Comparative writing

1. What is comparison? Contrast is a figure of speech that compares contradictory things together.

Contrast can intercept two different things or two different aspects of the same thing. Through the comparison between the two, the beauty and ugliness of the image are more distinct, the characteristics of both sides are more obvious, the advantages and disadvantages are more profound, and the contradictions are more acute. Contrast, from the content, there are two kinds of contrast, one-on-one comparison and two-on-one comparison.

The contrast between two bodies is to compare and compare two opposing figures and two things together. Some people are alive and he is dead; Some people died, and he is still alive.

(Cang Kejia, Some People) A fighter with shortcomings is a fighter after all, and a perfect fly is just a fly. (Lu Xun's Soldiers and Flies) These two cases are the contrast of two characters.

Through comparison and comparison, it is more obvious that Mr. Lu Xun is great and the reactionary ruler is small, which can arouse our feelings of love and hate. Through comparison and comparison, we affirmed and praised the revolutionary fighters who adhered to the truth, and denied and rebuked the reactionary slaves who slandered the revolution.

Another example is: 3 Zhumen wine stinks, and the road has frozen bones. (Du Fu's "From Beijing to Fengxian to recite 500 words") 4 A cart of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin, will be cherished by the palace envoys.

Half horse red and full of silk, full of charcoal straight to the cow's head (Bai Juyi's The Charcoal Man) These two cases are the contrast of two things.

Example 3 expresses the poet's anger at the ruler's extravagant demands and sympathy for the people's tragic experiences through comparison; It shows us the sharp class contradiction and opposition in feudal society. For example (4), "a car full of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin" shows that there are many materials, and "half a horse is a foot of silk" shows that it is of little value. The comparison between them reveals the predatory nature of the court market and shows the poet's sympathy for the sufferings of the people.

Double-sided comparison is to compare and contrast the opposite or opposite sides of a thing together. For example, these people have Marxism and liberalism: they talk about Marxism and practice liberalism; Marxism for the people; Be tolerant of yourself.

He rubbed his hand on Bao Xiao's "monk's head", and his old heart, numb by poverty, became furious and gave birth to new hope. (Mao Dun's "Spring Silkworm") 3 Our soldiers are so cruel to the enemy, but they love the people of Hanxian so much, and they are full of deep internationalist feelings.

(Wei Wei, "Who is the cutest person") (4) From the perspective of assuming the main leadership responsibility, if there are 100 to 200 people in our party who systematically study Comrade Marxism–Leninism, it will greatly improve our party's combat effectiveness ... (* * * China's position in the national war) These examples, example ① very specifically criticize the dual nature of liberals; (2) highlighting "new hope" with an "old" mentality; Example (3) Raise two diametrically opposite attitudes of volunteer soldiers and praise our soldiers for their clear love and hate; Compared with the two opposing concepts of "system" and "piecemeal" and "reality" and "emptiness", the negative and positive aspects make the viewpoint more distinct and more prominent. According to the structural standard and referring to the traditional classification, comparison can be divided into two categories: average ratio and difference ratio.

Pingbi refers to the equal and parallel comparison of two things, and often uses the coordinate sentence. For example, modesty makes people progress and pride makes people fall behind.

(* * * "Opening Speech of the Eighth National Congress of China") Today, we are as tame to the people as our mothers; Tomorrow, the invading enemy will be burned to ashes by harsh artillery fire! (Li Ying's Snowy Night) Example ① Comparing the different results of "modesty" and "pride" with compound sentence, the advantages and disadvantages are prominent. Example 2 The sentence pattern is the same. Through comparison, it is revealed that soldiers can only be harsh on the enemy if they are docile to the people. Let the two aspects of the warrior's personality be more distinct.

Contrast ratio: refers to the comparison of two things with different weights. In contrast, the party often adopts transitional sentences or progressive sentences.

For example: 3 bees are small; How noble bees are! (Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey") 4 Peach Blossom Pond is deeper than thousands of feet's, but not as good as Wang Lun's (Li Bai's "For Wang Lun") 3 The comparison of "Zhuan Sentence" reveals the universal truth that honey's work and life seems to be "small" but actually "noble". Example 4 uses the relative word "less than" to express the difference ratio, emphasizing that the latter is deeper than the former.

To sum up, contrast and contrast are both related and different. Party A and Party B contrast and contrast at the same time, with Party A lining Party B and Party B lining Party A; The comparison between Party A and Party B also includes some comparison. Because they are related, some rhetorical works combine them as "contrast" or "contrast".

