Appearance description composition and lecture

1. Teaching plan for describing characters' appearance in composition

Write the characteristics of the characters.

huaiyin middle school in jiangsu province

Ying Xing

Teaching objectives:

1

Learn to observe the appearance characteristics of characters;

2

Learn how to describe the appearance of characters.

Teaching focus:

Grasp the characteristics and describe the characters

Teaching difficulties

The embodiment of personality and psychology in appearance characteristics

Teaching philosophy:

Pay attention to the learning process, pay attention to the transfer of knowledge, extend it in time, and let students

Cheerful,

Learn to write in a relaxed atmosphere,

Cultivate in the process of practicing writing

Students' habit of careful observation can improve their language expression ability.

Teaching arrangement:

Completed in two class hours

One,

Import:

Introduction to language design:

Children can recognize their mothers when they are very young.

When someone hugs him, the child may cry, and when his mother reaches out, the baby will laugh loudly.

A child who is only a few months old can identify his mother very accurately.

How can babies accurately

Recognize mom?

Twins,

They look alike,

People often make mistakes,

And their mother.

This kind of mistake never happens. Do you know why?

If you go shopping with your parents,

Look at the bustling crowd in the street.

You can recognize your parents. You say, why is this?

Teaching philosophy:

You can ask one or two students to answer,

Some students will answer, which is closely related.

2. The writing teaching that highlights the personality through the description of characters' appearance records that he is 7 years old this year. He is neither tall nor thin, but he looks very energetic. He has short hair, a handsome face with bright black eyes and a high nose like a carrot. People who have been to his house say that he has good features and is a good-looking boy.

My sister is very cute. She has been three months. A few days ago, it was my sister's centenary birthday. My mother drove her little sister to "Love You Baby" and took some photos. My sister has a pair of sparkling eyes, a bulging face and a very small mouth. She has a pair of lovely ears, and a pair of small hands clenched their fists and swayed from time to time. Look! That meaty little foot like steamed bread is so cute! I love my sister.

My favorite classmate is Geng Hao, a handsome boy. Look! He is not tall, but he looks strong. His arms and legs are like ripe corn cobs. He likes to wear a coat without buttons, and he says, "That will be more imposing." Geng Hao's head is round, his red face is round, and coincidentally, his shiny black eyes are round. I like his smile best. When he laughed, his black eyes turned into two crescent moons. His little red mouth likes telling jokes. His jokes always make us laugh until the end, and then the curved crescent moon appears again.

My father is the first mate of the merchant ship of ocean shipping company. He is very tall, his yellowish hair is naturally curly, his white square face is embedded with a pair of smart eyes, and his nose is particularly big under his high nose. When I was a child, I often looked at his nostrils and asked, "Dad, why are your nostrils so big?" He always answers with a smile; "Choose a horse with a big nose, because a horse with a big nose runs fast. Dad was a sprint champion at school when he was a child. Do not believe you ask your mother. " At this time, my mother and I will look at his big nostrils and laugh.

Dad is thin, of medium build, with a pair of modest eyes and a flat head. His high nose looks more energetic. The chiseled lips are covered with whiskers like steel needles. Dad has a lot of knowledge. He often tells me many amazing and interesting science stories and tries to exercise me in many ways.

3. How to describe the teaching design of characters' appearance Yang Fanjun, a junior high school student in Shouxian County, Anhui Province. Teaching goal: 1. Knowledge and ability: 1. Understand the methods and functions of describing the appearance of characters.

2. Learn to describe the appearance of characters. Second, the process and method: through the active exploration of design, explore the methods and functions of mastering the description of characters' appearance.

Third, emotion, attitude and values: cultivate students' spirit of inquiry. Teaching focus: 1, master the method of character appearance description.

2. Practice describing the appearance of the characters. Teaching difficulty: describing the appearance characteristics of characters.

Teaching hours: one class hour. Teaching process: 1. Introduction.

(Student answers: Because a good friend looks different from others. Yes, because your good friend looks different from others, so you won't admit your mistake.

This also tells us that everyone in life has their own appearance that distinguishes them from others. But it is difficult to distinguish who is who according to the appearance of the characters described in the students' compositions.

Why? It's because the looks in students' compositions don't describe everyone's characteristics. So how do you describe the appearance of the characters? Today we will discuss this problem.

(blackboard writing: how to describe the appearance of characters) activity 1: guess who they are.

