How to keep a diary in grade three?

The third day diary is written as follows:

Writing method 1:

Ah! How beautiful it is today. It's a sunny day, which makes me leave the annoying rainy weather. Today I can finally go out to play with my friends.

At about three o'clock in the afternoon, we made full preparations and set off. First, we came to a big tree and looked at the dark blue sky. It seems that there are some soft clouds floating on it. Chatting is a bit sleepy, but I can't live up to that playful heart.

Then, we went to the grass by the lake and looked at the green lake and the lush willows, feeling a little cool. My friend touched the water curiously. It was very cold.

Then, he went to a place full of red flowers and green bristlegrass. The flowers are still very red, not inferior to last year, and still so fragrant. Let's talk about catgrass. The hair on the stem is lovely. When the wind blows, the fluff is blown away. How happy I am. Today, how nice!

Writing method 2:

When I came to the photography studio, my enthusiastic aunt greeted me and introduced us seriously.

First of all, we must choose good clothes. As soon as I entered the cloakroom, colorful clothes flooded my eyes. I didn't know how to choose, so I had to ask my mother to help me choose. My mother says it's best to choose some clothes with bright colors and personality, and the effect will be good. Under the guidance of my mother, I chose three sets of skirts: gold, red and blue.

We started to make up, and the makeup artist ordered me three sets of makeup according to the clothes I chose. Next, the photographer chose a scene for me according to my clothes. The scene is set and we start shooting. The door was closed when the photo was taken, but there was always a crack. My mother peeked at me taking pictures in the cracks, and I was so shy.

When shooting, the photographer kept teaching me to pose, one moment like this, one moment like that, one moment laughing, one moment pouting, one moment squatting, one moment lying down, so tired that my back ached, I insisted on taking more than 100 photos.

Matters needing attention in keeping a diary:

1, pay attention to the format.

Keeping a diary is similar to writing a composition, but the difference lies in the format. Write down the date, day of the week and the weather in the first line of the diary. Write the text again, that is, the things to be recorded today. When writing the text, pay attention to starting with "today".

Step 2 pay attention to the main points

Keeping a diary is not keeping a running account. Many children think that keeping a diary is to write down everything that happened that day, from getting up in the morning to going to bed at night. Keeping a diary is actually writing down one thing that you think is worth writing that day. That is to grasp the key thing to write and describe it clearly.

3, pay attention to describe things to be specific and complete.

When writing a diary, the things described should also be written according to the six essentials of things, and the time, place, people and reasons, process and results of things should be clearly written. Various descriptions can be added when describing the process of things, such as psychological description, expression description, language description, action description, environment description and so on.

In order to make sentences more concrete and vivid when writing sentences, if appropriate rhetorical devices are used, it will add a lot of color to the diary. For example, metaphor, personification and parallelism.