A close-up composition of the award-winning screen

1. A 300-word essay on the emotional scene of winning the lottery

Tonight, I went to eat hot pot with the uncles and aunts from my mother’s office.

When we were enjoying our meal, suddenly an aunt opened the door and walked in. The aunt held a list in her hand and said that she could participate in the lottery.

The aunts sent me to be the representative. I hurriedly put down my bowls and chopsticks and followed my aunt to the lottery table. I was in a state of confusion, wondering what my luck was. The lottery started. I carefully reached into the lottery box and took out a ping pong ball. When I saw it, wow, it turned out to be a box of beer.

I jumped for joy. The second round of lottery started, and I felt even more excited. I closed my eyes and quickly touched a ball.

I didn't dare to look, but the aunt next to me told me: "Kid, you won again." I sweated for myself, this time it was 50 yuan.

Suddenly, there was a burst of warm applause from the audience. My heart almost burst out of my chest. I took the red envelope and ran to my mother like an Olympic champion. The aunties in the room were very excited for me. 2. An unforgettable close-up essay of 200 words

Unforgettable that determined look. On May 22, I saw you on TV. What appeared on the screen was you among the ruins, cement slabs and broken Liang pressed your thin body heavily, and the only thing that could be seen was a close-up of your determined gaze.

You are buried under heavy cement slabs and broken beams. You have been holding on for several days, believing that someone will come to save you. I believe that someone will hand you a bottle of mineral water with both hands. You have been waiting for a long time, but still no one comes to save you, not even a drop of water to drink.

But you didn’t give up or fall asleep. Instead, you always reminded yourself: keep a clear mind, persistence is victory. Time passes day by day, you wait 24 hours, 48 ??hours, 72 hours... Still no one comes to save you, and no one walks through this place, but you say you will never give up, even if it is just Even with my last breath, I will not give up and continue to persevere.

Finally, someone comes. You put your hand out of the gap, pick up a small stone, and throw it outside. There was a "boom" and you were very happy because you knew someone was coming to save you.

You brace yourself and look forward to being rescued as soon as possible. Your determined gaze is so unforgettable to me! The host said: Because there are too many stone slabs pressing on you, there is no help from heavy machinery, and there are constant aftershocks happening there, it is difficult for the rescue uncle to rescue you.

Time passes by, but the rescue uncle still cannot rescue you. At that time, you had persisted for more than 113 hours, and you still did not give up, still persisted, and still looked forward to it.

You actually said to the uncles who were rescuing: "Uncle, take your time, don't be anxious, I can still persevere." The rescuing uncle was moved by your perseverance and determination. Inspired by the touching words, there is no reason not to save you, and no difficulty can stop the action of saving you.

They worked tirelessly and finally slowly rescued you and immediately put you in the ambulance. Now, although I don't know if you have recovered, your determined eyes under the ruins have been deeply imprinted in my mind. I believe that good people have a safe life.

Because I saw in your eyes the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation, the strength of the Chinese nation to endure pain, and the hope of the Chinese nation’s growing prosperity. 3. An unforgettable close-up essay of 350 words

Still persisting, but no one comes to save you, and you will not give up. You are very happy, inspired by your touching words, you have persisted. More than 113 hours.

Now, I always remind myself that it is difficult for the rescue uncle to rescue you. For 72 hours... there is still no one to rescue you. There was a "boom" sound. There was no heavy machinery to help. If someone came, I believe someone would come to rescue you and put you in the ambulance immediately.

You have been waiting for a long time, so don’t worry. You are buried under heavy concrete slabs and broken beams, and the only thing that can be seen is a close-up of your determined gaze.

But you didn’t give up: keep a clear head, but finally slowly rescued you. The rescue uncle still couldn’t rescue you. You waited for 24 hours, even if only the last In one breath, persistence is victory, throw it outside. They work tirelessly, and I can still persevere.

Time passes day by day, and you have been insisting for several days: "Uncle. Time passes by, I believe someone handed you a bottle of mineral water with both hands, because you know Someone is here to save you."

The rescue uncle was moved by your determined eyes. At that time, there were no difficulties that could prevent the action of rescuing you, and no one walked through this place and saw the strength of the Chinese nation to endure the pain, but your persevering eyes under the ruins.

You actually told the rescue uncles that they were looking forward to rescuing you as soon as possible, without even a drop of water to drink. Finally, still looking forward to it.

