Expand the composition to look at Tianmen Mountain

1. Expansion of "Looking at Tianmen Mountain"

[Expansion of "Looking at Tianmen Mountain"] One day, I, Li Bai, had nothing to do. Seeing that the weather was so sunny, I simply went out. Turn around and expand "Looking at Tianmen Mountain". I went to the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River to rent a small sailboat. I paddled the sailboat and slowly turned around. Suddenly, my eyes lit up (you know, I am dignified A great poet’s eyes will not light up except when he sees beautiful scenery! I am better at capturing scenery than those photographers). I came to the front of Tianmen Mountain without knowing it. Tianmen Mountain is wide and narrow. When the river reaches a narrow place, it will be choppy, but when it reaches a wide place, it will be calmer. I immediately stopped and stood on the bow of the boat, carefully savoring this charming scenery. As I looked at it, I forgot that time was passing, and I couldn't forget to leave. For a moment, I put on a chic look, and inspiration came to me again, so I immediately recited the poem I just composed: The gate of heaven interrupts the opening of Chujiang River, The clear water flows eastward here. The green mountains on both sides of the bank face each other, and the solitary sail comes from the sun. Wow haha... I am me, and I have written another poem! It's getting late, so I'll swim here. Boat, boat, you can't afford the boat rental, otherwise I'll have to spend the night beside this beautiful scenery! [Expansion of "Looking at Tianmen Mountain"] Contribution to the article: What is failure? Nothing, just one step closer to success; what is success? It means that after all the roads leading to failure, there is only one road left, and that is the road to success. 2. "Looking at Tianmen Mountain" was rewritten into 100 short essays

When I came back from the tutoring class and walked to the lawn not far from my home, I suddenly heard a series of "dong dong" sounds. I didn't go to the lawn at all. Pay attention, as soon as I heard the sound, my alertness began to increase. I looked around carefully, and the focus of my eyes was fixed on the withered yellow weeds.

A small bird that looks like a woodpecker is very focused on pounding the ground with its long pointed beak! I slowly approached it, and it seemed to be scared. It spread its wings and took a few steps back. Only then did I gradually see its "true face in Lushan" clearly. It has dry grass-colored clothes. No wonder I didn’t notice it when I passed by! Its beak is very long, a little longer than my middle finger; the middle of the feathers on its wings is like the black dot on which a seal is pressed; its tail is not as short as a sparrow, but a bunch of longer feathers covering its rump; Its chest is furry, swollen like artificial hair, and it looks more energetic. What's especially strange is that there is a laurel wreath as big as a small fan on the top of its head! What kind of magical bird is this? I stood quietly in front of the little bird, and it was still pounding the ground to catch snacks. It seemed that it was very hungry~~~ I could only see it crawling around the ground as fast as pounding garlic, and I didn't see it eating anything. The Adam's apple was moving over and over again, up and down, up and down... I quietly took a big step forward. It didn't have the same fear as before, it just pounded the ground, as if I were A breath of air, and it seemed like it didn't notice me.

It was pounding here and there, and there were small holes in the land made by it, a great writer. It seemed like someone was riding a bicycle behind it, but it didn’t seem like there was one. Anyway, there was something that scared it. , it continued to twist and run towards the wall, the laurel crown on its head was shaking, and its crown was also covered with small dots, some were white, some were black, and some were brown. I didn’t go any further. I walked around and just stared at it quietly. Whenever it looked up at me accidentally, I just smiled. I gradually approached it again, so close that I could reach out and touch it. It looked up at me motionlessly, and I smiled in a friendly way. It did not hide away because of fear of me, as if it knew that I meant no harm. What it meant was that it flew over my head and circled in a big circle. I was surprised by its behavior and it was fixed there at that time.

When I came back to my senses, it was no longer pounding the ground. It seemed to be doing some post-dinner exercise, walking gracefully on the grass and walking slowly with its chest held high. I walked to it step by step and walked side by side with it. It didn’t look up at me or flinch, it just walked quietly with me... The sky darkened unknowingly, and it Shaking its wings, I thought it was time for it to leave. It didn't turn to look at me the moment it took off, but I kept watching it as it flew far away, and it never looked back.

It seems that we don’t know each other at all. It may have its own meaning, and I can’t understand it. I looked at it, and in the dark night, it gradually condensed into a small black dot until it disappeared from my sight.

This was the only most intimate contact I had with a bird, and I felt their unique inner world. At this time, I thought of a sentence: Trust often creates a beautiful state.

Although I am still not sure what kind of bird you are, a wonderful relationship between people and animals happened between us. 3. Rewrite looking at Tianmen Mountain into a composition within five words

Example One day, Li Bai went to Tianmen Mountain to enjoy the scenery. He got on a boat and swam along the Chu River. When the boat arrived at Tianmen Mountain, Li Bai was The beautiful scenery in front of me attracted me.

