading, and life is such a good article.

(Meng Constitution 256652, Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail: Home Phone: 0543-35 10567.

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on one's pins

[Afghan] Ulfat

The same is the water in the stream, but some people hold it in gold cups and some people drink it in pottery cups; Those who have neither a golden cup nor a soilless cup have to drink it in their hands.

Water, there is no difference. The difference lies in the container for holding water. The difference between a king and a beggar lies in the "vessel".

Only thirsty people know the sweetness of water best, and tired travelers from the desert know the taste of water.

At noon in the scorching sun, farmers are busy farming and sweating like rain. Water is the most precious thing for them.

When a shepherd comes down from the mountain and is thirsty, if he can lie down by the river and take a long drink, he is the one who knows the sweetness of water best.

However, another person, although he sat in an armchair under the green forest tree, with a beautiful kettle beside him and drank several cups, still could not taste the sweetness of water.

Why? Because he didn't have the hunger and thirst of travelers and shepherds, and he didn't plow the fields at noon in the hot sun. So he won't feel like he needs water.

No matter who has never tasted hunger and thirst, he will never enjoy the sweetness of rice and water and don't know what life is like.

-from "bosom friend"

Simple and meaningful to shock people.

-Appreciation of two primary school textbooks

Sad plot. Two primary school textbooks tell a sad story: an illiterate mother traded a pair of silver bracelets for two useless books. This pair of silver bracelets was bought by "my mother fed two pigs in the dark early in the morning", which is the "fruit" of my mother's hard work and the "treasure" of my mother's "buried with her", showing its weight in my mother's heart. However, in order to make her son successful, the mother mysteriously "bought two college entrance examination books" with a silver bracelet with great sense of responsibility and sacredness, which shows her good intentions and love. However, in the face of the deceived and fooled mother, "I" can't tell the truth and make her sad, so I can only "endure tears and bear the burden of humiliation"

Look at the big picture from the small. The article is nothing more than two primary school textbooks and two useless books. It is these two books that make the mother deceived and resentful, but they fully reflect her ardent expectations for her son's future and her extraordinary concern for his fate. Two primary school textbooks, mother's fist love, mother's sunshine and rain, how pure, selfless, strong and heavy love! From this point of view, who can say that these are two useless books? It has become my motivation and my firm belief that I will never live up to my mother's expectations. It always urges me to study hard and finally get into college. The success of "I" admitted to the university has made my mother's ethereal spirit have a happy home, and turned two waste books into "precious books". Therefore, the mother got more comfort than "you must have silver (or gold) in your mouth to be buried". This sour "cause" and gratifying "fruit" seem to have internal relations and are intriguing.

The brushwork of keeping strange things in light. The language of this article is unpretentious, but meaningful and enduring. There are not many lyric sentences in the full text, but its connotation is regrettable. For example, the sentence "They say that as long as you use this book, you can get into the university bag" not only shows your mother's ignorance, but also shows your mother's love; "No" at the end of the article. I will never let her know the word ",which makes the article full of meaning;" The beautiful lie "Yes, Mom, Yes" makes readers feel excited and full of thoughts. After carefully tempered dialogue, the article is rich in concise and meaningful beauty. The structure of this article is ingenious. The application of flashback and interpolation saves a lot of pen and ink for the article, and the details are handled properly, which is worth trying to learn from.

(Meng Constitution 256652, Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail: Home Phone: 0543-35 10567.

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Two primary school textbooks

Yuan

One day, I cleaned the house and found two dusty primary school textbooks. Girlfriend said not to throw it away? I stroked the book for a long time without speaking.

My mother is a Miao woman who can't read. There is a custom in my hometown that when a woman dies, she must have silver (or gold) in her mouth before she can be buried. So in poor families, accumulating a small piece of silver ornaments has become an important part of family life. That year, my mother got up early and fed two pigs, and finally bought a pair of silver bracelets.

In the days before the college entrance examination, my mother often went to town to send me something to eat. She knows that I am busy reviewing, and I always come and go in a hurry. One day, my mother came back soon after she went, and dragged me to a secluded place: "Hey, I bought two books for your college entrance examination." "What?" My heart thumped. It is often heard that people outside the school often use fake books and materials to deceive parents in mountainous areas who don't know a word.

"People say that as long as you use this book, you will be admitted to the university bag."

