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Li Bai, it's good to climb Tianmu Mountain in my dream.

Visit Tianmu Mountain in a Dream

Lipper

A sailing tourist will talk about Japan, which is hidden in water and fog and inaccessible.

However, when the Vietnamese talk about Tianmu Mountain, they can still see it through clouds of different depths.

On a straight line leading to heaven, its peak enters heaven, topped with five sacred peaks, and casts a shadow across China.

The Paradise Terrace Mountains are 100 miles long, and it is here that they begin to extend to the southeast.

My heart and my dream are in Wu Heyue, flying over Jinghu Moon overnight.

The moon lit up my shadow and I came to Yanhe.

Xie Caotang is still there, the clear water is rippling, and the apes are singing. I put on Xie's first spiked shoes and climbed the blue ladder.

Halfway through the sunny ocean, the sacred rooster crows in space.

Thousands of turns, flowers lure me, stones slow me down. The day suddenly ended.

Bears, dragons, storms on mountains and rivers? The deep forest shook the top floor.

Clouds are darkened by rain, and streams are pale by fog.

God of thunder and lightning, the mountains are crumbling.

The stone gate is broken and ventilated in the deep pit of heaven.

An impenetrable shadow, but now the sun and the moon illuminate a golden and silver terrace.

Wearing rainbow clothes and riding the wind, all the queens of the clouds came and came down one by one.

With the tiger as the harp and the phoenix as the dancer, the images of fairies are arranged in rows.

I moved, my soul flew and suddenly began to grow.

My pillow and mat are the lost clouds in which I once lived.

This is the consistent way of human happiness, and all kinds of things will always flow to the east like water.

So I'm leaving you. I don't know how long it will take. But let me raise a white deer on my green hillside and ride to you when I need you, Dashan.

Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those people with high status and important positions? They never want to be seen with a sincere face!

This is a poem about dreams and immortals. Poems about famous mountains are unique, rigorous and magnificent. Emotion is deep, intense and unpredictable, which reflects the truth of life in the illusory description. Although bizarre, it is not artificial. The content is rich and tortuous, and the image is brilliant and romantic. Formally, miscellaneous words alternate with each other, while using Sao style, not bound by laws and regulations, and the system is liberated. The letter is handwritten, the pen is attached, and the poem is a masterpiece.

1 Lesson 2 Lesson 5 Tianmu Mountain Rising in a Dream Teaching Plan

Teaching focus

Experience and learn exaggerated and imaginative expressions, and be able to appreciate romantic poetry;

Understand the poet's yearning for the immortal world, the yearning for free life, and the lofty spirit of dismissing the dark world and powerful people.

Teaching difficulties

Feel the magical and magnificent dream world ideal in this poem; Understand the poet's yearning for the immortal world, the yearning for free life, and the lofty spirit of dismissing the dark world and powerful people.

Teaching methods: reading and discussion.

teaching process

Reading aloud, overall perception

1 Students read the full text. Solve the obstacles of words, phrases and sentences.

Play the reciting tape or the teacher demonstrates reading aloud, and ask the students to grasp the rhythm and pause. Experience the emotion contained in the poem.

Clear your mind, understand the theme and appreciate the artistic characteristics.

1 summarizes the general idea of the three paragraphs.

Clear:

The first paragraph describes the reasons for sleepwalking. The second paragraph is about sleepwalking. The third paragraph writes about the lament after sleepwalking.

How does the poet describe Tianmu Mountain in the first paragraph?

Clear:

The incredible Yingzhou reflects the objective existence of "or visible" Tianmu Mountain. Then, the poet described the majestic momentum of Tianmu Mountain through the mouth of Yue people. The three verbs "horizontal", "pull" and "cover" not only describe the appearance characteristics of Tianmu Mountain, but also give it a strong sense of movement.

According to the different scenery in the dream, how many layers can this paragraph be divided into? What is written on each floor?

Clear:

The first layer is "Monkeys clearly call on the blue waves", which describes the scene of flowing from dreams. On the second floor, I went to "Holy Cockcrow in Space" to describe the sleepwalking scene of Tianmu Mountain. From the third floor to "Row upon row, like a field of hemp, arranging immortal figures", it describes the wonderful scene of poets meeting immortals at the top of Tianmu Mountain. On the fourth floor, I went to "I am in a Lost Cloud" and the poet woke up from his dream.

Describe your favorite picture, pay attention to the alternation of time and space, the change of color and the grandeur of the scene.

