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Book a pick-up service from a foreign hotel. Hotel confirmed. 1. The scheduled itinerary is to fly to the capital of the country and then transfer to the city where the hotel is located. However, if the plane is late, you may not be able to catch the scheduled bus on time. Contact the hotel after getting on the bus to determine how to express this clearly to the other party. The hotel made a mistake about the sex of the reservation, and the surname and first name were written backwards. How to gently point out the above mistakes to the other party in your reply?

I'm worried that the plane may be delayed, so I prefer to call the hotel pick-up service after getting on the bus from XX to XX.

I noticed that the hotel registration information was wrong.

I am a woman, my first name is XXX and my last name is XXX.

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