A Quick Method of Modifying Ill Sentences

Let me show you some questions. Here are some explanations, which I hope will help you.

Test center training to distinguish and modify sick sentences

1. The function words in black in the following items are used correctly ().

A. why shouldn't we sing praises to the people?

B. A person's personality is not born, but determined by family background and living environment.

C. If a comprehensive analysis is made from the overall description of the work, it cannot be said to be a successful work.

D. they attach great importance to the problem of parts matching.

2. The improper use of black notional words in the following sentences is ()

A. This argumentative paper is full of interest and can be said to be a demonstration of what a good language is.

B In Wangfujing Street, the capital, the traffic is busy and the shops are dressed in festive costumes.

C. at that time, reading should be the right way. The so-called westernization was originally thought to be a desperate person in society.

Satire shows the power of his attack, while humor shines with his wisdom.

3. Choose the right one ()

A a star with solar mass will become a black hole if its radius is reduced from the current 700,000 kilometers to 3 kilometers, that is, by more than 200,000 times.

B There are only more than 2,200 private middle school teachers in the province, and now there are more than 7 1700 teachers, an increase of 32.6 times.

C it takes about twelve years for Jupiter to orbit the sun, which is eleven times longer than that of the earth.

Workshop D 1 Last year, the output exceeded 90% of the annual plan, making it the best workshop for the whole plant to complete production tasks.

4. In the following sentences, the correct collocation of modifiers and headwords is ()

A. Mr. Zheng looked at us, his eyes slightly tired from lack of sleep.

B China's ceramics are handicrafts with a long history.

Let's stride forward on the road to the four modernizations.

D. Archaeologists have made various studies on the cultural relics unearthed from Mawangdui No.1 tomb in Changsha more than two thousand years ago.

5. In the following sentences, the group with incorrect collocation of modifiers and head words is ().

A. touching stories are like countless pearls.

B.the bright moonlight shines on the whole campus like silver gauze.

C. Our teacher made it clear what should be said.

D. Two excellent Chinese teachers with 30 years' teaching experience in our school have also become representatives.

6. The group with proper subject-predicate collocation is ()

A. Their footprints have covered 18 1 counties around Taihang Mountain.

B. In the past two years, Xiao Wang's work style and policy level have been greatly improved.

C. Grass-roots cadres should conduct in-depth investigation and study, and contact the work style of the masses.

D. From him, we can see that cadres and the masses became one in the revolutionary war years, sharing weal and woe.

7. A group () where the predicate and the object are properly matched.

A. As one of the representatives of the Democratic Liberal Party, Kennedy has no panacea for domestic economic problems.

B Everyone pays attention to school hygiene, and the health and illness of the whole school will be guaranteed.

C. The heroic artillery unit shot down many planes and tanks.

D. the most fundamental point is whether the whole class has a correct understanding of the purpose and significance of learning.

8. Choose the appropriate item () with related words.

A Only by fundamentally solving the problem of "why people" can we better serve the workers, peasants and soldiers.

B Japanese women, no matter how talented they are, can't give full play to it as they did in China.

C. Although Japanese planes bombed Chongqing frequently at that time, which caused Ding Zhaozhong to stop attending classes, his study was not interrupted under the guidance of his mother.

D There are many people visiting here at ordinary times, but more people come on holidays.

9. Choose a group () without inappropriate word order.

A. A lot of facts have proved that Qigong therapy is a good way to treat cancer.

B. In order to write this report well, we investigated many advanced deeds of Lao Zhang.

C. Sister Guihua, why don't you bring your children with you?

D young people from all over the world speak, laugh and sing in different languages.

10. Select the appropriate related words ()

A. In order to help that classmate, on the one hand, Mr. Wang strengthened home visits, on the other hand, the classmate helped the teacher think of many ways.

B on the one hand, doctors should carry forward the revolutionary humanitarian spirit of saving lives and treating patients seriously and responsibly; On the other hand, patients should also actively cooperate.

C. By the river and in the forest, people play chess, read books and dance.

English is not very popular there, but Japanese can be found in hotels, restaurants and some shops.

1 1. In the following sentences, the word order is reasonable ()

A. There are all kinds of things and books that Mr. Lu Xun used in the past in the house.

Every ambitious young man hopes to be a person who contributes to socialist modernization in the future.

C. Pavlov, a famous physiologist in the Soviet Union, is busy doing conditioned reflex tests of various animals all day, and tying animals to test stands with ropes.

D 78 trained and qualified market managers in Shanghai obtained law enforcement certificates, and the first batch of law enforcement personnel in the talent market began to take up their posts.

12. The following sentence is ()

A. With the technical conditions of your factory, this task will be completed on time with good quality and quantity.

B. Enterprises have the right to increase the wages of employees by increasing production, improving quality, expanding business and reducing material consumption within the scope permitted by national policies.

