Writing skills of rewriting ancient poems

1. The method of rewriting ancient poems This is a poem of Su Shi's tour of the West Lake, which can be roughly rewritten as follows:

One sunny day, Su Dongpo and his friends were boating and drinking on the West Lake. Suddenly, dark clouds billowed, heavy rain suddenly came, and thick dark clouds surged. Clouds and rain are more urgent. Dark clouds have not covered the mountain by the lake, and showers have fallen from the sky. Glittering raindrops beat on the lake, splashing like sparkling pearls and jumping into the cabin. Forced by the heavy rain, the poet hurried to shelter from the rain.

As the saying goes: "In summer, children's faces change three times a day." No, the atmosphere was so tense just now. Suddenly a gust of wind swept in and dispersed the dark clouds, and the shower stopped immediately. The poet stood on the railing of Wang Hu Building and looked at it. Downstairs, there is no rain at all, and it is calm. The sky reflects water, and the water reflects the sky. The sky is so clear and blue.

2. How to rewrite ancient poems into articles? The ideological content of ancient poetry is basically unchanged, but the form of ancient poetry is changed into vernacular, the structure is changed and the language is reorganized.

Poetry:

Qingpingle country house

Author Xin Qiji, Song Dynasty

The thatched roof of the hut is low and small, and the stream is covered with green grass.

Drunk Wu local drunk, gentle voice, white-haired old man who is it?

The eldest son is weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream, and the second son is busy knitting chicken cages.

My favorite is my youngest son, who is lying in the grass, peeling the lotus just picked.

Rewrite the article:

In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low hut. Behind the hut are green and straight bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The river looks sparkling in the sunlight.

A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Everything else seems to be put down. White inside and pink inside, like a shy girl with a veil on her face. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. It is more beautiful and lovely against the backdrop of streams and lotus flowers.

There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are all a little drunk. They are together, talking intimately in Wu dialect, and the second son next to them puts in a few words from time to time!

The old couple's eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, not yet an adult, knows nothing. He could only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, peeling the lotus while eating and shaking his feet. Really cute!

What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated, just standing there, unwilling to leave for a long time …

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Override method:

1, change the style: the ideological content of the original is basically unchanged, and most of them just focus on changing the form of the original. For example, ancient poems are rewritten into words, poems are rewritten into narratives, and narratives are rewritten into expository texts; This novel has been adapted into a play.

2. Change the style: change the classical Chinese into vernacular Chinese; Change the structure, change the sequence of flashbacks, and reorganize the material;

3. Change the person: the first person is changed to the third person, and the third person is changed to the first person.

4. Change the sentence pattern: enlarge the sentence. Abbreviations, etc.

References:

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3. How to Turn Ancient Poetry into Narrative Poetry-Rewrite Mujiang Song

As the sun sets, the afterglow of the setting sun spreads all over the earth.

The sun took off its dazzling coat and put on a bright red shawl. It is so soft and beautiful!

The clear river shines like a mirror in the corner light. When the breeze blows, water waves appear on the river, and the reflection of sunlight vibrates, just like a girl dancing in the water.

The weeping willows by the river plunge their long hair into the water, like a beautiful princess, twisting her slender waist and putting green skirts on the shore to contrast with the sunshine in the water. Unfortunately, they didn't name the winner, but reflected the river half red and half green, like a huge palette.

Although the flowers on the riverside are not so graceful, they always exude charming fragrance.

I stood on the rock and looked around. The mountains in the distance were looming in the fog, which was extremely mysterious. The brightly lit snuff village is like a swarm of fireflies, and the hazy fog connects the river, the earth and the sky. Ah! September 3rd, what a beautiful night! Birds are singing in front of the mountain, and the fruit in the field is fragrant; Dewdrops are like crystal pearls; The hidden moon is like a beautiful bow, even the fallen leaves are full of praise, and the wind is singing hymns.

I love you this intoxicating Mujiang!

Teacher: Ancient poems describing scenery should focus on describing scenery and grasp its characteristics. When writing scenery, there should be true feelings between the lines and express true feelings. Emotion and scenery are inseparable, which is an important means to create artistic conception. A good work should avoid the lack of emotion in the scenery, and make it vivid and emotional. Only when the two are integrated can the article be made.

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Teacher: The students of landscape painting and ancient poetry all know its rewriting method, so how should narrative ancient poetry be rewritten? Next, please look at the rewriting of To Wang Lun.

This is a narrative poem praising friendship. It is also a masterpiece in farewell poems. Since ancient times, the atmosphere of parting has been sad, with few laughter and laughter. But the poet adopted a unique way to create a heroic atmosphere and express deep affection and farewell wishes among friends. Please look at the original text and the revised examples.

(The projection shows poems with pictures and an example "A gift for Wang Lun")

say goodbye to

-Rewrite A Gift for Wang Lun.

Li Bai was one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty. His life was bumpy and he experienced the rise and fall of the Tang Dynasty.

