Four-level landscape composition

In our daily study, work and life, everyone has tried to write a composition, which is a comprehensive and creative speech activity. What kind of composition can be called an excellent composition? The following is my carefully arranged landscape writing composition for grade four 10, which is for reference only and I hope it will help you.

After lunch on Thursday, all the teachers and students of the fourth grade of Dongfanghong School took sixteen buses to visit Changsha Ecological Zoo.

When we got off the bus, we traveled in sightseeing bus in different classes. We saw many animals in the car: tiger, king of beasts, lion, king of forest, black bear and zebra eating grass.

After sitting in sightseeing bus, we walked and watched those lovely animals, including a group of monkeys. Some of them are alive and kicking, some are eating, some are looking at us curiously, and some seem to be competing with their companions.

Walking, we came to the Forest Theater and watched the performances of the animals. First, four lively and lovely little monkeys appeared. They wore clothes of various colors and rode bicycles with flags of different colors around the stage several times. One of the little monkeys in red fell down and immediately pushed his bike to run, which caused laughter. Some people even say that Po Hou is still cheating! The second appearance was a chubby black bear, whose hand hung on a cradle, and then the animal trainer pushed it hard, and it rolled freely in the air, winning warm applause from everyone; The third appearance is an old goat. Its four stout hooves can walk freely on a thin wire, and it can stand on it with one foot. I thought: how can it stand on it? It's incredible! The last thing that appeared was the tiger that I had been waiting for for a long time. It actually wants to jump over the hoop more than two meters away. I saw that it first retreated a few steps, then took a big step quickly, and finally skipped two hoops. I was surprised to see this scene. I can't believe my eyes. Can a tiger jump so far?

After watching the forest theater, we came to the elephant performance hall. Those big and fat elephants play football, run, offer flowers and shake hands with everyone. At the end of the program, the animal trainer selected four students to go to the elephant and see which lucky student the elephant put his hat on.

The zoo is really interesting! I reluctantly left Changsha Ecological Zoo and went home by car.

This summer vacation, my classmates and I came to Singapore, which we have been longing for for for a long time.

It was already late at night when I first arrived in Singapore. The quietness of the airport surprised me a little, and the air was filled with faint fragrance. Here, almost no sound can be heard, even if someone speaks, the volume is consciously reduced, which is in sharp contrast to the noise in our domestic airport.

After a night's rest and getting up early in the morning, the students are full of energy. We started a pleasant trip to Singapore under the guidance of a tour guide.

Singapore, also known as the Lion City, is an island country in Southeast Asia and one of the four little dragons in Asia. Although the area is only over 700 square kilometers and the population is only over 5 million, it is highly civilized. The tour guide said that the legal system here is very strict, and flogging is still preserved to safeguard people's moral standards.

We shuttled through the city by bus. Through the window, I saw towering buildings, neat streets, lush trees and colorful flowers beside the road. Everything looks so fresh that it deserves to be called a garden city. Although Singapore is small in size, it has a high coverage rate of green trees. The tour guide told us that most of these green trees were cultivated artificially, and I couldn't help but marvel at the scale of the project. Compared with cutting down trees in China, Singaporeans know how to care for and protect nature. Imagine that when you walk under the dense shade of tropical plants and breathe the air with a little floral fragrance, it is really a pleasant enjoyment!

Singapore's architecture is also very distinctive. In its economic center, there is a famous Merlion statue, and the clear spring from the Merlion's mouth represents the vitality brought to the economic center. This statue is a well-deserved symbol of Singapore. Around the water system of the financial center, there are three tall buildings, the roof of which is a huge boat shape, which is called the world's largest rooftop garden swimming pool. This is the Jinsha Hotel. Seen from a distance, it's spectacular! The skyscraper viewing wheel is also one of the landmark buildings. As high as 165 meters, equivalent to the height of 42 stories, it is known as the highest skyscraper viewing wheel in the world. Visitors can enjoy a 360-degree panoramic view on the Ferris wheel and enjoy the beautiful scenery of Singapore.

Singapore attaches great importance to the inheritance and protection of China's traditional culture, such as the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival, Dragon Boat Festival and other traditional festivals in China are well preserved. Chinese classes are also specially offered in the school. Walking in the street, you will see Chinese signs full of eyes, and they are all simplified Chinese characters. This familiarity seems to be in China.

Traveling in Singapore makes me feel kind and comfortable! Fresh Singapore and inclusive Singapore left a deep impression on me, which made me feel the breath and rhythm of developed cities.

