Rewrite composition method according to poetry

1. How to rewrite ancient poems into articles

Rewriting ancient poems basically does not change the ideological content of ancient poems, but only changes the form of ancient poems into vernacular, changes the structure and reorganizes the language.

poem: qingpingle village residence by Xin Qiji; in the Song Dynasty, the eaves were low and the grass was green on the stream. The Wu place that is drunk is drunk, sounds gentle and beautiful, whose home is the old man with white hair? The eldest son is weeding the bean field in the east of the stream, and the second son is busy knitting the coop.

I like the death of children most, and I lie on the stream and peel the lotus. Rewrite the article: In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low and small hut.

Behind the hut are green and tall bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream next to the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in the river can see it clearly. Under the sunshine, the river looks sparkling.

a breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Others seem to be put down.

The white inside is full of powder, and the pink inside is full of red, like a shy girl with a veil on her face. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. Against the backdrop of the stream and lotus, it is even more beautiful and lovely.

There is an old white-haired couple in front of the hut. They just drank some wine. From their red faces, we can see that they are slightly drunk, leaning together and having an intimate conversation in the dialect of Wudi, and the second son next to them has put in a few words from time to time! The eldest son of the old couple is weeding hard in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he is working! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, who is not yet an adult, can't do anything. He can only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, while peeling the lotus and eating, shaking his feet. It's really lovely! What a happy family! I was so intoxicated that I just stood there and didn't want to leave for a long time ...

Expanding materials: rewriting methods: 1. Changing the style: basically not changing the ideological content of the original, but mostly focusing on changing the form of the original.

For example, ancient poetry is rewritten into words, poetry is changed into narrative, and narrative is changed into expository; The novel was changed into a script. 2. Change the style: change classical Chinese into vernacular Chinese; Change the structure, change the order to flashback, and reorganize the materials; 3. Change the person: the first person is changed to the third person, and the third person is changed to the first person.

4. Change sentence patterns: enlarge sentences. Abbreviated sentences, etc.

Resources: Baidu Encyclopedia-rewritten. 2. How to rewrite ancient poems into 8-word narratives

-Rewriting

The setting sun is fading, and the afterglow of the setting sun spreads all over the earth.

The sun took off that dazzling coat and put on a bright red shawl. It was so soft and beautiful!

the clear river is like a mirror, shining in the afterlight. When the breeze blows, water waves appear on the river, and the reflection of the sun vibrates with it, just like a girl dancing in the water.

weeping willows on the riverside put their long hair into the water, just like beautiful princesses, twisting their thin waists and putting their green skirts on the shore to compare with the sun in the water. It's a pity that they didn't tell the winner, but reflected the river half red and half green, like a huge palette.

Although the flowers on the riverside are not so graceful, they always exude charming fragrance.

I stood on the rock and looked around. The gentle distant mountains were looming in the fog, which was extremely mysterious. Snuff's brightly lit villages are like fireflies in droves, and the hazy fog connects the river, the earth and the sky. Ah! What a beautiful night on September 3! Birds are singing in front of the mountain, and the fields are fragrant with fruit; Dewdrops resemble crystal pearls; The hidden moon is like a beautiful bow, even the fallen leaves are full of praise, and the wind is singing hymns.

I love you this intoxicating sunset river!

teacher: ancient poems about scenery should focus on the description of scenery and grasp the characteristics of scenery. When writing a scene, there should be true feelings between the lines, expressing true feelings. Emotion and scene are inseparable, and it is an important means to create artistic conception to contain emotion in the scene, melt emotion in the scene and blend scene. A good exercise should avoid the scenery without emotion, so that emotion is the scenery, and the scenery is the emotion note. Only when the two are in perfect harmony can the article be implicit and meaningful.

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Teacher: The students of the ancient poems of landscape painting have understood its rewriting method, so how should the ancient poems of narrative be rewritten? Now, please look at the rewriting of "To Wang Lun".

This is a narrative poem that celebrates friendship. It is also a masterpiece in farewell poems. Since ancient times, the atmosphere of parting is sad and desolate, and there are few laughter and laughter. However, the poet adopted a unique way to create a heroic atmosphere. Express deep affection and parting wishes among friends. Please see the original text and the revised example.

(Projection showing poems with pictures and an example "To Wang Lun")

Farewell

-Rewriting "To Wang Lun"

Li Bai was one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty. I had a bumpy life experience and experienced the process from prosperity to decline in the Tang Dynasty.