C. The company solved the problem of insufficient supply of raw materials and overfulfilled the plan for the first quarter, with an increase of 65,438+00% over the same period of last year.

D after more than ten years' investigation, China bird workers found that there were as many as 4 17 species of birds in Guizhou plateau.

13. The following sentence without structural confusion is ()

A. He is wearing new clothes, including New Pants, new coat, new shirt, new shoes, new socks and new hat. Even the handkerchief with his pocket exposed is the first time.

I don't know the man you just mentioned, let alone have never met him.

C. Due to the limitation of low ideological level and poor written expression ability, shortcomings and mistakes are inevitable.

D. They adopted new technologies and new processes based on the principle of ensuring quality and reducing costs.

14. The following sentence is ()

A. Regarding the task of teaching songs, we invited a classmate who had studied music to volunteer.

B In the past, the quality of products was either lower than that of coastal areas, or the cost was higher than that of coastal areas.

C in the workshop, we mobilized the enthusiasm of the masses and overfulfilled the production tasks without increasing the number of staff.

D. it is unreasonable to do the same thing, do more and do less, and do well and do badly.

15. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad and has a clear meaning is ().

A. When we came to this world-famous museum, we were deeply proud of the dazzling array of art treasures.

B Around the Western Han Dynasty, our ancestors began to use instruments for meteorological observation, but it was relatively simple at that time.

C. Traditional bamboo painting adopts straight width, because it can better reflect the straightness, momentum and nobility of bamboo.

D. After several years of trial, it has been proved by practice that the publication of "Examination Instructions" is conducive to the scientific and standardized examination, and is also conducive to candidates reviewing for preparation and reducing unnecessary burden.

16. The following sentence is ()

A. The park is very quiet, because it is the last day of the autumn garden party, so there are few tourists.

B. The following summer, an unfortunate misfortune suddenly came to the Wangs.

Beijing C 100 market managers have obtained law enforcement certificates, and these talent market law enforcement officers started to take up their posts today.

D. In order to write this book well, he collected a large number of students' materials and analyzed them until late at night.

17. The following sentence is not wrong, and the sentence with clear meaning is ().

A. Li Bai roamed many places in his life.

B. He is sallow and emaciated, and he can tell at a glance that he is in poor health.

C. Behind her, there is a long blood trail in the bright white snow. ...

D. "Xiaoling, why is your hairstyle getting shorter and shorter?" "Can't you see that gay men's hair is getting longer and longer? How can we not be short? "

18. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A according to preliminary statistics, at present, more than 20% of people in the society regard savings as their future endowment insurance.

Nowadays, many young men and women choose their partners on the basis of being able to work and having scientific and cultural knowledge.

C. I can't tell you how many days it took me to understand why he brought me back.

D. Many great writers who came out of the old camp made such great achievements because they overcame the limitations of their world outlook.

19. The following sentence is not wrong, and the sentence with clear meaning is ().

A. In order to do a good job in after-sales service and effectively safeguard the legitimate rights and interests of users, today we announced that electrical appliance enterprises will implement "three guarantees" after-sales nationwide.

B. I found that this set of books not only contains world famous works and social science knowledge, but also some reading materials to cultivate young people's ideological cultivation.

C. it is not easy to collect materials, and it is even more difficult to identify materials. Most historians in China have devoted their major efforts to this aspect.

D. The rainy season in this area is very special, with 90% concentrated in July and August.

20. The following sentence is not wrong. The sentence with clear meaning is

A. An American scientist found that spraying methanol on crops can nearly double the growth rate of crops and reduce water consumption by half.

B. When he found out, he immediately returned all the gifts and underpaid meals.

C. On the one hand, Zhang Jun studied hard by himself, and on the other hand, his teachers gave him more guidance, so his academic performance was greatly improved.

D. 70% of the boilers in the city have used effective smoke and dust removal devices or taken other simple measures, and there are fewer and fewer boilers emitting black smoke.

2 1. Among the following sentences, the one that is not wrong is ().

A. By participating in social practice activities, we can personally experience the surging tide of reform.

B: In my opinion, when excellent old farmers patrol dikes to check risks and shrewd connoisseurs judge ancient paintings, the spirit of picking and choosing, seeing things in detail, is precisely the performance of being good at observing comprehensively and grasping contradictions concretely.

C. it is necessary to reduce the unreasonable economic burden of farmers.

D the coal mines in Shanxi province are one of the richest areas in China.

22. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad and has a clear meaning is ().

A. In order to severely suppress Han Chinese and southerners, Han Chinese and southerners are not free to act, and all actions are carried out under the supervision of the rulers.

B. Although swallows may not eat locusts completely, they are addicted to this pest, which is abundant in the lake area. We can say that swallows are enemies of locusts.

