Close-up composition 400

1. The unforgettable 350-word close-up composition is still persisting, but no one will come to save you and will not give up. You are extremely happy and inspired by your touching words. You have persisted for more than 1 13 hours.

Now, I remind myself all the time that it is difficult to save you from your uncle's rescue. After 72 hours ... no one came to save you. Bang. Someone came without the help of heavy machinery. I believe someone will come to save you and put you in an ambulance at once.

You have been waiting for a long time, so don't worry. You are buried under heavy concrete slabs and broken beams, and the only thing you can see is the close-up of your determined eyes.

But you didn't give up: keep a clear head, and finally you were rescued slowly, and the rescue uncle still couldn't be rescued. You waited for 24 hours, even with your last breath, persistence is victory, and you threw it outside. They have made unremitting efforts, and I can persist.

As time goes by, you have persisted for several days: "Uncle. Time is ticking away. I believe someone handed you a bottle of mineral water with both hands, because you knew someone was coming to save you. "

Uncle rescue was moved by your determined eyes. At that time, no difficulty could stop your rescue, and no one walked through this place and saw the strength of the Chinese nation to endure pain, but your determined eyes under the ruins.

You even told your uncles that you were looking forward to getting you out as soon as possible without drinking a drop of water. Finally, I am still looking forward to it.

You are full of energy, you put your hand out of the gap, you still don't give up, take a small stone, you will continue to insist and not sleep! The host preached, and there are aftershocks in your place. Because I see the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation in your eyes.

I can't forget your determined eyes. 48 hours, you never leave, has been deeply imprinted in my mind. I believe that good people are safe all their lives: On May 22nd, you were in ruins, I saw you on TV, and I saw the hope of the Chinese nation. Cement slabs and broken beams weigh heavily on your thin body. Why not save it?

2. The close-up composition is 400 words. I think since it is news, it must be true and credible. At the same time, news is a way of information dissemination and requires conciseness. News has a certain structure. It is roughly as follows: title (topic)-introduction (usually the simplest thing to talk about)-body (that is, the details of news)-summary (that is, the end) Writing news is very different from writing in school Chinese class. As long as the words are fluent, the narrative is clear and the writing is beautiful, it is a good composition, which does not necessarily require truth, nor is it for publication. News is a report of recent facts. The genre of news is also relatively clear, and writing also has its own requirements. Let's start with three main news genres. First, putting on airs before writing an article is the basis of all writing. Before you start writing, you must think about what to write and determine the central idea, which is usually reflected in the topic. However, in the manuscript, it is often seen that the title does not match the content or the topic is small. Then I have to think about how to write, put on airs for the article, what to say first, and then what to say. What kind of material to use at last, and so on. However, in the submission, many articles obviously lack thinking about the structure, and the phenomenon of digression, improper details and repeated phrases is very serious. These two points should be self-evident for news writing, but there are too many problems in this area, including some full-time journalists, which often ignore these most basic writing requirements. I speak fluently, but I don't understand. Therefore, when talking about specific writing, first, please think for yourself: what do I want to write and how am I going to write it (including using various materials). Second, news writing is the most common news genre. Its purpose is to report the latest facts and propaganda to readers in concise and objective words. The objectivity principle of news does not allow journalists to comment or make judgments in it. Even if they want to report and publicize something, they should "speak with facts" and choose the facts to report. Journalists can't comment on the news. Fact news generally adopts an inverted pyramid structure, that is, the whole news arranges narrative levels and paragraphs according to the importance according to all aspects of a fact, thus forming the following "top-heavy" or "anticlimactic" reporting structure: 1. Introduction. The most important or wonderful part of the fact, or the most important and wonderful words of the key point of the fact, should be regarded as the first language. 2. Materials that further explain or illustrate the facts mentioned in the introduction. These materials are arranged in order of priority and can be divided into several paragraphs. 3. The necessary background materials are also arranged in order of importance. 4. Secondary auxiliary materials. If such news is abridged from behind, leaving only an introduction or even a sentence, it can still exist independently. And tell the reader clearly what happened. Obviously, the lead plays an important role in news and must be written well. There are four main types of guidance: factual guidance: general guidance; Descriptive introduction; Delay in advance. We should decide which one to adopt according to the specific situation. There are two key points to grasp: to understand the key points of reporting facts; Find verbs or phrases that can impress readers and guide them to continue reading in time. The introduction generally involves the following four aspects: 1, which briefly tells readers specific and clear facts; 2. The time when the fact happened; 3. News sources; 4. Place of occurrence. Other common news structures, as well as cumulative interest structure, time series structure, summary structure, etc. Thirdly, communication writing reports the facts in detail and eclectically, thus forming another major news genre-communication. Communication and * * * have the same feature, that is, to comprehensively report the recent facts in the way of narration, description, lyricism and discussion. Both events and people should be reported frequently. Through people's activities and thoughts, facts are generally perceptual, which is the charm of communication. Communication and cooperation are more flexible than news, which allows journalists to express their tendencies (of course, some communications can also be reported objectively), but it is not easy to write well because it requires a more solid writing foundation. Communication needs a very clear theme, and refining the communication theme is usually the key to the success of communication. This requires an in-depth analysis of the characteristics of facts. Understand the background and spirit of the times. From this aspect, we can see the author's analytical ability and ideological level. The types of communication structures are flexible and diverse, and there are three common types: 1, and the "one-stop" type, that is, the vertical structure in time. 2, "broken watermelon" type, that is, the horizontal structure in space. 3, "peeling bamboo shoots", that is, from simple expression to deep development.

