The detail fragment describes the composition of 600 words.

1. An essay with a detailed description of 600 words Faced with a mountain of extracurricular exercises on the desk, the girl smiled wryly, her mouth trembled slightly, and she exhaled a long, gentle but heavy airflow from time to time in her small mouth.

The girl's eyes turned to the alarm clock. Minnie, who had a bright smile, looked at her helplessly at this time. The pendulum swings from side to side. Time ticked away and the girl began to get nervous again. Outside the window, the night is too thick to melt, like a painter, painting everything so deep, so mysterious, so dignified.

What is precipitated is human experience. The earth without the moon quilt has only a few rays of light and no wind. It seems that everything is sleeping.

The girl was nervous, her racket was broken, and a few drops of sweat dripped from time to time on her face. Sweat is very heavy, but it drips slowly and the steps are heavy. But the girl completely ignored it and let the sweat drip through the cheeks of * * * *; The breeze blew through her hair, making her aching right hand drop raindrops on her exercise book. .........................................................................................................................................................

I should have slapped the pen heavily, but I put it down gently, raised my head and smiled. Outside the window, a shining star squeezed out of the thick clouds, which proved that she was the most beautiful with its brightest light.

2. A detailed composition of about 600 words Faced with a mountain of extracurricular exercises on the desk, the girl smiled wryly, her mouth trembled slightly, and her small mouth exhaled a long, gentle but heavy airflow from time to time. The girl's eyes turned to the alarm clock. Minnie, who had a bright smile, looked at her helplessly at this time. The pendulum swings from side to side. Time ticked away and the girl began to get nervous again.

Outside the window, the night is too thick to melt, like a painter, painting everything so deep, so mysterious, so dignified. What is precipitated is human experience. The earth without the moon quilt has only a few rays of light and no wind. It seems that everything is sleeping.

The girl was nervous, her racket was broken, and a few drops of sweat dripped from time to time on her face. Sweat is very heavy, but it drips slowly and the steps are heavy. But the girl completely ignored it and let the sweat drip through the cheeks of * * * *; The breeze blew through her hair, making her aching right hand drop raindrops on her exercise book. ...

She smiled slowly, and slowly, her mouth rose slightly. Finally, she finished. I should have slapped the pen heavily, but I put it down gently, raised my head and smiled.

Outside the window, a shining star squeezed out of the thick clouds, and proved that she was the most beautiful with its brightest light!

3. How to write a 600-word composition about detail description, we must find a way.

1。 Describe the environment and render the atmosphere.

2。 Describe the image, actions and manners of the characters.

3。 Express your feelings. Highlight the main idea and center of the article.

4。 Point out the problem.

take for example

In the morning, open the curtains and open the window. The breeze blew, and a fresh, fragrant and elegant earthy breath came to my face.

Spring comes so fast, quietly and unconsciously, the grass is green, the branches are sprouting, the wild flowers and rape flowers are blooming everywhere, and everything is bathed in the dawn of spring morning, swaying in the spring breeze, just like a girl's light singing and dancing, which is very lovely.

Creatures wake up in the spring morning, showing the preciousness and temptation of life.

The spring morning touched the hope in my heart and inspired the enthusiasm of life.

At the moment, the natural world is so beautiful: bright sunshine shines everywhere, colorful colors are shown everywhere, sweet birds are singing everywhere, and intoxicating fragrance is floating everywhere. This is a green world, an ocean of flowers.

Everywhere there are people who go for an outing, the kindness and satisfaction of the elderly, the laughter of lovers and the innocent smile of children.

Suddenly understand: the beautiful spring is so beautiful because it makes people's mood bloom at this moment.

Spring rain and spring thunder, with the spring breeze, came in one by one.

Spring rain is like silk, fog, smoke and tide. Through this thread, everything in the world is like a faint, foggy freehand painting, flickering.

I like spring rain, not only spring rain, but also the rainless world you created for me in this rainy season.

Spring is lively, spring is fanatical, spring is an attitude of growth, spring is young and energetic.

Spring is full of people's hard work. People sow their firm faith and eternal hope with their own hands, as well as their true love and selfless love.

Not as colorful as spring? Where is the fruitful autumn?

On a spring night, the moonlight shines on people and the cage yarn is graceful. The wind brushed my cheek and swept up my long hair.

