Pan quanyao's prose collection

Love is intoxicating in the depths —— Appreciation of Pan Quanyao's prose collection "This shore and the other shore"

On the 25th of the Year of the Sheep, Lu Yanhe, secretary general of the County Writers Association, told me that the Writers Association would hold a seminar for Pan Quanyao's prose collection "This shore and the other shore" and asked me to make a comment at the meeting. Under the invitation, although I felt that my level was limited, I did not refuse, but readily agreed.

I remember that in about 20xx, I was invited to write and publish a poem review article entitled "A euphemistic homesick song" in the book "Comments on Ankang Women Writers' Works" published by the Municipal Literature Research Office. But it was the first time to comment on prose. I felt nervous and scared, but I felt that the opportunity was rare and I couldn't miss it. It is an opportunity for me to attend the seminar on Quanyao works, which is not only an opportunity to learn and improve, but also to expand the literary creation exchange group between me and my friends.

What is prose? I feel that the so-called prose is an article that expresses many people, events, feelings or scenes scattered at different levels in our daily life in words through our own understanding and analysis, cognition and judgment (regardless of the outcome), so that readers can read and think.

This Shore and the Other Shore, a collection of Quanyao's prose, is published by China Culture Publishing House, with more than 200,000 words, and contains 92 prose works created by Quanyao since 20xx. This collection of essays describes the scenery of Xunyang people and Xunyang dialect, embodies the humanistic spirit of Xunyang, praises the changes of society and Xunyang, and has strong local characteristics in Qinba Hanshui area; Let readers read the warm homesickness more strongly and more simply, and let readers have a kind of "Xunyang is my hometown, and my hometown people have more beautiful scenery!" Sigh. Readers' love, intimacy, intimacy and pride in their hometown have been satisfied, and the happiness index has been rising.

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In Quan Yao's prose collection, the narrative of each article is relatively complete, the characters are vivid, and the people, scenes and events described are all devoted to his emotions. The events in the article do not pursue the integrity of the plot, nor do they pursue twists and turns, but they are full of true feelings when narrated. The characters in this paper are carefully cut and processed on the basis of real people and events, and also pay attention to the freehand description of people and events.

This article pays attention to the development of events and emphasizes the narrative of events. It forms a story with a beginning and an end, such as "shooting at Hutou Mountain" and "playing erhu at Yangshan Mountain". The difference is that the essay "Walking in Sichuan in Early Winter" is a clip of several fragments. First, it describes the "different scenery" you saw from Ningqiang, Shaanxi to Guangyuan, Sichuan, and then describes the feeling of "dead of night" you experienced during your stay in Shiquan, Shaanxi, Cangxi, Dianjiang, Chongqing and Chengkou. From Ningqiang to Guangyuan, I heard the affection of "Sichuan accent"; "Chongqing asking for directions" after getting lost; Later, he wrote down his "city impression" of the places he had been and the "towering mountains" he saw, showing his infinite attachment to these places. The whole article poured his sincere feelings into the narrative.

This essay focuses on the description of the characters, and the whole article is centered around the characters. Better grasp the personality characteristics of the characters and make a rough outline, focusing on the basic temperament, personality and mental outlook of the characters. For example, in the section "Asking for directions in Chongqing" in the article "Walking in Sichuan in early winter", Quan Yao wrote: "The back door of our car is broken, and the driver at the gate of a city stopped and lent us tools to help us repair the car. A resident also found us a piece of wire. When we thank them, they are all common words in Chongqing. These few words describe the basic temperament, personality characteristics and mental outlook of the characters with flesh and blood, incisively and vividly, just right, and show the image of Chongqing citizens like Lei Feng to our readers.

The travel essays in this collection are extensive. After reading it, the scenery of mountains and rivers, customs and places of interest are vivid in my mind. They all describe the real scenery, without exaggeration or fiction, and at the same time do not follow similar records, but integrate feelings and things to achieve the effect of scene blending. For example, the trip to Hanzhong, the intersection of Xizi in the golden autumn, Wuyishan and so on. He wrote about Hanzhong: "The night is dim and the neon lights are flashing", "Wide streets, neat trees and beautiful street lamps are endless", "The ridges are covered with dark green beans, and rows of willows are like smoke and water", and he wrote about Xicha: "When you drive into the Xicha River, you will see a golden world, and the rice on both sides has entered. Millet is dried in the courtyard dam, corn cobs are hung on the wall, children are playing under the osmanthus tree, and the puppy is kneeling in front of the door, tilting his head as if he is sleeping, enjoying the pastoral poetry. " "Dozens of miles of scenery, clear rivers, verdant pines and cypresses, blue sky and golden rice fields constitute my dream home." Just like entering Tao Yuanming's paradise, it gives people a kind of beautiful enjoyment. He wrote, "Yangshan is changing, always changing, not only in appearance, but also in bones." "The only thing that hasn't changed is that the mountains in Yangshan are still so green, and the water in Yangshan is still so green. The spring water suddenly gushing out of the crevices in Erliwan outside Tiesuo Cave is thicker and purer than before." Every word of these essays, between the lines, makes people feel immersive after reading them. At the same time, it will also make us sigh, "How beautiful our hometown is!"