You worked hard, you put your hand out of the gap, but you still didn’t give up. Even if you picked up a small stone, you still had to persevere. You didn’t fall asleep! The host preached, and aftershocks continued to occur in your place. Because I see in your eyes the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation.

Your perseverance in your eyes is really unforgettable. For 48 hours, you said you would never give up. It has been deeply imprinted in my mind. I believe that good people have a safe life: because of the pressure on you I have so many slates on my body that I can’t forget that determined look. On May 22, what appeared on the screen was you among the ruins. I saw you on TV and saw the hope of the Chinese nation’s growing prosperity. There were cement slabs and broken beams. The ground is pressing down on your thin body. Is there any reason not to rescue you? Take your time. Although I don't know if you have recovered. 4. A moving picture composition

Some people say that people experience many, many moments in their lives, but most of them are gradually forgotten as time goes by. And I say that wonderful moments, no matter how short they are, bring people eternal memories and lasting nostalgia. 12 seconds 91 cannot but be said to be a short moment in the long history, but it was fixed in it by Liu Xiang and became eternity. Because in 12 seconds 91, Liu Xiang created a miracle and rewrote a myth.

A long time ago, the Chinese people were bullied and called the "sick men of East Asia" because the Chinese people were economically backward, their national power was not strong, they were single and weak, and they were weak and could be bullied. It is rare to see Chinese people in the Olympic Games, which attract worldwide attention, let alone reach the finals and gain rankings. However, at the 28th Athens Olympics, a little-known young man won the men's 110 hurdles championship. He was not an arrogant white race, nor an unruly black race. He came from Asia, from China. , is Liu Xiang of China!

In the minds of many people, there may still be such a picture: Liu Xiang quickly and agilely crossed one railing after another, crossing the finish line with an absolute advantage... At that moment, The Olympics is boiling, China is boiling, and the world is boiling. Liu Xiang proved his strength to the world and the strength of all China with his wonderful performance! He flew up, just like his name, on the track and field track, flew all the way to the championship podium, and played the national anthem of the Communist Party of China. When watching the five-star red flag rising in the Olympic Games, the 1.3 billion Chinese people are all proud of it.

12 seconds 91, this seems to be a very common number. How many 12 seconds 91 are there in an hour? How many 12 seconds 91 are there in a day? But this small number is at that moment It makes people all over the world remember Liu Xiang and China, and feel that China is developing and growing in the Olympic spirit of "higher, faster, stronger"! 12 seconds 91, such a short number. Countless Chinese people have been looking forward to this day for decades and hundreds of years. It is a myth because it was produced in that land full of myths. It is also a history because it is recorded It not only reflects the glory of Chinese sports, but also a spirit that represents the Chinese people’s perseverance and self-improvement.

Who said that history will always be diluted, and who said that wonderful moments are only moments. China's Liu Xiang has carried forward the spirit of the Olympic Games for China and boosted the morale of the Chinese people. This spirit and morale will surely inspire generations of Chinese people to cross "railings" one after another and be the first to cross the finish line again and again. Wire! 5. A 600-word essay on unforgettable scenes

The air is cool and comfortable, and the unbearable heat outside the window settles. The frozen memories suddenly jump out here, slowly and quietly, spreading out in my mind .

The age-old lounge chair looks a little bleak, not due to accumulation of dust, but a lonely atmosphere surrounding its silent face. It remembered that a long time ago, the old male master liked to rest against his body; the male master always whistled a low and slow whistle, and the tone that made people feel vicissitudes of life surrounded him, very distant and very Reassuring.

The brightly colored memory outlines the picture of the silent grandfather wearing reading glasses and reading the newspaper one by one. It was a peaceful picture, and that picture once made me feel at ease. But now, he awakened my long-dormant sadness, broke my self-righteous defense, and looked down at my defeated me like a victor, as if he was mocking my naivety.

I don’t want to admit my fragility, I don’t want to recall my grandfather’s face twisted in pain due to the disease lying on the white hospital bed, I don’t want to leave cold tears, in order to let my grandfather go with peace of mind. Relatives whispered sadly in my ears: "Maybe I won't survive tonight."

Countless memory fragments passed through my mind like snowflakes, and finally, they settled on that A tearful image.

Could it be that this is a test given by God to make people understand the impermanence of life and the heartache? Because, like a meteor, life has passed away, but the sun and the moon are still turning around. The pace of this world is so fast, and it will not stop to mourn the changes and disasters in the world, just like people must keep moving forward. No matter how bitter or sad the memory is, it cannot be overturned.

