In the autumn evening, Jiang Shang rewrote the composition with the word 150.

1. A short essay "Birds Return to the Nest" written by Autumn Night on the River 100,

Tired as it is,

And come back with the sunset.

Flap your wings,

Throw the sunset on the river;

White-headed reed,

And dressed up as a beautiful woman.

Change: the bird is tired, flapping its weak wings, and its back is covered with the sunset that has already fallen asleep. When crossing the river, the bird accidentally turned its wings. In this way, the scene of "a touch of setting sun sprinkled in the water, half of the river rustling, half of the river blushing" gradually faded out, and the reeds on the shore also dressed up as a slim girl, revealing a shy face in the sunset.

2. Rewrite the composition on the autumn night river 400 words The Hanjiang River is like a beautiful blue belt, lying between Xiangyang and Fancheng.

In the morning, the river is calm. A red sun rose from Ran Ran in the east and dyed the Han River red. There are white clouds in the blue sky, and hardworking fishermen drive fishing boats to salvage fresh fish on the river early.

A boat carrying things, passing by the river, has silver waves. How charming it all looks.

The Hanjiang River is more beautiful at night. The colorful lights on the riverside are lit one by one and reflected on the river, forming a colorful picture, which is very beautiful! It is beautiful when it rains lightly. The drizzle seems to have covered the Han River with a milky veil, just like a fairyland in a fairy tale.

The Hanjiang River is not only beautiful, but also the source of life for hundreds of thousands of people in Xiangfan. We should cherish every drop of water and don't let the Han River dry up or be polluted. Let's create a harmonious home.

I love the beautiful Hanjiang River in my hometown! ! .

3. "An Autumn Night in the Deep Mountains" Wang Wei rewrote the prose fragment of about 150 words to be vulgar. My writing level is not very good. I remember that autumn evening, a falling rain fell quietly. The quiet mountain is quiet and transparent, like a whole ethereal crystal.

In the evening, the moonlight is like water, and the quiet autumn night is clearer than ever.

The star has long been shy, standing behind the tender bamboo shoots, looking back, still flashing like a girl's affectionate eyes.

On the clean pine path, the leaves are layered, soft, bright and spotless. The bright moon, like wisps of white sand, gently pours in the sky and moves slowly. ...

After the rain, under the pine and bamboo trees, the branches and leaves are dancing and the streams are high. On the clean stone, a drop of clear water overflowed gently, just like a light song. Night, so quiet and so soft!

The moon quietly disappeared from her face. At this time, deep in the bamboo forest, laughter overflowed. That's the village girl who finished washing clothes. Listen! Smile all the way, like a lyre curled up around you, and like a light and elegant mountain spring.

The lotus leaves on the edge of the forest are slender and green. In the moonlight, swaying. Swinging, like weeping willows in the wind and blooming flowers, that's a fishing boat entering the water. Also, it is so vivid, so natural, so beautiful!

I wander alone. Happy Tao Tao, it goes without saying: the fantasy spring is over, let it go. Isn't Shan Ye as beautiful this autumn?

"When you are here, oh, my friend's prince?" It is full of mountain shadows, and the gods are drunk in the fields.

4. The composition of "Qiu Jiang Fishing Alone" was rewritten as autumn, with rainy days.

He had to stay at home and read happily. Suddenly, a few drops of water floated in from the window. Looking at the drizzle, he thought, I'd better go out for a walk in this weather.

He picked up the old hemp fiber, put it on his body, put on his hat, brought a pot of wine, picked up the fishing rod and prepared to go fishing. When he first boarded the ship, he remembered that the bait was not ready.

Hey, you can find earthworms next to the mound on the shore! It can be said: "iron shoes are nowhere to be found, and they are easy to get." Ah! The lake is misty and rainy, and the level remains the same.

Occasionally a gust of wind blows, causing ripples in circles. He paddled slowly to the lake.

He first pulled out the fishing rod, put on the bait, threw it into the middle of the lake, held the fishing rod firmly, and waited for the little fish to trap themselves. After a while, the fish began to take the bait and finally caught a big fish.

He involuntarily took a sip of the wine and hummed a ditty. Later, the more he sang, the louder he became. After a long time, he found that the fish had stopped biting the bait.

Oh, it was his singing that scared the fish away. The ancients cloud; You can't have it both ways.

That's the truth. He put away his fishing rod and rowed the boat to another place on the lake.

Stop singing and concentrate on fishing. Many fish were caught in the evening.

Go home at night, bring wine, and have a delicious grilled fish dinner with my wife and children. Thought of here, his mouth bent into two thin radians.

In the moonlight, he thinks today's day is too interesting. So he wrote this poem "Qiu Jiang Fishing Alone", which has been passed down through the ages! He is Wang Shizhen, a poet in Qing Dynasty.

Attachment: The title of Qiu Jiang's solo fishing map is a boat; A foot of silk and an inch of fishing; Sing a song, drink a bottle of wine, and catch a river alone.

5. I just rewrote the ancient poem Moonlit Night into a narrative of 150 words and gave it to the students for your reference.

Practice requirements 1, rewrite an ancient poem you like into a narrative; 2. Write down the content described in ancient poems in a concrete and coherent way, and expand the imagination space appropriately without changing the original intention; 3, the topic is self-made, or it can be titled "Rewriting the ancient poem" xx ". Students talk about their understanding of the exercise requirements. Student 1: I think the genre of this exercise has changed from poetry to narrative.

Health 2: As far as the content is concerned, it should be concrete and vivid, complete in narrative, and respect the original intention of poetry. The plot should be vivid, imaginative and innovative.

Student 3: The focus of lyric ancient poetry is to describe the scenery and express the sense of * * *; Narrative ancient poetry focuses on the description of characters' language, movements and appearance, and the narrative is complete. Teacher: The students have a good understanding of the requirements of practice.