Li Bai looked up at these two tall mountains. They looked like a heavenly gate, facing each other on both sides of the Chu River. The tall and majestic peaks were like two patron saints, guarding the Chu River. .

The trees all over the mountain are lush and green. Some of them are bent over, like welcoming guests; some are like big open umbrellas, trying to provide visitors with shade and shelter from the rain; some are towering into the clouds, like Sun Wukong's golden cudgel. Hundreds of birds are chirping on the mountain, like playing a sweet symphony.

Sometimes the water of the Chu River flows quietly, sometimes the sound of the rushing water is like a docile little girl humming a light ditty, and sometimes it is like a wild horse that has escaped the reins, roaring and galloping, rushing thousands of miles. The sound of turbulent river water echoed in the valleys, deafening. The mighty Chu River water flows eastward, like a silver dragon flying towards Tianmen Mountain, flowing and circling at the foot of Tianmen Mountain. 4. Rewrite the composition of "Looking at Tianmen Mountain"

Dear travelers and tourists, hello everyone.

Today we are going to visit the beautiful Tianmen Mountain. It is said that in ancient times, Sun Wukong split the mountain in half with the golden cudgel he used to defeat the White Bone Demon three times.

As a result, the Chu River surged and roared, pouring down from the middle of Tianmen Mountain. One day, Li Bai was sitting in a small boat drinking wine, looking at the rolling waves of the river, and wrote the poem "Looking at Tianmen Mountain".

Look, the little fish are jumping on the water. If you are lucky, you will see a beautiful fish jump into your hand, which will make you ecstatic and smile from ear to ear. Mouth. Look, the green mountains on both sides of the river stand tall and spectacular, the trees are lush and the scenery is extremely beautiful.

Look, the little squirrel in the forest is climbing on the pine tree and picking pine cones. It’s really ridiculous. The golden monkey climbed on a peach tree and picked one here and there, making everyone laugh. laughing out loud. We were so lucky today. The little squirrel gave us the pine cone, which was really fun. The golden monkey handed us the peach and almost even dropped it.

The little birds kept chirping, as if they were singing happy songs to us. Seeing such scenery, would you like to visit this paradise on earth if you have the chance? . 5. Rewrite Li Bai's "Looking at Tianmen Mountain" into a short scene description, about 300 words

One day, Li Bai went to Tianmen Mountain to admire the scenery. He got on a boat and swam along the Chu River. The boat When he arrived at Tianmen Mountain, Li Bai was attracted by the beautiful scenery in front of him.

Li Bai looked up at these two tall mountains. They looked like a heavenly gate, facing each other on both sides of the Chu River. The tall and majestic peaks were like two patron saints, guarding the Chu River. . The trees all over the mountain are lush and green. Some of them are bent over, like welcoming guests; some are like big open umbrellas, trying to provide visitors with shade and shelter from the rain; some are towering into the clouds, like Sun Wukong's golden cudgel. Hundreds of birds are chirping on the mountain, like playing a sweet symphony.

Sometimes the water of the Chu River flows quietly, sometimes the sound of the rushing water is like a docile little girl humming a light ditty, and sometimes it is like a wild horse that has escaped the reins, roaring and galloping, rushing thousands of miles. The sound of turbulent river water echoed in the valleys, deafening. The mighty Chu River water flows eastward, like a silver dragon flying towards Tianmen Mountain, flowing and circling at the foot of Tianmen Mountain.

Li Bai was riding in a small boat, looking at the majestic, spectacular and magical Tianmen Mountain in front of him under the afterglow of the setting sun. He couldn't help but blurted out and recited "Looking at Tianmen Mountain" which made people have endless aftertaste:

The Tianmen interrupts the opening of the Chu River,

The clear water flows eastwards to this point.

The green mountains on both sides of the Taiwan Strait face each other. 6. Looking at Tianmen Mountain was rewritten into 100 short essays

When I came back from the tutoring class and walked to the lawn not far from my home, I suddenly heard a continuous sound. I didn't pay attention to the lawn at first, but as soon as I heard the sound, my alertness began to increase. I looked around carefully, and the focus of my eyes was fixed on the withered yellow weeds.

A small bird that looks like a woodpecker is very focused on pounding the ground with its long pointed beak! I slowly approached it, and it seemed to be scared. It spread its wings and took a few steps back. Only then did I gradually see its "true face in Lushan" clearly.