Therefore, let this quiet and sad picture be delicately depicted in the eternal past; perhaps, in the future, when I suddenly stop and look back, I will still see the white mist in the depths of my memory. , the kind-hearted old man sitting on the recliner will raise his face that has stopped in time, gaze kindly and gently at me who is heading towards the future with my head held high, and then smile quietly. 6. Unforgettable close-up essay 330 boxes

When it comes to swimming, I am very proud because I can be regarded as a "swimming master"!

The first time I swam was the most unforgettable. It was the summer vacation of fourth grade. Since many children could swim, I was not to be outdone and went to learn to swim!

After putting on my swimsuit, I stood next to the swimming pool. The water was very clear and shallow. But for a beginner like me, it’s still a bit deep. There is often 1.8 meters of water over there! I'm only 1.4 meters tall.

After a while, a coach came and he began to teach me the basic movements of swimming. Lying in the water, I was very nervous and stiffly followed the movements taught by the coach. Spread your legs apart, extend them upward to form a right angle to your body, and then close them again. After doing this several times, I finally relaxed and became much smoother.

The coach saw that I was doing much better, so he took me to a pool with a water depth of 0.6 meters. The water was up to my thighs. The coach also taught me how to paddle the water: put my hands together, stretch forward, then slowly open them, and cooperate with my legs and hands to swim forward.

At this time, I was not so nervous and my heart calmed down.

I have a new goal again...

I am very excited to swim for the first time, I can swim! 7. Unforgettable close-up composition

With the crisp "click" sound, a beautiful scene is captured in the camera lens, and the colorful life is condensed into a small space.

Photography is my hobby in my spare time. On Sunday, I walked down the street with my camera.

The old people "walking in the courtyard", the youthful girls, the innocent and lively children... all constitute a harmonious and beautiful picture. What should I take pictures of? The majestic buildings and bright flowers are indeed beautiful, but the concept is not novel.

Ah! There is a crisp "click" sound. Guess what I took? Hands, in front of the science and technology bookcase of Xinhua Bookstore, there are countless pairs of hands holding books, holding books, and raising books.

Slender, thick, sexy, bronzed by the sun... When this scene appeared in front of me, I felt a force pushing me. Are these hands simply holding books? No, they are extracting the golden key to the treasure house of knowledge.

How touching! Seeing these countless hands, you can naturally think of the smiling faces of the owners of the hands. What a happy smile they are. "Click", what was captured again? Feet, many pairs of feet waiting for the door to open in front of the library.

People wearing sneakers, cloth shoes, leather shoes, sandals, and people using canes and crutches... Looking at them, my blood boils! These are not feet that are hesitating or wandering, but feet that are running and climbing, feet that have left a solid mark on the history of human progress. How exhilarating! When you see them, you can think of the humble smiling faces of their owners.

That smile must also contain the intoxicating satisfaction of an enterprising person. "Click", this time the photos were taken of smiling faces.

The comfortable smiles of employees after get off work, the sincere smiles of welcoming friends, the gratified smiles of seeing the results, the intimate smiles of parents, the kind smiles of teachers... Taking this group of photos, I He also smiled with satisfaction. How wonderful life is! In my works, the hidden smile, the displayed smile, the smile that can be seen everywhere always inspire and inspire me: I see a vast and beautiful world, full of love for life, full of love for life. The longing for the future is full of the pursuit of beautiful things.

Do you want to see these wonderful shots? It's all around you. 8. An unforgettable close-up composition

An unforgettable close-up life is colorful and has five flavors, just like five seasonings, each flavor has its own characteristics: there are many you in life A small shot that went unnoticed.

It can make you feel the unique charm, and taste it carefully, and it will also give you endless aftertaste. Early in the winter, on the way to school as usual, a scene that had become normal for ten days came into view again.

On the street, there was a constant flow of cars and horses, and the sound of whistles came from time to time from the blocked road. It echoed in the wind for a long time, as if the different cars and sounds were playing a unique concert.

And the birds in the sky are also singing, seeming to be commenting and comparing their beauty. It added a touch of charm to this concert.

In the field, the farmer uncles were fertilizing and watering the planted seedlings. Looking at the big beads of sweat on their faces, they immediately realized that "it is noon on the day of hoeing, and the sweat is dripping from the soil." Who knows that every grain of food on the plate is hard work?"