The moonlight is as calm and soft as water.

My heart is like this moonlight, calm and soft.

I dare not pursue anything deliberately. I just hope that all good beginnings have a happy ending, just like this spring night is long and far away.

The details of 4.600 words describe the details of the composition. The details are the warmth and coldness after mom came home from school. The detail is the sentence that father should go to bed early after finishing his homework. The detail is the teacher's eyes when he finishes the question and asks you if you know it. The details are detailed notes handed by friends after illness.

Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.

Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.

Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course they have walked together and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.

"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.

Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.

The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.

The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.

But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.

Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.

One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.

The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.

The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.

Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.

But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.

5. About the details of the composition (600 words) We threw our clothes by the river, threw ourselves into the river, and immediately began to have a water fight and chase and play.

You see, we are divided into two teams, one is the "enemy" and the other is the "Red Army". A pair of small palms splashed water on each other, and everyone's face was covered with crystal beads.

The water blurred our eyes, so we all stepped aside, wiped them off with our hands, and then "attacked" violently. The whole river suddenly became noisy, shouting and laughing, and merged into a cheerful symphony.

Tired of playing with water fights, I chased after them in the river. One chased, the other ran, and crossed the water. A small body is as slippery as a loach and can't be caught.

The songs and laughter on the river are now far away from the two sides. We naughty boys will come to Xiaoshiwan in small groups, take off our pants and go into the water naked, regardless of their parents' repeated advice.

Diving, vertical dragonflies, water fights, tumbling over the river, chasing around in the water like a little loach, shouting and beating, I really can't say it. Several children, barefoot, treading water to play in the heavy rain! Red is a singer. When she sings, she picks up the rain from the sky with her hands.

Xiao Yu and Ding Ding, who followed her, stepped on the rain stream on the ground, swinging their arms rhythmically, and looked up from time to time to let the rain wash their faces. At this time, my heart itched, so I quickly took off my shoes, rolled up my trouser legs and rushed out of the door.

I just ran behind Honghong and plopped. I fell on my back and the splashing water fell on Honghong. Hong Hong turned around and said with a smile, "Hit Reservoir Dogs!" Say that finish, paddle with your feet and hit me.

Without getting up, I quickly raised the water to my flushed face with both hands and shouted happily, "Come on! Come on! " Red can't stand it. She cried, "Oh, my God!" She quickly covered her face with her hand and turned her head back. "reinforcements are coming!" With cheerful cries, Xiao Yu and Ding Ding came at me.

I immediately put my hands and feet together and threw a series of water columns at Xiaoyu and Tintin. "Hee hee hee-!" "Ha ha ha-!" The endless rain curtain echoed with our happy laughter.

Others: 1. If the blackboard is a vast sea, then the teacher is a sailor on the sea. At the moment when * * * rings, you are like a ship, turning the textbooks parked in the harbor into pulp with the teacher's whip.

On the desk, problems piled up. Your posture is lifelike, like a flying bird, drawing a beautiful arc on the platform-ships pass by ... there is no cloud floating in the sky, just like your bright heart. 2. Hope comes from disappointment, and rise begins with worry. As a poet said, people who feel hungry must digest well, people who feel anxious must be efficient, and people who feel crisis must make rapid progress.

Don't wander under the tree, don't meditate in the rain, and don't cry in the dark. Look forward, don't look back, as long as you face it bravely and raise your head, you will find that the haze of scores is just a short rainy season.

Looking ahead, there is still a bright day, and people will not feel confused. 4. The soft sunshine hangs obliquely on the branches and leaves of pine and cypress, which looks so quiet and solemn. On the green lawn and the white cement road, the footsteps are so light, but everyone's heart is so excited and thoughts are surging.

The ocean of life is not as blue as Xizi Lake. As time goes by, it is sometimes as calm as a mirror, sometimes the waves splash, and sometimes the waves soar into the sky ... People often become stronger after being tested by big winds and waves. 6. When you are immersed in warm air, birds and flowers, green mountains and green waters, fertile fields, you will be intoxicated; When you face the golden autumn season, you will be ecstatic.