4. How to write a good courseware to guide the composition of primary school appearance description? Chinese composition tutorial course in junior middle school

Description method of characters:

First, the appearance description:

Face, figure, clothing, expression ... Observe carefully. Initial training:

Three, the appearance description should pay attention to the problem

1, avoid "Facebook" and grasp the characteristics of people.

2. It should conform to and reflect the origin, status, experience, personality, age, occupation and other characteristics of the characters.

Fourth, appreciate the description of characters in writers' works.

Guess who "he (she)" is, with both form and spirit. 1. His face is yellow and white, and he is so thin that he seems to have recovered from a serious illness, but he is in good spirits and doesn't look depressed at all. Hair is about an inch long. I haven't cut it for a long time, but I stand briskly one by one. The beard is striking, like the word "one" written in thick ink.

-Excerpt from A Lei's "One Side" Lu Xun's face, hair and beard are full of vitality. 2. The only person who drinks standing in a robe. He is very tall; Blue and white face, often with some scars between wrinkles; A shaggy gray beard. Although I am wearing a robe, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it hasn't been mended or washed for more than ten years.

-Excerpted from Lu Xun's "Scream"

Standing, dressed in a robe, Kong Yi has a face, wrinkles and a beard of age and experience.

Dressed dirty, poor, lazy and dead proud.

Article, physics * * * (handsome), pink face contains spring power, and red lips laugh when they smell it.

Emerald crepe skirt A pair of red phoenix triangular eyes, two curved arch eyebrows, petite figure.

Kingdee wore a narrow coat of bright red satin and a colorful carved blue-green silver mouse jacket. Xiaxia

3. This person is dressed differently from other girls, and colorful embroidery is radiant, like a fairy princess: put it on her head.

Wearing a golden silk eight-treasure beaded bun, holding a five-phoenix beaded hairpin in Chaoyang, and hanging a red gold plate around his neck.

A circle; The skirt is tied with a bean green palace sash, and the roses are double balanced; Put on a wisp

From Cao Xueqin's Dream of Red Mansions. The skirt is beautiful, cunning and provocative.

4, tears a little, breath slightly. When you are free, it shines like a beautiful flower on the water, and when you act, it looks like a weak willow tree. The heart knows better than the stem, and the disease is not as good as the west.

Lin Daiyu, a beautiful, intelligent and sentimental woman from A Dream of Red Mansions, V. Deepen training and guess who "he (she)" is VI. Summary 1. Character description methods: appearance description, language description, action description, psychological description and detail description.

2. Description of appearance: face, figure, clothes and manners. ...

3, appearance description should pay attention to the problem (both form and spirit):

First, avoid "Facebook" and grasp the characteristics of the characters.

B, to conform to and reflect the characteristics of the character's origin, status, experience, personality, age, occupation, etc.

5. Ask for an article about character description. Football fans.

That night, the night was dark and windy, and the moon was high in the sky. Eyes are sparsely distributed in the dark blue sky like stars. That night, it was surprisingly quiet, but my home was very lively, because the fans' father was watching the ball at home and driving the "football part".

Father has a flat head and a dark face, but you can see that his teeth are white. Although he smirked "gnome male-"all day, he really knows football and is obsessed with it.

"Go in! Alas-"Look, my dad is watching the ball again. Just now, his face suddenly slipped from excitement and tension to expressionless and complaining-why didn't the ball score? After a while, he cheered again. Why? Goal! He immediately blushed and was ecstatic, just like a bird, as if to fly high.

According to my mother, it seems that my father didn't go to bed until three o'clock. Before going to bed, he told her how to play well and how powerful his favorite player was. Mom also said that she slept until midnight and was suddenly shouted by her father, "Good shot!" Wake up. He even sings his beloved football when he sleeps!

Not bad this time. In the days of the "World Cup", in order not to be bored before watching the ball, he specially cooked a pot of beef and tomato soup. The ball game started, and he sat in front of the TV to watch it on time. An hour passed, and he suddenly smelled a burning smell. Is the beef soup burnt? He thinks so. He was about to get up when he saw a player "kill" the ball into the penalty area. Dad no longer cares about his beef soup, and always looks at the players on TV with his eyes. Wait until he finishes watching the game, then go to see his beef soup. Oh, is that still a dish? -the soup has been burned to the end, and there is a layer of crispy rice under the pot. There are only black beef and tomatoes in the pot.

There are many other stupid things he did for football: for example, he forgot to buy rice, added monosodium glutamate to sugar porridge, and forgot to clear the mahjong table before the leader came to see him ... there was nothing he could do. Football, dad's medicine; Football is a good way to stop dad from hitting you; Football is an indispensable part of dad's life. ...

6. The composition material about appearance description is that my father loves mountains.

In the past, I only felt maternal love, never felt fatherly love, but now I do.

Just after school that day, it suddenly began to rain cats and dogs, and many students left with umbrellas. And I stood there alone, planning to run home when the rain wasn't so heavy. If I had listened to my mother this morning, I would have taken an umbrella. Why don't I listen? I stood there, watching the raindrops as big as beans drop to the ground like broken beads, splashing small splashes. Suddenly, a familiar figure appeared in my sight. "dad! Dad! I'm here, "I shouted excitedly. Dad heard this and ran over at once. "Dad, why are you here?" "I know you didn't bring an umbrella, so I brought it for you. Let's go! In order to avoid catching cold. " We walked quickly home with an umbrella. When I got home, I found my father soaked to the skin and turned into a "soaking chicken", but I was safe and sound, without a drop of water on me. It turned out that my father tilted his umbrella at me all the way, so I didn't get wet. As a result, my father got sick the next day.

This incident made me realize that fatherly love is so great, just like a heavy mountain; Father's love is so warm, just like winter warms our sun. Father's love is an umbrella to prevent us from being burned by the summer sun; Father's love is a big tree, let us enjoy the cool under his green forest; Father's love is our shelter from the wind and rain, and we are in him.

7. How to write the beginning and end of the composition? It is said that "a good beginning is half the battle" and the beginning of an article is very important. With a good beginning, the article can not only drive the whole article, make it unfold smoothly, but also catch the reader and make it fascinating. The ancients said that the article "phoenix head, pork belly, leopard tail" contains this meaning. Here's how to start and end: 1. Principles to follow at the beginning of the composition: 1. Centrality. At the beginning, we must closely follow the main content and central idea of the full text in order to highlight the center. 2. simple. Language should be concise, and it is best to come straight to the point. FAQ at the beginning: 1. Beating around the bush is too far from the point. I always beat around the bush when I put pen to paper. Some people compare it to

2. The same format is fixed. Just a few words at the beginning. 3. Pursuing tricks is self-defeating. It is well written, and the expression of thoughts and feelings is unclear, unclear and untrue. (a), cut to the chase method 1. Cut to the chase, don't beat around the bush, the first sentence is directed at the title of the article. Novices had better use this method. For example, at the beginning of Kingfisher, "Kingfisher likes to stop on a reed by the water." Another example is Edison. 2. explain. Explain the "four elements" of time, place, people and events at the beginning, such as the beginning of Deadpool: "193 1 year (time) late autumn,

Comrade (character) was unfortunately arrested in Baotou (location) (incident) "(2), indirect law 3. Descriptive method. Or describe people, animals, buildings or the surrounding environment. Give a clear impression. For example, the beginning of Swallow: "A suit of black feathers, smooth and beautiful, looks chic and light ..." 5. Start or quote famous aphorisms to point out the center; Or quote the language of the character to highlight the character; Or quote poems to arouse readers' singing; Or quote proverbs, explain things, and so on. Such as "

Beginning: "People say"

. "6. Lyric style. Speak your mind from the beginning and be emotional. For example, A Farewell to China I Love begins: "A Farewell to China I love and China I love wholeheartedly! "Patriotism and affection suddenly came out. 7. Always start. Always get the full text at the beginning. Such as "

Beginning: "Marx and Engels are good friends. They * * * just like learning knowledge, * * * and ... "8. Lenovo. The beginning of the article is from far to near, or

Start with other things, and then think of what you want to write, so as to set off what you want to write. For example, "Spring Silkworm" begins with the association from spring to sericulture, from sericulture to foster mother, and then recalls the scene of raising silkworm by foster mother. 9. Flashback. Start with the result of the matter, be fascinating, and then go back and describe the reason and process of the matter. Such as "

Beginning: "1April 927 18, I will never forget that day. It was my father's disaster, and it has been sixteen years now. " Frequently asked questions at the end of the composition: 1. Gild the lily. It's not important to add something. 2. Formula. Empty call medium. End of common composition: 1. A natural and fluent method for interpreting results. The matter is over, and the article is over. For example, at the end of Sparrow: "I hurriedly called back mine.

Took it and left. "2. The head-tail anaphora at the beginning of anaphora. The ending or main point, and the title.

; Or with the beginning, collect the full text. For example, the Summer Palace ends with: "The scenery in the Summer Palace is really beautiful!" Starting with "The Summer Palace in Beijing is a beautiful big park", it effectively highlights the center. 3. Make the finishing touch of the summary method. End or expand the association,

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Deepen the theme; Or summarize and improve, so that the theme can be sublimated. For example, "high"

End: "Thinking, thinking, in my heart, it seems that a seed is taking root and sprouting ..." 4. Lyric method. The ending directly expresses the author's feelings, thus arousing the readers' heartfelt wishes, from which they are infected and educated. For example, "Goodbye, dear, our hearts will always be with you" at the end of "Goodbye, dear". 5. Evaluation method. Summarize people or things at the end.

8. Write a composition to describe a book by its cover. When I was in the fourth grade, it was a female teacher who taught our class.

The female teacher's surname is Song. Because she is young, she is only 20 years old at most. So we all call her Miss Song, and some female students kindly call her Big Sister. Teacher Xiao Song is tall and dressed simply.

There are two arch eyebrows on the face of melon seeds, a pair of bright and sharp eyes embedded under the arch eyebrows, and a glib mouth. Teacher Xiao Song tied two long ponytails and dragged them to his shoulders.

1 She leaned close to my face and stared at my eyes with wide eyes, as if to instill an inspiring force into my heart. When she talks about God, heaven and angels, she looks very kind. The face has also become younger, and the moist eyes reveal a particularly warm light. But her eyes are small, as small as her father and as handsome.

Her eyes are the most beautiful, with deep double eyelids and a pair of very bright and black eyes. When eyes turn to any part of the orbit, they are very clever and charming. Without these eyes, although she looks well-proportioned and delicate, she can't show anything special about her.

Her eyes cover up all her shortcomings. Her eyes can bloom lovely flowers for her heart and brain. Although she has no profound knowledge, admirable personality and actions, her eyes will make her conquer everything; Seeing her eyes makes people forget to think about anything else, just feel cute.

The light in her eyes will go straight into people's hearts and make people crazy at once. Eyes are often bloodshot and turbid, and sometimes they stagnate like dead people.

I will study hard today, or my mother will open her eyes when she comes home. Mother's eyes are very beautiful, and black eyes grow in the middle of them.

Mother's left eye is dedicated to watching Japanese dramas, and her right eye is dedicated to watching me study. Both eyes are very memorable, so tired! If only I had another eye! If I had another eye, I wouldn't be able to steal time. 5 struggling to open your eyes, your eyes are blank. Only that eye or her eyes that are not bright suddenly glow.

Along the eyes, there are some tears in the corners of my eyes, and my eyes are not as energetic as before. Raise her dull eyes, just look straight at them and tell everyone the story that she never forgets day and night. She stood with her mouth open and looked straight at them. She just looked at them and didn't answer a word.

Seems to be very cramped, immediately gathered a smile, turn your eyes, to see the snowflake. Always staring at my eyes, without saying a word, staring everywhere, like a child looking for love in hunger and thirst, but with the light of indecision, although trying to avoid my sight, it seems to fly out of the window.

Confused and naive feelings stared at his father's eyes, feeling that his smiling eyes were as deep and mysterious as the night sky. My father's eyes are mysterious, as if they can make up a lot of happy light for me.

Six teachers have bright talking eyes. Once in class, I couldn't help but take out my own small plane to play, and was seen by teacher Ren.

She looked at me sternly, as if to say, "What's that in your hand?" I understood what the teacher meant, so I quickly put away the small plane and listened attentively again. Another time, when class was over, I saw a piece of waste paper on the ground, so I picked it up and threw it into the dustpan.

There was no one in the classroom at that time, and no one knew it was * * *. After a while, the class began, and the teacher found that the paper on the ground was missing. This is very strange. I looked at the teacher with a smile.

The teacher found out, his eyes were bent like a crescent moon, and he smiled and projected his eyes on me. The teacher's eyes are like a mirror, which allows us to see the slightest mistake.

The teacher's eyes are as full of care and love for us as the mother's eyes. 7 Those eyes, such as autumn water, such as cold stars, such as pearls, such as white water and silver with two black mercury, look around, and even people sitting in the distant corner think that Wang Xiaoyu has seen himself; The one sitting very close, not to mention.

At this glance, the whole garden was quiet, much quieter than when the emperor came out. You can hear a needle drop to the ground.

9. Imitate one side of the text and write a 250-word composition about the teacher's appearance.

I am proud to have such a good teacher as me. She is my head teacher, Miss Jiao. When I first entered middle school, I heard that our head teacher was an excellent teacher, Miss Jiao. With a little excitement, I silently imagined the image of this excellent teacher in my mind.