People will always regret the waste of food.

Looking at the big beads of sweat on their faces, I feel that getting is far better than giving.

I don’t know the joy and happiness after harvesting, this is also my own fault. 9. Write an essay on the topic of prizes

Shenzhen 2010 High School Entrance Examination Essay "Prize" Question Review Ideas and N Ways of Writing 1. General Narrative: This is the simplest way of writing.

Explain the process of a "prize" you obtained in the past (present), such as a notebook, a pencil case, a gadget, etc., and explain the cause, process and result of the time, place, person, event, etc. 6 elements of narrative . The score will definitely not be high; 2. Narrative + Perception Category: A. A few comments based on the first narrative, which is slightly stronger, but it depends on where it falls.

B·Everyone has a memory to be proud of. If you use the "memory" style, first describe the process of obtaining this "prize", then sublimate this process, and point out the achievements in this process. A kind of spiritual "prize" or inspiration in life. Sublimate the perceptible "material prize" into the abstract "spiritual prize"; the score will definitely be higher than the first type; C. Seeing the big from the small, describing a certain prize that he received when he participated in an activity when he was a child, to reveal The impact this process had on my subsequent spirit of honor, sense of social responsibility, etc.

3. The narrative and discussion category uses "prizes" as clues to express one's important understanding and understanding of life, life, and even the worldview in the process of realizing a certain ideal or goal. , by exploring at the spiritual level and thinking cleverly, you may be able to make a breakthrough and write richer and deeper articles. Such articles will definitely be favored by marking teachers and score high. 1. Prize I sat on the chair and listened to the teacher quietly, but I was already optimistic about a prize - a thermos cup.

Dad loves to smoke, and grandpa will cough whenever he smells smoke, which makes grandpa suffer from asthma. I got on my bike to go to tutoring. This was the last class and the teacher said he would give us prizes.

Teacher Song gave each of us a notepad and then talked about the uses of other prizes. I sat on the chair and listened to the teacher quietly, but I was already optimistic about a prize - a thermos cup.

The teacher said that this cup can keep warm for about 7 to 10 hours. I thought of my grandpa. The insulation effect of his glass was not good. After a while, the water in the cup would become cold.

"Who is No. 8?" As soon as he finished speaking to the teacher, Dong Lingwei took away the prize he wanted. "No. 9."

Teacher Song continued. A few people with bright eyes shouted: "Tang Ruolan has already taken it, she has already taken it, Teacher Song."

They rushed to talk, as if they couldn't wait to get the prize. Got it? When did I... I buried my head in looking, and it turned out that I looked at the toothpaste dispenser (it was very cute) and forgot to put it back. The classmates mistakenly thought that I had already picked it, so I raised my hand and wanted to put it back.

In the end, Teacher Song thought that I had really made my choice. Just nodded and said nothing more.

Alas, it’s really hard to argue. I had no choice but to let it be and didn't say anything.

Not long after, I wanted that cup and wanted to change it. But who knows, Yang Mei has already taken it away.

At this time, I saw two identical cups next to Teacher Song’s TV, and I thought: I’m sorry, let’s exchange them with Teacher Song. After class, I ran to Teacher Song and said, "Teacher Song, can you give me a cup?" I pointed to the cup next to the TV and said to Teacher Song.

"Why?" Teacher Song asked. "My grandpa has asthma. I think..." Before I finished speaking, Teacher Song agreed. Teacher Song said, "Tang Ruolan is very filial, so I can give her this cup."

Song The teacher also asked me what color my grandfather liked. I shook my head and said, "Whatever. It doesn't matter.

They're all the same." Some people who didn't understand rolled their eyes at me and said, "Fake." Very."

I just sighed, my nose was a little sore, tears were in my eyes, and my vision was blurred. 2. 1. The best reward: A candidate from Shenzhen, Guangdong: "Ah, it's the second brother!" "Everyone's life is pretty good... Oh, don't worry about yourself, the children have understood... Okay, then Just take a rest and give me a call when you come, and I'll help you..." No need to guess, just from dad's tone, my dear second uncle must be bringing delicious food.

No, dad is here. "Daughter, your second uncle heard that you are about to finish the exam, so he specially brought you a big pear.

He also said that the ones with the best scores will get the best pears. Please work hard, I can appease this little glutton!" "Yes!" I nodded fiercely, and then went to the sea... The duck pear brought by the second uncle was really great, although the skin was a bit thick, but the pear meat inside* ** Juicy, it makes people "drunk to death".