Have you ever thought that abundant spring scenery is heroic after severe cold baptism, but the beautiful scenery in autumn is the crystallization after melting in hot summer? 7. If you want to harvest fruits in the autumn, then in the early spring when the chill invades people, you should roll up your trouser legs and tirelessly open up wasteland, sow seeds and cultivate until the day of harvest.

8. Life is a winding path in the mountains, with bumps on the side and cliffs on the side. If you fall, cry if you want. What are you afraid of? Stop pretending! This is honesty, not weakness, because crying does not affect the road, but you can be careful.

The mountains are full of flowers and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, smile happily, don't pretend to be reserved! This is honesty, not pride, because smiling does not affect the road, but can increase self-confidence. 9. Love is the sunshine in winter. People who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world. Love is a clear spring in the desert, and people who are on the verge of despair have seen the hope of life; Love is a shower sprinkled on the long-term arid land, which makes the lonely and helpless people get spiritual comfort immediately.

10, days always pass through your fingertips like spun yarn, and slip away inadvertently. Those sadness and misuse, with the waves gently faded, leaving the joy and smile, will always remain in the depths of memory.

1 1, the melancholy mood vanished. 12, faded memory.

13, another peaceful home is smoking. 14, some memories are burned, some memories are buried in the bottom of my heart, and the age of innocence is like flowing water across the golden age.

15, I want to melt in the pink peach petals and erase the worries in your heart all day. 16, I completely read my parents' hearts.

17, maternal love is a masterpiece that I can't finish reading all my life; Motherly love is the sky that I can never fly out. Zhang Weiwei 18, when yellow autumn leaves are swaying in the wind, they float outside the school gate in late autumn. In the moonlight, my father's shadow is very long, and my skinny father is wrapped in a huge windbreaker, and my heart is sour.

19, the true feelings in the world are like a big net, which warms people's hearts all the time, just like maternal love, which is endless. 20. Time is a poem, a philosophical poem of the richest man. Time is a camel carrying the dreams of countless people.

2 1, the fate of the ship lies in drifting; The fate of sails lies in chasing the wind and waves; The fate of life lies in grasping and believing in life, so that you can be innocent of youth. 22. Past events are like songs. In the journey of life, despite the ups and downs and regrets, you have not lost the beauty of your youth. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let's remember that sentence.

6. A composition describing father's love in detail There is a kind of love in the world, which is the most selfless and greatest, and that is maternal love.

There is still a kind of love in the world, but it is silent. What is not easy to show is the father's love. Perhaps, some people think that fatherly love is far less than maternal love, so these people are all wet.

Why don't you think about the big picture? My father is the pillar of the family. He makes money all day and is willing to suffer for his family. Can this not be touching? Some fathers are strict with their children's education, while others let their guard down. This kind of education is a world of difference.

As the saying goes, "Like father, like son." Father's education became the key.

I have a father who treats people warmly and is usually serious at critical moments, making people too scared to say a word. Occasionally, I make jokes. When I tell a joke, my face turns red and my heart stops beating. In addition, my father is also a person who carries out his work to the end and forgets himself to the point of obsession. I remember once, that is, ten years ago, when my father was bending a pipe, he was talking to people and bending at the same time. As a result, he accidentally dropped two fingers of one hand, leaving only bones. But my father didn't panic, so he quickly combined his two fingers into one. I reluctantly picked up my finger and bandaged it. At that time, I didn't understand. I thought my father was playing games, didn't cry, and kept laughing. I didn't understand until my mother explained it, which made me feel bad. I thought it must hurt! More than a month passed, and my father's fingers finally recovered, with a smile on his face, and continued to work. When we make mistakes, my father always criticizes us severely and teaches us how to deal with people. He even used beatings, endured pain and died in tears. I know my father did it for our own good. How can an uneducated child have a future? Father is very reasonable, speaks with grace and has the style of a gentleman. In fact, he is everywhere around us, but not particularly remarkable. I remember there was a heavy rain last semester in senior one. My father and my sister rushed to meet me at school together. Although he was very busy at work, he came to meet us. I was deeply moved at that time. I felt my father's love for the first time. Although ordinary, it is very precious. Because I have such a father by my side ... Motherly love has been sung for millions of times and years, but it will never stop, because it never stops.

When I was in primary school, my teacher left many compositions on the topic of maternal love. For me, I always finish it without pain. I don't have a deep feeling about its true meaning, that is to say, I am afraid and hated by my mother. Because my mother is strict with me.