It has grass-colored clothes. No wonder I didn’t notice it when I passed by! Its beak is very long, a little longer than my middle finger; the middle of the feathers on its wings is like the black dot on which a seal is pressed; its tail is not as short as a sparrow, but a bunch of longer feathers covering its rump; Its chest is furry, swollen like artificial hair, and it looks more energetic. What's especially strange is that there is a laurel wreath as big as a small fan on the top of its head! What kind of magical bird is this?

I stood quietly in front of the little bird, and it was still pounding the ground to catch snacks. It seemed that it was very hungry. Seeing what it had eaten, its Adam's apple was moving repeatedly, up and down, up and down... I quietly took a big step forward, and it was not as scared as before. Just pounding the ground, as if I were nothing, and as if it didn't notice me.

It was pounding here and there, and there were small holes in the land made by it, a great writer. It seemed like someone was riding a bicycle behind it, but it didn’t seem like there was one. Anyway, there was something that scared it. , it continued to twist and run towards the wall, the laurel crown on its head was shaking, and its crown was also covered with small dots, some were white, some were black, and some were brown. I didn’t go any further. I walked around and just stared at it quietly. Whenever it looked up at me accidentally, I just smiled.

I gradually approached it again, so close that I could reach out and touch it. It stood motionless and looked up at me. I smiled in a friendly way. It did not hide away because of fear of me. , as if knowing that I didn't mean to hurt it, it flew above my head and circled in a big circle. I was surprised by its behavior, and it was frozen there at that time.

When I came back to my senses, it was no longer pounding the ground. It seemed to be doing some post-dinner exercise, walking gracefully on the grass and walking slowly with its chest held high. I walked to it step by step and walked side by side with it. It didn't look up at me or flinch, it just walked quietly with me...

The sky was changing. The sleep became dark, and it shook its wings. I thought it was time for it to leave, but it didn't turn to look at me the moment it took off, but I kept watching it as it flew far away, and it never looked back. It seems that we don't know each other at all. It may have its own meaning, and I can't understand it.

I looked at it, and in the dark night, it gradually condensed into a small black dot until it disappeared from my sight. This was the only most intimate contact I had with a bird, and I felt their unique inner world. At this time, I thought of a sentence: Trust often creates a beautiful state.

Although I am still not sure what kind of bird you are, but a wonderful human and animal relationship happened between us 7. A short poem about the poetry of looking at Tianmen Mountain

In the early morning, I took a few taels of silver and came to the Chu River. I saw a small boat passing nearby, so I called it loudly, gave the boatman a few taels of silver, and got on the boat to enjoy the scenery.

I first looked up at Tianmen Mountain in front of me, and immediately exclaimed: "It's so majestic!" I saw Tianmen Mountain cut off in the middle, looking like a gate. The two mountains guard this place like giants, and the Chu River flows under their feet. There are several maple forests on both sides of the bank, the leaves are fiery red, almost redder than the flowers in February. They danced their leaves "whispering" as if to welcome people's arrival.

When I lowered my head again, I found several white swans on the water. They swam gracefully and stretched their necks from time to time, which was really pleasing to the eye. The mountains here are all green, and large tracts of woods stand on the mountains. There are also many beautiful birds flying in the sky and singing their own songs. This is so beautiful!

In a blink of an eye, the ship sailed to the middle of the "gate". Here, the water forms huge whirlpools. From time to time, many water droplets fly out from these whirlpools, which sparkle under the sunlight, making people feel as if they are in a fairyland. I think Chu Jiang is really a naughty doll. He deliberately created these whirlpools for playing. He is so naughty! At this time, several small silver fish swam to our boat and swam happily with our boat. Maybe, they also know that there are whirlpools here, so they follow our boat and want to swim through here safely.

Finally, we left this "gate". At this time, the sun also rose, and it gave off a dazzling light that illuminated the water surface. Turning around, I discovered that there were many beautiful mountains on both sides of the shore. They appeared in front of us as if they had been discussed long ago, as if they were welcoming us. Look at that mountain, it seems to be dancing! Look at this mountain again, it is like a round green ball, so cute! Wow, the mountains over there are even more beautiful. They all have different shapes, some look like they are playing football, some look like they are running, and some... I am so happy, I open my eyes wide and look at these beautiful mountains. Mountain.

"Whoosh", there was a sound of paddling in the distance. Taking a closer look, it turned out to be a lonely boat heading towards us from where the sun rose. Sitting on it was none other than the great poet Li Bai! Seeing all this, he felt inspired and wrote an eternally famous poem "Looking at Tianmen Mountain":

The Tianmen interrupts the opening of the Chu River,

The clear water flows eastward here. Back.

The green mountains on both sides of the strait face each other,

A solitary sail comes from the sun. 8. Wangtianmen Mountain changed to 600 words in modern writing

In the early morning, I took a few taels of silver and went to the Chu River.

