Looking for Su Mu's Poems and Their Appreciation

Blue sky, yellow leaves, autumn colors, cold smoke, green waves.

The mountain reflects the setting sun and the sky meets the water, and the grass is ruthless, even outside the setting sun.

Dark homesickness, thoughts of chasing travel. Every night unless, sweet dreams make people unable to sleep.

The bright moon tower is lonely, and the wine turns into sorrow and tears.

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White clouds are floating in the blue sky, and golden leaves cover the earth. Autumn scenery is reflected on the blue waves on the river, and the water waves are glowing with cold smoke and green. The distant mountains are bathed in sunset, and the sky is connected with rivers. The grass on the shore seems heartless, beyond the setting sun. Sad souls in different places, chasing the sadness of living in different places, can only make people unable to sleep every night, unless it is a dream. The bright moon shines on tall buildings, so don't lean on it alone. Picked up the wine to wash the sorrow, but turned into acacia tears.

White clouds and yellow leaves are everywhere. Autumn scenery is reflected on the blue waves on the river, and the water waves are glowing with cold smoke and green. The distant mountains are bathed in sunset, and the sky is connected with rivers. The grass on the shore seems heartless, beyond the setting sun.

Sad souls in different places, chasing the sadness of living in different places, can only make people unable to sleep every night, unless it is a dream. The bright moon shines on tall buildings, so don't lean on it alone. Picked up the wine to wash the sorrow, but turned into acacia tears.

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Fan Zhongyan was a famous minister in Song Dynasty. He is omnipotent politically and militarily, but at the same time, he does not lose his manners. This word is beautiful and affectionate. The content is about homesickness. The subject matter is general, but the writing style is unique. The scenery of Shangcheng is profound and profound, and the viewpoint is from top to bottom, from near to far.

Since the novel Calling a Hermit in Huainan Mountain, "The wandering prince and grandson don't return, the spring grass grows and the warbler flies" and "the fragrant grass" are often inseparable from parting, but the seasonal characteristics are secondary.

Shangque is a landscape language, only the word "heartless" points out the sadness, and it is still for the landscape, leaving no trace.

The next chapter reveals the main idea directly, because "the grass is ruthless" leads to sadness and acacia.

The word "chase" is particularly sentimental.

The words "wine into sorrow" are extremely painful to write. His word "Yujiexing" also said: "Worry is over, there is no reason to get drunk. Before the wine arrives, it becomes a tear first;

This word is a big scene, not tragic. According to the individual images in the Ci, Zhang Huiyan and Liaoyuan Huang in Qing Dynasty thought that the Ci was not homesick, but actually expressed their concern for the country through the boundless autumn colors.

In the Yuan Dynasty, Wang Shifu's The West Chamber, the fourth volume, the third fold of Farewell to the Long Pavilion [Palace Quezhengshan] said: "The sky is yellow, the west wind is tight, and the geese fly north and south." Whoever is drunk by frost forest at dawn always makes people burst into tears. "That is to say, it is made up of this word.

Shang Chuan's first two poems, clear and sometimes elegant, depict a vast and declining autumn scenery from two angles. In three or four sentences, from the vast expanse of blue sky to the autumn water that connects heaven and earth remotely. Autumn color refers to the blue sky and yellow leaves. This bright and golden land has been extended into the distance, connecting Simon Qiu Jiang at the end of heaven and earth. Above the river waves, there is a layer of emerald cold smoke. Fog was originally white, but because it is connected with the blue sky and the blue waves, it is difficult to distinguish it from the blue sky from a distance, such as the so-called "autumn water * * * sky is the same color", so there is a saying that "the sky meets the water" The word "cold" highlights the autumn feeling given by this emerald haze. These two sentences are far apart, and cooperate with the first two sentences to form an extremely vast and colorful autumn map.

The last three sentences of Shangque further connect heaven, earth, mountains and water through sunset and grassland, and the scenery extends from the line of sight to the imaginary horizon. These three sentences have strong subjective feelings and the word "emotion", which has made a powerful rendering and foreshadowing for the lyrical transformation of the scenery in Shangque.

Through the film, you can directly point out the "hometown soul" and "travel thinking". Homesickness, that is, homesickness, is close to "thinking about traveling" Two sentences mean that a person's homesickness is gloomy and melancholy, and the melancholy of travel overlaps and continues. There is an emphasis on top-down communication, and the protagonist's homesickness is self-evident after living in a foreign land for a long time.

