Come to an expert to see how the plot of this novel is and what needs to be changed. Please explain it in detail. Thank you.

That night, an assassin sneaked into the guest room and attacked Yunfu. It doesn't feel like the tone of memory here.

Yunfu used to have high martial arts and instruments. There is no point in emphasizing martial arts here, as long as it is clear that he is poisonous in the fight.

Yes, the blood wolf king finally caught him. How could he let him run away so easily? Yunfu bowed his head and found himself tied to the cross like a specimen. He carefully tried to earn exercise, which didn't help at all, but wasted a lot of energy.

This logic seems to be reversed. Might as well go back and forth.

In this case, there is no way to go to heaven, and there is no way to go down; It took him only a quarter of an hour to come up with a countermeasure, although it sounded risky ... it felt too exaggerated here.