Clear:

For example, "at the end of the deep sky, there is a magnificent and colorful fairy world." The sun and the moon hang here, and the golden palace is wrapped in silver. Immortals wear clothes and walk against the wind. The breeze rippled and the clothes fluttered. Immortals come in droves; Tigers play the piano for them and Luan birds drive for them. Yue Xian's voice, unprecedented! How can such a free and beautiful fairy world not let poets fall for it? "

5. Divide the third paragraph into different levels to further understand the theme of this poem.

Clear:

These seven sentences actually show three meanings. "This is the consistent way of human happiness, and all kinds of things will always flow to the east like water" wrote the uncertainty of the world, just like that fleeting dream. There are some negative emotions, but as far as the whole poem is concerned, they are not the main ones. "So I leave you, I don't know how long? But let me, on my green slope, raise a white deer and ride to you, great mountain, when I need you "is the poet's straightforward confession to stay away from this dark and filthy real world." We should not regard this idea as passive and secluded, but should realize the poet's wisdom of observing the world and his lofty sentiments of despising the world. "Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?" This sentence most directly and thoroughly expresses the poet's arrogant attitude of not serving the powerful.

Learn the whole poem and talk about your understanding of the theme of the poem.

Clear:

This poem reflects Li Bai's complicated thoughts and feelings and contradictory psychological state. The real society is dark and cold, just like in a dream. Instead of indulging in the unpredictable reality, it is better to ride a deer to seek longevity and stay away from the turbid world. The poet launched a fantastic romantic technique, dreaming in wonderland, which showed his longing for the fairy world, his longing for a free life, and his lofty spirit of despising the dark world and powerful people.

Although the author also showed the negative thought of "ten thousand waters flow eastward in Qian Shan", "But let me raise a white deer on my green slope and ride to you, Dashan, when I need you", what is more prominent is the cleverness and arrogance of observing the world and not serving the powerful. This is the magnanimity and magnificence of "Alas, how can I grovel to those dignitaries who will never suffer".

After reading the second paragraph, what do you know about the artistic features of Li Bai's poems?

Clear: 1 rich imagination (omitted)

Bold exaggeration (for example)

blackboard-writing design

Comments on teaching plans:

Reading aloud is a good way to appreciate ancient poems. This poem has a musical rhythm and is catchy to read. Repeated reading helps to realize the ideal of magical and magnificent dream world in this poem;

Let students fully expand their imagination and turn words into pictures, which is helpful to understand the poet's romantic style.

Example 2 of teaching plan

Hubei/Zhu Huahua

Teaching emphasis: (1) Understand Li Bai's thought and character. (2) Appreciate the artistic features of Li's poems.

Difficulties in teaching: understanding the internal relationship between dreams and poetry themes.

Author: Shan Wen Shui Ling 2007-2-22 15:24 Reply to this statement

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Second, go to the fifth lesson: Tianmu Mountain climbing dream teaching plan.

Teaching process:

First, import (and define the style)

Teacher: When we were in primary school, we once learned a farewell poem "To Wang Lun" by Li Bai (read by the whole class): "Li Bai was about to leave by boat when he suddenly heard a song on the shore. There are thousands of Taohuatan households, not as good as Wang Lun. " This poem shows the profound friendship between Li Bai and Wang Lun. Today, we are going to learn another farewell poem by Li Bai, which has a very different idea. (Writing on the blackboard, author) Yin is a kind of Yuefu poetry, which belongs to ancient poetry, and the text, sentence pattern and meter are generally free.

Second, read and analyze the text.

(-) Read and analyze the first paragraph.

Teacher: Read the first paragraph together and think about it: Since the topic is "Sleepwalking in Tianmu" (double lines are marked under the word "Sleepwalking in Tianmu"), why do you want to talk about Yingzhou at the beginning?

Qing: The ethereal Yingzhou is as mysterious and wonderful as the ethereal Tianmu. Yingzhou's "hard to find a letter" makes people shy, but the "or visibility" of Tianmu has become a strong temptation. In this way, taking Yingzhou as a backdrop and virtual reality as a backdrop, it not only casts a mysterious and wonderful veil on Tianmu Mountain, but also evokes the author's idea of wandering in Tianmu Mountain.

Teacher: Besides Yingzhou, what other mountains are mentioned in this paragraph? What's the role?

Qing Dynasty: Wuyue, Chicheng and Tiantai were also mentioned, which set off the grandeur of Tianmu and further aroused the author's strong desire to roam Tianmu. (blackboard writing: why)

Read and analyze the second paragraph.

Teacher: How can the mysterious and majestic Tianmu Mountain not make the author dream? So there was a wonderful dream of "My heart and dream are in me and the moon, flying over the mirror lake and the bright moon overnight". Please listen to the teacher read the second paragraph and think: either in chronological order or in place order, point out that this paragraph depicts several pictures, and summarize the characteristics of each picture with L-2 words.

(Analyze and write on the blackboard)

Moonlight Night-Quiet and Quiet of Tunxi

Magnificent scenery on the mountain during the day.

The evening terror outside the cave

Night-Yue Xian in the cave

Teacher: Taste key words: flying, sending, yin, millet, shock, etc.

Qing Dynasty: The words "fly" and "send" used exaggeration and personification successively, which vividly showed the poet's eagerness, excitement, lightness and longing on the road.