I have hated my mother's harshness for countless times. Although I don't have the courage to yell at her, I often slack off and do things my mother doesn't allow me to do, but I don't let her know. Therefore, my academic performance has been mediocre, my life has been so-so, and my mother has broken her heart. From junior high school, with the growth of age, I began to understand that my mother's strictness is also a kind of love.

This kind of love sometimes seems cruel and inhuman, but it gives me endless motivation and makes enviable achievements in my study. Just last Sunday, just after dinner, I shouted to play computer games. My mother was so entangled in me that she had to say, "Take out your homework and let me check it. If you do well, you can play computer games. "

Although I can't play computer right away, my hope of playing computer is still there, because I have already finished all my homework. I piled all my homework on the table at lightning speed. "Mom, I have finished my homework. Can I play?" I shouted.

"Did you do your homework carefully? Can you do math problems? " Mom asked with a grain of salt. "It's a piece of cake, it's a piece of cake …" I haven't finished writing, but I found my mother's face gradually darkened: "Look at the math problem you did, the handwriting is sloppy, the steps are incomplete, and there are so many mistakes …" My mother said that she mistyped the number, and the more she mistyped it, the more angry she became. Finally, she tore up my math homework. "Redo!" Looking at my mother's angry face, I dare not say another word, but silently say to myself, "Dear computer, I'm going to kiss you goodbye."

Although I am extremely unhappy, I know my mother is doing it for my own good. So, I did my math homework again carefully, and my mother talked in detail about the problems I couldn't do.

In the next day's math class, we had a math test. I feel very calm and calm during the exam. When most students around me are scratching their heads, I have carefully checked the test paper. The next day, as I expected, in the envious eyes of the whole class and their warm applause, I got my perfect score paper back as I wished.

That feeling is simply "great!" My mother is very strict with me, not only in my studies, but also in every aspect of my life. My mother is very demanding of me. When I was very young, my mother taught me to wash my face, brush my teeth and clean my room ... I should do it well. A little slack will be criticized by my mother, and sometimes I will suffer from some flesh and blood.

Although I didn't understand it at that time, I still tried to do something that my peers couldn't do. Now I know that my mother wants me to take everything seriously. No matter what my reason is, I can't be careless.

"The blade comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom is bitter and cold." Thank my mother for being strict with me. Your love will give me infinite strength to overcome any difficulties and guide me to move forward in my future study and life. Never give up the greatest love in the world is maternal love.

7. A composition of more than 600 words, with a detailed description of 1. Description: Childhood, childhood infatuation with watermelon. Now that I'm grown up, sometimes I really miss that cold feeling.

Street stalls or melon shadows on the screen come into view, and the moment when I ate melons in my childhood reappears in front of my eyes: in summer, the brilliance of the rest of the day sinks into a corner of the sky, and the summer heat gradually disappears. Under the blowing of the evening breeze, people's spirit is particularly comfortable.

At this time, the fragrance of watermelon filled the streets, sometimes thick and sometimes light, as if nothing had happened. I (about five or six years old) put my arms around my knees and squatted on a small bench like a cat catching a mouse. My small black eyes glanced at the watermelon spinning up and down in the water.

Across the water, the sweat on my face has already dried up, and "Qianchuan" hangs like a waterfall. Mosquitoes "swim around" in their ears and don't care.

Under a bright smiling face, there is an expectant heart waiting-My Sweetie in a melon seed shell. Until the watermelon was cut into pieces: I saw watermelon seeds embedded in red melon meat like black pearls; The melon meat is a little cold; Melon juice flows down the mirror-like melon surface, one drop, two drops; The texture on the surface of melon is like the fine lines on the surface of painted porcelain ... The happiest moment is that the iced watermelon is held in your hand, and it seems that there is a cold current floating back and forth all over your body.

2. The fragrant mud flies yellow, the northwest wind whistles, and the residual snow rolls on the road. Although it is early spring, the weather is still very cold.

She, leaning against a poplar tree at the school gate, was as motionless as snow sculpture. The sudden ringing of the bell.

Her dim eyes sparkled with longing. A group of children, singing, walked out of the school gate without her son; Another group of children talked and laughed and set foot on the road without their son ... The figure was sparse, scattered and gone.

