The senior high school entrance examination is coming, so I need some excellent model essays.

Selected compositions of the latest full marks in the senior high school entrance examination (1)

1. Winning by description

In terms of thinking form, there are two main types of articles, one is articles with logical thinking, and the other is articles with image thinking. Articles with logical thinking, such as argumentative essays, prove and emphasize the author's point of view through strict logical relations. Articles of thinking in images include narratives, novels and other literary works, which have an appeal through vivid content. Logical thinking is an advanced form of thinking. It is not until high school that the application of composition is emphasized, while thinking in images is the basic form of thinking. Narrative writing and novel writing all emphasize "vivid image" and regard whether it is "vivid image" as an important criterion to judge whether an article is good or bad.

how can I write an article vividly? One of the most critical methods is to apply the technique of "description".

High-level description is like a camera, which vividly reproduces the actual state at that time, making people feel like seeing the person, smelling the sound, smelling the taste and being there.

"description" can be divided into two categories: scenery description and character description. Character description is divided into appearance, language, action, psychology, expression and detail description.

Read the following article and think about it: Can I write? How can I write it? After reading the article, think again: What kinds of descriptive techniques are used in this article? What will happen if you don't use descriptive techniques?

1. 27 Shanghai Senior High School Entrance Examination Full Score Composition

Topic: There are always days in life that are worth remembering, and it is this "day" that enriches our lives. "This day" may be so unusual from early morning to dusk, or it may be a moment that makes "this day" extraordinary. ?

Please write an article of about 6 words on the topic of "Remember this day".

1. Remember this day

"Pa". As soon as I entered the alley, I heard the sound of dropping a cup all the way. My heart tightened and I hurried home. I met my neighbor head-on, and I knew from her eyes that something must have happened to my family again!

when I arrived at the door, I heard a reverberation of "banging" in the room, followed by my mother's crying. "Oh my God! Hand in hand! " I hurried into the house, only to find my mother's face covered with tears, her hair unkempt and her coat torn, while my father's image was similar, showing that the two sides were evenly matched, but "men don't flick when they have tears".

"I've had enough of these days, divorce! Divorce! " Mom's soprano almost pierced my eardrum. I looked at my mother and then at my father. Mom looks like she's going to make a big deal out of it, and dad is still in the old school: he takes things too seriously but can't end them, and he has a pair of warm soup. "Is it not playing mahjong? What happened to playing mahjong? Is it illegal? Does the police want you to take care of it? " Although mother's education is not high, the quarrel is unambiguous, and the rhetorical question seems to be a barrage. At this time, dad only has to listen. I'm stupefied, it's for beating hemp pulp again! Mom and dad have argued about this more than once. Alas! What do you think our ancestors invented? Why did they invent this thing? I don't know how many families have been harmed What a sin.

"Dad, mom, stop arguing. I'm hungry, and I have to review my lessons after eating. " I look for opportunities to change the subject. As soon as my mother heard this, she stopped crying slowly, and I lost no time in handing out the tissue. "You wait, I'll cook." Mother dried her tears and was ready to go to the kitchen. I thought to myself: it seems that this trick is quite effective.

"Leave!" Mom was about to call a truce, but dad got tough, and a thunderous roar scared me. The muscles on his face were shaking violently, and he looked really angry. I hurriedly dozen circle field: "dad, you have to think clearly: it doesn't matter if you leave, what can I do?" There is still less than a month before the senior high school entrance examination. Do me a favor and wait until I finish the exam before getting divorced, okay? " At this time, the room was surprisingly quiet. For a long time, I heard my father sigh heavily. My mother looked at me guiltily, glanced at my father in fear, stood up silently, wiped her tears with the back of her hand, smoothed her messy hair and walked to the kitchen. Dad also silently picked up the broom and began to clean the battlefield. According to past experience, I know that the dawn of peace has finally arrived! I am proud of my outstanding peacekeeping mission. After a while, the smell of food wafted from the kitchen, and the ground was clean. Nothing seemed to happen at home except the messy clothes on both sides.

at dinner, while I was helping my parents with food, I said sadly, "I love you, and no one can lose you. I hope this is your last battle. Please remember this day and never forget it. " Mom and dad looked at each other and nodded at me hard. From their eyes, I believe that "war" will never come again.

comments: 1. the beginning of the article is impressive. 2. There are many language descriptions in the full text, which vividly show this family storm.