"Cause", "element" and "respect" are used flexibly as verbs, causatives and causatives respectively.

Teacher: Let the boys read "Yue Xian in the Cave", and then let a girl describe it in plain cultural language.

Reference: Lightning and thunder, mountain collapse. The stone gate of Xiandong snapped open from the middle. The sky in Xianfu is endless, with no end in sight. The sun and the moon shine on palaces made of gold and silver, rainbows are clothes, the breeze is horses, and the immortals in the clouds descend to earth one after another. Tiger playing the piano and bird driving, there are countless gods like hemp. What a happy scene.

Teacher: Read the part of Tianmu Sleepwalking freely and try to recite it.

Teacher: Just as the dream reached its climax, the author said, "I moved, and my soul was scattered, and I was suddenly surprised and long." My pillow and mat are the lost clouds in which I once lived. "The dream suddenly disappeared. Facing the reality, the author can't help but sigh. What did the author sigh? "

Read and analyze paragraph (3)

Teacher: Ask one student to read paragraph 3, and the rest of the students think: What kind of thoughts and character does this paragraph reflect?

Clear: The word "Liu Jun" refers to the topic "Liu Bie" (double line is marked under the word "Liu Bie"). The most dissatisfied with the reality, not following the trend, despising the powerful, arrogant and unyielding, is mainly revealed in the jokes. At the same time, it also reveals the nothingness and sentimentality of life as a dream and the negative thoughts of escaping from reality. However, we should not criticize Li Bai too much because of this. In the dirty feudal market, how many people were assimilated and lost their self and personality, and the poet could not change the social environment at that time. A proud and unyielding person like Li Bai is very valuable.

Teacher: Why does the author spend so much ink to describe dreams? What role does it play in expressing the theme?

Clarity: Dreamland symbolizes the ideal state pursued by the author. The beauty of fairyland is written to contrast the ugliness of reality. Writing about one's yearning for the celestial world is only to express one's dislike of the dark reality. That is to say, the poem is consistent with the poet's yearning for a free life, but the first half of the poem is expressed in the form of a dream, while the second half of the poem is outspoken and sings directly: "But let me, on my green slope, raise a white deer and ride to you, the great mountain, when I need you. Ann can raise her eyebrows and bend her waist, becoming very powerful, and no one will be seen with an honest face! "

Teacher: That's a good understanding. Is there any other understanding that can make a hundred schools of thought contend? I wonder if the students paid attention to the third question after class: Why did the poet only write a fairy festival in which he was not?

Author: Shan Wen Shui Ling 2007-2-22 15:24 Reply to this statement

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The second and fifth lessons, Tianmu Mountain climbing dream teaching plan.

Clear: Teachers can insert relevant background to help understand. Li Bai had the ambition to help the world and strengthen the country in his early years. However, he disdained to ascend the official career through the imperial examination, but hoped to become an important official by leaps and bounds. As a result, he roamed all over the country, making celebrities and expanding his fame. In the first year of Tianbao, recommended by a friend, 42-year-old Li Bai was called to Chang 'an by Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty. He thought it was time to show his ambition, and he really won a short victory. However, he soon discovered that Li Longji only regarded him as a royal poet who entertained himself. At the same time, Li Bai was arrogant by nature and refused to go along with the powerful. He was drunk and ordered Gao Lishi, the favorite of Xuanzong, to take off his boots, which offended the dignitaries and led to their exclusion. Even Xuanzong began to be dissatisfied with him, so he only lived in Chang 'an for more than a year, and was expelled from the capital by Xuanzong of Tang Dynasty in the name of "giving money back to his hometown". In this short period of more than a year, Li Bai witnessed the fatuous corruption within the ruling group and the cruel struggle of court life. In the second year, when Li Bai left Donglu and toured Wu Yue in the south, he wrote this poem "Farewell", sincerely expressing his contempt for the powerful and unyielding to his relatives and friends, and completely divorced from court life.

Therefore, we can also understand the author's dream as a reflection of his court life a year ago. From "Flying to the Lake One Night", we seem to see that Li Bai jumped from a humble cloth to a respected minister. However, when he entered the court, he found that the upper class he had been longing for was not so beautiful. From the descriptions of "bears, dragons, mountains and rivers, shocking the forest and shocking the sky" and "clouds and rain are dark", we seem to see the intrigue and ruthlessness of court life and the loneliness of Li Bai's situation. Although the scene of the fairy party is joyful, the unruly Li Bai can't get along with them, as Zhu Ziqing wrote in Moonlight on the Lotus Pond: "The excitement is theirs, and I have nothing." The poet is excluded and can only be a bystander of the upper class, but he is more sober, and his timely awakening shows that he is completely out of this life.

In a word, whether the dream is understood as the ideal state pursued by the author or the court life abandoned by the author, their main purpose is the same, that is, contempt for powerful people and perseverance.