Detailed description composition of friends 400

1. Description of friendship details +400-word composition Our class was divided.

Huangyelin of Le Tong Middle School

As soon as the school started, it was reported that our Class Three Five was going to be dismantled. At this time, I always smiled and said to my classmates who told me this unfortunate news, "No, it can't be true. Our class five will not be separated. Are you kidding? " However, I have a bad feeling in my heart.

This day has finally arrived. ...

On the morning of the first 14 day after school started, we were having a math class when the headmaster came in. He told us that due to the need of teaching, Class Five was split and the students in the class were assigned to other classes. Then, read the names of the students assigned to each class. My heart really hurts. I think that our solidarity and friendship class will be separated, and tears are spinning in my eyes. I looked at my classmates. They are just like me.

After reading the name, the headmaster asked us to go to the newly assigned class, but we didn't move, as if we couldn't accept the fact. At this time, I don't know who led the team, so the whole class sang the song "Friends" together. The students sang with great devotion and sang, and everyone cried. After singing, the rest of the class is crying. Even the two students we call "cold-blooded ghosts" can't stop crying. In tears, we realized how United and friendly our Class Five was!

Later, we went to another class. But after class, our classmates in Class Five got together and talked all the time. Go to our original classroom almost every day and write a few words on the blackboard. Even running on the playground, you can't help but take a look at the original classroom. If you do this, you will feel better.

One day, I don't know who wrote a sentence on the blackboard in our original classroom: "All friction turned into friendship with the dissolution of Class Five." We watched and cried again. We agreed to meet again in five years. Everyone works hard, everyone lives up to expectations, and everyone becomes a success ... See you in five years.

Now, I am standing in the classroom of our old class again. The song "Over the years, one person ..." has come back to my ears. The people in our class have been separated, and the hearts will not be separated. I am eagerly looking forward to the reunion in five years, that distant and beautiful reunion.

Comments and inspiring compositions are about the class's nostalgia for the collective. This feeling is really from the heart, otherwise, the students will not "sing" this song "Friends" in class. The students sang with great devotion and sang, and everyone cried. After singing, the only thing left in the class is crying "; It won't be "our class five classmates will get together and discuss this problem all the time." Go to our original classroom almost every day and write a few words on the blackboard. Even running on the playground, you can't help but take a look at the original classroom "; I wouldn't be "eagerly looking forward to the reunion in five years, the distant and beautiful reunion".

Love, from the heart, true; Miss unity, friendship and beauty. A composition that expresses true and beautiful feelings is naturally successful.

2. Description of friendship details+composition 400 words Our class was demolished. As soon as Huang Yi of Le Tong Middle School started school, it was reported that our Class 3-5 was going to be demolished.

At this time, I always smiled and said to my classmates who told me this unfortunate news, "No, it can't be true. Our class five will not be separated. Are you kidding? " However, I have a bad feeling in my heart.

This day has finally arrived ... On the morning of the first 14 day after the start of school, we were having a math class and the headmaster came in. He told us that due to the need of teaching, Class Five was split and the students in the class were assigned to other classes.

Then, read the names of the students assigned to each class. My heart really hurts. I think that our solidarity and friendship class will be separated, and tears are spinning in my eyes.

I looked at my classmates. They are just like me. After reading the name, the headmaster asked us to go to the newly assigned class, but we didn't move, as if we couldn't accept the fact.

At this time, I don't know who led the team, so the whole class sang the song "Friends" together. The students sang with great devotion and sang, and everyone cried.

After singing, the rest of the class is crying. Even the two students we call "cold-blooded ghosts" can't stop crying.

In tears, we realized how United and friendly our Class Five was! Later, we went to another class. But after class, our classmates in Class Five got together and talked all the time.

Go to our original classroom almost every day and write a few words on the blackboard. Even running on the playground, you can't help but take a look at the original classroom.

If you do this, you will feel better. One day, I don't know who wrote a sentence on the blackboard in our original classroom: "All friction turned into friendship with the dissolution of Class Five."

We watched and cried again. We agreed to meet again in five years.

Everyone works hard, everyone lives up to expectations, and everyone becomes a success ... See you in five years. Now, I am standing in the classroom of our old class again.

The song "Over the years, one person ..." has come back to my ears. The people in our class have been separated, and the hearts will not be separated.