But the difference between contrast and contrast is obvious. ① As far as the status of Party A and Party B is concerned, generally speaking, there is no obvious distinction between primary and secondary. By comparison, the two complement each other and are more prominent.

The contrast between Party A and Party B is not half-to-half, but primary and secondary, with Party B lining Party A as the main body and Party B lining Party B, which makes the main body more prominent. This is the main difference between contrast and contrast.

(2) From the looming of A and B, both of them must appear when compared with B, otherwise the expression effect of black and white will not be achieved; On the other hand, when Party A and Party B set out, the inner sub-body must appear, while the main body is allowed to be hidden. You can write this clearly and hint at each other. In particular, there is often no contrast between subjects, such as moving to static and bright to dark. (3) From the category of Party A and Party B, whenever Party A and Party B compare, they are either the same object or the same aspect, otherwise they are incomparable; As for Party A and Party B, they may belong to the same genus or different genera. For example, setting the landscape as the background means saying one thing, which means another.

Contrast and contrast are not only rhetorical methods, but also expressive methods of many arts, which are often used in drama, film, painting, photography, sculpture and music. If used properly, you can get good artistic effect.

2. Write a composition topic comparison 600 In life, we are often used to comparing everything, mixed with sorrow and joy, success and failure, gathering and parting, and our mood fluctuates in comparison, sometimes even making ourselves exhausted. In fact, a person who truly understands life must be a master who learns to compare reasonably and always keeps a wise smile in the long river of years.

Sometimes, omitting many comparisons may make us live more freely and happily. Sometimes, proper comparison can enrich our minds and pursue a higher realm. Zhou Zeng wrote: "It is often that teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow before talking about pain, but Beethoven sang a ode to joy in his later years." When Beethoven was unfortunately deaf in his later years, he did not compare his frustration with the joy of listening to beautiful melodies in those years, but regarded it as the most precious wealth in life, so he bravely grasped the throat of fate and wrote a hymn of life.

Known as the most famous psychologist and interpersonal relationship scientist in American history, people never thought that he would make such remarkable achievements before. The boy, born in poverty, has a clumsy appearance and a missing index finger in his left hand. He used to be laughed at, doubted and indifferent, but he learned not to compare his imperfect appearance with those who are healthy and outstanding in appearance, thus overcoming his inferiority with dreams and courage under repeated realistic pressures. They all gave up a lot of contrast, so they paid more attention to the land under their feet and the shining ideals in their hearts, and thus gained an extraordinary life.

But sometimes, we also need to make appropriate comparisons to constantly sublimate ourselves, enrich ourselves, enrich ourselves, learn from each other's strengths, compare with others, find each other's strengths, and turn them into the driving force for our progress. When reading a work, we should always compare it with other similar works, take its essence and discard its dross, and enrich our experience and thoughts. Imagine, without these repeated comparisons, how can we find the essence and originality of the article? As the Buddhist saying goes, learning the Tao requires man of iron, setting a spiritual mountain and taking the supreme bodhi, which is beyond your control.

Generally speaking, the life style of pursuing knowledge is a lonely road. We should be tolerant of loneliness, focus on our own ideals, keep a low profile, cultivate our wisdom, not pay attention to the right and wrong around us, and not make so many fearless comparisons. Sometimes, through some comparisons, we can live a smarter life. Those who learn to use contrast must know how to live.

Write a composition by comparison. There are several palm trees in our campus. Seen from a distance, it looks like an open umbrella. Standing at its feet and looking up, it is straight up, up to four or five floors. Its trunk is thick, straight and slender. The thickness of the trunk varies from top to bottom, and the middle part of the trunk is the thickest. The upper and lower parts are thinner than the middle part. The most beautiful is the leaves of palm trees, which spread out like peacocks. The leaves are very big, separated by small leaves, like Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, which is really interesting.

Palm trees are full of vitality all year round. Whether it is spring, summer, autumn and winter, it is so green and so high, as if soldiers are guarding our campus and accompanying us to learn and grow.

4. Write a composition of more than 500 words on the topic of "comparison" and compare people.

When food and clothing is no longer a problem, most of the troubles are compared.

Poverty is not terrible. Both of them are poor and can live happily.

No matter how rich people are, once there is a gap, they will live very unhappy.

Our happiness should not be achieved by "comparing with others";

Compared with the weakness of others, showing your Excellence will produce pride.

Compared with other people's strengths, it's a little hard to say that you have an uncontrollable emotion. It's just pain and jealousy anyway.

Comparing the strengths of others, we find that we are poor, but we have no vitality and hope for life, which will lead to inferiority.