My Campus We all love our campus. It may be like a beautiful garden with green grass and flowers. It may have only a few bungalows, a few old trees and a small playground. Anyway, we will spend many happy days on campus. Passing through a long and wide driveway is the school playground. The playground is also the school football field. The track on the playground is a red plastic track. Walking on it is much more comfortable than walking on the concrete floor. There is a green lawn in the center of the stadium. I thought it was true. I am hand-molded, but the lawn is fake and has no feeling of grass.

As soon as I entered the campus, the first thing I saw was the red plastic runway, which surrounded the wide playground and was about 200 meters long. When playing in physical education class, it won't hurt to fall. During the sports meeting, athletes run sprints, long-distance races and relay races on this plastic runway, which makes the runway show great vitality.

On both sides of the plastic runway are small forests of birds and flowers. Walking on a path in a small forest, when the sun shines on this path. Light shines on the ground through dense bamboo forests and beautiful willow branches. Standing on the poetry path, you can see rows of green willows on the long embankment from a distance. Willow leaves are green, like flawless jade; Willow branches are slender, like braids of spring girls; The trunk of willow is straight, like a row of soldiers on guard, guarding our campus day and night. There is a neat row of small trees on one side of the runway. How can it be neat? A row of small trees looks like a straight line at first glance. Willow swaying in the wind, as if to show us its graceful dance, graceful, its long green soft hair dancing. ...

I love this beautiful and quiet campus, where we, the future flowers of the motherland, enjoy nutrition. How can such a beautiful campus not bring us a good paradise for growth and study?

Today is Sunday, and the sky is clear in Wan Li. My mother and I went to Yuhuangshan Park to find spring.

Walking into the park, wow, willows sprouted, and long branches floated in the warm spring breeze like girls' long braids. In the distance, a sea of red and white flowers is particularly bright. I ran over and saw that it was plum blossom, with a charming fragrance.

When I came to the pond, I found groups of little people swimming. When I looked carefully, it turned out that the tadpoles were swimming freely. Their big heads are dragged with thin tails behind them. They are so cute, like a group of black elves.

In the park, children are playing happily. Some of them are flying kites, some are roller skating, some are taking pictures, and some are riding bicycles. Everyone had a good time. Spring is like a naughty child, and its shadow can be seen everywhere. It is full of vitality and tells us a truth: a year's plan lies in spring.

Spring is the season when everything grows. Grandpa has slipped away in winter, and Miss Spring is coming to us with light steps. The world around me is completely new, and my white eyes turn green. A breeze blew, forming a beautiful picture of spring in front of my eyes.

Spring is coming. In the park, all kinds of flowers are colorful, like a rainbow, printed on the green lawn. Look at the peony flowers. It is dressed in red all over, as if wishing us prosperity every day. Look at violets again. It gives off purple light, and when the breeze blows, it dances as if "Xia Zixian" is welcoming us. My favorite is morning glory, which looks like a small trumpet and stands on a "pillar". Only when the "enemy" comes will the alarm be sounded. So cute! On the big tree, lovely birds are singing beautiful music, gentle blue sky and light green trees, how like a beautiful note on the staff!

Spring is coming, the lake is slowly thawing, and there are some small fish hidden in the clear lake, which seems to be playing hide-and-seek with us! The lake is sparkling, reflecting high-rise buildings, green trees and red flowers, blue sky and white clouds, and a thriving scene ... Small fish also show their heads and blow small bubbles from time to time, just like flowers. They close first and then open, which is very fun!

When I came to the campus, it was raining in Mao Mao, which soaked the earth and the campus. The grass pokes its head out and greedily sucks the crystal beads falling from the sky, as if to put a green coat on the earth, which can't help but remind people that "Jasper is dressed as a tree, and thousands of green tapestries hang down."

Spring is so beautiful. I like spring. A year's plan starts with spring. In this beautiful spring, I will study hard and make progress every day, just like a small tree thriving!

The sixth teaching goal of landscape writing in grade four;

1, cultivate students' ability to observe the scenery carefully.

2. Let students master the writing method of observing and changing scenery at fixed points.

Teaching focus:

Clear the foothold, clear the location of the scene and the order of writing the scene.

Teaching difficulties:

Clear the center, highlight the characteristics of the scenery, write your own feelings, and do it beautifully and affectionately.

According to class hours:

One class hour

Teaching methods:

Create situational inspiration and guide cooperative discussion and detailed expression.

Preparation before class:

Briefing session; exhibition

Teaching process:

First, create a scene, and the conversation enters:

1, classmates, it's the beginning of spring again. Unconsciously, we once again stepped into the embrace of spring. Although the pace of spring in the north is a little slow, it can't stop the news of spring. I think careful students must have caught the shadow of spring in dribs and drabs.

It can be seen that the students can't wait to report the breath of spring in their eyes. Let's share it together.