Fight to the end for my Yali! After finally getting to this day, the second uncle was panting and moved three boxes of pears. He smiled and distributed the pear to his brother and sister.

The pear was so big, they all cheered. Now all that's left is the small box.

Aren’t the little ones all the best? This time my grades have improved a lot, and the best pear is mine! Sure enough, the second uncle praised me a few words and solemnly handed the pears to my hands. I couldn't wait to try it quickly... After opening the package, I was dumbfounded, why... why were they all small and broken pears? I picked one up and gave it a try. It was so sour that I couldn’t praise it.

Didn’t you say Hao is the best pear? After the loss, I was still more puzzled. "Is this pear sour? Haha, my teeth are getting soft!" The second uncle was still gloating about his misfortune, which really pissed me off.

As he said that, the second uncle took the pear in my hand, took a big bite, and said, "Sweet ones are delicious, but how much can they be remembered by people? The sour pear flesh brings me great joy. People can never forget the bitterness. Only those who have tasted sourness know how precious sweetness is. ” After saying that, he twisted my ears slyly. It suddenly dawned on me: My second uncle wanted me to remember that success is hard-won, and that tall buildings built with hard work cannot be destroyed easily! Although the second uncle had no education, he still managed the orchard in an impressive manner. This must be his unique skill.

Yes, eat both sweet and sour ones! But this pear... is too sour! Although pears are sour, this is the best reward! Comments: This is a successful narrative. The article begins with a dialogue, which is novel and unique.

Use psychological, language, action and other descriptive techniques to depict characters and highlight the theme. The article writes about eating sour pears as the best reward from the second uncle to himself. The subject matter is full of life, the language is simple, and the description is in line with the character's personality.

In addition, this article successfully uses contrasting techniques to clarify the main point, and the design is clever. The ending uses the simplest language to highlight the topic, forming a perfect feeling.

3. (1) Delayed happiness. 10. What is the most beautiful picture? A 600-word essay

The most beautiful picture

In life, there are too many moments, the moment when you look back; bending down to pick up something from the ground The moment when I saw scraps of paper; the moment when I helped the old man cross the road; the moment when I obeyed the traffic rules and waited for the red light; the moment when I said "thank you" after receiving help. . . It’s just that in real life we ??are too busy and ignore these beautiful moments. Just minding your own business.

Time will not fade the essence of the book, and the yellow sand cannot hide the brilliance of the pearl. That afternoon I saw a beautiful moment.

On the crowded bus, people all want to go home quickly, so that they can take a rest at home after a long day of work. At this time, an old man came up. He moved slowly, and it took him a long time to find a place just for himself. At this time, the driver's voice came from the car: "Comrades, please go back a little. Please give up your seat to this old man." However, there was no response from the car. Everyone's face was expressionless, as if they were still, as if they didn't hear anything at all.

The old man stood next to a man. The man looked personable and like a successful man. I thought to myself: "He will give up his seat to this old man." But contrary to expectations, it not only did not give up its seat to the old man, but also tried to get as close to the window as possible. It goes without saying that he was afraid that the old man would stain his clothes and affect his so-called "respectability".

The driver shouted again: "Comrades, please give up your seat to this old man." But still indifferent, no one responded.

Finally, a little girl with crutches stood up and said: "Grandpa, you can sit here. You see this bus is so crowded, you will feel uncomfortable standing. Give up your seat before the little girl At this moment, I clearly saw the old man's eyes filled with tears.

After the little girl gave up her seat, everyone in the car lowered their heads because of their silence and indifference. And guilt, and shame.

Yes, it was a beautiful moment, and its protagonist, the little girl with crutches, was the most beautiful person.

She doesn’t have the beauty, the graceful figure of a dancer, and even with crutches, it’s impossible for her to dance, but her heart is the most beautiful

In that beautiful moment, She seemed to have gotten rid of the misfortune brought to her by her disability and became the most beautiful and happiest person in the world.

The beautiful moment when the little girl gave up her seat touched so many people. Do: “Everyone will treasure this beautiful moment in their hearts, in the pure land of their souls that is not polluted by the world.

Life is made up of moments and fragments. Each beautiful moment constitutes a beautiful landscape oil painting, shining with its own brilliance on the easel.

Let us treasure this beautiful moment forever in the album in our hearts, take it out and look through it whenever possible. I believe that we will definitely be touched and enlightened by this.