Happiness cannot be based on comparison. If compared with others, "being inferior to others" can't bring happiness, and the happiness produced by "being inferior to others" is immoral and not real happiness.

If your happiness is based on their contrast, you will never be happy.

No one is perfect, gold is not enough, and one mountain is still high.

Don't ruin your value by comparing with others, because we are all unique and everyone is special.

Don't set your goals by what others think is important. Only you know what you want most.

We should have our own definitions of happiness and happiness.

We should have our own ideas, goals, plans, actions and efforts.

When we work hard, even if we fail, we should relax and accept it frankly.

We won't give up our dreams. Without dreams in life, we lose hope. Without hope, we will lose our direction. Don't let the pace of life go too fast and forget where we are and where we are going.

Our happiness comes from the heart,

From the fact that we can feel the value of our existence,

Because we have our own ideals and goals,

It comes from our healthy bodies and smiles on life.

We should regard life as a process and a trip, and we fully enjoy every day of life.

Instead of seeing it as a game, we only value the result. If so, this life will be painful, because the process is long and the result is short.

"Life is an experience.

Success lies in how much you have overcome and how many disasters you have experienced, not in what you have achieved. I hope that when I am 70 or 80 years old, I will tell my grandson how much your grandfather has experienced in this life, not how much he has achieved. "-Ma Yun

"I don't care what others think of me, I care what I think of the world"-Ma Yun

When you no longer need the approval of others, when you no longer compare with others, you will have more inner freedom than you want. "

5. Write a composition in contrast [Thinking Analysis]

Let's talk about the contrast in Lu Xun's Kong Yiji first.

[Problem solving process]

Contrast, as an artistic technique commonly used by Lu Xun, can also be seen everywhere in Kong Yiji. Now let's talk briefly about the artistic effect of each group contrast in the novel:

1. Comparison between "short clothes gang" and "wearing long clothes"

A. the "short coat gang" is standing outside the cabinet drinking.

B. "The man in the gown" wandered into the house next to the shop, ordered wine and vegetables, and "sat and drank slowly".

Xianheng Hotel is the epitome of the dark old society at that time, with distinctive characteristics of the times. The novel introduces two kinds of drinkers: one is the "short coat gang"-the working "poor workers"; The other is the "long gown wearer"-a leisurely and rich exploiter. In the sentence, "short" and "long", "outside" and "inside", "standing" and "sitting" are in sharp contrast, paving the way for Kong Yiji's appearance. The contrast between the two reveals the disparity between the rich and the poor and the difference in the social status of customers.

2. Contrast of internal contradictions:

Kong Yiji was the only one standing drinking and wearing a gown. "Standing and drinking" shows that Confucius has been living in poverty, and his economic status and social status are the same as those of the "short coat gang"; "Wearing a gown" shows that he puts on airs, envies those who are leisurely and rich ideologically, despises the working people and is unwilling to associate with the "short clothes gang". The contrast between the way he drinks and the clothes he wears reflects the contradiction between his economic status and ideology, thus revealing Kong Yiji's special social status.

3. Comparison between "beating" and "being beaten":

A. Ding defeated Kong Yiji.

B. Kong Yiji's leg is broken.

This comparison reveals how the imperial examination system divided scholars into two opposite poles: some climbed the imperial examination ladder, such as Ding, and beat Kong Yiji at will, becoming arrogant "cannibals"; More people fell down, such as Kong Yiji, who was poor and became the object of being beaten and eaten. This fact profoundly exposed the evil of the imperial examination system.

4. The contrast between "laughter" and "fate":

A. Kong Yiji's face is black and thin, and it is no longer like it; Wearing a shabby jacket and crossing his legs ... his eyes seemed to beg the shopkeeper not to mention it again.

B. At this time, several people have gathered around, and they all laughed with the shopkeeper.

The novel describes in detail the tragic scene of Kong Yiji's leg being broken by Ding during his last appearance. Kong Yiji died in the laughter of drinkers and shopkeepers, and "laughter" runs through the whole novel. This burst of laughter was in sharp contrast with Kong Yiji's unfortunate fate, which profoundly exposed the darkness and cruelty of feudal society and criticized the numbness of the masses.

5. Comparison between "clap" and "touch":

A. Without answering, he said to the cabinet, "Heat two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." I will pay a lot of money.

B.he took four pence out of his tattered pocket and put it in my hand. He found his hands covered with mud. ...