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Quan Yao's prose collection expresses his strong subjective feelings, and his rich imagination makes him spread his wings, making him click on his thoughts on the keyboard in the form of words, jumping out of the space and making achievements in the distribution list of regular publishing houses. The people, scenery and feelings in the book are vivid and vividly reflected in front of readers, which is an eye-opener and an eye-opener. The expression of written language is like a stream, like a crying song, winding and continuous, and like the waves of the Han River, sometimes calm, sometimes turbulent, sometimes whirling, and sometimes slowly flowing. Let people think and experience; Therefore, literati will rise and fall smoothly and orderly, and their poems will prosper; Or painting, or singing.

Quan Yao's prose collection also conveys his feelings about people or things in his works through the description of the external image. One is that he expresses his feelings through scenery, and the other is that he expresses his will through the support of things. Pay attention to melting emotions into a specific thing with symbolic meaning, and express subjective emotions with the help of pictographic association or implied association.

An example of pictographic association is that when planting trees in the autumn of 20xx, Ma Yun, the former secretary of the county party committee, planted trees on the mountain beside the Han River with a soil ball on his shoulder. This scene happened to be caught by Quan Yao. He immediately turned on the camera and photographed the scene where the county party secretary took the lead in planting trees up the mountain. Later, this photo was exhibited in cities and counties many times. Later, he wrote the essay A Photo. He described Secretary Ma Wei as follows: "He is carrying a sapling, but in fact she is carrying the heavy responsibility of' changing the backward landscape of Xunyang's greening and sending a river of clear water to Beijing'", "Now, this photo is linked with the greening of Xunyang, embedded in the green mountains and green waters of Xunyang, and sung in my heart like a beautiful poem". Look, how well written, touching and shocking!

Examples of implied association are: Quanyao puts feelings in the scenery, gives life to the scenery, writes the scenery clearly, writes the feelings secretly, and makes the scenery blend and the scenery live together. For example, in the article Sunflowers, he wrote: "Sunflowers need neither sowing nor watering. In winter, its rattan leaves froze to death, but the next spring, it gave birth to new ones, still flourishing. " Sunflower "in summer, it is colorful and full of flowers. People like to appreciate it, but no one cares about it, which is amazing." The best of this flower is really too cheap to bow to fate or look for it, and to support a brilliant with the truth of life. " In this essay, Quan Yao puts his feelings on the sun flower, endows it with life, makes the scenery clear and writes his feelings secretly, which plays a role in blending scenes and gives readers unspeakable enjoyment. What is the revelation of sunflower? The conclusion of this essay is explained as follows: "People can be simple, neither humble nor supercilious, not weak, not cowardly, not flexible, not changing their personality, not belittling me or insulting me. These things are the inspiration of sunflower and the reason why I love it. " This language shows the author's life style and distinctive personality charm.

In addition, what moved me was the article "Golden Ring". It happened in June of February1,20xx. My daughter wanted to surprise her father, so she seduced him with a gold ring. The father Quan Yao couldn't stand the temptation of his daughter and accepted it gladly. He lamented: "Today is Father's Day, and my daughter gave me a gold ring. I am deeply moved and intoxicated with happiness, and I don't know what to say, Jingui's ring and Jingui's filial piety. "In fact, it doesn't matter whether you wear gold or silver. It's good to be happy, and the comparison is not worth the candle." "Thanks to society, life and daughter." A few short sentences, both short and long, are thought-provoking. They all use gold rings to express their feelings and express their hearts directly, which resonates with readers. Of course, the gold ring is real and dead; Man is an active body with thoughts. People's feelings and experiences of wearing gold rings vary according to their status. Wearing a gold ring on a good person is a kind of enjoyment, just like enjoying a lifetime. Quan Yao is a good man, a good son, a good son-in-law, a good husband, a good father, a good grandson and a good colleague in the unit. Wearing a gold ring is not only beautiful, but also natural and well deserved!

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Quan Yao pays attention to the expression of emotion in prose writing. Take his argumentative essays as an example, because argumentative essays are more important than reason, and lyrical prose is more important than emotion, and Quan Yao properly avoided both when expressing emotion. In writing methods, it is not based on facts and logic, but on literary images. Have vivid images and strict logic; Move people with emotion and convince them with reason; Blend form, emotion and reason in one furnace, and integrate political theory and literature and art. Such as Xunyang Landscape and Xunyang People, Xunyang Bloodstone, A Preliminary Study of the Changing Characters in Novels, and Realistic Masterpieces.

Here, I just want to talk about the essay "From the mayor of planting trees to the director of forestry". In this essay, he first takes the life prototype of Duan, the director of his unit, as the literary image in this essay: "Duan seems to have formed an indissoluble bond with forestry, from' planting trees as a mayor' to the director of forestry, explaining his life legend." What kind of life legend? The preface left a suspense in the reader's mind, so that the reader had to read the article.