When I saw a small boat passing by nearby, I called it loudly, then gave the boatman a few taels of silver and got on the boat to enjoy the scenery. I first looked up at Tianmen Mountain in front of me, and immediately exclaimed: "It's so majestic!" I saw Tianmen Mountain cut off in the middle, looking like a gate.

The two mountains guard this place like giants, and the Chu River flows under their feet. There are several maple forests on both sides of the bank, the leaves are fiery red, almost redder than the flowers in February.

They dance their leaves "whispering" as if to welcome people. Lowering my head again, I discovered several white swans on the water. They swam gracefully and stretched their necks from time to time, which was really pleasing to the eye.

The mountains here are all green, and large tracts of woods stand on the mountains. There are also many beautiful birds flying in the sky and singing their own songs. This is so beautiful! In a blink of an eye, the boat arrived in the middle of the "gate".

Here, the water forms a huge whirlpool. From time to time, many water droplets fly out from these whirlpools, which sparkle under the sunlight, making people feel as if they are in a fairyland.

I think Chu Jiang is really a naughty doll. He deliberately created these whirlpools for playing. He is so naughty! At this time, several small silver fish swam to our boat and swam with our boat. Maybe, they also know that there are whirlpools here, so they follow our boat and want to swim through here safely.

Finally, we left this "gate". At this time, the sun also rose, and it gave off a dazzling light that illuminated the water surface.

Turning around, I discovered that there were many beautiful mountains on both sides of the shore. They appeared in front of us relative to each other as if they had been discussed long ago, as if they were welcoming us. Look at that mountain, it seems to be dancing! Look at this mountain again, it is like a round green ball, so cute! Wow, the mountains over there are even more beautiful. They all have different shapes, some look like they are playing football, some look like they are running, and some... I am so happy, I open my eyes wide and look at these beautiful mountains. Mountain.

"Whoosh", there was a sound of paddling in the distance. Taking a closer look, it turned out to be a lonely boat heading towards us from where the sun rose.

Sitting on it is the great poet Li Bai! When he saw all this, he was inspired and wrote an eternally famous poem "Looking at Tianmen Mountain": Tianmen interrupts the opening of the Chu River, and the clear water flows eastwards to this point. The green mountains on both sides of the strait stand out from each other, and the lone sail comes from the sun. 9. A short essay on the poetry of looking at Tianmen Mountain

In the early morning, I took a few taels of silver and went to the Chu River.

When I saw a small boat passing by nearby, I called it loudly, then gave the boatman a few taels of silver and got on the boat to enjoy the scenery. I first looked up at Tianmen Mountain in front of me, and immediately exclaimed: "It's so majestic!" I saw Tianmen Mountain cut off in the middle, looking like a gate.

The two mountains guard this place like giants, and the Chu River flows under their feet. There are several maple forests on both sides of the bank, and the leaves are fiery red, almost redder than the flowers in February.

They danced their leaves "swish", as if to welcome people's arrival. Lowering my head again, I discovered several white swans on the water. They swam gracefully and stretched their necks from time to time, which was really pleasing to the eye.

The mountains here are all green, and large tracts of woods stand on the mountains. There are also many beautiful birds flying in the sky and singing their own songs. This is so beautiful! In a blink of an eye, the boat arrived in the middle of the "gate".

Here, the water forms a huge whirlpool. From time to time, many water droplets fly out from these whirlpools, which sparkle under the sunlight, making people feel as if they are in a fairyland.

I think Chu Jiang is really a naughty doll. He deliberately created these whirlpools for playing. He is so naughty! At this time, several small silver fish swam to our boat and swam with our boat. Maybe, they also know that there are whirlpools here, so they follow our boat and want to swim through here safely.

Finally, we left this "gate". At this time, the sun also rose, and it gave off a dazzling light that illuminated the water surface.

Turning around, I discovered that there were many beautiful mountains on both sides of the shore. They appeared in front of us relative to each other as if they had been discussed long ago, as if they were welcoming us. Look at that mountain, it seems to be dancing! Look at this mountain again, it is like a round green ball, so cute! Wow, the mountains over there are even more beautiful. They all have different shapes, some look like they are playing football, some look like they are running, and some... I am so happy, I open my eyes wide and look at these beautiful mountains. Mountain.

"Whoosh", there was a sound of paddling in the distance. Taking a closer look, it turned out to be a lonely boat heading towards us from where the sun rose.

Sitting on it is the great poet Li Bai! When he saw all this, he was inspired and wrote an eternally famous poem "Looking at Tianmen Mountain": Tianmen interrupts the opening of the Chu River, and the clear water flows eastwards to this point. The green mountains on both sides of the strait stand out from each other, and the lone sail comes from the sun.