Theme language of rambling in ancient poetry garden

Many poems will light up our hearts like sunshine, touch us, shock us and inspire us, such as Qu Yuan's "The road is long, and I will go up and down", Wang Bo's "However, China holds our friendship, and heaven is still our neighbor", Lu You's "There is no doubt that there is another village in the dark" and Ai Qing's "Why do I often burst into tears? Because I love this land deeply ... "If life deceives you, don't be sad or impatient." ...

Give yourself a title, or describe the experience related to poetry, or talk about the enlightenment from it.

The writing instructions are as follows

Writing training point: borrowing style method

Borrowing style means borrowing one genre form to express the ideological content that another genre should undertake, and even borrowing written forms and factual processes from other disciplines and fields to express their feelings and feelings.

Commonly used styles can generally be divided into three types:

Literary works, applied styles and special categories.

Literary works can take the form of poems, novels, plays, fairy tales, fables and science fiction.

Applied style can draw lessons from letters, diaries, applications, debates, contracts, instructions, minutes of meetings, speeches, broadcasts, announcements and other forms. Special classes can borrow relevant experimental reports and result reports from physics, chemistry and biology; Derive, prove or solve problems by using mathematical formulas; Borrowing judgments, petitions and other legal documents; Borrow the doctor's diagnosis, medical report and other forms; Borrow film and television scripts and TV programs, such as interviews, telling the truth, news investigation, cross talk and other forms; Borrow commercial forms, such as plans, marketing plans, tenders, advertisements, etc. ; Borrow various forms of the network, such as personal homepage, blog, forum, QQ chat, etc.

Other special forms, such as new stories, test papers, total memories, telephone messages, cooking, etc.

Borrowing stylistic methods generally has the following advantages:

First, it gives people a refreshing feeling and makes people shine.

Second, it saves the burden and trouble of quotation and transition in general narration, and its material goes straight to the theme and the center is more prominent.

Please pay attention to the following points when using:

1, familiar with the writing style and characteristics of metonymy, which is the premise of writing this kind of composition.

2. If you want to skillfully use this form in the examination room, you must first do a lot of training in peacetime, so that you can fully master this form and be handy in the examination room.

3, the innovation of form, we must consider the ideological connotation of the article, the content should be broad and deep, and we should not unilaterally pursue the innovation of form, but become a "golden jade outside, which is defeated."

Examples of inspiration for brilliant ideas:

Interview with Wang Bo A scientist finally invented a videophone that can travel through time and space. An admirer of Wang Bo was lucky enough to be the first tester to interview Wang Bo by telephone.

"I am a future person and want to know you through time and space. Your work "Preface to Pavilion" has been circulated through the ages, and "However, China has our friendship and the sky is our neighbor" in "Farewell to Du Shu" is even more popular. Can you tell us how you wrote this work at that time? "

"yes. Alas! It's a long story: actually, I'm going to visit my father. When I passed by Nanchang, I caught up with Governor Yan of Nanchang and successfully built the museum. On the Double Ninth Festival, I held a grand banquet in Wang Teng Pavilion. So I went to visit, and the enthusiastic governor Yan invited me to dinner. Yan Dudu's banquet is to boast about the talent of his son-in-law Meng. Let the son-in-law prepare a preface in advance and show it to everyone as an impromptu writing during the dinner. At the banquet, the governor of Yan asked people to take out paper and pen, pretending to let everyone preface this great event. Everyone knows his intention, so he refuses to write, and I am a young man in my twenties, but I don't know how to refuse. Instead, I wrote in public with a pen and paper, and I didn't notice that the governor was already unhappy. "

2. Poetry Job-hunting Poetry Adults posted a job advertisement on CCTV, and the recruiting unit kept asking for it.

I am a painter, "sneaking into the night with the wind, moistening things silently." You can draw a picture of spring rain for farmers with the pen of genius; I am a musician. "In the fragrance of rice flowers, you say' bumper harvest' and listen to frogs." I can play the farmer's harvest song with a light melody; "I am a photographer," just like the strong wind in spring, when it comes at night and blows open the petals of ten thousand pear trees, I can photograph the whiteness and vastness of winter with strange feelings and wonderful ideas, and stay in the splendor and romance of winter with my mind's eyes.

