My hometown Huaiyuan 450-word Zhoukou Shenqiu composition

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My hometown is in Shenqiu, which is a very beautiful place.

There is a picturesque place in my hometown called Huaiyuan. There are green hills, clear rivers and endless lakes. There are several boats floating on the lake, rippling leisurely with the wind. There are groups of small fish and shrimp in the Qinghe River. There are many stout locust trees growing on the river bank.

The sky there is very blue, and there are several white clouds like cotton candy floating in the blue sky. There are golden rape flowers and green wheat fields. The sweet potato in Shenqiu is delicious. Take a bite. It's really soft, fragrant and sweet.

There are groups of small fish and shrimp in the Qinghe River. There are many stout locust trees growing on the river bank. The sky there is very blue, and there are several white clouds like cotton candy floating in the blue sky. There are golden rape flowers and green wheat fields. The sweet potato in Shenqiu is delicious. Take a bite. It's really soft, fragrant and sweet.

I clearly remember one thing: my father Tomb-Sweeping Day took my cousin and Lele to Laoliying Village to burn paper for grandpa. When I got there, my father put the paper money and burning paper that had already been prepared on grandpa's grave and began to burn it. After burning the paper, my father set off firecrackers in front of grandpa's grave and lit the gun. The firecrackers crackled.

Finally, I said to my grandfather's grave, "Grandpa, your grandson has come to see you, and I love you. From now on, I will learn my skills and make our hometown more beautiful. " I seem to hear grandpa say in my ear in his familiar and kind voice, "Thank you, dear grandson, I love you forever!" " "

I love my beautiful hometown-Shenqiu.