So, how vivid is the literary image of director Duan? Quan Yao wrote three things in detail, which vividly portrayed the literary image of the director Duan. The first thing is that "during his tenure as deputy mayor and mayor of Duanjiahe, he was catching up with the county to catch the afforestation land of the Han River, and all the barren hills along the intuitive slope of Duanjiahe were afforested. It has achieved the goal of turning from yellow to green and greatly improved the ecological appearance along the Han River. " The second thing is that during Duan Chengen's tenure as the mayor of Duanjiahe, "the greening area of the whole town reached more than 3,000 mu in four years, and the first-class mountains of Duanjiahe National Highway 365 and 438+06 were basically afforested". As a result, when he made a statement for the advanced unit of afforestation and greening, hit the floor's forceful statement, "How can a living person plant a dead tree", surprised the four participants around him, and all the township leaders who attended the meeting were shocked. Since then, the relevant leaders in the county have treated Duan differently. The third thing is that when Duan was the director of the county forestry bureau, the new official took three fires and took three measures to realize three changes in forestry work in the county. First, turn barren hills into cultivated land to ensure the quality of garden construction; Second, the employment of natural forest protection rangers was changed to selection from the current village cadres, which improved the forest protection effect; The third is to change the propaganda of forest fire prevention to sign a "Notice of Forest Fire Prevention" with every household, clarify the responsibility, and ensure that the fire source management is foolproof and no major fire occurs. These three things that this short essay addressed to Director Duan are closely related and logically rigorous. Persuade people with emotion and reasoning. At the same time, the combination of form, emotion and reason, political theory and literature and art, makes readers sit up and take notice of the director segment and give a thumbs up.

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Through reading this shore and the other shore, I have a deep feeling, gained a lot, experienced and felt. The writing techniques and skills of the article, the theme and conception of the article, the description of the environment and atmosphere, the description of characters and personality characteristics, and the conception and expression of language are all worth learning and learning.

Quan Yao and I met at a literary creation forum held by the County Federation of Literary and Art Circles a few years ago. At the meeting at that time, he sang Xunyang folk songs first, and then Xunyang Huaguzi. I immediately took some photos of him, and that's how we met. Later, because * * * participated in many cultural activities organized by the county Federation of Literary and Art Circles, we gradually got in touch. Later, I often saw many literary works created by him in newspapers and websites, and also saw articles on his Sina blog "Fish in the Han River" and space. Through contact with him, I know that he is a generalist. I don't know what his voice is like. Anyway, he likes singing and sings well. He can play the erhu, sing while playing, revel in it and appreciate himself; I like planting flowers and grass, and it will be full of poetry when I look at it; His photography skills are also very good, and his works often participate in city and county photography exhibitions. I'm thinking, maybe it's his broad interests that are the source and motivation to promote his enthusiasm for literary creation.

On April 20xx 1 1 Japan, many literary friends had a heated discussion on the creative background, techniques, themes and ideas to be expressed, which was very insightful. I quite agree with them. There are also young literary friends who have raised the question of the "truthfulness" of the content of the article. I think that in literary creation, some contents are not realistic, but vary from person to person because of things; You can't write too real, too real, and you can't write too fake. The realistic place writes reality, and the fictional place writes falsehood (such as documentary prose). Sometimes, it is necessary to combine reality. For example, Wei Wei's "Who is the cutest person" actually describes the sacrifices of so many volunteers, but wrongly describes the tragic war (battlefield) scene. This essay has achieved a clever combination of reality and fiction, captured readers' hearts, and was selected into students' textbooks, which shocked and touched countless readers.

What is a well-written essay? Li Jingze, secretary of the Secretariat of the Chinese Writers Association and a famous critic, concluded: "The spirit of prose lies in freedom, and any article that cannot be expressed in a clear style can be classified as prose. However, prose also has its standard, which is to see a free and sincere soul in the article. " "But I still hope that prose creators should have an ideal spirit, be a little" stupid "and stick to it. After all, this style full of one's loyalty to oneself and the courage to explore the world needs someone to fight for. "

Yes, Pan Quanyao is a bit "stupid" and "stupid", forgetting to eat and sleep. Many of my friends and I hope that he can persist in being "stupid", take a new starting point as the new shore, and firmly move forward to the new shore.

We look forward to the early publication of Pan Quanyao's next work.

(Introduction to the protagonist: Pan Quanyao, male,1was born in Zhaowan Town, Xunyang County in June 1965. He works in the Forestry Bureau of Xunyang County, is a member of Shaanxi Writers Association and a director of Xunyang Writers Association. Over the years, he has created a large number of literary works and published many essays, novels and literary comments. The novellas "Boiling Mountain Country", "No Love", "Urinating Tea" and "Confessing Dad" have all received good responses from readers. )