In ancient times, there was a fisherman who was a good fisherman. But he has a bad habit of wishing, even if it is unrealistic, over and over again.

This is a combination of relationships.

This kind of composition must not only understand the meaning of related concepts, but also fasten the relationship between concepts. The two aspects of the relationship can always be linked together, or they can each have their own emphasis, and there is no need to average pen and ink. As far as the topic of "goal and reality" is concerned, we should pay attention to the relationship between "goal" and "reality", and vice versa.

Everyone lives in reality and everyone has a goal to pursue. People's life, study and work are often influenced by both. Knowing this, we should first mobilize the accumulation of life, recall the people and things, feelings and scenes how to deal with this problem, and select materials with rich connotations that are worth chewing and pondering repeatedly.

Naturally, how to conceive can be taught in accordance with their aptitude. The main ideas are: people who live in reality cannot live without lofty goals; The goal should be based on reality; It takes hard work and so on to turn the goal into reality.

Here are some writing ideas.

[Exercise 1]

Laohuaishuxia

Finally, the old locust tree began to feel lonely, and only the burning sun roasted the oily green leaves, and cicadas kept howling among the green leaves.

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I remember when I was a child, there were some old locust trees standing on both sides of the road in front of my house. Every summer, the scorching sun bakes the oily green leaves, and cicadas howl among them. At this time, under the old locust tree, it became lively. Women huddle together in twos and threes, holding the soles of shoes and pulling their families; The man took a bamboo plaque or a bench or something and took a leisurely nap under the tree.

In my memory, Uncle Mo is one of them. Tall, he is always shirtless, covered with pimples, sleeping in a bamboo plaque and snoring like no one's watching. That sound can travel three miles and four miles.

At that time, I was not a fuel-efficient lamp. Every time Grandpa Yao falls asleep, I scratch his naked body with grass. Uncle Yao is most afraid of tickling. Every time he scratches, he wakes up laughing and spins around in the bamboo plaque.

When I woke up, Grandpa Yao chatted with me. He told me about Journey to the West, insisting that he had put a hoop spell on the pig's head. I didn't know it existed until I grew up.

Sometimes he will tell me how serious he is at school and how good his grades are, but he was born in that era and can only leave school early; Then he sighed, "How nice that city is!" Then he shouted loudly to get up: "city people look down on us rural people, bah!" In the future, I must earn a lot of money and let the city people see me just like seeing my uncle! " Grab the teapot and drink it.

Finally, the old locust tree began to feel lonely, and only the burning sun roasted the oily green leaves, and cicadas kept howling among the green leaves. There are only pedestrians rushing by under the old locust tree.

When I came home from my last holiday, I was walking, and a brand-new "Haojue" motorcycle stopped beside me. I see, isn't it uncle? Snow-white shirt with tie, straight suit and shiny leather shoes. "Silly boy, the leng wear stem? Go, I'll take you home! "

It turns out that Grandpa Yao's furniture factory has a prosperous business, and now his money has exceeded six figures.

I jokingly asked him, "Will you sleep under the old locust tree in the future?"

He said seriously, "I'm too busy to stand up now." It's a pity that there are few drops of ink in my stomach, otherwise the bill will be turned over several times. -You should cherish the opportunity to study now! "

At the door, standing under the old locust tree, I looked at my uncle a little. He is much more energetic and has deep wrinkles on his forehead.

I suddenly realized that the goal and reality are not far away. As long as you work hard, the goal will become a reality.

[Exercise 2]

Goals and reality

I am a senior three student.

I don't want to use many flashy adjectives to describe how hard life is in senior three. Senior year? High "mountain"! We get up early every day and get greedy in piles of homework. From time to time, we have to look up to see if our position in the ranking table is rising, when we can reach the peak, and then stay high. All I know is that the glasses are getting deeper and deeper, and the weight is dropping pound by pound. ...

Speaking of goals, I think my goal is only three words: go to college!

Dad once told me that goals are often only one step away from reality. How to make the goal come true depends on how much effort you put into it.

In late autumn, I had a lot of barbs on my hands. Touch along the direction of barb growth, without any feeling; But if you touch it against the direction of its growth, there will be terrible pain; If you pull out those barbs hard, although there was a rebellious pleasure at that time, there will soon be red and swollen wounds.

I don't want my goal to become the biggest wound in my life one day, so I will work hard and aim at my father's words.

But in reality, it is often to look down on yourself in the eyes of others and witness your own failure from the success of others. Sometimes I ask myself, can I really get the flowers and applause in my dreams from my daily hard work? I'm confused. ...

Even so, I don't give up easily. Anyway, I am a senior three student, and I can only set the most common facial expressions as expressionless. Perhaps, sometimes thinking too much will make people yearn for simplicity. Now I just want to study simply, live simply, treat people and things around me simply, and let myself have enough capital to be complicated.

And all this is just for my goal: to go to college!

"Remember my dream when I was young? Like a flower that never fades, accompany me through the storm, see the impermanence of the world and listen to the vicissitudes of life ... "Maybe many years later, when I listen to this song again, there will be infinite regrets. ...

[Comprehensive evaluation]

Although these two exercises are based on the same topic, they are quite different in genre, conception, theme and interest.

Li Yunyang's Under the Old Sophora Tree tells the story under the old Sophora Tree. Uncle Yao, who is tall and acne-faced, is very ordinary, and the young author may not care about a grandiose speech made under the old locust tree at all. The old pagoda tree is lonely, and there are only pedestrians passing by in a hurry under it. A few years later, Grandpa Yao became a rich boss, and his original goal came true. Throughout the full text, the article is like running water, but it is undercurrent. It was not until the end of the article that the meaning of the problem was revealed. This arrangement is commendable.

Jing Wong's "Goals and Reality" is an argumentative essay, and it is the real experience and life sentiment that a girl with delicate feelings confides to you. Generally speaking, writing argumentative essays on this topic is the easiest to become empty. This paper expounds and expresses my feelings based on my own experience, which is more true. The article has true feelings, so it can infect us. Although the article is written about the hard work of studying in senior three, showing a feeling of confusion, it shows a positive value orientation on the whole, which should be said to meet the requirements of the problem.