In the next three or four sentences, it seems that homesickness and travel troubles have also been eliminated, but in fact, they have been bothering me. In this way, the words are strange, and the expression is deeper and more beautiful. The phrase "bright moon" means that I can't sleep at night because I'm worried about traveling. Although the moonlight is bright and the night view on the high building is beautiful, I can't watch it, because watching it alone on the railing will aggravate my disappointment.

Finally, I would like to say a few words, saying that because I can't sleep at night, I drown my sorrows in wine, but once the wine enters my heart, it turns into tears of acacia, and it hurts more to send acacia. These two sentences are lyrical and profound, and the words are novel and natural. At this point, the depressed homesickness and anxiety in a foreign land triggered the development to a climax, and the text stopped here.

The combination of structure and scene is common in words. The particularity of this word lies in the unity of beauty and tenderness, that is, the unity of vast scenery, beauty and affection. The words about homesickness and sadness are often expressed by bleak autumn scenery, but this word is the opposite, with a wide and beautiful scenery. On the one hand, it shows the poet's broad-minded mind and love for life and nature, and then sets off his parting feelings. On the other hand, it makes the feelings expressed by Xia Kun look soft and bony, deep but not decadent.

Su Muzhe Zhou Bangyan

Burn agarwood to relieve summer heat. Birds call clear, intrude into the eaves. The leaves of Chuyang withered all night, the water was clear and round, and the wind and lotus rose one by one.

My hometown is far away. When will I go? I live in Wumen and have been traveling in Chang 'an for a long time. Do the fishermen in May remember each other? Boat, dream into furongpu.

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Zhou Bangyan's ci is famous for its richness and delicacy. But this fresh and natural poem Su Mu Gai is one of the few exceptions in Muslim ci. This word was written from the sixth year of Zongshen Yuanfeng (1083) to the first year of Zhezong Yuanyou (1086). At that time, Zhou Bangyan was a guest of the capital for a long time, and he was in the rising stage of his life from entering Beijing to becoming a teacher. The word is centered on writing about the lotus after the wind and rain, introducing the dream of hometown and expressing homesickness, with simple meaning.

First, Shang Juan wrote about burning incense indoors to cool off the heat, then about birds singing on the eaves, and then about the swaying of outdoor wind load. The words are lively and fresh, the structural meaning is coherent and natural, and the viewpoint conversion is very hierarchical. The vivid description of the lotus flower in the poem was rated as "the one who can really get the truth of the lotus flower" by Wang Guowei's "Words on Earth", which is the swan song of writing the lotus flower.

Next, from the scene of Qingyuan in May, the scenery of the wind and the lotus is similar to that of Wumen, the hometown in May, and a boat, dreaming of Furong Pu, the feeling of lovesickness is incisive.

This word has a clear paragraph, with the first half describing the scenery and the second half lyrical. Write a quiet scene together, burn incense to cool off the heat, and let your heart calm down naturally, or suggest taking a pair of coolants in a busy field and writing two sentences about silence. There are noises in three or four sentences of silence. The words "the birds are singing" and "Hula La" are vivid, suggesting that it rained last night and Kesaharu. Stealing a column is more affectionate, peeping under the eaves, telling people that they are happy with the new sunshine, vivid and charming. The sentence "On the Leaves" is fresh and beautiful. "The water surface is clear and round, and the wind and load are lifted one by one", so the strength is remarkable. These three sentences are actually interactive syntax, which is very clever in coordination and verb-sound. It was a round lotus leaf, and the raindrops remained on the leaves last night, gradually drying up in the early morning sun. A gust of wind, lotus leaves flying in groups, just like the lens of a movie, timely framing. Refine the word "ju" into words, and the whole word will stand up. Moving scenery is like life. In this way, when we look back at "burning agarwood to cool off the heat" together, it should be a day's work, and when "birds are singing", it is the scene in the early morning, and then it is pushed from the house to the outside, and the lotus pond is a new sunny scene. Look at the first two sentences again, and the time should be lengthened. Summer is like a year, and the fragrance disappears. Silence is obvious, and its meaning is rich and implicit, which lays the foundation for the guests' long-term homesickness.