"Where did you get the money?"

"The bracelet has been changed."

I grabbed the book and tore off the package, and a great despair suddenly struck me: two primary school textbooks cheated my mother of her bracelet!

"Hello, how are you?"

Looking at the expectant mother, I forced down my tears and humiliation: "yes, mom, yes!" "

Later, I was admitted to the university, and my mother was very happy, saying that two bracelets were well spent. She even wants to thank the person who sold her the book!

"Did your mother know the truth later?" The girlfriend asked.

"No. I will never let her know. "

(Selected from Shenzhen Youth No.8 1998)

Fishing is kind and beautiful.

-appreciation of "butterfly fishing"

"Butterfly fishing" is a poetic topic, and its content is a beautiful story, which can also be regarded as a beautiful fairy tale. The little girl in the article is fishing for beautiful butterflies, pure childlike innocence and beautiful hope.

The little girl "can't bear to see the sharp hook pierce the fish's mouth", let alone the "bleeding fish". What a precious heart of compassion and kindness. From the little girl, we see the innocence and loveliness of childlike innocence and the beauty and light of human nature. This is what the author yearns for: cherish life, regenerate soul and make our world better.

In fact, Butterfly Fish can be regarded as a fictional story, which gallops the author's rich imagination and vividly expresses his intention. Imagination is an important way of thinking and one of the most important writing abilities to write wonderful articles.

(256652 Meng Constitution of Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail:

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Fishing butterfly

Yi Ming

A neighbor has a 7-year-old girl who can't go fishing in the suburbs with her parents. She said it would hurt when she saw a bleeding fish. Therefore, she would rather stay at home alone every Saturday than go fishing with her parents.

Another weekend, I heard the little girl crying. It turned out that she still didn't want to go fishing and was spanked by her parents.

When I came downstairs after a nap, I saw the little girl waving a beautiful fishing rod on the balcony on the third floor of her house.

I walked over curiously and looked up and asked her what she was doing.

The little girl told me happily that she caught a butterfly and the bait was a beautiful rose.

In fact, she also likes fishing, but she can't bear to watch the sharp hook pierce the fish mouth and choose a flower as bait. Of course, this will only attract butterflies or bees, which has made her very satisfied.

I was moved by the beauty and gentleness of the little girl. You look up at her, and the sun shines obliquely on her face, looking as touching as a little angel.

I think beauty and kindness are the same thing.

-The original text is taken from New Youth.

Understatement of Jiangnan map

-Appreciation of Jiangnan

The prose poem Jiangnan is a beautiful article: the beauty lies in its poetic and picturesque artistic conception; Beauty lies in its witty remarks, which are meaningful. The combination of emotional beauty and linguistic beauty has become the unique style of this article. Jiangnan is a beautiful picture of Jiangnan water town, which is fascinating to read.

Taking Jiangnan as the topic, it is difficult to write: the vast Jiangnan has too many landscapes and customs to write, and how to write and choose the angle is quite painstaking. In this paper, the unique region of "Jiangnan Water Town" is appropriately selected, and the waterscape and characters are outlined with stretched and concise pen and ink. The full text is only 285 words, and it is only a corner of the south of the Yangtze River. But this corner is the epitome of Jiangnan, a typical Jiangnan with outstanding characteristics. There is indeed a leaf that knows the beauty of autumn.

Beautiful scenery is the characteristic of Jiangnan. "Waterscape" naturally becomes the literary eye of this article "Jiangnan". At the beginning of the article, I was too lazy to say anything, but the finishing touch was: "On the water, an ancient stone bridge arched like a beautiful eyebrow." With a word "arch" and a vivid metaphor, the author presents readers with a picture of a small bridge in a water town, which can be described as "getting straight to the point and getting into the picture". In a word, it is fascinating. The second paragraph describes people, events and scenery. It is not a direct description, but a description of its shadow in the water, which makes the clouds reflect the moon, and the reality and reality set each other off. It is interesting, exciting and fascinating to describe with a pen. The third paragraph describes the narrow and steep river banks and houses built along the river, which has become a major landscape of the water town. "There is a teahouse, a bookstore and a wine shop extending all the way to the river", which is full of interest and makes people feel particularly novel. Then he wrote about the "residential households" living on the shore: "The stone stairs at the back door, sisters squatting on the stone stairs to wash vegetables, step on their feet and wash rice", which makes the finishing touch, from things to people, and makes people envy people who live in this exquisite and comfortable environment. The fourth and fifth paragraphs continue the third paragraph, focusing on the girls in the south of the Yangtze River. Like sketching, they grasp the characteristics, sketch briefly, and deliberately write their own "printed headscarves" and "soft words". With two vivid metaphors, the charming image of a girl in the south of the Yangtze River is highlighted, which is vividly on the paper-meditation and beauty. The sixth, seventh and eighth paragraphs describe that aquatic products are abundant everywhere in the water town, and "the fishy smell is fresh": Jiangnan is beautiful and rich.