3. Students can report freely. Teachers and others make timely evaluation and feedback.

Transition: Since there are so many beautiful things in our hearts, should we express them? Then we will boldly "I write my heart by hand."

Second, cleverly set up cases to attract jade:

1. Teachers, like classmates, are always moved when they see beautiful things, and then they want to express these words and write articles. Next, the teacher will show his achievements and ask the students to encourage or make suggestions boldly and enthusiastically.

2. Show examples on the screen to guide students to comment collectively, so as to realize the advantages, point out the disadvantages and review the known practice methods and precautions.

3. Collective feedback from teachers and students, once again clarify the precautions for writing landscape articles: for example, the writing style is not neat enough; Lack of coherence in expression; Not vivid and concrete, improper use of punctuation marks, in order to attract students' attention and strengthen the repeated revision of the article.

4. Recall the requirements of landscape writing: Since all the students have practiced landscape writing, please recall what requirements landscape writing put forward for us. (free discussion) in a certain order

5. Analysis: Students, you have made this certain order clear in one sentence, so what are the advantages of describing it in a certain order? Write on the blackboard: the context is clear.

6. Transitional memories: In addition to writing in a certain order, we should also grasp the characteristics of the scenery to describe it. What are the characteristics of the scenery?

Blackboard writing: color form

Smell the sound

size ...

7. discussion: what are you most worried about after grasping the characteristics of the scene?

lively

Blackboard writing: images

special

8. How can I make my expression vivid, vivid and concrete? We should spare no effort to use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to write the things described vividly.

9, through the above analysis and summary, skillfully leads to the requirements of this exercise:

(1,) Scenery description should be in the order of orientation, from near to far, from far to near, from top to bottom, from bottom to top, from inside to outside, from outside to inside, or from middle to all around, orderly, with proper priorities and details. (step by step)

(2) can be written according to the type of scenery, such as mountains, water, flowers, birds, etc.; Waterfalls, rocks, peaks and caves; Pavilions, pavilions, etc. Write down the light, color and taste of the scene; Write not only its static state, but also its dynamic state, as well as its environmental atmosphere. (A Guide to Understanding Ancient Poetry)

(3) Observe carefully, grasp the different characteristics of scenery in different seasons, use your imagination moderately, don't make things up, and write according to your own fantasies.

(4) Landscape writing can also write people and things in detail. If people, scenery and things are combined to write, the composition can be more touching.

(5) When writing a scene, don't forget the relationship between yourself and the scene, but consciously write your own feelings and feelings, which will make people feel immersive when reading.

(6) Appropriate and correct quotation of poems and songs describing scenery by predecessors can also add color to the composition. This requires you to read more and accumulate more at ordinary times, and don't look for it when necessary.

Third, excellent works are appreciated and accumulated.

1. Watch the video and listen to the model essay. Requirements: while listening, write down one or two sentences that you think are vivid.

2. Discuss the model essay: Where do you think the model essay is well written? Why is it good?

3. Summary: What inspiration have you got from the above analysis? What methods can you use to make the article vivid and specific?

metaphor

Writing on the blackboard: personification

exaggerate

Fourth, enjoy the beautiful scenery and shine in the pen.

1, play the video, and the students will appreciate the infinite beauty and vitality of spring.

2. Conception and writing.

Requirements: Use appropriate rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to describe the picture. And can skillfully express emotions.

3, the teacher patrol guidance.

4. Discussion, analysis and comments.

Blackboard design:

Write a scene (self-made topic)

1, fine observation:

The context is clear in a certain order.

2. Grasp the characteristics

Shape and color are vivid metaphors.

Smell sound personification image

The size is exaggerated and specific.

Step 3 accumulate more

It is said that we grew up in a honey pot after 90, but who knows, under the glamorous appearance, our grief and indignation ... all say that the post-90 s generation is a happy generation, loved like a little princess and little emperor. However, those adults who know the post-90 s injuries, those intrigues, those intrigues, those friends' betrayal, and those dirty hearts all let us experience all this prematurely. After 90, we are not bad children, although we sing karaoke and dance in the ballroom; Although we dyed our hair, permed our hair and smoked cigarettes, underneath the glamorous appearance is a broken heart. We can only pretend to be happy, naive, lively and cheerful, and then smile at the tears and say, in fact, I am very strong.

