Tonglu Diamond Ring Hotel

Interception is right, I hope it can help you!

First, the artistic conception is beautiful

At the beginning of the article, the background of Fuchun River landscape is outlined with concise brushstrokes-sunny, the sky is high and the clouds are light, the air is fresh, the mountains are green and the water is green. The overall impression given by Fuyang's water trip to Tonglu is "strange mountains and different waters, chinese odyssey".

The second paragraph is "different water". First, grasp its "light green" characteristics and write its crystal-clear static beauty: this water seems to be transparent, which can be seen at a glance, even the fish swimming around and the fine stones at the bottom can be seen at a glance. Then, through exaggerated metaphor, the dynamic beauty of its fast-flowing fierce wave is outlined: this water is sometimes fast-flowing, and it is breathtaking. In this way, there is movement in silence, and the combination of movement and static shows the beautiful and spectacular beauty of Fuchun River, highlighting the word "different".

The third paragraph says "strange mountain" First of all, from the point of view of form, the strangeness of writing the mountain itself lies in "competing against the potential" and "competing for height" Yamamoto is still the same, but in the author's pen, it seems to have endless vitality to make progress. They seem to have left the earth and headed straight for the sky. If they want to go up, they will become "Thousand Peaks". Secondly, from the perspective of sound, write the wonder of empty mountains and the sound of nature. In the empty valley and deep mountains, springs tinkle, birds sing cicadas and apes cry. These cheerful voices converge into an ode to life, turning this silent valley into a vivid, harmonious, joyful and meticulous world. There are these lives in the mountains, and these lives give this mountain unlimited vitality. Thirdly, from the perspective of color, write the wonders of the sun in the mountains. Although it is sunny outside the mountain, it is a different scene inside. The author's brushwork changed from dynamic to static, and wrote a gloomy picture of the valley with dense branches and leaves and shaded by thick shade, and only "sometimes seeing the sun" during the day. In this passage, the color of the mountain voice is closely related to the word "strange".

Grasping the characteristics of this mountain and water, the author skillfully combines motion and stillness, sound and color, light and shadow, and paints a vibrant landscape for readers, so that readers can fully appreciate the "beauty of mountains and rivers" on both sides of Fuchun River.

Second, the beauty of interest

This paper is mainly about scenery writing, and there are few languages to write lyric records directly. But excellent articles have always paid attention to the coexistence of scenes. From the author's description of the scenery and a few words about impressions, we can appreciate the author's elegant taste and noble feelings. We can feel a kind of freedom, freedom and freedom from the first sentence "drifting from the stream, anything will do"; From the description of the scenery, I realized the author's love for nature and freedom and praise for vitality. What is even more admirable is that when describing the mountain scenery, the author inserted two words of testimony: "Those who fly kites against the sky look at the peak and rest their hearts;" He who is in charge of the affairs of the world looks at the valley and forgets to betray. "These feelings not only set off the breathtaking charm of dangerous peaks and valleys from the side, but also conveyed the author's contempt for fame and fortune and his boredom with officialdom.

After careful consideration, the author's interest is not only different from active entry into the WTO, but also different from passive seclusion. It is a kind of admiration for relaxation and nature, a yearning for freedom and harmony, and a tribute to a happy life. It is less serious than the former, more natural and unrestrained, less pessimistic and more cheerful than the latter, so its mentality is more common, more acceptable and cordial.

Third, the language is beautiful.

Parallel prose is a formal style. The author Wu Yun is a famous parallel prose writer in the Southern Dynasties. His masterpiece A Letter with Zhu naturally keeps the characteristics of parallel prose. The article basically follows the requirements of parallel prose, mainly using four sentences and six sentences, and using a lot of antithetical sentences in the second half of the article, such as "Spring Rock makes a cold sound; Good birds sing in unison. ""cicadas are endless, apes are endless. " In this way, the expression effect of neat sentence patterns, harmonious phonology, ideological contrast and interest in each other is achieved, and it is catchy to read and has a strong sense of rhythm.

However, this paper is different from the general parallel prose at that time, which broke the shackles of parallel prose form to a certain extent and embodied valuable breakthroughs and innovations. First, in the four sentences and six sentences, "those who fly kites against the sky, look at the peak and rest;" The sentence pattern of alternating five-character and four-character avoids the disadvantages of rigid parallel prose and makes the language lively and free; Secondly, there is almost no duality in the first half of the article, which is no different from general prose (especially the first section). The second half is basically neat antithetical sentences with flexible and rhythmic language. Third, the article does not pile up allusions like ordinary parallel prose, and even deliberately uses coldness. In addition to the allusion of "kite flying against the sky", the full text adopts the method of sketching to convey the spirit accurately, making the language of the article look fresh, natural, vivid and smooth, and stand out from the crowd in the mainstream parallel prose at that time.

Fourth, the structure is beautiful.

Although Zhu Yu's books are short in length, they are also well organized.

The first paragraph of the article leads the whole article with the word "strange mountain and strange water, chinese odyssey", while the second and third paragraphs are divided into two aspects: "strange water" and "strange mountain", which are described around the word "unparalleled", with clear structural outline and distinct context.

The order of scenery description is "water" first and then "mountain", from near to far, spread out layer by layer, which is in line with the viewing habit of "drifting from the stream" and is well organized.

In the focus of landscape description, the full text details "mountain" and slightly writes "water"; Write the part of "water", the details are static, and the dynamics are slightly written; Write the "mountain" part, write the dynamic part in detail, and write the static part slightly. This not only highlights the main features of the scenery, but also appears meticulous and decent.

Reading this book with Zhu is like reading a good poem, because it is not only poetic with meaningful words and harmonious syllables, but also full of fresh and elegant poetry; Reading "The Book with Zhu" is like enjoying a landscape, because it has a unique landscape and is more clear and free. In a word, this article has beautiful scenery and beautiful words, which can give us beautiful enjoyment and spiritual pleasure.

Wu Yun (469-520) was born in Xing Wu (now Anji County, Zhejiang Province). Famous litterateurs in Southern Dynasties. Poetry and prose mostly describe the natural beauty of mountains and rivers, with tall and straight style and certain artistic achievements. When people imitate his style, it is called "Wu Junti".

All the dust and fog have cleared away, and the sky and the mountain peaks show the same clear color. Let the boat drift with the current, whether it is east or west. From Fuyang to Tonglu, Baili Waterway, Qifeng Strange Water, chinese odyssey. Rivers are all green, and thousands of feet can be seen at the bottom. Swimming fish and thin pebbles can be seen clearly. Rapidly flowing water is faster than flying arrows, and surging river waves are like galloping horses. Cold-resistant evergreen trees grow on the high mountains between the two banks. The mountains rely on the terrain to strive for upward, one higher than the other. Strive to point directly at the sky and form a thousand peaks. The spring water hits the stone and makes a crisp sound; Good birds sing in harmony with each other and weave beautiful melodies. Cicadas can't finish singing, and apes can't finish singing. People whose careers are soaring will calm their passion for fame and fortune when they look at such a beautiful mountain peak; People who are busy planning and managing secular affairs all day will linger when they see such a beautiful valley. Cross-sloping branches cover the sun, even during the day, it is as dark as dusk; Sparse branches cover each other, sometimes missing some light spots.