Li Taibai is called a "romantic poet" because he is generous, easy to travel and good at wine. At that time, a man named Wang Lun worshipped Li Bai very much. Let his son recite Li Bai's a message to meng haoran from an early age. Knowing that Li Bai wanted to go out to play because of state affairs, he wrote a letter to Li Bai: How is your husband? There are ten miles of peach blossoms here; How's the wine, sir? There are ten thousand hotels here. Wang LUN

Li Bai was elated when he received this letter, thinking: Playing and drinking are my favorite things, so why not take this opportunity to relax? So he set off the next day. When he came to Wang Lun's home, Li Bai couldn't wait to ask, "Brother Wang, where is Shili Peach Blossom?" Wang Lun took Li Bai to see it with a smile, but there was only one peach tree. Wang Lun said, "We only have one peach tree here, which smells ten miles every blooming season, so it is called' Ten Miles Peach Blossom'".

Li Bai asked again, "What about the ten thousand hotels? Why don't we go and have a few drinks! " But Wang Lun led Li Bai to a small restaurant called "Wanjia Hotel". Li Bai was puzzled. Wang Lun told Li Bai that the owner of this hotel was surnamed Wan, so it was called "Wanjia Hotel".

Li Bai is not only not angry, but also applauds repeatedly. Wang Lun was also very happy, and invited Li Bai to be a guest at home, and the people in the Wang family warmly entertained him. Li Bai had a long talk with Wang Lun at his home and became close friends.

Li Bai lived in Wang Lun's house for half a year, and time flies. On this day, Li Bai said to Wang Lun, "Brother Wang Lun, I have been in your house for half a year, and I will leave tomorrow to continue my immortal life." "Why? Is it because I don't treat guests well that you don't want to stay any longer? " Wang Lun asked. Li Bai waved and explained, "No, your family treats me like a relative. How can I dislike it?"? It's just that I want to travel around the world. " Wang Lun saw that Li Bai could not be said, so he had to agree to let him go.

The next morning, Li Bai came to the edge of Taohuatan with endless nostalgia and regret. Li Bai clenched his fists with both hands and said with tears: "Brother Wang, your friendship with me is unforgettable for Li!" Before the words were finished, there was a sound of singing with the beat of feet on the shore. Li Bai looked at it at a glance, ah! It was the villagers who saw him off. Li Bai waved to the crowd and said loudly, "Take care, folks. I will definitely come to see your again!" One of the people in the crowd said, "Great poet, take care of yourself, too. I wish you all the best. See you soon." At this time, a boat has docked on the shore, waiting for the great poet Li Bai to board. Li Bai stepped on the boat and said the last sentence to Wang Lun with deep affection: "Brother Wang Lun, the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, but it is not as deep as the friendship between you and me. Let's hold up the boat of friendship and sail to the other side of each other's hearts." Wang Lun finally couldn't control his emotions and said with tears in his face, "Take care!" 3. The method of rewriting ancient poems

This is a poem of Su Shi's visit to the West Lake, which can be roughly rewritten as follows:

On a sunny day, Su Dongpo and his friends were boating and drinking on the West Lake, and suddenly dark clouds rolled and heavy rain came, and thick clouds like ink surged in. The clouds are in a hurry, and the rain is even more urgent. The dark clouds have not covered the mountains by the lake, and the shower has swept over from the sky. The glistening raindrops are beating on the lake, splashing like glittering pearls and jumping into the cabin. Forced by the heavy rain, the poet hurried to take shelter from the rain.

As the saying goes, "A child's face changes three times a day in summer." No, the atmosphere was so tense just now, and suddenly a gust of wind rolled in and blew away the dark clouds, and the shower stopped immediately. The poet stood on the railing of Wanghu Building and looked at it. Downstairs, there was no rain at all, and it was calm. The sky shone with water, and the water reflected the sky. The sky was so clear and blue. 4. composition adapted from ancient poems

There are right and wrong in life, and my true love is right. Green mountains and green waters remain, deposited in the years, and the wind whines about me.

Birds in cages are always thinking about yesterday's Woods, and fish in the pond are constantly thinking about the former deep pools. That long and rich homesickness led me to walk briskly, clearing up land, farming, picking up hoes, with earthy simplicity, and Ye Er, whose simple thoughts were written all over the mountains. The grass house in the village, with its back facing the blue sky and facing the earth, is soaked in the wet fog, and the flowing air tells its heartfelt feelings. Willow and elm nestle behind the house, guarding the peace of the village. Peach and plum are not lonely, but harvest with the joy of autumn.

the door opened, just like my grin. The mountain in the distance, flowing with its springs, turned into a fairyland and flashed in the smoke. That layer of life, like fog and smoke, has left me. I waved to them without leaving my smile, which was painful.