2. Remember that this day

is a bleak autumn night, and it is outside the door, and a vague figure is accompanied by a burst of knocking at the door ...

"Excuse me, could you please turn down the volume?" Dad bowed his head and said to his neighbor on the fourth floor. "Er ... OK!" Before he finished, his father interrupted him again. "My child is doing his homework. Your voice is ... a little loud." "bang!" With the sound of the door closing, my father turned around and sighed, his eyebrows frowning lightly. Suddenly, the air around him seemed to be trapped, filled with only a touch of sadness and helplessness.

This is an ordinary "landscape", a picture that everyone knows about the residents of Building 6. Because, almost every day at this time, the father on the fifth floor will come to ask the neighbors not to make a sound to influence me-a student who "fights" for the senior high school entrance examination.

but, god knows, how can there be a reason not to make a sound? Regardless of the "buzzing" sound from Aunt Zhang's washing machine on the sixth floor, even the rock music played by Xiao Wu on the fourth floor is enough to make me unable to do my homework with peace of mind.

"alas, it is so influential! Say it again today! " Dad didn't wait for the "movement" to start playing, but he thought about saying to his neighbors, "Dad, don't go. Why should people listen to you?" When I heard my father's complaint in the room, my heart was like a walnut being suddenly knocked open, and the cool and bitter taste came to my mind. I couldn't help rushing out and saying to him.

"no!" Dad didn't listen to my persuasion at all and rushed out of the house.

I lie prone at the window and can't bear to watch the scene at this moment: a father over half a century is going to pay his dignity for his daughter!

a hand was raised, and when I was about to "enjoy" the noise for a few minutes, suddenly, the sound disappeared! Father's "wanting to knock and stop" hand was stiff in an instant. At this moment, Building 6 has returned to the scene of "and a thousand sounds are quieted".

on this day, my heart was deeply shocked. I can't forget my father's love, but the silence of my neighbors moved me even more. Has the "scenery" disappeared? No, the former "scenery" is gradually sneaking into the night. Now, the silence of that day continues as always, and I remember this day in my heart.

remember this day, remember that moment, and remember the love of everyone around you. Because this day contains the love of my father, the understanding and concern of my neighbors, and my careful interpretation of the term "love"!

Comments: 1. The theme of this article is love: father's love, neighbor's love, focusing on what my father and neighbors have done for me. 2. Behind the "vague figure" and "knocking at the door" at the beginning of the article is the father's love.

Second, in 27, Jinan City, Shandong Province, got a perfect score composition

The topic was "eternal beauty".

3. Beautiful Butterfly

Life is short, but the beauty of life is eternal.

-Inscription

As the shower gradually subsided, I went out of the stuffy room to get some air. My eyes suddenly flashed, ah! A colorful butterfly! Blue skirt, white ribbon, butterflies flying like fairies. Not far away, it is such a gorgeous flower that presents a different kind of beauty in the washing of rain. Butterflies fluttered among the flowers, disturbing my sight. Suddenly it flew again and landed on the trunk of a big tree beside me. Is it showing off its beauty to me? I stopped to watch.

"poof!" Butterfly was hit by a drop of rain beads and fell into the puddle under the tree. I froze, I didn't know whether to hold it, and my weak wings flapped feebly in the water. I suddenly found that my breathing was shortness of breath. Gradually, gradually, a miracle appeared. It climbed to a small flower in the puddle bit by bit, erected its wet wings and trembled slightly in the wind.