3. The barren peach blossom shows the deception of fruit farmers in the form of Sanqu, whipping those unscrupulous people who are greedy and harm the interests of the people, so as to awaken people's sympathy and arouse people's indignation.

Prelude colorful clouds, peach blossom garden. Bees buzz and butterflies fly. Cover the mountain village with several embroidered quilts, pile the hillside into several splendid piles, turn the river into colorful peach blossom water, turn the girl into a peach blossom girl with flowers all over her head, and make the grandfather happy to be thirty years younger. Laughing, the whole village is full of joy.

Taoyuan dreamed of a small mountain village, turned joy into worry, and opened a peach garden on the hillside, hoping to have a three-year fruiting period. I can't talk about investing, but I'm ashamed. I can't talk about sweating and crying. It is far from learning science and technology. I can't talk about pest control and drought prevention. In the dream, flowers bloom and fall, with lush foliage and numerous fruits. In my dream, peaches are ripe, and the fruit fragrance floats ten miles. In my dream, I signed the bill and was busy delivering the goods. In my dream, I watched my wallet bulge. Oh, I didn't expect it to be a bolt from the blue. What a dream!

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Here are a few model essays, which can be extrapolated:)

1. Walking tour in ancient poetry garden (cold angel)

After visiting the ancient poetry garden for a period of time, I got a taste of the imagination of the poet Li Taibai and the romanticism in his poems. It also made me realize the great poet's sincere patriotic feelings and deep homesickness; Among them, I witnessed the beautiful face of the fairy Chang 'e under the mysterious veil; I have seen the infinite beauty at four o'clock. I have benefited a lot. -inscription

I came to the ancient poetry garden and traveled here four times. I saw that "falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more;" Spring water is brighter than the sky. Draw a boat and listen to the rain. "Spring; I have seen "the lotus leaf connected with the sky is infinitely blue, and the lotus reflected in the sun is not the same red;" The trees grow dark in summer, and the balcony reflects the pond. "Summer; Appreciate "the tall building looks forward to dusk, and there is a rustling rain on the plane leaves;" "The sunset is lonely in Qi Fei, and the autumn water is * * * one color." Autumn; Looking at it, "like a strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows away the petals of ten thousand pear trees;" Thousands of miles in Huang Yun, the day shines, and the north wind blows geese and snow. " In winter.

When I galloped in spring, summer, autumn and winter, I also met famous great poets all over the country. They are patriotic: Du Fu and Du Zimei can't help but feel: "Although the country is divided, mountains and rivers remain forever, and the city is full of spring grass. The place where the petals flow like tears is very shocking. The war lasted for more than half a year, and letters from home were rare, with a hundred thousand gold. I stroke my white hair. It has become so thin that it can no longer hold hairpins. " They are more homesick. Wang Wei looked at the distance alone, thinking of his long-lost relatives, and sighed: "Being in a foreign land, I miss my relatives twice every festive season. I know from a distance where my brother climbed, and there is one person missing from the dogwood. "

Among them, there is a world-famous poet Li Taibai. His poems, as Wang Shizhen said, are "based on nature". Li Bai's natural poetic style consists of six aesthetic features: deep beauty, bright beauty, halal beauty, round beauty, simple beauty and novelty beauty. These six characteristics are all "based on nature", which are interrelated and integrated; It shows that Li Bai's natural poetic style is the dialectical unity of diversity and concreteness, and the unity of flexibility and skill. Li Bai's natural poetic style is mainly manifested in six aspects: bold language, quick language, drunken language, fairy language, modest language and spoken language. In a word, Li Bai's natural poetic style is a combination of skillful and flexible creative skills and skillful and natural language skills.

When it comes to poetry immortals, we have to talk about the bright moon in his works. Li Bai's life enjoys a high position in the history of China literature with his brilliant poetic achievements. And the bright moon he recited in many poems is even more superb. None of the poems are the same, and there is no deja vu. There is a feeling of thousands of people. Colorful, colorful. Form a smart and interesting world.