I am eagerly looking forward to the reunion in five years, that distant and beautiful reunion. Comment and inspiration composition is about the class's nostalgia for the collective.

This feeling is really from the heart, otherwise, the students will not "sing" this song "Friends" in class. The students sang with great devotion and sang, and everyone cried.

After singing, the only thing left in the class is crying "; It won't be "our class five classmates will get together and discuss this problem all the time." Go to our original classroom almost every day and write a few words on the blackboard.

Even running on the playground, you can't help but take a look at the original classroom "; I wouldn't be "eagerly looking forward to the reunion in five years, the distant and beautiful reunion". Love, from the heart, true; Miss unity, friendship and beauty.

A composition that expresses true and beautiful feelings is naturally successful.

I happened to meet a 400-word detail to describe the real feelings around the world today!

It was very hot, so my friends and I went to buy popsicles. We walked to the store, but it was crowded with people. My friend and I were just about to join the team when the old man in the shop stopped us and signaled us to go in without queuing.

Those adults also got out of the way and let us walk in. I thought at that time: the world is full of true feelings! When everyone picked out the popsicles they wanted, the classmate in charge of money screamed, "Where did my money go?" ? Why is there a big hole in your pants? "

The shopkeeper looked us straight in the eye, obviously full of trust and concern. The boss pondered for a moment and said to us, "Never mind, children, take it and eat it!" " I don't want to ask who stole the children's money, just ... don't arrest me! "

There was a commotion among the adults, and they all sympathized with us. Finally, they decided that everyone would donate one yuan to us.

Watching adults donate money, our eyes are filled with tears of happiness. There are true feelings everywhere in the world. When my friend and I came home with money, we suddenly found a stolen wallet and a note inside. The note said: I'm sorry, I shouldn't have done that, forgive …

Our eyes are full of tears again. Yes, the true feelings in the world make our world full of beauty and love. ...

4. The detailed description of the 400-word composition details is mom's inquiry after school. The details are that dad said he would go to bed early after finishing his homework. The details are the teacher's eyes when he finished his homework. The details are the detailed notes handed over by his friend after he got sick.

Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.

Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.

Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.

"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.

Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.

The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.

The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.

But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.

Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.

One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.

The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.

The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self as an eternal existence in the historical chain? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.

Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.

But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.

5. Detailed Description Composition 400 My classmate (character description fragment)

Look at her dark face, revealing an indomitable character, with a pair of glass ball-like eyes shining under her thick black eyebrows, carefully observing her opponent's every move, alert and flexible. The uneven outline outlines her unremitting pursuit of table tennis. Although she is short and not strong, she is still crazy about sports. Just like her shocking name-Thunderstorm Point, the thunder keeps coming!

Her opponent is now classmate Q. She lifts the table tennis board without weakness, shrugs habitually, twists her neck, squats professionally, raises her head slightly, reveals daunting eyes, and smiles and says softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal!

"Damn it!" She gritted her teeth, reached for the towel, wiped her sweat and threw it back.

"Boy, not bad!" She clenched the board, gently threw the ball into the air and lifted it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move.

She was annoyed and the sweat on her forehead was burning. She roared, her eyebrows sweated together, and the ball "brushed" and hit the opponent's key, and the opponent staggered back. Suddenly lost a goal!

6. Write a composition (with detailed description) with 400 words original. One morning, I finished my homework and went out to play with great interest.

Just out of the unit door, I suddenly heard a noise behind me. When I looked back, it turned out to be a little girl of eleven or twelve. She is wearing a dirty and small half-sleeved shirt and a pair of fat old leather shoes. She was rummaging through the garbage behind the door with a hook, and found things like beverage bottles and cans, picked them up and put them in the bag beside her. Suddenly, she picked up a book from the garbage as if she had found a treasure, and carefully dusted it off, as if afraid of breaking it. Then, she squatted there and looked through it carefully. She was so absorbed and devoted that she didn't notice me when I walked behind her. I looked at the book and was surprised: Isn't this the Chinese textbook I just threw away yesterday? She realized that someone was behind her, hurriedly closed the book, turned around and looked at me timidly, her eyes full of alert and doubt. We looked at each other silently. After a long time, she slowly took out a handkerchief from her pocket, carefully packed her schoolbag, picked it up and turned to leave. "Wait a minute!" I suddenly had an idea, turned and ran upstairs in a hurry, took out a childhood book that I had treasured for many years, and handed it to her and said, "This is for you, little sister." She looked at the book and then at me. Tears sparkled in her eyes. She silently took the book, picked up the bag and left.