C. this book tells the truth, tells the truth, and makes bold words. The author frankly expressed his views on how leading cadres at all levels should understand and exercise the power entrusted by the people.

D. The old professor led the students to conduct a comprehensive social survey of forests, rivers and minerals, which made everyone gain a lot of valuable knowledge.

23. The following sentence is ()

A. With the enthusiastic care of the Party Committee, all the teaching staff in the affiliated middle school have greatly improved the quality of education.

B.zhang works very hard. Everyone in our village says he is not active.

C. There have been several heroes with literary talent and martial arts in history who wanted to unify the world, but none of them realized their ambitions.

D. This village has a bumper harvest of rice this year. Not only sold 60,000 Jin of rice to the country, but also stopped eating state relief food.

24. The following sentence is ().

A. the phenomenon of not talking about politics has not attracted the attention of the comrades concerned so far.

B * * * Tongxian County Party Committee and relevant departments * * * studied 10 specific measures to save expenses and decided to further reduce the expenditure at the township level.

C the sun is a fiery gas fireball, and its outer layer consists of three layers: a light ball, a balloon and a corona.

D. the public security department requires local public security organs to crack down on illegal drug trafficking and smuggling activities.

25. The following sentence is not wrong, and the meaning is clear ().

A. In the factory, 33 technical problems were voluntarily asked by engineers to solve key problems.

B. Facts tell us that ecological crisis and environmental disaster have no national boundaries and are not limited by time and space. On the issue of ecological environment, no country can be "immune".

C. At this time, Roentgen's teacher has seen the quality of an excellent physicist from the young Roentgen.

D. Hovercraft is a new type of ship with continuous improvement and development, and it is one of the ways to realize the modernization and high speed of ships.

26. The following sentence clearly indicates that there is no language disorder ().

A. This is a frontier far away from the motherland, but closely linked to the heart of the motherland.

B. I remember when I met him, I was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.

C command information accessibility is an important factor for the success of military exercises.

D. Zhou Jie created a beautiful and lively golden peacock image with her beautiful and skillful dancing and shining eyes.

27. The following sentence is ().

A. ups and downs, he chisels on the mountain every day. He awakens the sun with a hammer, knocks down the moon with a hammer, and beats stones with emotion.

B. Erecting the precast slab with its own weight of 1. 16 tons directly on the brick wall greatly exceeds the safety standard and is very dangerous.

C it's quiet in the park, because the spring festival is coming, so there are few tourists.

D. In order to prevent this financial inspection from going through the motions, the minister asked leading organs at all levels to conduct strict self-examination and set an example in financial inspection.

28. There is no ill-chosen expression below, and the clear sentence is ()

A. On behalf of our company, I wish you a happy Spring Festival.

B hundreds of millions of years have passed, and human beings have left the sea and locked themselves in cities and resumes.

C. On the night of the festival, Hongqiao Hotel was brightly lit and even more magnificent.

D. They clean up together and then go their separate ways.

29. The following sentence is not wrong, and the sentence with clear meaning is ()

A. Whether the idea is good or not is related to the quality of the work and can show the writer's superb artistic skills.

B.she is a famous model worker in our workshop. Every month, her work is 45% to 50% over schedule.

C. We will broadcast a joint broadcast of China National Radio in china national radio at 18: 30. Welcome to listen.

D. our store is committed to serving all passengers. If you want to buy cars, boats, planes and meal coupons, please contact the service desk on the first floor.

30. Choose a sentence that is not wrong and has a clear meaning ()

A. Wushi Town firmly grasped the pillar industry of the town's economy-fishery, explored the way of offshore fishing in time, and the fishery production developed rapidly.

B. At present, many developed countries have established "Forest Fragrant Flower Hospital". Have some provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions in China also established nature reserves and forest parks?

C after years of efforts, he's animal husbandry and veterinary station has been well received by local cadres and masses and higher authorities.

D Now, the Pearl River Delta, the Yangtze River Delta, the Beijing-Tianjin-Tangshan region, the Jiaodong Peninsula and the central and southern Liaoning have been vividly called the five major urban agglomerations.

3 1. Among the following sentences, the one that is not wrong is ().

A. He led the technicians to struggle for 100 days, and finally completed a new range hood with beautiful appearance and reliable performance.

B. The U.S. Department of Defense announced on the 7th that due to climatic and technical reasons, the laser weapon experiment scheduled to attack satellites was temporarily cancelled.

C. It is true that the family plays a vital role in cultivating children's healthy psychology and sound personality from an early age, but society also bears a great responsibility in publicizing and educating young people on how to treat themselves correctly.

D "AAA English" is an China native living in the United States. In 1990s, Professor W compiled a new set of self-study crash textbooks for China to learn English.