The word "Pai" shows that Kong Yiji wants to show his generosity to the "short coat gang" who only spends a lot of money, writes his proud expression, and also shows his pedantic character; The word "touch" shows that Kong Yiji is slow to move, and the "four pence" is well hidden, which shows that this money is hard to come by, and Kong Yiji is further down and out. The contrast between the first "row" and the second "touch" reflects the deteriorating economic status of Kong Yiji.

6. Contrast between "disdain" and "decadence":

A. Someone asked, "Kong Yiji, can you really read?" Kong Yiji looked at the person who asked him and showed disdain.

B. They went on to say, "Why can't you even get half a scholar?" Kong Yiji immediately a face of depression, face was full of gray.

Kong Yiji is proud to be a scholar. He always pretends to be a scholar in front of everyone and disdains the jacket gang. Even when others made fun of him, he repeatedly showed pretentious and narcissistic arrogance. Only when people ask, "Why can't you get half a scholar?" Does he feel very painful, because he is bent on learning from middle school, but he never gets what he wants, which has become his greatest pain and humiliation. This is enough to show that feudal culture and imperial examination system have seriously poisoned the lower intellectuals.

6. Comparative composition The world is beautiful because of differences, the world is rich because of differences, and the world is full of vitality and vitality because of differences. The world is different, and our future will be full of charm.

If there is no difference, our world and our life will be dull; If there is no difference, our inner world will feel lonely. If there is no difference, the world will stay where it is and will not move forward. College entrance examination full score composition network

Flowers are not only a color, red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple, but also an animal, birds and beasts, flowers and birds, fish and insects, beaming; There is not only one style of our clothes, and human beings are not only yellow people.

In this world, there will never be the same person, the same thing, the same thing, the same scene. For scientists, he is delighted with the powerful functions of mobile phones; For astronomers, he is more concerned about the change of humanistic feelings by mobile phones. They have no right or wrong, only different perspectives.

In this world, the similarity of everything is relative, and the difference is absolute.

The sun we see every day is not the one we saw yesterday. It will always change and there will always be differences. Compared with yesterday, everyone has changed more or less. Today is different from yesterday. Difference is the most common existence in the world. If there is no difference, the world will die. If there is no difference, our life will be dull. If there is no difference, we will lose the motivation to move forward. Only when there are differences can our life be rich and colorful.

Everyone's thinking, ideas, attitudes and practices are different. Because of these differences, the whole country and even the whole world will continue to advance and develop, new things and technologies will emerge, and society will become more and more perfect. The more perfect the world is, the happier life will be.

Not long ago, there was a saying on the Internet: "Fiona Fang, what do you think?" In other words, different people have different views, ideas and practices. There is a famous saying: for a thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlets.

It's like southerners are looking forward to snow very much, because it seldom snows in the south, while northerners don't want it because it will cause disaster to crops. In the spring drought, farmers look forward to the stars and the moon, and look forward to a little rain in the old world, because crops need rain and dew to moisten them; For people who travel in spring, they hope that the spring breeze will be warm and sunny every day, because such weather is a good time to play.

It is not difficult to imagine how boring human life would be if there were thousands of people, and how bleak and colorless the world would be if everything was the same shape. We know and understand the differences, and we should respect them more. Respecting differences means respecting individuality. Respecting individuality means loving society and the world we live in.

7. Pupils had better start writing in grade one, usually in grade three. In the first grade, you can use that little English book to keep a diary of one sentence in Pinyin every day. That's what my teacher asked at that time. You can ask your parents to help you write Chinese characters. If your child can read, you can write Chinese characters yourself. Anything you want, it's better to be interesting and observed in life. It can mainly cultivate children's observation ability and sentence-making ability. You can also practice pinyin. When I was a sophomore, I could write a short diary in a few words every day, and I could use pictures. In order to cultivate your interest in writing, you can write a relatively complete composition in grade three, 200 words is the best. Remember the bits and pieces of life, pay attention to observation, and don't tie the child's unique imagination. You can try all kinds of styles. There are 300 words in grade four, 400 words in grade five and 500 words in grade six.

8. Please write a short essay on the topic of "comparison". Bitterness and pleasure are contradictory and interrelated. For example, being intoxicated with money is a pleasure, and success is also a pleasure. The former is vulgar, while the latter is sought after. What we need is joy in suffering, joy in joy, and joy in joy. Bitterness and pleasure are interdependent and contradictory. Happiness comes down to pain. "If you don't suffer, it's hard to have the fragrance of wintersweet", and the happiness of success comes from hard struggle. Only by suffering can there be results. The ancients "hung their heads and tied their legs", but they worked hard and realized their ambition to make progress, which is a kind of happiness in itself. They take pleasure in suffering and take pleasure in suffering. