Review sick sentences in the fourth grade

1. Mountains and rivers dyed the sunset glow golden.

Changed to: Mountains and rivers were dyed golden by sunset glow.

China is the most populous country in the world.

China is the most populous country in the world.

Compass, papermaking, gunpowder and seismograph are one of the four great inventions in ancient China.

Compass, papermaking, gunpowder and printing are four great inventions in ancient China.

Wan Li blue sky Wan Li is cloudless, blue as a piece of blue glass.

Wan Li blue sky Wan Li is cloudless, like a piece of blue glass.

I can't help crying!

Revised as: delete "can't help" or "can't help"

Xiaoming and Xiaohua go to school together. He finds a wallet on the way.

Change: change "he" to Xiaoming or Xiaohua.

7. Students must obey the traffic rules to prevent accidents.

To read: Delete "Don't"

It is shameful to waste the fruits of labor carelessly.

It is shameful to waste the fruits of labor carelessly.

9. We should cherish every grain.

To read: Delete "every pill"

10. There are a lot of people watching the program and a lot of children.

Changed to: Delete "many children"

1 1. The scenery here is really beautiful and charming.

To read: Delete "beautiful" or "charming"

12. In the past half term, my knowledge of Chinese has improved.

Change to: change "knowledge" to "level"

13. At the meeting, everyone exchanged views on learning Chinese.

At the meeting, everyone exchanged ideas on how to learn Chinese.

14. The day before yesterday, we watched the rice dance performance and music.

Change: change "wait and see" to "appreciate"

15. In the evening, I counted the stars and the moon in the yard.

At night, I count the stars in the sky and enjoy the moon in the yard.

16. All the students in our class went for an autumn outing except Xiaohong.

Changed to: Delete "Only Xiaohong didn't go"

17. I have a glass of milk and a loaf of bread every morning.

I drink a glass of milk and eat a loaf of bread every morning.

This composition aroused my interest.

I am interested in this composition.

19. Every pupil should concentrate on listening and studying in class.

Every student should have a good habit of listening carefully in class.

China is the most populous country in the world.

China is the most populous country in the world.

2 1. At the "June 1st" party, our class performed entertainment programs and chorus.

Change it to "chorus" and delete it.

22. We should constantly improve our learning methods and improve our learning efficiency.

We should constantly improve our learning methods and improve our learning efficiency.

23. People who don't do what they say is a very bad style.

To read: Delete "person"

24. Dark clouds fell from the sky with heavy rain.

Changed to: Eliminate "Dark Clouds"

25. Dark green wheat seedlings are spreading their young leaves.

The wheat seedlings are spreading their dark green leaves.

In recent years, the living standards of our people have improved again.

In recent years, the living standards of our people have improved again.

27. The general consciousness of the masses has been improved through the education of popularizing the law.

Changed to: After the education of popularizing the law, the people's consciousness has been improved.

28. His hands were almost completely frozen.

To read: Delete "almost"

29. Huang Jiguang not only died heroically, but he will live in our hearts forever.

Replace "not only but" with "although but"

We should have the spirit of not being afraid of hardship in our study.

Change: change "bitterness" into "difficulty"

3 1. Cotton production in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

"Cotton production" should be changed to "produced cotton"

32. The vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. Changed to: put "incomparable" before "enthusiasm"

We should give full play to the role of young people.

Change to: move "full" before "play" and delete a "of"

34. Exhibit cultural relics unearthed thousands of years ago.

It should be changed to: "thousands of years ago" should be transferred before and after "cultural relics"

35. We are no longer a country that is arbitrarily bullied by foreign powers.

The word "arbitrary" should be placed before the word "bullying"

If he can't be realistic, his career will be damaged. To read: "He" should be moved after "If"

37. ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered is no stranger to young people in China.

Changed to: Zhongqing vs ostrovsky.

38. They are exploring, judging, searching and thinking about their own path.

They are thinking, judging, exploring and finding their own way.

39. His revolutionary spirit always comes to my eyes.

Change to: "God" and "manifestation" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship, so "God" can be changed to "image".

40. Commemorate the arrival of the three leading festivals.

Changed to: "March 8" can only be commemorated, not "come".

4 1. We carefully studied the staff's suggestions and humbly sought the opinions of experts.

Change it to: "earnest" can not modify "research", but can be changed to "earnest" and "prudent"

We firmly believe that one day, China's agriculture and agriculture will become developed countries.

To be replaced by: The word "state" should be replaced by the word "behavior"

Now that you are here, I should go, too.

Change to: "Since" and "Ye" cannot be used together, and the word "Ye" should be changed to "Jiu".

She was praised by her teachers and classmates for her good grades.

She was praised by her teachers and classmates for her good grades.

In the old society, the working people did not have enough to eat and wear. Change to: or delete "life" or add "life" before "eat"

46. They cherish the motherland and the world, vigorously carry forward the courage to fight, and finally win the championship.

Read: "Dare to fight" should be followed by "spirit"

47. When spring comes, the wheat grows well and enjoys a bumper harvest.

It should be changed to: add "summer" before "acquisition" to limit time.

48. This academic conference has gained a lot and the time is not long.

To read: "The word" notwithstanding "should be added before the word" time "

49. Our revolutionary predecessors shed a lot of blood and sacrificed many precious lives for the benefit of the people.

Change to: There is a subject "revolutionary predecessors" in front of it, so "they" is unnecessary.

50. The students are studying hard to meet the coming of the college entrance examination.

Change it to: "Welcome" is "College Entrance Examination", not "Arrival", so it should be deleted.

5 1. Today, I came to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou and visited the White Pagoda, Junyutai and Wu Ting Bridge.

Change to: "The place" is redundant and should be deleted.

52. In order to simplify the number of words, it has to be slightly reduced.

Before it was changed to "some" and "a little", you can delete one.

You can imagine how you can get good grades if you don't study hard.

Change to: mix rhetorical questions with judgment sentences, which destroys the integrity of sentence structure and tone. If you use rhetorical questions, it should be "how can I get good grades in the exam?" If you use a judgment sentence, it should be "it is conceivable that your grades are not good."

54. Survival, published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House, was written by a Chinese Canadian writer who has lived abroad for more than 20 years.

It is a mixture of subject-predicate sentences and verb-predicate sentences, and the "author's hand" at the end of the sentence should be removed.

55. He agrees with those who advocate acceptance and those who oppose it.

It is not clear whether "this proposition" refers to "acceptance" or "opposition".

56. My sister is anxious when she can't find her parents.

Changed to: What's the situation? Is "Sister" in a hurry? Or "dad" and "mom" are in a hurry. Or is "mom" in a hurry? You can put a comma between "dad" and "mom" or before "dad"

57. He is one of many surviving victims.

Changed to: since "survived", naturally not dead, how can it be said that it is "one of the dead"? How many people died? He is the one who survived. )

58. In terms of career development, there is still a shortage of scientific experts and talents.

Changed to: all kinds of talents, including scientists, should not be juxtaposed, but should be said to be "experts in various disciplines and other talents"

I saw him walk out of the factory twice before I realized that the old man who was eager to help the patients turned out to be a worker.

It is not enough to judge that the old man is a worker just by seeing him walk out of the factory twice.

Over the past few years, he has been collecting and sorting out folk songs and accumulated a lot of information.

Change it to "always", which means "always". The sentence is just the opposite. You can change "forget" to "be"

Conclusion: The above classification of ill sentences is not strict. For ill sentences, you don't have to memorize their types, you can find and correct them with more practice.

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