I heard the dog barking and growling there. The sound was natural. I knew I was back, picking my chrysanthemums.

Return to the Garden (Part III)

When you plant beans at the foot of the south mountain, the grass is full of bean seedlings.

in the morning, you should make good use of waste and filth, and bring home the lotus with you.

outside the road, the wood is long and narrow, and the evening dew touches my clothes.

clothes are not enough to cherish, but you can keep your wish. 5. How to rewrite ancient poems into essays

How to rewrite ancient poems into essays needs to master certain methods.

first of all, grasp the poetry and the main center. This is the basic requirement for rewriting ancient poems. Take "Yong Liu" as an example. What do you need to know about the poem? How is it written? Why chant willow? Through study, we know that the poems describe the beauty of willow color, the beauty of willow branches' posture and the beauty of willow leaves' shape. Finally, it points out the origin of beauty: the power of spring. The author praises the charm and greatness of spring by chanting willow. In this way, we understand the poetry and buckle the center.

Secondly, be loyal to the original poem and expand the poetry. Because poetry is short and concise, it can't write all the details related to the content very clearly and comprehensively. On the basis of being loyal to the original poem, we must carry out appropriate and reasonable imagination in time and space to expand poetry. In the poem "Yong Liu", think about what other things can be enriched around "spring", such as returning swallows nesting in mud; A few bright butterflies are dancing among the flowers; You can also imagine what games lively and lovely children are playing and so on. In this way, the article is full and full.

finally, the structure is perfect. The ancient poetry has a great leap in time and space and content, so the rewriting must make up the beginning and end reasonably according to the poetry, so as to make the article structure perfect.

"The fish comes out in the drizzle, and the swallow leans in the breeze." This cross is almost empty. It depicts the environment of the thatched cottage, but what is implied between the lines is the poet's leisurely mood and love for nature in spring. I understand the meaning of the poem and grasp the poet's central idea, that is, I can expand my poetry on the basis of being loyal to the original poem. 6. How to rewrite ancient poetry into modern prose

Rewriting purpose 1. It helps us to understand the artistic conception of poetry.

2. Rewriting poems can cultivate our imagination and improve our writing ability. Rewriting method 1. Understanding poetry A. What time or season? B, who is doing it? C. What's the mood of the characters? (What theme is expressed? ) 2. Re-organize the materials according to the main materials around the theme.

3. Re-create based on poems and songs. Rewriting can change the genre, such as rewriting poetry into narrative; You can change the person, such as changing the first person to the third person; You can change the structure, such as changing flashback to sequence.

In order to rewrite the poem successfully, firstly, we should study the original poem carefully and understand the meaning of the poem and the thoughts and feelings contained in it; Second, we should establish the theme of narrative and description according to the meaning of the original poem; Third, on the basis of reading the original poem, combined with the actual life, expand a reasonable imagination to make the still picture in the poem come alive and make the expression of the article more accurate and vivid. . 7. Rewrite an ancient poem into a short essay ~

Shepherd Boy (Rewrite an ancient poem)

Look! At first glance, a piece of green grass seems to be spread on the ground! The sound of "rustling sand" when the wind blows gently spreads everywhere.

listen! The shepherd boy is playing the flute again, and a cheerful tone teases the evening breeze, slowly whispering in his ear.

In the morning, when the sun was half exposed, the shepherd boy took his flute and went up the mountain to herd cattle. He sat on the cow's back, playing the flute and humming a tune. Running happily on the grass, unrestrained, without any troubles. Until I am tired of playing, I lie on the grass and look at the white clouds and birds in the sky, with a smile floating around my mouth.

after dinner, the sun had already set, and the bright moon climbed up. With a flute in his hand, the shepherd boy came to the haystack with joyful steps, lay down without taking off his hemp fiber, listened to the unknown bugs singing beautiful songs in the grass, looked up at the bright moon in the night sky, and came up with pictures in his mind.

listen to that cheerful tune playing again, how beautiful it is! Hey! Why did you stop? Oh ... It turned out that the shepherd boy closed his eyes and fell asleep. Yes! He is really tired, so let him have a good sleep listening to the lullaby of the bug!

References:

Qingpingle Village Residence (rewriting of ancient poems).

in the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low and small hut. Behind the hut are green and tall bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream next to the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in the river can see it clearly. Under the sunshine, the river looks sparkling. A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Others seem to be put down. Pink in the white,

red in the pink, like a shy girl with a veil on her face. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. Against the backdrop of the stream and lotus, it is even more beautiful and lovely.

There is an old white-haired couple in front of the hut. They have just drunk some wine, and they are all red.