Li Taibai is called "Romantic Poet" because he is generous, easy to swim and good at wine. At that time, a man named Wang Lun worshipped Li Bai very much. He asked his son to recite Li Bai's A Word to Meng Haoran from an early age. Knowing that Li Bai had worked hard for state affairs for a long time and wanted to go out to play, he wrote a letter to Li Bai: How is your husband? There are ten miles of peach blossoms here; How about the wine, sir? There is Wanjia Hotel here. Wang Lun

When Li Bai received this letter, he was elated and thought: Playing and drinking are my favorite things. Why not take this opportunity to relax? So he set off the next day. When he arrived at Wang Lun's house, Li Bai couldn't wait to ask, "Brother, where is Shili Peach Blossom?" Wang Lun smiled and pulled Li Bai to see that there was only one peach tree. Wang Lun said, "We only have a peach tree here. Every time it blooms, it smells fragrant, so it is called Shili Peach Blossom.".

Li Bai asked again, "What about the 10,000 hotels? Why don't we go for a few drinks! " But Wang Lun took Li Bailing to a small restaurant called Wanjia Hotel. Li Bai is very confused. Wang Lun told Li Bai that the owner of this hotel was surnamed Wan, so it was called Wanjia Hotel.

Li Bai was not only not angry, but also cheered again and again. Wang Lun was also very happy and invited Li Bai to be a guest at home. The Wangs gave him a warm reception. Li Bai had a long talk with Wang Lun at home and became close friends.

Li Bai lived in Wang Lun's house for half a year, and time flies. On this day, Li Bai said to Wang Lun, "Brother Wang Lun, I have lived in your house for half a year, and I will leave tomorrow to continue my immortal life." "Why? Is it because I don't treat my guests well that you don't want to stay any longer? " Wang Lun asked. Li Bai waved and explained, "No, your family regards me as a relative. How could I not like it? " I just want to travel around the world. "Wang Lun saw that he couldn't beat Li Bai, so he had to promise to let him go.

The next morning, Li Bai came to Taohuatan with endless nostalgia and regret. Li Bai clenched his fist with tears and said, "Brother, your friendship with me will never be forgotten by Li!" Before the words were finished, there was a song accompanied by footsteps on the shore. Li Bai took a look, ah! It was the villagers who saw him off. Li Bai waved to the crowd and said loudly, "Take care, folks. I believe Li will come to see you again! " One of the people in the crowd said, "Great poet, you should also take care of yourself. I wish you a smooth sailing and we will meet again soon. " At this time, a boat has docked on the shore, waiting for the great poet Li Bai to board. Li Bai stepped into the boat and said his last words to Wang Lun with deep affection: "Brother Wang Lun, although the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as the friendship between you and me. Let's lift the boat of friendship and sail to each other's hearts.

4. How to rewrite ancient poems into short essays It is difficult for primary school students to rewrite ancient poems into narratives, but it is also a good way to train writing and broaden their thinking.

Here, I take Su Xinshi Xugong Store as an example to talk about some experiences in guiding rewriting. The poet Yang Wanli was a unique writer in the Southern Song Dynasty. His landscape poems are fresh and lively, full of life breath, and the title is Cheng Zhai Ti.

Written in 1 192, the first two sentences of this poem describe the beautiful countryside at the turn of spring and summer, and the last two sentences describe the scene of children playing with butterflies, which shows the poet's happy mood in spring. On the basis of understanding the thoughts and feelings expressed in ancient poems, let students imagine creatively.

The emphasis of rewriting is on the last two poems, because these two poems create a vivid image of "children flapping butterflies", and the whole picture is dynamic, in contrast to the static description of the first two poems. The appearance of children broke the stillness and made the picture come alive. After the children saved the butterfly, the picture returned to the stillness.

When rewriting, we should follow the order of "static-dynamic-static", grasp the movements, expressions and emotions of children when they jump on the media, and write down the disappointment that children can't find when they see Huang Die flying into the day lily. Please look at a short passage rewritten by a child under the guidance of a teacher.

There is a path outside the fence, with sparse hooves. Although the flowers on the roadside trees have fallen, the leaves have not been shaded. In the fields, the oil flowers are golden.

How about rewriting ancient poems into compositions in the examination room? I wonder if this parent wants to take the college entrance examination or the senior high school entrance examination?

If you want to use poetry, it is best to use famous sentences in poetry and the background or allusions of poetry as examples. It will be more difficult if you insist on rewriting.

If you take the senior high school entrance examination, I personally suggest that the topic composition should be in this form. Even if you make up stories, you should connect with life. Don't let the wild horse of thought run wild = =! ! Or take poetry as a clue to write, and make appropriate changes to one or two words in the poem (use another word or something) when necessary. This form of clue will be very popular if used well. But no matter what you take, the most important thing is the words.

This directly affects the mood of the marking teacher and the score of the composition, and then the topic will be deducted at the beginning. If possible, ask questions everywhere to make the article more compact.

But the first question is the most important! .

6. How to rewrite ancient poems into 800-word narratives-Rewrite Mujiang Song.

As the sun sets, the afterglow of the setting sun spreads all over the earth.