The last three paragraphs of the article euphemistically express the author's love for Jiangnan, and if he mumbles something, he will be infatuated. This sincere love is hidden between the lines as the keynote of the article, so everything described by the author is so beautiful and full of aura, and the words are so beautiful and smooth. It can be said that because of emotion, the words are touching.

The clever use of punctuation marks in this paper makes the article colorful. For example, under the stone bridge, there are bridges in the water, people and umbrellas, dogs and gardenias, bamboo hats, and the burden of selling steamed cakes are all swaying in the waves. Using its comma skillfully, the words naturally grow concise and beautiful. There is no need to use semicolons at the end of the first seven natural paragraphs, thus forming a coherent tone and natural structure.

Jiangnan is good, meaning and language are beautiful.

(Meng Constitution 256652, Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail: Home Phone: 0543-35 10567.

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south of the Yangtze River

light of the early morning sun

On the water, an ancient stone bridge arched like a beautiful eyebrow;

Under the stone bridge, there are bridges in the water, people and umbrellas, dogs and gardenias, bamboo hats, and the burden of selling steamed cakes, all swaying in the waves;

The river bank is narrow and steep; There are cloisters on the shore, and teahouses, bookstores and restaurants extend to the river; There are also residents, the stone steps at the back door of residents, and sisters squatting on the stone steps, washing vegetables, stepping on their feet and washing rice;

Their printed towels are like colorful herbs;

Their gentle words, like the return of Yan Zi, are playing the whisper of love;

On the bridge, under the bridge and in the basket, there are fresh squid, swordfish and mandarin fish;

In the bamboo basket, there are water-soaked water chestnuts, lotus roots, cymbals and water chestnuts;

Small streets, though paved with stone slabs, are like soaking in water, like rivers and harbors, and smell fishy. ...

Perhaps, this is Jiangnan. A sketch of Jiangnan corner.

Suzhou pingtan, the soft voice of the silk string;

That girl is more beautiful and smarter than Shi; Perhaps this is the image and character of Jiangnan. ...

-From "Middle School Students Reading Literature"

Words and deeds have profound implications and novel ideas.

-Appreciation of mother's feathers

Eulogize maternal love, an eternal theme at all times and in all countries.

Xi Murong's "Mother's Feather" eulogizes the sacred and great maternal love from a novel angle, which is refined, novel and original.

The article begins with a rhetorical question that all mothers are fairies. This metaphor is very strange and ingenious. The author's thoughts are like silkworms spinning silk, like a trickle, making it grow bigger and bigger-"looking at the water all day long, I am surprised by the beauty of its feathers and skin." They have long focused on their youth and are fascinated by that brilliance. " -"Feather Clothes" is the "eye play" of this article. What's that beautiful down jacket? It was the brilliant youth and beautiful years of girls, their unique chic and unrestrained happiness and freedom.

"One day, her feather clothes disappeared, and she became coarse clothes on the earth. She has decided to be a mother. Being a mother means that the bright and beautiful years will be bleak, which means that you have to sacrifice your youth to devote your life's love, and you need to experience the hardships of life without regrets. Being a good wife and mother will pay a heavy price! As mothers, their youth has turned into a gorgeous dream, and it is inevitable that they often miss and relive old dreams. "They even opened the box with melancholy eyes and felt the soft feather clothes. She knew that as soon as she put on the feather coat, she would return to the clouds, but she patted the soft white feather coat again and again, still silently closing the box and hiding the key. "This is a mother's choice, a mother's mind. Sacrifice yourself silently in exchange for the happiness of your loved ones. This is the image of a great mother.

