Composition on Traveling to Mount Jiuhua in Gushi

Jiefang Road Central Primary School 3 (10), Xuzhou City, Jiangsu Province Zhang Yanming In March of spring, Mother Yan took her little swallows to fly over thousands of mountains and rivers, from the south to the north.

Mother Yan and the little swallows were flying and flying. Just when they were happy, they couldn't find their home. Mother Yan said to herself strangely: "Hey, where is the place where we used to live?" Little Yanzi also said: "Yes, yes, why is the place where we used to live gone?" Suddenly, a thick smoke was like a line. The black poisonous dragon floated over. Little Yanzi's eyesight went dark and he fell down.

The little fish panting on the river was startled when he saw the little swallow falling down, and asked in surprise: "Why did you fall from the sky?" The little swallow was out of breath. Xiaoyu answered angrily: "My mother and I were flying in the sky just now. Suddenly a puff of black smoke came out from nowhere. My eyes went dark and I didn't know anything." Xiaoyu sadly said to Xiaoyanzi: "Brother , I have the same fate as you! Many people defecate and throw garbage here. Some people cut down big trees, and the sewage from the factory is discharged here, so it becomes a "drainage ditch". I can’t stand it anymore!”

Just when Xiao Yanzi was looking sad, Xiao Yu suddenly said happily to Xiao Yanzi: “By the way, aren’t we doing the ‘Four Cities Together’ event?! I’ll go. Complain about the environment here and this factory, and everything will get better. Just wait for my good news with your mother!" Xiao Yanzi also said to Xiao Yu: "Goodbye, come back soon!" Xiao Yu replied. "knew". Then he swam quickly into the distance.

Soon, a large number of saplings were planted on the wasteland, the sky turned blue, the water became clear, and the factory disappeared.

Instructor: Chen Dandan

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