I have no interest in playing at all. I stood there looking at her thin figure, and my sight blurred for some reason. I think hard: teachers often say that we are the future of the motherland, don't they? Why don't you go to school at an early age? Because the family is poor? But why have we imported so many limousines and built so many luxurious food cities and entertainment palaces? Don't just watch them spend their "golden childhood" by picking up garbage! All this makes me puzzled.

As a primary school student, I appeal to: save my peers like this little girl and wish them a bright and comfortable classroom as soon as possible!

7. Write a 400-word composition for a good friend, my good friend.

I have a good friend. We met in kindergarten. She has a pink face in Zhang Yuanyuan, always wearing a ponytail, and a round face with big eyes, as if she could talk. She is neither fat nor thin, as tall as me. She loves the group very much and likes to help others.

Once, the teacher asked us to go out for free activities, and the students flocked out. We had a good time. But when we walked to the door of our class again, she suddenly stopped. I followed her eyes and saw that the classroom was a mess, and there were many pieces of paper left by my classmates on the ground. After reading it, my good friend thought for a moment and said, "Maybe they were in a hurry to go out to play and didn't have time to clean up. Let's clean up! " "Say that finish, pull me to clean the classroom. We are busy sweeping the floor, setting the small table and cleaning the blackboard. After a while, I finally finished cleaning. My good friend put the garbage in a bag and walked out of the classroom with me, closed the door and threw it away. She ran so fast that she accidentally fell down. I saw her standing up from a distance with a painful expression on her face, rubbing her knees and insisting on throwing away the garbage before coming back to play with everyone.

My good friend not only loves the group, but also likes to help others.

Once, when we were playing, I accidentally stepped on the shoelaces of sports shoes. I almost fell down, but fortunately, she gave me a hand, and it took me a lot of effort. I couldn't tie it up, and I was so anxious that I was sweating. She saw it and squatted down to help me tie my shoelaces carefully. I quickly said to her, "Thank you!" She said, "Nothing, I'm older than you!" We all laughed. She always does. When others are in trouble, she will lend a helping hand.

This is my good friend, a girl who loves groups and is helpful. Although I can't remember her name clearly, her good qualities will remain in my heart forever.

In my childhood, I made many friends. Among them, Xu Sijing is my favorite little friend.

When I was young, she left a bad impression on me. Complacency, pride, look down on others, everyone really hates her, and finally, she transferred to another school. As time went by, we all forgot her. I didn't expect the scorching sun on the summer vacation, so I had to hide at home and dare not go out. Ding, Ding, the telephone rang, and I hurried to answer it. A strange, familiar and sincere voice sounded. "Hello, Chen Bingqian, I'm Xu Sijing. What happened before was that I was wrong. Please forgive me. " Suddenly a silent thing fell. Unexpectedly, Xu Sijing has changed so much in recent years. I said with tears in my eyes, "It doesn't matter. We are good children and are still good friends. " The phone went dead with a beep. I left the phone angrily. How much I wanted to chat with Xu Sijing for a while, but she hung up the phone mercilessly.

I like not only her virtue of correcting mistakes, but also her spirit of helping others. Once, I traveled with her, and the scenery along the way was beautiful and charming. At this moment, we saw a child playing on the road. Xu Sijing said, "Tell the children to leave the road quickly!" I said, "Leave her alone and let's go." She walked on reluctantly. Suddenly, a car came from behind the children. The children didn't notice, but they were still playing. When Xu Sijing heard the whistle, she knew that the children were in danger. She suddenly turned her head and saw the car, the children and the distance between them. She flew over, over the railing, flew in one step, and rushed out of the road with her child in her arms. Everyone present praised Xu Sijing, saying that she is a rare only child who loves to help others. Hearing the praise, Xu Sijing smiled and said, "Nothing, this is what a young pioneer should do." They listened to her words and were full of praise. But God has no eyes. Just as the golden and Huang Chengcheng seasons are coming this year, Xu Sijing lost his precious life in a car accident. Why did God treat her like this? Why? Why? Although Xu Sijing died, her quality took root in my heart. These qualities will always inspire me to move forward!