"Mother's Feather" is less than 400 words, which vividly shows a profound theme and has the beauty of "a foot hides a thousand miles, and an inch of water raises a foot of fish". This is due to its novel conception. This is worth learning. Naturally, the birth of this idea is based on the author's profound understanding of maternal love.

The language of this article is euphemistic and beautiful, vivid and touching, and the style of writing is natural and smooth, with a rigorous structure.

(Meng Constitution 256652, Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail: Home Phone: 0543-35 10567.

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Mother's down jacket

Xi Murong

Which mother is not a fairy?

Just like the little weaver girl in the story, every girl once lived on the bank of the Milky Way. They weave rainbows, spin neon lights and hide clouds to catch the moon. How often do they worry? They are the most pitiful little daughters of the gods. They look at the water all day and are surprised by their beautiful feathers and skin. They focus on their youth for a long time and revel in its brilliance.

And one day, her feather clothes disappeared and she changed into coarse cloth. She decided to be a mother. Some people say that her feather clothes are locked in a box and can't fly anymore. People also say that her husband locked them and the keys were hidden in a very secret place.

But all mothers know that the fairy knows where the box is and where the key is. When no one is around, she even opens the box with melancholy eyes and touches the soft down jacket. She knew that as long as the feather coat was still there, she would return to the cloud, but she patted the soft white feather coat again and again, still silently closed the box and hid the key.

It was she who locked the old down jacket.

She can't fly because she can't bear to.

From Youth Literature 200 1.

Childish and interesting language, profound reflection

-Appreciation of children's stories

It's childish and interesting, but it's unique. It is wonderful to use children's words as a window to peep into society and see the big picture from the small.

What children say is ridiculous. In fact, the author's "children's words are unbridled" are carefully tempered. With the passage of time, the children's discourse in this paper shows great changes in material life and mysterious changes in the roles of "father" and "mother", which is thought-provoking. -The richness of material life brings about the diversity of thoughts and the richness of spiritual pursuit, but the spiritual misunderstanding of "father" and "mother" in the text cannot but make people think deeply. How can you not worry about the psychological trauma, family breakdown and even social instability brought by the marriage change in this article? This has caused us to think about a series of issues such as social ethics and the construction of social spiritual civilization.

The language of this article is humorous and poetic. Such as the dialogue between Sakazaki and Qu Qu, set each other off and become interesting. Its semantics are similar, and so are its sentence patterns. This expression technique has its own formal beauty. These personalized characters' languages not only show the vanity and the trend of comparison contaminated by the protagonist, but also reflect the diversified ideological trend brought about by the development of the times. Especially with the development of dialogue between characters, an unexpected result puts the protagonist in an awkward position, and also induces readers to suddenly realize, smile bitterly, sigh somewhat, feel helpless somewhat and think somewhat. The ending came to an abrupt end, full of twists and turns, powerful ups and downs, far-reaching and beautiful.

It can be described as: childish and playful language, witty and ironic topics, serious and profound thinking.

(Meng Constitution 256652, Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail: Home Phone: 0543-35 10567.

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Tongyu

The source of wealth

Batteries are as big as music, and they are as innocent and lovely as young flowers and leaves. They entered the same kindergarten and were assigned to the same class.

In kindergarten, two children often quarrel together. At first, they argued about the quality of toys. Later, they began to argue about the pick-up on the road.

First of all, Zaki raised this topic: "My mother came to pick me up on a new bike yesterday. Dashiqi. " Ququ is not to be outdone: "My dad also rode a new bike, which cost more than 1000!" "

As soon as autumn passed, Qu Qu attacked Qi again: "Yesterday my father rode a new motorcycle to pick me up, Honda's, 125." Not to be outdone, Sacchi said, "My mother also rode a new motorcycle, red, more than 20 thousand yuan!" " "

After a winter snow, Zaki challenged Ququ: "My mother came to pick me up in the car yesterday, Mercedes-Benz. The car runs fast and can put on the heating. " Qu Qu replied: "My father also drives a car. Is it Lincoln's or made in America? My father said that this is his treasure, very American. " Qu Qu is as proud as a cockerel who just won the battle.