In my anxious expectation, finally in the evening, Miss Jiao appeared in front of us. First of all, I think she should not be our future head teacher, Miss Jiao! So young. While I was thinking about this problem, she couldn't help introducing herself to us. Strangely, right or wrong, she is not much older than us. Why did you become an excellent teacher?

But in the later days, I gradually got to know her. Miss Jiao's handwriting is also great, but she is our English teacher. She is strict in class, but not strict outside class. I remember that she used to chat with us. Really, she seems a lot like her sister. If she has something on her mind, go to her and she will talk to you for a while, so that there will be no unhappy things. It seems that some students like to make mistakes. As long as they get to Mr. Jiao's hand, there is nothing, just what she gave them is crisp, just like "roll with the punches, roll with the punches". .

In fact, I am also a person who likes to make small mistakes sometimes, but sometimes I can control it, and sometimes I can't, but Miss Jiao never criticized me, just chatted with me for a while, and that one thing was forgotten!

But I will also remember this little lesson. I hope I won't make mistakes in the future. It's best not to make mistakes from now on and be a regular me.

Also, I want to focus on the teacher: If I am a bird flying with wings, then you are the wind that stirs my wings. If I am a new leaf that has just sprouted, then you are a root buried deep in the soil.

I always want to tell you if I am thoughtful, and I want to share my joy with you. With respect and love, Mr. Jiao, let me once again call you "Mr. Jiao" with the deepest affection, okay?

Last year, our class was often influenced by the sun. Health always comes first, but we also have an excellent head teacher! So we can do everything well. If only teachers are excellent, we are not qualified. How can we be worthy of such excellent teachers? So I hope the whole class will cheer up and let our class by going up one flight of stairs under the leadership of the teacher!

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My most respected teacher

One of my most respected teachers is my head teacher, Miss Zhang. She is as strict with us as her mother and loves us.

Miss Zhang has long hair. She is kind and amiable. Once, my handwriting was crooked and very ugly. Teacher Zhang kept me and asked me to write again. Teacher Zhang asked me to write neatly and regularly before letting me go home. I hated teacher Zhang at that time and thought, isn't it just a few words? Isn't writing well the same as writing badly? Why do you write over and over again? It is a waste of time to write words in a standardized way. When I got home, I told my mother why I stayed. My mother told me: "Words are a facade, from which you can see a person's character. Teacher Zhang's strict requirements are correct and he is responsible for you. Your handwriting is good, it is your own, and no one can steal it. " After listening to my mother's words, I understand Mr. Zhang's intention and admire him even more. Since then, I have been like a first-grade pupil, practicing calligraphy every day, and writing neatly and regularly no matter what homework I write. After a while, my handwriting was more beautiful and standardized than before, and I was praised by the teacher many times. This is the result of teacher Zhang's strict requirements!

Teacher Zhang is strict with us in study and cares about us in life. There are 46 students in our class. In order to let the students devote themselves to their studies, Mr. Zhang visited every family in his spare time and knew every child's family situation like the back of his hand, thus giving us timely care. Teacher Zhang will also observe words and deeds! Whenever a classmate is sick, she always asks her classmate what's wrong and whether she has taken any medicine. If the illness is serious, she will take her classmates to see a doctor herself, so that they can get timely treatment. Once when I was playing, I accidentally cut my hand. After the teacher knew, he quickly took me to the school infirmary for treatment. The bleeding stopped and a band-aid was put on. I was so excited. I am really proud of having such a strict and considerate teacher.

This is one of my most respected teachers-Miss Zhang.

My former teacher.

Author: Yuan

My teacher is very busy. If you look at her, maybe a few beads of sweat will roll down from her head.

Once, she went to another school to attend classes, just as the head teacher of the whole school was going. But after class, all the other teachers went shopping. Only xu teacher (my teacher) was desperate and hurried back. When she suddenly appeared in the class, the whole class was stunned by her appearance. Suddenly, the class was in chaos: someone was talking, someone was cheering, and someone was booing! Suddenly, a classmate stood up and said to the teacher, "xu teacher, all the other teachers have gone shopping. Why are you coming back? " Xu teacher smiled and said to his classmates, "I came back to tell my father about the paper!" After that, she handed out the paper to each classmate and began to talk seriously. At this time, I found a sweat in the teacher's ear and slipped down at once. ...

This is our head teacher, xu teacher. What a responsible and good teacher!