32. In the following sentences, the sentence with clear meaning is ()

A. The viewpoint of this paper is to criticize and resist the thoughts and actions of counter-social revolution.

B. She had to take her two-year-old child and her 80-year-old grandmother back to her hometown.

C. Wang Jibao stood with his back against the tree and a bodyguard, showing a duel posture.

D. This little mouse can communicate with the computer by inputting signals.

33. In the following sentences, the sentence with clear meaning is ()

I saw Bird helping an old man get off the bus with a black leather bag in his hand.

B. The library has received many books from publishing houses these days, which makes Mr. Zhang very happy.

C. Li Yu and others think that Du Fu's family has a strong sense of hierarchy, which is debatable.

D. If words in brackets are used to annotate the whole sentence, such brackets are called extra-sentence brackets; Parentheses should be placed after punctuation marks at the end of the sentence.

Reference answer

1.A 2。 B 3。 C 4 explosive B 5。 B 6。 A seven. D 8。 D 9。 A 10。 D 1 1。 D 12。 D 13。 A

14.d (A contradiction, B "not" should be before "quality", C subject is inconsistent, and "in" should be before "workshop")

15.d (A removes "everything makes man", b removes the ambiguity of "but it was simpler then" and c removes "momentum")

16.C (A removes "so", B repeats the word and removes "misfortune", D is ambiguous)

17.c (A lacks subject, B collocates improperly, D collocates improperly)

18.d (A is not properly matched, B is not taken care of before and after, and C is repeated)

19.a (the concept of B is illogical, the reference of C is unknown, and the collocation of D is improper)

20.D (A repeated words, improper collocation of B, improper position of related words of C)

2 1.b (A lacks subject, C is unreasonable, and D is out of order)

22.C (A is ambiguous, so "for" is changed to "because", B is ambiguous, and D is not properly matched)

23.C (A subject is inconsistent, B multiple negation is improper, and D word order is improper)

24.B (A lacks a subject, C repeats words, and D removes "illegal")

25.b (a), delete the word "handling"; C, add "due" before "quality"; D add "building hovercraft" before "yes").

26.C (A is ambiguous, the frontier is not far from the motherland, B is ambiguous, and D is not properly matched)

27.A (B conversely, C imposes cause and effect, and D denies it improperly)

28.b (a) Add "on this occasion" after "festival", c delete "de" and d delete "respective").

29.C (A is neglected before and after, B is ambiguous, D is ambiguous, and the word "ticket" should be added after "vehicle" and "plane")

30.D (A is a misnomer, "putting on a big show" is changed to "writing a big book", B is ambiguous, "whether" is removed, and C is a chaotic structure)

31.d (improper collocation of A, improper word order of B, and incomplete composition of C)

32.B 33。 D

Problem-solving guidance

The key to judging ill sentences lies in finding the reasons. For example:

Question 1, the word "because" in a. B should be changed to "by", the word "from" in C should be changed to "right", and the word "about" in D should be changed to "right".

Question 2, choose B. Because "store" should not be "dressed up", but should be changed to "dressed up".

Question 3: Choose C. A "decrease" should be changed to "decrease to", B "increase" should be changed to "increase to", and D "output exceeds 90% of the annual plan" is ambiguous.

Question 4: B. A "seeing with eyes" is not properly matched, C "striding forward on the new waterway" is not properly matched, and D "more than 2,000 years ago" should be placed after "unearthed".

Question 5, choose B. Because moonlight is like silver gauze, it should not be "illuminated" but "draped".

Question 6. Choose A. Because the "work style" in B can't be said to be "improvement", C is essentially lacking in predicates, so "you" should be added after "want" and "fine tradition" should be added in D.

Question 7. Choose D. Because A can't say "there is no panacea", B can't say "disease is guaranteed" and C can't say "shoot down the tank".

Question 8. Choose D. Because "Jiu" in A should be changed to "Cai", "Que" in B should be changed to "Du" and "Cai" in C should be changed to "He".

Question 9. Choose A. Because "a lot" in B should be placed after "Lao Zhang's", "no" in C should be placed before "ba", and "funny words" in D can't be said.

10, choose D. Because "Teacher Wang" in A should be placed after "On the one hand", "Doctor" in B should be placed after "On the one hand" and "Or" in C should not be omitted before "Reading" and "Dancing".

Question 1 1, choose D. Because "all kinds" in A should be put after "used", "future" in B should be put after "self" and "letting animals" in C should be put after "using rope".

Question 12, choose D. Because the bird mentioned in the sentence refers to the bird that lives in Guizhou Plateau. Therefore, "habitat" should be added before "in".

Question 13, choose a. Because B should be "I have never seen him or know him", C "not high" and "poor" should be removed, and D "for" should be changed to "for".

The following questions are the same, so I won't repeat them here.