One day in the early spring of the following year, Qu Qu mysteriously aligned with Qi and said, "Yesterday, my father came to pick me up with a beautiful aunt. They are so happy. "

Soon after, Qi Qi mysteriously said to Ququ, "Yesterday, my mother and her boss came to pick me up and took me to a hotel for dinner. What eyes! "

Bloom has been in spring for a long time, and the battery and the music seem to have lost their former excitement. After school that day, saki said with tears, "Qu Qu, my mother didn't want me, and my mother left with her boss." Qu Qu also lowered his head and whispered, "Qi Qi, dad doesn't want me either. He and his aunt went to the south. "

-Excerpted from Selected Mini-Novels, 8 issues, 2002.

rise high

-Appreciation of "Late at Night, That Lamp"

A lamp, a beautiful soul: the lamp is the "literary eye" in the middle of the night, the lamp. The lamp is a beautiful "lie", and the story of the lamp is a riddle that my sister painstakingly set for me. My sister died unfortunately to save the drowning child, which sublimated her image into a lamp for my soul, a lamp for my bumpy life and an immortal lamp in the reader's heart. The flashing light is the embodiment and symbol of my sister's beautiful heart. This paper takes "Late at Night, That Lamp" as the title, which is the finishing touch and reveals the main idea.

A character, a noble soul: as a narrative, the key is to write people alive. Although "I" runs through this article, it is only a clue. The central figure in this article is my sister. The uniqueness of this article lies in that the author does not blindly describe her sister's story and praise her noble soul like the general narrative, but cleverly chooses an angle to compare her sister with the story of "I" and Deng from the side until the end. My sister, a tall and incomparable people's teacher, stands out in front of readers and gives people a novel and profound impression. The noble soul of my sister shown in the article gives people infinite reverie and shocks people. The technique of expressing characters in this paper is novel and unique, which is worth learning.

A riddle, a breeze blows the waves in my heart: literature seems to see mountains, not peace. This paper has a natural paragraph of *** 12. The plot of the first seven natural paragraphs is not tortuous, just eloquent and leisurely. The last five paragraphs naturally reveal the mystery in a few words, which can be described as a bright future, such as popularity on the water, ups and downs, twists and turns, which makes readers feel excited, deeply moved and greatly satisfied psychologically. Here, my sister's good intentions towards "me", my sister's deep love for "me" and my sister's noble character sacrificed to save people are all vividly displayed.

(Meng Constitution 256652, Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail: Home Phone: 0543-35 10567.

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Midnight lights

Hope failure, failure and revocation

That spring, I was crushed by a flying car accident, causing a comminuted fracture. The doctor said there was little hope of a cure. What can I do except stare at the ceiling next to Lacrimosa all day?

My sister, who teaches music in primary school, brought me high school textbooks and put them on my pillow silently. I was so angry that I scattered them all over the floor Sister bent down and picked it up one by one. Big drops of tears came out of her eyes, and I couldn't help crying.

One night, my sister suddenly pushed the door in, helped me up, pointed to the dark building opposite, and said excitedly, "Brother, did you see that window?" Third floor, second window on the left. "She told me that there was a girl who was completely paralyzed and lived alone with her blind mother. The girl sticks a shoe box to a factory during the day and studies writing hard at night. I was only 17 years old, and I published more than 100,000 words ... I blushed when I looked at the light in that window.

"Brother, take courage!"

Since then, the light from that window has been with me. As long as I can see the soft light, I can't help but pick up the textbook beside my bed.

One rainy afternoon, my sister died unfortunately to save a drowning child! The bad news broke down the whole family.

As night fell and the cool breeze blew gently, I lay in bed, tossing and turning, tears streaming down my face. Suddenly, a light shone softly on my face, and I suddenly had an idea: I want to meet that girl, tell her my sister's story, thank her for the light at night, and accompany me through this difficult season. I stumbled upstairs on crutches and tapped on the door.

No one answered. I knocked hard and the opposite door opened. A kind old lady looked me up and down and said, "Stop knocking, young man, it's an empty room."

I froze.

"... my son used to live here, and then he moved away, and this room has been empty ever since. Two months ago, a girl with long braids rented it, but strangely, she didn't live here. She just told me to turn on the light at night and turn it off the next morning ... "

I suddenly threw my crutch and fell in front of that door, crying. My sister's voice seems to be ringing again:

"Brother, summon up courage ..."

-Excerpted from Reader, No.6 1999.