The rewriting of ancient poetry is a brand-new package of ancient poetry from form to content, and it is a second creation on the basis of the original text, which makes the poetry sentences more concrete and easy to understand. (Writing on the blackboard: form: narrative content of ancient poetry: keeping original intention and imagining appropriately) So how to rewrite ancient poetry? Let's do the second part: read examples and learn methods.

(Students read together) 3. Lead the way with examples (1) Teacher: Please look at the first example. Rewrite the Twilight River song.

This is a famous landscape poem. Based on what the poet saw by the riverside, the two small shots of the sunset sprinkling water and the new moon, and the wonders of dusk and the scenery of the moonlit night constitute a colorful and three-dimensional picture of Qiu Jiang.

Beautiful artistic conception. So how did the little author rewrite it? Please look at the big screen.

(There are poems and pictures in the projection, and there is an example of Ode to Mujiang.) Ode to Mujiang-The situation of rewriting Ode to Mujiang is getting worse and worse, and the afterglow of the sunset is scattered all over the earth. The sun took off its dazzling coat and put on a bright red shawl. It is so soft and beautiful! The clear river is like a mirror, shining in the corner of the light.

When the breeze blows, water waves appear on the river, and the reflection of sunlight vibrates, just like a girl dancing in the water. The weeping willows by the river put their long hair into the water, like a beautiful princess, twisting her slender waist and putting a green skirt on the shore, compared with the sunshine in the water.

Unfortunately, they didn't name the winner, but reflected the river half red and half green, like a huge palette. Although the flowers on the riverside are not so graceful, they always exude charming fragrance.

I stood on the rock and looked around. The mountains in the distance were looming in the fog, which was extremely mysterious. The brightly lit villages with snuff are like swarms of fireflies, and the hazy fog connects the river, the earth and the sky. Ah! September 3rd, what a beautiful night! Birds sing in front of the mountain, and the fields are fruity; Dewdrops are like crystal pearls; The hidden moon is like a beautiful bow, even the fallen leaves are full of praise, and the wind is singing hymns.

I love you this intoxicating Mujiang! Teacher: Ancient poems describing scenery should focus on describing scenery and grasp its characteristics. When writing a scene, there should be true feelings between the lines and express true feelings.

Emotion and scenery are inseparable, and it is an important means to create artistic conception to contain emotion in scenery, melt emotion in scenery and melt scenery in scenery. A good practice should avoid scenery without emotion, and let emotion be scenery and scenery be emotional notes. Only when the two fit perfectly can the article be subtle and meaningful.

(2) Teacher: The students of landscape painting and ancient poetry all know its rewriting method, so how should narrative ancient poetry be rewritten? Now please look at the rewriting of To Wang Lun. This is a narrative poem praising friendship.

It is also a masterpiece in farewell poems. Since ancient times, the atmosphere of parting is sad, and there are few laughter and laughter.

However, the poet used a unique way to create a heroic atmosphere. Express deep affection and farewell wishes among friends.

Please look at the original text and the revised examples. (A picture projection of a poem and an example of A Gift to Wang Lun) Farewell-Rewriting A Gift to Wang Lun Li Bai was one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty.

I had a rough life experience and experienced the process from prosperity to decline in the Tang Dynasty. Li Taibai is called "Romantic Poet" because he is generous, easy to swim and good at wine.

At that time, a man named Wang Lun worshipped Li Bai very much. Let the son recite Li Bai's "A Word to Meng Haoran" from childhood.

Knowing that Li Bai was going out to play on state affairs, he wrote a letter to Li Bai: How is your husband? There are ten miles of peach blossoms here; How about the wine, sir? There are ten thousand hotels here. When Wang Lun and Li Bai received this letter, they were all in high spirits and thought: Playing and drinking are my favorite things. Why not take this opportunity to relax? So he set off the next day.

When he arrived at Wang Lun's house, Li Bai couldn't wait to ask, "Brother, where is Shili Peach Blossom?" Wang Lun smiled and pulled Li Bai to see that there was only one peach tree. Wang Lun said, "We only have a peach tree here. Every season in bloom, we can smell the fragrance of Shili, so it is called Shili Peach Blossom". Li Bai asked again, "What about the 10,000 hotels? Why don't we go for a few drinks! " But Wang Lun still took Li Bailing to a small restaurant called "Wanjia Hotel".

Li Bai is very confused. Wang Lun told Li Bai that the owner of this hotel was surnamed Wan, so it was called "Wanjia Hotel". Li Bai was not only not angry, but also applauded again and again.

Wang Lun was also very happy, and invited Li Bai to be a guest at home. The Wangs warmly welcomed him. Li Bai and Wang Lun talked at his parents and became close friends.

Li Bai lived in Wang Lun's house for half a year, and time flies. On this day, Li Bai said to Wang Lun, "Brother Wang Lun, I have lived in your house for half a year, and I will leave tomorrow to continue my immortal life." "Why? Is it because I don't treat my guests well that you don't want to stay any longer? " Wang Lun asked.

Li Bai waved and explained, "No, your family regards me as a relative. How could I not like it? " ? I just want to travel around the world. "Wang Lun see can't say li bai, had to agree to let him go.

The next morning, Li Bai came to Taohuatan with endless nostalgia and regret. Li Bai clenched his fists with his hands and said with tears, "Brother, your friendship with me will never be forgotten by Li!" Before the words were finished, singing accompanied by footsteps sounded on the shore.

Li Bai took a look, ah! It was the villagers who saw him off. Li Bai waved to the crowd and said loudly, "Take care, folks. I believe Li will come to see you again! " One of the people in the crowd said, "Great poet, take care, too. I wish you all the best and we will support you. "