The creaking iron gate locked the silent campus. She was dizzy and could hardly stand up. She stumbled over and held her hands tightly on the iron fence.

"For what?" An old man in a message came out with a democratic face. "bright! My little light! " Like breathing, like crying.

"School is over." "Know the way ..." She murmured in a low voice with glassy eyes, lowered her head feebly, slowly released her hand, and took out a candy wrapped tightly with body temperature from the pocket of a long-breasted cotton-padded jacket: "Uncle, please ... give it to the child."

"What's your name?" "Wang Xiaoliang." "What grade and class?" "Today, just after my eighth birthday."

"I asked what grade and class." The old man is getting impatient.

"Oh ... maybe ..." She shook her head again. The old man looked at the neurotic woman strangely. "Who the hell are you?" What he answered was the tears in his eyes and the back that hobbled away.

The old man sighed in confusion and seemed to understand something. In the afternoon, this bag of candy finally reached Wang Xiaoliang in Class Two, Grade Two.

The child was very surprised. I haven't tasted this favorite toffee for a long time. His little hand rubbed his clothes back and forth, thought about it, and respectfully sent one to each child, two to his good friends and five to his teacher.

"Eat!" He shouted and jumped happily, even throwing off the prostitute with his mouth open. The students shared the joy with him in the laughter of hip-hop. Only the teacher quietly turned around ... After school, Xiao Liang was still immersed in joy and skipped home.

Suddenly, he stopped and felt the candy left in his pocket, and a sense of fear came upon him. He seemed to see it again: now mother raised her slender eyebrows and whispered something in her father's ear. Dad grabbed a stick and came up to him angrily.

He looked blankly, not knowing what to do. He patted his pocket hard, but it was bulging at first sight.

He lowered his head, sucked his fingers, thought for a long time, and looked around. He quickly buried the sugar in the snowdrift by the side of the road and specially inserted a small stick. Xiao Liang slept soundly and sweetly that night.

He dreamed that his old mother came back with a smile, and now her mother is hanging her head and leaving. I'm so happy. Next day, Xiao got up early.

As usual, he emptied and rinsed the bedpans of the whole family first, then washed rice, added water, poked fire, sat in the pan, and then slipped out with a cold steamed bread on his back. He wants to digest his candy quickly.

I don't want to. Overnight, the ground temperature rose, the ice and snow melted, syrup and snow water mixed together and penetrated into the earth. On the wet ground, there are some crumpled candy paper and small sticks as marks.

Xiao Liang blinked and couldn't help rolling down tears. He squatted on the ground sadly and looked blankly.

After a while, I couldn't help reaching out my chapped little finger, picking up some dirt and putting it on the tip of my tongue-he smiled again: that dirt, My Sweetie's. Summarize several common detail descriptions: (1) portrait detail description, that is, portrait detail description.

For example, in Daddy's Caregiver, the portrait of the patient is a detail. It is this detail that drives the development of the plot.

(2) Description of language details, that is, a detailed description of the typical language of characters. For example, in "Deer Fetus Hitting Kansai Town", after Lu Da killed Kansai Town, he faked his death. This is a language detail, which shows Lu Da's bold and refined character, courage and wit.

(3) action detail description, that is, a thorough and detailed description of the typical actions of the characters. For example, in the passage about Lu Da borrowing money to help Jin Lao's father and daughter in the boxing town of Lu Tiha, the verbs used vividly show the different personality characteristics of the three men.

(4) the detailed description of psychological activities, that is, the detailed description of the psychological activities of the characters. For example, in the article "Daddy's Caregiver", the description of young Sisillo's psychological activities after seeing "Daddy" seriously ill can well show the excellent quality of caring for his parents.

(5) Detailed description of expression changes, that is, a detailed description of the process of expression changes of characters. In the article Seven Matches, the description of the expression change after the unknown soldier handed the match to Lu Jinyong is a detail worth savoring.

(6) Description of clothing details, that is, detailed description of characters' clothing. It is necessary to see the professional characteristics of this person through the description of clothing, and it is also possible to see the personality characteristics other than professional characteristics. This is a good description of clothing details.

(7) a detailed description of things, that is, a detailed description of the development and change process of things. For example, in.