Meticulous painting of strange waterfall

-Appreciation of Baishui Mine

Baishui Mine is one of Zhu Ziqing's Essays on Wenzhou. The white water written by the author is fantastic and charming. It only took the author more than 230 words to describe the masterpiece of nature "White Water Mine" so vividly and touching, which is inseparable from the author's keen observation and deep feelings, and also benefited from the author's careful choice of writing materials. The author is ingenious, only grasping the distinctive characteristics of Baishui Mine to write, splash ink and explain.

Don't be bored at the beginning of the article, one sentence will cause the following. The first sentence of the second natural paragraph begins with a clear meaning, grasping the distinctive characteristics of Baishui Mine to write: "This is also a waterfall; But too thin and too thin. " This sentence tells readers that Baishuikuang is a waterfall, but it is a thin waterfall. In the following, Baishuikuang Waterfall, which is different from other waterfalls, is described as "thin": "a little white light shines" and "only a piece of flying smoke remains". Investigate its reason, "all because of the sudden vacancy in the middle of the rock;" There is nothing to rely on when the water gets there, and it will be sparse when it flies down. " Among them, the sentence "Xu Lingfei down" is just right, ethereal and wonderful. The author then seized the strange rock gap to describe it. The waterfall flows through the rock, and there is nothing to rely on. "White light into smoke, it is already a shadow, but sometimes even the shadow can't be seen. "The author described the ethereal Shui Ying vividly and vividly. A word "change" has the magical effect of refining words. The author did not stop describing the "flying smoke" and "shadow" that interested him, but described the moving scene when the breeze blamed "shadow": "Sometimes when the breeze comes, holding the shadow with your hand becomes a soft arc; But as soon as her hand was released, it shrank back like a rubber belt. "How vivid personification, how novel metaphor, how apt words-"Hold the shadow with your hand, it will curl into a soft arc ","Like a rubber belt "and" retract the crouching iron bar "-are all carefully honed oral English, fresh, natural and smooth. We can't help but revel in the exquisite beauty of this kind of writing. We can't help being as fascinated as the author, seduced by white water and attached to it. What magical white water! Baishui Mine, the spirit described by the author.

The author said that several friends accompanied him to go swimming in Baishui. In fact, we also read White Water with Zhu Ziqing's pen and ink. At the same time, it is also inspired by writing: when practicing writing, we should carefully observe things, grasp their characteristics and describe them with vivid words.

(256652 Meng Constitution of Zhangji Middle School, Bincheng District, Binzhou City, Shandong Province) E-mail:

Bzmxf110@sina.com home phone: 0543-35 10567.

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Baishui mine

Zhu ziqing

Some friends accompanied me to go swimming in Baishui.

This is also a waterfall; But too thin, too thin. Sometimes there is a little white light flashing; When you look closely, there is nothing-just a piece of flying smoke. There used to be a so-called "fog", which is probably the case. So, this is all because an empty part suddenly appeared in the middle of the rock; When the water got there, it had no foundation and flew down in the air, thin and thin. When that empty place is the most miracle. White light turns into smoke, which is already a shadow, but sometimes there is no shadow. Sometimes the breeze comes, holding the shadow with your hand, and it curls into a soft arc; But as soon as her hand was released, it slipped backwards like a rubber belt. So I suspect that there may be another pair of unknowable dexterous hands who weave these shadows into a magic net. -the breeze wants to take her away, how can she?

There may be temptations woven in the magic net; My attachment is evidence of my boss.

-Selected from the collection of essays "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond"

Cold water meticulous painting

-Enjoy the cold water

"Cold Water" is a delicate masterpiece, a meticulous ink painting with beautiful language and thought-provoking.

Elegant beauty of artistic conception. The author used calm and charming pen and ink to focus on three shots-the detailed picture of clear water, the picture of farmers fishing and the picture of magpies drinking water. This charming landscape painting is elegant, distant, wonderful and charming. If, as Liu Zongyuan put it, "There are no birds in a hundred mountains, and there are no footprints in a thousand paths." A boat with a leaf and a bamboo coat, an old man fishing in the cold river snow "shows a kind of sad and broad-minded beauty," Old vines are faint crows, bridges are flowing, people are thin and horses are west wind "shows a kind of quiet and lonely beauty, and" cold water "shows elegant, harmonious and vibrant ecological beauty. This is the author's mentality.