For example, Drinking the Bright Moon Alone: "From from a pot of wine among the flowers, drinking alone. No one is with me. Raise my cup, I invite the bright moon, which brings me its shadow and makes us three people. The moon doesn't know how to drink, but the shadow in front of it is behind. I have to mingle with them and enjoy the happiness of spring. The song I sing is bright and wandering, and I dance the shadow before wandering. Wake up and be happy together, and disperse after drunkenness. Will goodwill be guaranteed? I see the long road of the Milky Way. " Today, no matter men, women and children, anyone in China, as long as he raises a glass and drinks lightly, will sing "Until, raise my glass, I ask for the bright moon, bring my shadow to me and let the three of us" to express his appreciation of the so-called elegance and drinking alone. The uniqueness of this poem has long been integrated into the collective unconsciousness of our nation.

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Step 2 keep waiting

Deng qinxiao

How many nights, she longed to walk into her dream hometown because she was so tired. However, how many nights, she woke up from her dream and experienced a night of sadness alone.

Her name is Li Qingzhao. Since she separated from her husband, she often can't sleep at night. No, tonight, she woke up from her dream again, so lost and haggard! Get up and light the oil lamp, trying to drive away the darkness inside. By the light, she carefully looked at every electrical appliance in the room. Suddenly, her eyes stopped on the very old cup on the table-the cup she once drank at her husband's farewell party!

She carefully picked up the glass and the two mandarin ducks stayed peacefully on the water. Looking at these two lovebirds, she was a little sad and had endless disappointment. A person looks at himself and doesn't feel empty. With a sigh, I took out half a bottle of chrysanthemum wine left for my husband's farewell dinner that day, poured it myself, drank it, and didn't feel tears. ...

Drink, wait! Maybe, at dawn, he will come back. She looks forward to it and supports it. Finally, I hope a ray of light jumps into the hut from the window. It was dawn, and she seemed a little happy. The door creaked open. Standing for a long time, she habitually raised her groggy head, and the geese flew back. However, she clearly felt that the brocade book in the cloud had not arrived yet. The sky is no longer beautiful, the white clouds are no longer white, and the geese are no longer moving! Finally, she sighed deeply: "There is no way to eliminate this situation, only to frown and take it to heart."

Keep waiting! It doesn't matter if the white clouds tease themselves, and it doesn't matter if the geese cheat themselves.

The blue boat was moored on the shore, and everything around it seemed so quiet. Farewell to the sky, she gently untied the ribbon, and the dress slowly lowered her arm, so charming. She knows that the thoughts of her husband have been hanging over her.

Alas, go boating for fun! Maybe it can solve my thoughts about my husband. She boarded the ship. The autumn wind blew and she shivered. Sitting in the bow, looking at the unknown flowers on the shore, swaying and struggling alone in the wind, and finally the petals are ruthlessly pulled into the water by the wind. She was caught in the water, ran under the boat and made a loud noise ... Looking at all this, her nose was sour and she couldn't help but sigh: "Flowers are floating with water."

Rowing? Don't! She can't bear to see the shadow of the flower quilt. Find a husband? Don't! Where does the husband find himself when he leaves? Give up waiting? Don't! She doesn't want to give up, because she knows that her husband is also missing himself in an unknown place! Therefore, she had to choose persistent waiting. Thinking of all this, she couldn't help but express her inner feelings: "A kind of acacia, no worries for both places!"

Unconsciously, it's getting late. She returned to the shore and went into the yard. Although the chrysanthemums are full of flowers, she doesn't want to pick them. Lift up the difficult steps, walk listlessly to your hut, and continue to wait and torture endlessly. ...

[opinion]

The article successfully rewrites ancient poems, which makes the article show profound cultural connotation. The article imagines the content of Li Qingzhao's A Piece of Plum, the poet's mood and background when writing, and his feelings are sincere and reasonable. Interspersed with the phrase "a dried plum", like this.

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On the night of spring, I smelled the flute in Los Angeles.

Zhou Yanqiong

I, holding my glass, walked slowly outside the door, with an uninvited mind of "drowning my sorrows with wine".

