The second day of writing imitates Yueyang Tower and writes 600 words about xxx scenic spots.

Ouyang Xiu was a famous essayist and poet in the Northern Song Dynasty. Mention him, and you won't forget his drunken pavilion. By describing the beautiful natural environment and harmonious social atmosphere, he implicitly and euphemistically expressed his special mood after being demoted. In this essay, there are descriptions of scenery, descriptions of personnel and expressions of emotions, all of which vividly show Ouyang Xiu's special feelings at that time. With the description of the scenery in the article, we see a leisurely and happy world: "There are mountains around the Chu River, and the peaks in the southwest are beautiful, and the viewers are beautiful and deep. Six or seven miles up the mountain, I gradually heard the sound of water gurgling, overflowing the spring between the two peaks. The peak turns around, the pavilion wings go up to the spring, and the pavilion is also drunk. " There are no rugged rocks and cliffs in the mountains here, and the water here is not breathtaking. The mountains are undulating, covered with green shade, deep and beautiful, quietly extending around; Water, like a winding silver belt, gurgles down, melodious and beautiful; There is also a pavilion, the corner of which is inclined, like a bird, flying quietly by the thin water. What a soft and quiet scenery. The description at the beginning of Zuiwengting brings us to a beautiful environment and produces a pleasant feeling. The same is true of another scene description: "If the husband is in the forest at sunrise, the clouds will return to the cave, and the changers will be in the mountains." The wild fragrance is rich, the wood is beautiful, the wind and frost are noble and clean, and the truth comes out. "Here, I wrote about the light fog floating in the morning, the clouds gathering in the evening, the wild flowers in the spring, the green trees in the summer, the frost in the autumn, and the stones above the water in winter. Everything is so quiet and simple, elegant and natural. This is a description of the scenery in prose. Let's look at the description of personnel in the prose: "The satrap and the guests come here to drink, and they get drunk with less, so they call themselves alcoholics." "As for the loser who sings on the road, the walker rests on the tree, the former calls, the latter answers, lowers his head, supports, never stops, and the Chuhe people swim. Fishing near the stream, deep fish fat in the stream, spring wine making, spring fragrant wine bottles; The pheasant is just a predecessor and a satrap feast. The joy of a feast is not silk or bamboo. In the shooter, the player wins, the money is intertwined, the guests sit up and make noise. The guests are also white-haired, and the middle one is also drunk. " "After all, the setting sun is in the mountains, the figure is scattered, and the guests are smooth. "What it describes is not a vigorous social event, nor an extraordinary heroic act, but a relatively ordinary social life and personal life, without contradictions and conflicts. Prose describes the daily life of the people and the fragments of the old satrap's life, showing a scene of leisure, happiness, tranquility and peace. The author feels infinite happiness, can't help but feel relaxed and happy, and forgets all the honors and disgraces in the world, so that he forgets "drink less and get drunk" and drinks as much as he can. As a result, the surrounding songs filled the air, people sat up and quarreled, but he was "depressed" and couldn't get drunk. This was the highest state of happiness. Ouyang Xiu expressed his inner feelings through the description of scenery and the narration of personnel. His sincere feelings melted into the scenery and events, which made the article more affectionate: "The meaning of drunkenness is not in wine, but also between mountains and rivers." "The joy of mountains and rivers, the heart of wine. ""... the tourists went and the birds were happy. However, birds know the joy of mountains, but they don't know the joy of people; People know that swimming from the satrap is fun, but they don't know that the joy of the satrap is also fun. "This is a relief for people who have experienced vicissitudes of life and have been bumpy in their official career for decades. From the eighth year of Tiansheng (1030), Ouyang Xiu, who was only 23 years old, began his political career. Back and forth, he tried his best to actively assist Fan Zhongyan in reforming his internal affairs. Finally, he was rejected by evil spirits and demoted by officials. His ideal could not be realized, but after being demoted to Chuzhou, he achieved gratifying results, which was a comfortable enjoyment for Ouyang Xiu, who was busy and tired! The happy life of Chuzhou people gave him great comfort, and the scenery in front of him brought him into a quiet realm. He was intoxicated, but not by wine, but by beautiful scenery and quiet life. Here, birds are happy because of the mountains, people are happy because of the travel of the satrap, and the satrap is happy because of the happiness of the people. He has a beautiful environment, pleasant body and mind, comfortable and carefree, and can't help getting drunk. Ouyang Xiu was pale and white-haired, sitting in the crowd with his eyes closed slightly. The scenery in front of us is beautiful and people are very happy. Ouyang Xiu was also enveloped and intoxicated by this harmonious atmosphere. Ouyang Xiu claimed that "the meaning of drunkenness is not in wine", and he was broad-minded and self-released, getting rid of the ups and downs of the official sea and the disturbance of the world. In this landscape far away from the city, he immersed his mind in a leisurely and quiet situation and gained a sense of balance and harmony. This feeling pervades the Zuiweng Pavilion, making the article picturesque, elegant and natural, and smooth.