I speak my mind straight, and the words are like their words, without carving. I stayed in Chang 'an, which was actually Bianjing (now Kaifeng). Students from Zhou Bangyan presented "Biandu Fu" to the capital, which was appreciated by Zongshen, but they still achieved nothing, so they couldn't help thinking of going to the countryside. "My hometown is far away, when will I go" means "I live in Wumen and have been visiting Chang 'an for a long time". Immediately after Meet in Yu Lang in May, he didn't say that he missed his friends in his hometown, but wrote whether Yu Lang missed himself. This is a deeper way of writing from the opposite side. A few words, "boat, dream into the lotus pond", is rowing a boat into the lotus pond in a dream. In fact, it ends with a fictional dream. Although virtual and real, unpredictable.

The realm of this word is indeed as Zhou Ji said: "If you are interested, if you are not interested, you will be dazzled." (Selected Works of Song Sijia) And Zhou Bangyan's mind should be as Chen Shi said: "It is not necessary to win by words, but to win by words. The wind is excellent, and you can also see that your heart is calm "and" Shao Yunji ". It serves to show that Zhou Bangyan's ci is famous for its elegance, and he is also a master of poetry. Of course, his ci is exquisite, and his superb ideological realm is the solid foundation of his ci.

Translation:

Burning agarwood (a precious spice) to eliminate the sultry and humid summer heat. Birds call it sunny (as the old saying goes, birds can occupy rain), and I secretly listen to their "words" under the eaves at dawn. The first ray of sunshine on the lotus leaf dried the rain and water all night, and the water surface was clear and round. Lotus leaves are exposed to the morning breeze.

I want to go to my distant hometown. When can I go back? My family originally lived in wuyue (now Qiantang) and lived in Chang 'an for a long time. In May, it was my childhood friend in my hometown who was thinking of me and rowing a boat. I came to the lotus pond in my dream (the word refers to West Lake in Hangzhou).

Su Muzhe Tian Hai Yi Se

In the late spring night, the plum rains are falling and the wind is blowing and raining. The quadrangles in the Ming Dynasty are sad, fragrant and turbid.

Crisp hands, quiet piano caress, oh hands with low eyebrows, want to play my thoughts. Who is the daughter's mind telling? The water was running, and she was speechless.

Su Muzhe Fu Xuehe

The cold wind is clear and the purples are falling. The moonlight is like a poem, and there are thousands of hidden waves. The sky is high and wide by Longtan Lake. Poor residual lotus, wheatgrass lonely.

In this life, love is wrong. The world is reincarnation, and feelings are at the end of this life. Staring at the cold pool, the wind rests. I don't care about sooner or later, I just want this promise.

General idea: Going to Shangque is an exciting way for lonely lotus in autumn. Next, I wrote that love in this life is disordered, and I promised to wait for the afterlife in this life. Wrote endless sadness and helplessness.

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Lengyouzi

Cui Yunshan, clear water and cold, silent rain, I don't remember the return date.

The unique Hanshan River is tepid. Clouds and winds stay, while boats stay in the sunset.

Solitary flute is silent, not heartbroken, and has no intention of staying or staying. Is silence a reward?

I only drown my sorrows in wine. Clouds go away without a trace, sunny and rainy!

Su Muzhe Acacia Girl

Lengyouzi

Green robe, drinking spirits, holding a sword, riding as fast as the wind.

As strong as a dragon. Where are the rivers and lakes in the storm?

Willow eyebrows, cherry mouth, as light as smoke, for whom to wash clothes?

Worried about it but can't see it. When the moon sets and the sun sets, rivers and lakes forget each other.

Su Muzhe Yu Ye Xiang Si

The night is boundless, the stars are long, the night ice reminds the soul, and the stars are accompanied by regrets.

Regret meeting and hating each other late, regretting the fleeting time, regretting sleepless nights.

The wind is fluttering, the rain is continuous, the sleeves are cold, and the rain is accompanied by people's thoughts.

Also flying with me are Miss Yan, Miss Yuanyang and Miss Xiao Honglian.

Water bag dance

mei yao chen

The dew is flat and the smoke is a villa. After rain, Jiang.

The unique Yu Lang has the least years. Spring robe, tender color to shoot.

Pick up the pavilion and get lost. I can't complain about Wang Sun, but I don't remember coming home early.

All the pears are gone, and spring is back. The sun went down, and the ground was green and smoky.