How long has it been since you opened that 400-word photo album to compose old photos? Half a year, a year, or even longer, dust off the shallow gray layer on the cover and turn it over, which is the color of memory. On the old photos, there are traces of years drifting. From the pages of those yellowed photo albums, there are the laughter of seven years ago, the warm golden sunshine of ten years ago, the fleeting time and the old flavor. Look at this old photo. There is little hair on it and deep eyes. In the photo, I am in a stadium that has not been rebuilt. Although wearing a knee-length skirt, she is still naughty and active, regardless of the "lady image". I grabbed the rusty parallel bars in the gym with my chubby fingers and made a nonstandard "pull-up". My legs look like I'm kicking around in the air. Looking at this photo, the small fragments of my childhood are easily shaken off. I remember my father telling me. Because the stadium is near my home, my parents often take me to the stadium to play. There are a lot of fitness equipment in the stadium, but I am a tomboy who "learns to shoot in a skirt". As soon as I got to the stadium, I climbed up and down around the sports equipment that was taller than me. At that time, my parents always watched quietly, taking a few pictures from time to time and holding up the camera to take a close-up. Count, one, two, three. Fingertips pluck at the page, thoughts shuttle for a period of time, and familiar smiles stir up bits and pieces of memories and instantly gather into an ocean. Mom in the old photo, sitting on the golden lawn of the park in the winter sun; In the old photos, I wore pink clothes and played carefree by the sea ... Every old photo is a witness, witnessing the rise of the sun and the setting of the moon, and the unchanging memory is warm.

4. The composition "My Mom", a close-up character, is about 400 words (I can't remember). There is a person who will always occupy the softest place in your heart, and you are willing to love her with your life; There is a kind of love that you can freely ask for and enjoy without asking for anything in return ... This person is called "Mom", and this kind of love is called "maternal love"!

May 13 is Mother's Day, which is the most unforgettable day in our hearts. This festival is a praise and commendation for mother, which reminds us to always remember: be grateful to mother.

We are grateful for the life experience our mother gave us; Mother makes us grow sturdily, and we are grateful; We are grateful to our mother for her education and enlightenment, which enabled us to gain knowledge and strength; There are always difficulties and twists and turns in our life. It is mother who gives us care and help, and we should be more grateful.

Gratitude is a comprehensive expression of a person's love, conscience, kindness, responsibility and loyalty. It is hard to imagine that a person who has no filial piety, no gratitude, no love and no respect for teachers and classmates can bear any responsibility for his company and country in the future. How can a person who doesn't love his country, his family and others devote himself to building the motherland tomorrow?

There is a touching little boy washing his mother's feet in the advertisement, but in real life, is it possible for every child to do it? "A drop of kindness should be rewarded by a gushing spring." We may sometimes be obsessed with a little care from a stranger, but turn a blind eye to our mother's great love, feel that she is nagging, or get furious because of some trivial things ... However, our mother will always support us silently, patiently enlighten us and give us support and encouragement.

Mother is pure as jade, exquisite as ivory carving, and the life watered by maternal love is brewing pure beauty and fragrance. We should listen to our mother's nagging with a grateful heart, face her harshness sincerely and feel her sunny inner world. ...

Let's learn to be grateful from today, from filial piety to mother! Let's remember the birthdays of all mothers in the world, wash their feet once, beat her back hard, give her a warm hug, a warm blessing and a grateful smile!

On this warm day, I wish all mothers in the world a happy Mother's Day! A bunch of carnations and a sentence "Mom, you have worked hard" can make your mother's cheeks smile again! Let's give our mother more consideration and care, make our mother and our family full of happiness and harmony, and we will have a real growth!

Here, I want to quote a poem to end: the growth of children is the hope of mother's rebirth; The child's failure is the mother's sour tears; A child's success is a mother's happy smile. Students, for the sake of mother's smile and tomorrow's harvest, let you and I be ambitious and carefree!

5. Unforgettable close-up composition 330 grids Speaking of swimming, I am very proud, because I can be regarded as a "swimmer"!