I was drinking when I heard a sweet flute. I am surprised, excited and very happy. Listening to the sweet flute, everything in my hometown comes to my mind. Really, it sounds like the voice played by musicians in my hometown. His face, his hands and that beautiful flute. He sat there, blowing and blowing Many people sat there, listening to wonderful music, and people cheered. ...

I looked up at the bright moon in the sky and couldn't help thinking of my scene of "crossing the mirror lake with them for one night on the moon" So put down your glass and listen to the flute along Luoyang city. I was walking on the road, listening to the flute, and I couldn't help wondering, "Where did the flute come from?" I looked at the houses on the edge of the city. Most shops in this city are closed. There are few people walking on the slate street, and occasionally one or two birds are singing. This feeling is really cold. Walking up and down gradually, there is always a flute.

I don't understand. I wonder, where did this sound come from? So I went back along the original road and walked in the street. Occasionally there is a cool breeze, a little cold. I listened slowly. After walking for a while, the flute suddenly stopped and then blew again. Wow! This sound is familiar. It's "Folding Willow Song". Yes, but I'm more excited. I suddenly remembered the big willow tree in front of my house. Spring has come, the willow leaves are green and dripping, and flocks of birds are perched on the willow trees, chirping. When I left home for Beijing, my relatives and friends all saw me off under the willow tree. I saw them crying. I want to say something, but I can't say anything. There really is a scene of "I will leave infinite meaning for people and stir up the spring breeze in a thousand ways" ... I think of my friend Wang Lun and can't help singing: "Li Bai is going by boat, and suddenly I hear singing on the shore. Taohuatan is deep in thousands of feet, not as good as Wang Lunqing. "

Singing this poem, I thought of the loneliness of life and recalled the warmth of life at home; I think of the hardships of my official career and the fun of staying at home; I remembered the pain of being alone in a different place; Recall the enthusiasm of the people in my hometown. I saw the smiling faces of the people in my hometown, heard their eager words and felt their love.

I walked on, accompanied by the beautiful flute, and unconsciously returned to my cabin. Picked up the glass of wine, fierce drink two, came to the table, spread out the paper, quickly wrote:

Yu Di's dark flying sound scattered into the spring breeze in Los Angeles.

In this serenade, I heard the breaking sound of willow trees. No one can miss home!

-Too white a topic

[opinion]

This paper imagines the writing process of Li Bai's "Spring City and the Smelling of the Flute in Los Angeles" in the first person. It is a masterpiece with novel conception and unique conception.

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4. Forum No.23 Pushkin Street

Moderator: Welcome to the "No.23 Pushkin Street" forum, and remember our slogan "Don't be sad, don't be impatient, you need to calm down in blue days!" If you don't feel uncomfortable, come and speak freely!

[Comment: Sorry, it's interesting to start with the first sentence of Pushkin's poem. ]

(The host's voice did not fall, and the number of visits to this website continued to soar ...)

Yijiangchunshui: I am already very calm! However, I am really impatient. I have to finish writing 28 review papers tonight and hand them in tomorrow. Is that reasonable? (crying ...) My sadness is like a river flowing eastward! [Comment: Cheng, quoting poems to express pain is just right. ]

Bitter gourd ice cream: Hey, friend, relax and have some ice cream! "Everything is instantaneous, and everything will pass!" [Opinion: Turn. ]

Bird: I secretly made up my mind to be the first in the exam, but I just couldn't work hard! (ready to sing) "I flew into the sky and found myself afraid of heights."

[Opinion: Discount. ]

(Laughter continues)

Empty Valley Youlan: (exclaiming) Alas, we are in the same boat! Not afraid! Not afraid! My heart will always look forward to the future!

General Chang Sheng (obviously too much academic history): My weekend. Just like war. My fu (parents) helped me sign up for n interest classes, math, English, chess, piano ... (endless stream) "God, help me." (Singing generously)

Savior: Huh? You called me? (The whole world is spitting) Well, I will give you a motto, "Believe it, happy days will come!"