There is a boy in my neighbor's house. He is my little friend-Zhang Lin. His skin is beige, his face is covered with many freckles, his hair is a little yellow and curly, and his eyes are watery, but unfortunately they are not blue, otherwise others will think he is a foreigner.

He is so courageous that he even dares to catch snakes.

Once, we played on the grass in the yard. He patted his chest and said to us, "I am a fearless hero." Call me if anyone dares to bully you! " We listened to it very disapprovingly. After a while, we played in the yard. The yard is damp and overgrown with weeds. Suddenly I saw a flower snake crawling into the grass over there, and immediately stood up and screamed, "There is a poisonous snake over there!" " ""Do you dare to catch it? "Xiao Qiang said defiantly." Dare! "Zhang Lin said without hesitation. So, he walked over carefully and grabbed the snake's neck. The snake was caught. We look at it and envy it. It turned out that he also knew that the deadly place of a snake was seven inches (snake neck). He said proudly, "What happened? Awesome! "

Look, he is such a brave man. Just intercept and modify it yourself according to the number of words.

8. Describe the students' composition with details. The name is required to be no more than 400 words. "Man" is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, neither personalized nor vivid, and the whole article looks dry, boring and lacking in appeal. If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details.

Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images. Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, the characters lose their flesh and blood. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene." As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances."

The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details. In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. " The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger its indisputable", and then think deeply about the national inferiority?

Not only China writers, but also foreign writers. Like Balzac's Eugénie? Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gold-plated cross to his lips to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture to hold the cross in his hand, and this last effort killed him." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the description of details that makes the characters vivid and vivid. The characters are vivid, the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.

Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical. It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life. Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent". In the dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce coldly looked at the wandering * * *, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever. Capture the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine!

9. There is a 500-word composition called Friendship (detailed description), which forgets the original purpose and does not want to investigate whose fault it is. I was young, ignorant and timid, but I just remember it clearly. At this time, he turned around coldly and said to me coldly, from now on, you go your way and I will cross my wooden bridge. At that moment, I heard the sound of heartbreak.

Some people say that the most hurtful thing is love, and love is a poison, but why doesn't friendship hurt people? In fact, friendship and love are poisons, just like poppies. You know it's poisonous, but you approach it again and again. Friends are actually your weakness.

I wrote this in my diary when I was in fifth grade. At that time, I didn't believe that there was friendship in this world until Tingting, a naive girl, appeared. Her appearance was purely accidental. That afternoon, she appeared out of thin air in a white dress, and her smile shone into my heart like the rising sun. All I know is that her smile that melted the iceberg slowly entered my frozen heart.

I am very happy that we have become good friends. Although we would quarrel and fight, my closed heart was finally opened again, and Tingting was the one who opened it.

I finally believe in friendship again. I know I'm poisoned again, but I'm sure there is love in my heart now. This kind of love is called friendship.

10. The details of the composition are described in 400 words. I have always admired my mother since I was a child. Mother's goose egg face is embedded with a pair of big eyes. She had long shawl hair and was dyed yellow. She is very gentle and smiles at everyone. She is not tall, but slim and a beauty.

My mother is hardworking and caring. Once, my aunt's baby was about to be born, and my mother was afraid of being small. My aunt didn't have enough baby sweaters, so she knitted a sweater overnight. Late at night, under the dim light, I saw my mother still flying a needle to thread under the light. I don't know when to fly the needle and when to thread it. All I know is that the wool balls are getting thinner and thinner and the sweaters are getting bigger and bigger. "Mom, there are so many sweaters in the children's wear store, can't you pick one?" I said. Mother said, "How can a sweater knitted by machine be knitted well by hand?" "Oh, it's really a hard mother."

Mom loves me very much, and I am the little baby in her eyes. I bought a bunch of candied haws one day and didn't want to eat them. I want to leave, for my hard-working mother. As soon as I got home, I stuffed Sugar-Coated Berry into my mother's hand: "Mom, eat quickly, Sugar-Coated Berry is melting." Mom is still an old saying: "Baby, I won't eat, you eat." I lied to my mother and said, "I just ate." Mom said, "Open your mouth and show me. You lied to me. You didn't eat Sugar-Coated Berry. " My mother saw through my lies, and this sugar-coated gourd became my dish again.

My mother is cheerful, self-respecting and good at running a family. She loves me very much, but she doesn't spoil me. She often encourages me to study hard and be a promising person. I love my mother!