Swimming for the first time is my most unforgettable thing. It was the summer vacation of grade four, because many children can swim, and I am not to be outdone, so I went to learn to swim!

I put on my bathing suit and stood by the swimming pool. The water is clear and shallow. But for a beginner like me, it's still a little deep. Often there, the water is 1.8 meters deep! I'm only 1.4 meters tall.

After a while, a coach came and he began to teach me the basic movements of swimming. Lying in the water, I was nervous and practiced stiffly according to the movements taught by the coach. Spread your legs apart, stretch upward, make right angles to your body, and then come together. After doing this several times, I finally relaxed and did it much more smoothly.

The coach saw that I was doing much better, so he took me to the pool with a depth of 0.6 meters. The water didn't reach my thigh. The coach also taught me to pull the water on the spot: put your hands together, stretch forward, then slowly open them, and then you can swim forward with your legs and hands.

At this time, I am not so nervous and my heart is calm.

I'm moving forward like a new goal ...

I am very excited about swimming for the first time. I can swim!

6. Children's Day composition, 400 words, with an unforgettable "June 1" garden activity as the topic.

This year's Children's Day is coming, and a huge red banner "Celebrate Children's Day warmly" is hung at the school gate. The festive atmosphere on campus has become very strong, and all the students have innocent smiles on their faces. The whole school held a garden activity to celebrate Children's Day.

The cadres in our class made the classroom especially warm, and all the students came to the classroom in advance. At 2: 30 in the afternoon, the garden activities began with the warm applause of the monitor Liang Yuya. The first game is "Numbers Game". The rule is: first, the host says a set of numbers and asks for the middle number. If the number is correct, you can get a reward; The next game is "guessing people by touching hands", and I am fortunate to be invited to participate in this game and win prizes; The next step is to test the adaptability of the "Aauto Quicker quick eye". This game is to see what you want to take first, and then get it in 5 seconds, even if overtime is lost; Wonderful games followed. Everyone wants to shine in the competition, and everyone cheers for the students who won the prize for their wonderful performance. Actively participate in various games and gain a lot. * * * got a piece of writing paper, two notebooks, a protractor, a ruler and a triangle.

The activity was rich and colorful, and the students were enthusiastic and unforgettable, because it was not only the last time our alma mater celebrated June 1, but also the last time our alma mater celebrated the festival, which made me truly realize the happiness of today's life. I will firmly remember the school motto of "I am proud of Longping today, and I will be proud of Longping tomorrow", study hard, lay a good foundation, grow up healthily and strive to win glory for my alma mater!

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7. A 400-word scene close-up (an article written, not a sketch drawn) requires five speeds. Thank you, Associated Press, Moscow, 1980, July 18. Nadia comaneci is still the most beloved character in the Olympic Games.

She 18 years old. She is tall and fat, but she is still a slim girl. This striking Romanian athlete is the only one who can walk out of the gate of the Olympic Village and cause traffic jams.

It happened yesterday. Towards noon, nadia and her teammates in green sweatshirts-they looked like the runaway fairies in the story of Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs-found a place to sit down on the steps outside the International Hall.

Players from all over the world gathered there, some basking in the sun and some chatting about friendship. They sat there quietly for a while, and people in the past didn't notice who they were at first.

A photojournalist noticed them and "click, click" took their photos. Another photojournalist is coming.

Finally, they were completely surrounded by a group of journalists and athletes. They craned their necks to see the ophthalmologist Manych or asked her to sign it as a souvenir. Soon, the international hall was full of excitement.

They all remember that nadia comaneci, a girl of 14 years old, shone brilliantly at the 1976 Montreal Olympic Games and won three gold medals, 1 silver medal and 1 bronze medal. She is a gymnast with a perfect score of 10 and a perfect score of seven times.

Nadia is a quiet and kind girl. She tried to respond cheerfully to people's concerns. She answered several questions in French.

Then, she stood up with her teammates-all little dolls less than her shoulder height-and walked to the nearby gym. Her admirers pushed and shoved behind her.

When she came back, this scene was repeated several times. Cuban heavyweight boxing champion Tefero Stevenson sat on a low wall.

Fairport Boyle, a world-famous long-distance runner from Tanzania, walked into an open-air cafe. Other athletes-some alone, some in groups, and some champions in sportswear-passed by, but no one attracted everyone's attention.

However, people focus on Nadia. A short Indian man approached Nadia and gave her an Indian doll.

He explained, "This is Clara dancer." Nadia hugged the doll affectionately and smiled happily.

When Romanian athletes pushed the crowd into the Olympic Village, someone asked nadia in English if she could win the gold medal again. She held up her thumb to say "first" and then disappeared.

There will be a women's gymnastics competition next Monday, and it will be clear whether she can win the championship again.