300 degrees: for me, for me. Listen to me first: "I am forced to study every day!" " "My glasses, very heavy, have 300 degrees, it's terrible. (it's too exaggerated)

Tram woman: Then you dare to surf the Internet. Hurry up and bury yourself in the book! Don't be depressed all the time! We support you! (cheers)

Tangyuan: Worse than me! I am a fat man, and everyone calls me Tangyuan. I weigh 60 kilograms, not kilograms. You can't do any exercise! Everyone is far away from me, and my self-confidence has completely collapsed! So, I decided to turn over a new leaf and carry on losing weight to the end! The task is arduous, and the road is long. Xiu Yuan Xi! Come on, let's hear more applause!

The audience shouted: "and what has passed will become a kind memory!" " "[Opinion: He. ]

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4. Military service appreciation

The bonfire shines on Xijing (1), and my heart is uneven.

Tooth Zhang Cifeng Que ②, iron riding around Longcheng ③.

The heavy snow darkened the color; The wind roared and the drums rang.

Better be a centurion than a scholar.

Note: ① Xijing: refers to Chang 'an, which is symmetrical with Luoyang, Tokyo.

(2) Tooth palm: the bugle used to adjust soldiers in ancient times was divided into two sections, and the joint was toothed, so it was called tooth palm. Zhang is jade. When in use, the imperial court and the commander-in-chief each hold one piece, and the two pieces can be transferred together. Fengque: generally refers to the palace.

(3) Longcheng: The place where Xiongnu offered sacrifices every May in the Han Dynasty, so it is located in today's Mongolia. This refers to the enemy's lair.

(4) Centurion: an officer who commands 100 people, generally referring to a junior officer.

Yang Jiong, the author of this poem, was one of the "four outstanding figures in the early Tang Dynasty" and was hailed as a child prodigy in his childhood. After reading this poem, you will first be shocked by the surging patriotic enthusiasm and heroism.

In the early Tang Dynasty, Turks in the north often invaded and harassed. According to textual research, at that time, the Turkic literary department invaded Guyuan, Gansu, thousands of miles away from Chang 'an. To say "According to Xijing" is to use exaggerated brushwork to vividly reflect the urgency of border troubles. At this time, Yang Jiong was working as a civil servant in the imperial court, and his heart was full of pent-up anger. The word "self" highlights the passion of defending the enemy and serving the country. This couplet came like thunder, with extraordinary momentum.

The second couplet closely follows the previous sentence, showing the continuous picture of Tang Jun's rapid assembly, departure, attack all the way and going straight to the enemy's nest. A word "around", as easy as lifting weights, wrote the joy of iron drums. This couplet only uses the cross to summarize the process of successive victories, and conveys the swiftness and courage of counterattack with overwhelming momentum.

The third joint "the flag is painted with dark snow and the wind is full of miscellaneous drums" can be regarded as a concentrated description of the hard struggle to win the final victory. The red flag of victory is red with blood. With these two sentences, this poem appears vigorous and powerful, otherwise, it may be inevitable that it is suspected of "pretending to be bold and unrestrained". Try it, snowflakes are flying, covering the sky, and the colorful embroidery on the military flag is dim; The north wind roared, the drums roared, and the soldiers still fought bloody battles. I am invincible. Here, the first sentence is written in the eyes, and the second sentence is written in the ears, interwoven into a heroic snow battle map.

"Better be a centurion than a scholar" echoed "injustice in my heart" and expressed my feelings of joining the army to kill the enemy and serve the country. The Tang Dynasty was the peak of feudal society in China, and many literati also yearned for a life of galloping on the battlefield and making contributions, thus creating the prosperity of frontier poems. Yang Jiong sang the heroic spirit of the times with such resolute vows as Ninglang and Sanctuary. As for future generations to regard it as a synonym for "no talent is a scholar", it is one-sided.

"Joining the army" is an old topic in Yuefu. Originally, it was used to describe military life. However, Yang Jiong brought forth new ideas to express his feelings and shaped the poet's self-image of rejuvenating the country and enriching Qiang Bing. The whole poem is vigorous and cautionary, and it is still very exciting to read after 1000 years.

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I wish you progress in your study!