The sun took off its dazzling coat and put on a bright red shawl. It is so soft and beautiful!

The clear river is like a mirror, shining in the corner of the light. When the breeze blows, water waves appear on the river, and the reflection of sunlight vibrates, just like a girl dancing in the water.

The weeping willows by the river put their long hair into the water, like a beautiful princess, twisting her slender waist and putting a green skirt on the shore, compared with the sunshine in the water. Unfortunately, they didn't name the winner, but reflected the river half red and half green, like a huge palette.

Although the flowers on the riverside are not so graceful, they always exude charming fragrance.

I stood on the rock and looked around. The mountains in the distance were looming in the fog, which was extremely mysterious. The brightly lit villages with snuff are like swarms of fireflies, and the hazy fog connects the river, the earth and the sky. Ah! September 3rd, what a beautiful night! Birds are singing in front of the mountain, and the fruit in the field is fragrant; Dewdrops are like crystal pearls; The hidden moon is like a beautiful bow, even the fallen leaves are full of praise, and the wind is singing hymns.

I love you this intoxicating Mujiang!

Teacher: Ancient poems describing scenery should focus on describing scenery and grasp its characteristics. When writing a scene, there should be true feelings between the lines and express true feelings. Emotion and scenery are inseparable, and it is an important means to create artistic conception to contain emotion in scenery, melt emotion in scenery and melt scenery in scenery. A good practice should avoid the scenery without emotion, let emotion become scenery, and scenery become emotional notes. Only when the two fit perfectly can the article be subtle and meaningful.

(2)

Teacher: The students of landscape painting and ancient poetry all know its rewriting method, so how should narrative ancient poetry be rewritten? Now please look at the rewriting of To Wang Lun.

This is a narrative poem praising friendship. It is also a masterpiece in farewell poems. Since ancient times, the atmosphere of parting is sad, and there are few laughter and laughter. However, the poet used a unique way to create a heroic atmosphere. Express deep affection and farewell wishes among friends. Please look at the original text and the revised examples.

(The projection shows poems with pictures and an example "A gift for Wang Lun")

say goodbye to

-Rewrite A Gift for Wang Lun.

Li Bai is one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty. I had a rough life experience and experienced the process from prosperity to decline in the Tang Dynasty.

Li Taibai is called "Romantic Poet" because he is generous, easy to swim and good at wine. At that time, a man named Wang Lun worshipped Li Bai very much. Let the son recite Li Bai's "A Word to Meng Haoran" from childhood. Knowing that Li Bai was going out to play on state affairs, he wrote a letter to Li Bai: How is your husband? There are ten miles of peach blossoms here; How about the wine, sir? There are ten thousand hotels here. Wang Lun

When Li Bai received this letter, he was elated and thought: Playing and drinking are my favorite things. Why not take this opportunity to relax? So he set off the next day. When he arrived at Wang Lun's house, Li Bai couldn't wait to ask, "Brother, where is Shili Peach Blossom?" Wang Lun smiled and pulled Li Bai to see that there was only one peach tree. Wang Lun said, "We only have a peach tree here. Every time it blooms, it will smell the fragrance of Shili, so it is called Shili Peach Blossom".

Li Bai asked again, "What about the 10,000 hotels? Why don't we go for a few drinks! " But Wang Lun still took Li Bailing to a small restaurant called "Wanjia Hotel". Li Bai is very confused. Wang Lun told Li Bai that the owner of this hotel was surnamed Wan, so it was called "Wanjia Hotel".

Li Bai was not only not angry, but also applauded again and again. Wang Lun was also very happy, and invited Li Bai to be a guest at home. The Wangs warmly welcomed him. Li Bai and Wang Lun talked at his parents and became close friends.

Li Bai lived in Wang Lun's house for half a year, and time flies. On this day, Li Bai said to Wang Lun, "Brother Wang Lun, I have lived in your house for half a year, and I will leave tomorrow to continue my immortal life." "Why? Is it because I don't treat my guests well that you don't want to stay any longer? " Wang Lun asked. Li Bai waved and explained, "No, your family regards me as a relative. How could I not like it? " ? I just want to travel around the world. "Wang Lun see can't say li bai, had to agree to let him go.

The next morning, Li Bai came to Taohuatan with endless nostalgia and regret. Li Bai clenched his fists with his hands and said with tears, "Brother, your friendship with me will never be forgotten by Li!" Before the words were finished, singing accompanied by footsteps sounded on the shore. Li Bai took a look, ah! It was the villagers who saw him off. Li Bai waved to the crowd and said loudly, "Take care, folks. I believe Li will come to see you again! " One of the people in the crowd said, "Great poet, take care, too. Wish you all the best. See you later. " At this time, a boat has docked on the shore, waiting for the great poet Li Bai to board. Li Bai stepped into the boat and said his last words to Wang Lun with deep affection: "Brother Wang Lun, although the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as the friendship between you and me. Let's lift the boat of friendship and sail to the other side of each other's hearts. " Wang Lun finally lost control of his emotions and said with tears, "Take care! "