After 90, we are not bad children, we are just pretending, we just save our sadness for the last, then cry in the dark at night, and say to ourselves after crying, in fact, I am very happy. Who can know such self-consolation? We are not bad kids ... after 90, we are not bad kids. We will want to listen carefully, to make progress, to be rewarded by adults and teachers, to laugh from the heart and to find a good friend who can tell the truth. It is not that we have learned hypocrisy, but that the world forces us to wear many masks of hypocrisy; It's not that we have learned to guard the yin and the yang, but that this society has made us understand that only such people can gain a foothold in society. It's not that we've gone bad. Although the people around us have been changing, in fact, we have been confused. Where can I have real friends? There are no friends who are really nice to you. Although every relationship between us is changing, the person in our hearts will never change. We are not bad boys!

Grade four landscape composition 8 is near, near, I hear teacher Chun singing, singing songs about spring. Swallows whisper, vilen is dressed in new green, and everything is revived. It is another spring in full of green.

Miss Chun came to the venue first. Look! The rape flower in Huang Chengcheng is amazing "beauty"! The breeze blows its graceful posture, giving off a refreshing fragrance, which makes people linger. The poplars along the roadside have turned from gray to green, and the branches spit out small green buds, like chickens that have just pecked through eggshells. Listen! What's that noise? "Wow, wow, wow ..." Looking closer, it turned out to be a river! The ice has not completely melted, and naughty it has flowed to the distance day and night.

Then, Miss Chun came to the courtyard of the farm house, and the spring flowers were covered with branches, layer after layer. In the open space behind the house, the grass shook its head with the wind, as if reciting ancient prose. Hey! What's wrapped around the rope beside the eaves? It turned out to be morning glory. There are a few light blue flowers in the high place, and a few small pink and purple speakers in the low place, as if celebrating the arrival of spring. Later, Miss Chun came to the farmland again. What a lively scene! Farmers are sowing seeds. They scatter their hopes on soft land. These seeds will sprout, blossom and bear fruit under the call of teacher Chun.

Miss Chun, nature welcomes you, you bring green and vitality, people welcome you, and you bring new hope and a new beginning.

Composition evaluation: This is a landscape writing article. The author describes the beautiful scenery of fields, courtyards and farmland in spring with the footsteps of spring girls as the main line. When describing the courtyard part, "the grass shakes its head with the wind, as if reciting ancient prose", the author personifies the grass, showing the vibrant scene of the spring courtyard. The structure of the article is reasonable, and the author skillfully realizes the transition of each part through the footprint of "Spring Girl". The article adopts the general form of score, and sublimates the theme at the end, expressing the love for spring.

Fourth grade landscape composition 9 Spring is coming! Spring is coming!

Swallows fly back from the south. They are dancing in the air. What a beautiful dance! The sun rises from the horizon early, radiating dazzling light, so warm!

Groups of tadpoles are wandering in the stream. Are they looking for mother frog? Several ducks are playing on the water. Suddenly, a duck found the fish in the water. It plunged into the water and tried to catch the fish, but the clever fish wriggled and ran away briskly.

Xiaohong is running happily by the stream with her butterfly kite. Kites fly higher and higher, as if competing with swallows in the air. The grass on the shore is dense and dazzling green. In the grass, bright wildflowers are blooming brilliantly, red, yellow and purple … colorful and beautiful. Green leaves grow on the trees, and birds sing on the branches and build their own homes. Sister Feng Chun sat on the willow branches and swung, hahahaha ... Happy laughter knocked off the pink peach petals.

The scenery in spring is really beautiful!

My grandfather's house is in the country, and going to my grandfather's house is my happiest time, because I can go treasure hunting again.

Seeing grandpa standing at the door waiting for us, I threw myself into his arms. Grandpa smiled from ear to ear, and the amiable neighbors greeted us with smiles: "Xiao Ming is back to see grandpa!" " You have grown so big. ""Good aunt, good uncle. "Country people are very human and kind. I like this kind of care and warmth.

I like grandpa taking me for a walk in the country best. He will teach me the names of many animals and plants and various insects. Look! A group of egrets followed the cultivator, pecking at the insects that had just been turned over, and suddenly flew up and lined up in a row. It was really interesting. Listen! A flock of birds parked on the wire? On u "choo choo! Joe. Hey! "Chorus, like notes on the staff, melodious songs resounded through the sky. Looking around, a green field, green grass, birds and flowers, blue sky and white clouds set off, beautiful scenery straight into your eyes. Is the countryside really like an ever-changing god? Girls, different seasons, different times, there are always different scenes.

I like living in the country. Although it is not as convenient as the city, the air in the country is fresh, there is no noise, it is very broad and has a large space for activities, which keeps the original appearance of nature and broadens people's minds. Rural people are happy and know how to live, and they don't compete with others for profits, which is probably related to the living environment! The vastness of the world and the vastness of the mind.

I will always remember the green grassland, the colorful flowers and the beauty of the countryside, but what is more unforgettable is the deep enthusiasm of a group of simple people!