Appreciate II

Poetic and picturesque, colorful —— On Ouyang Xiu's Zuiweng Pavilion

His Zuiweng Pavilion is a beautiful essay. This essay is poetic and unique in style, which is really rare in China's ancient literary works.

Beautiful artistic conception. Good prose should be poetry, creating beautiful artistic conception. The so-called artistic conception, including meaning and context, is an artistic picture that permeates the author's subjective feelings. Excellent prose should have beautiful pictures, giving readers a unique aesthetic feeling and pleasing to the eye. The ideological meaning of Zuiweng Pavilion is a word of "music", which is the music in "drunkenness", like a colored line, connecting various pictures. And "the meaning of drunkenness is not wine" and "care about mountains and rivers". Indulge in trees and mountains is the author's real intention. The conception of prose is like setting up a notebook, and the author writes a beautiful "environment" according to this "meaning", so as to achieve the blending of emotion and scenery and the harmony between meaning and environment. The author describes the realm of prose from these aspects.

First, the beauty of mountains and rivers. In the author's pen, the distance of Zuiweng Pavilion is a landscape painting. There are mountains, springs, forests and pavilions. But the author does not use ink in isolation, but interweaves it together, which is both beautiful and diverse. The "magnificent" Langshan Mountain is picturesque and winding. With mountains as the background and spring all around. Shenlin Road is winding, and the spring flows winding, so "there are pavilions on the spring", which is surrounded by mountains and waters, showing the clearness of the spring, while pavilions and pavilions are located by the spring, which has a unique scenery. In this way, without mountains, the brewing spring is not beautiful; Without spring, Qingshan is lonely. Without a pavilion, the mountain spring is eclipsed; With springs, pavilions are more interesting. The mountain springs depend on each other, and the spring pavilions set each other off. In a painting, there are all kinds of landscapes and pavilions, which reflect colors and form a poetic and beautiful realm.

Second, the beauty of change in the morning and evening. The author wrote about the beautiful scenery of Zuiweng Pavilion changing in the morning and evening. "The rising sun rises, flowers bloom in the forest, clouds return to the cave, changes are bright, and sooner or later in the mountains." On Dongshan Mountain, the sun shines directly on the earth. The lush forest was originally shrouded in gauze-like fog, but after the sun shone, the fog disappeared and showed a fresh green color. In the evening, as the sun sets, the cave is in complete darkness. The author vividly described the different scenery in the morning and evening. Because the morning and evening are different, the tone and atmosphere of the author's pen are also different. In the morning, there is a quiet and fresh breath, and at night, there is a dark image and a hazy atmosphere. The author's observation of landscape changes is thorough and meticulous, and his brushwork is like silk, and he writes different realms according to different scenes.

Third, the change of the four seasons is beautiful. The author not only wrote the scenery in the morning and evening, but also further developed the pen and ink with Zuiweng Pavilion as the center, describing the scenery changes of the four seasons. "Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood is cloudy, wind and frost are expensive, the truth comes out, and it is also in the mountains at four o'clock", which is indeed a vivid pen. The author has carefully selected the most distinctive scenery to describe here. The grass is growing, and the fragrance is spring; Tall trees and lush branches and leaves are the scenery in summer; The wind is bleak, and first frost paves the way for autumn; The water is thin and the stone is dry, and the vegetation is withered. With the change of the four seasons, the scenery is different and each has its own realm. There are four plates, which are changing and give people different aesthetic enjoyment. The four plates are facing each other at the same time, and the spring scenery is like the sea facing the autumn cold; The lush summer sets off the cold winter scenery.

Fourth, the beauty of dynamic and static contrast. What are your interests in prose landscape painting? Same scenery, same pen, same modality. ! Ouyang Xiu always pays attention to the dynamic and static changes of things in this essay. Let's talk about the dynamic and static contrast between scenery and scenery first. The majestic Wolf Mountain is static, the gurgling spring is dynamic, the mountains are lush and pleasing to the eye, and the sound of spring is beautiful, which set each other off. "The Woods are overcast, singing above and singing below", and the silence of the trees contrasts with the singing of birds, which complement each other. Let's talk about the contrast between the scenery and the characters. "Sunset in the mountains, the characters are scattered, and the guests are smooth." The setting sun resting on the top of the mountain is its quietness, the figure moves away and returns to dusk one after another is its movement. Static scenery and dynamic people set each other off. Finally, the dynamic and static contrast between the characters. "The loser sings on the way, and the walker rests on the tree." There is singing and resting, and there is movement and silence. "All the guests are happy when they sit up and make noise. The white hair is white, and the middle one is too drunk. " In contrast to the noisy movements of the guests and the quiet silence of self-restraint, it is full of life. Due to the author's comparison in many aspects, the artistic conception of the prose is vivid and vivid, and the scenery, water color, human feelings and drunkenness are integrated into one painting, each with his own feelings.