I am filled with joy. The tenacious life finally overcame the bad luck. Suddenly a breeze blew and countless raindrops fell on the tree. Once again, the butterfly was unfortunately hit and fell miserably. My heart aches. There are shallow ripples on the water, and this little life is still struggling. It is still alive! I seem to feel the throb of a powerful life! Hurriedly carefully picked it up. The trembling wings opened and closed slightly, and my heart fell with them. Weak butterfly, can you survive?

another gust of wind blew, and it cleared up, and a rainbow hung in the sky. That brave butterfly tried several times, and finally jumped out of my hand and flew to Ran Ran ... < P > I stood quietly and watched it. Respectable butterfly, for beauty, breaks the shackles of silk cocoon, for beauty, overcomes the hardships of wind and rain, isn't it explaining to me the eternal beauty of life?

comments: 1. the central word: beauty, the beauty of life. Grasp the central word and grasp the theme of the article. 2, the inscription and the ending, echo from beginning to end, profoundly point out the theme of the article.

Third, in 27, Qingdao City, Shandong Province, got a perfect score composition

Filial piety to parents is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. In Xunzi's Outline, it is pointed out: "Those who are courteous, you are respectful, and the elderly are filial." "The Doctrine of the Mean" also says: "Those who are filial are good at following people's aspirations and telling people's things." It means that filial piety means being kind to parents, serving them wholeheartedly, obeying them, respecting them and caring for them. From this point of view, filial piety is the duty of children and the obligation of the younger generation. Please take "filial piety" as the topic, write an article of about 6 words with your own topic and style (except poetry and drama). The real school name and person name shall not appear in the text.

4. When the present arrived home from school, my father was prostrating himself to weave a straw mat. When he saw me, he immediately stopped his work, looked at me transfixed, and the surprise of reunion after such a long separation clearly flashed in his deep eyes. ? I quickly stepped forward to help him sit down and couldn't wait to report the good news I brought back: "Dad, I got the first grade in the midterm exam!" " Father nodded excitedly, showing a face of excitement and joy: "... eh! Ok! ……”? "Dad! Tomorrow is your fifty-third birthday, and I bought you a cigarette with a scholarship. " I dug out his birthday present in my bag with passion and respectfully presented it. ? Smoking is my father's greatest hobby in his life. Smoke has a strange magic power to drive him away from fatigue. Every time my father was tired in the field, he took out a cheap and inferior cigarette from his arms and lit it leisurely. He took a break with the cigarette after working in the field in a focused and comfortable expression. In the end, his physical strength seemed to recover completely, so he picked up farm tools and went to work harder ...? At this time, my father stayed and didn't pick up. He stood up slowly and left the wooden bench, his expression on her face suddenly became more complicated, and his lips began to move violently, but he didn't make any noise. ? "Dad! More than three pieces of a pack of good cigarettes! " My father just reached out and shook the cigarette. ? As soon as I saw his blue-blooded hand, I was about to cry-my mother left early. For more than ten years, he has been running the house and the house alone, and he has to provide me with a study. People are getting old quickly. I couldn't bear to read it. When I received the admission notice from the city's key middle school six months ago, I took the initiative to ask my father to give up school and help him. But he flatly refused, so he borrowed from the east and the west to make up 1,2 yuan and sent me to the station: "Go and study hard. After reading the book, everything will be fine. In the future, I will go home to visit relatives on holidays and bring my father two packs of good cigarettes to smoke, and my father will be satisfied. " When the bus was about to leave, my father rushed up again, struggling to climb the window and told me, "If you need money, just call your neighbor. Dad has a way!" I nodded with tears ...? At this point, I want my father to open the cigarette case immediately, take out one, and focus on lighting it comfortably as usual after being tired. However, I couldn't. My father just held the cigarette in front of his eyes and stared at it emotionally. He looked at the cigarette and looked at me again. His eyes were full of tears. For a long time, he carefully put down the cigarette and said calmly, "Smoke, I quit." ? "Dad ..." I threw myself into my father's warm arms and sobbed. ? "Stupid kid, what are you crying about? You buy cigarettes with a scholarship, which is the best gift you can give dad! " After listening to this, I couldn't cry any more. I let my father's rough hand fondle my head affectionately ...

Comments: the description of the characters is vivid and vivid, and the skills are: language+action, expression.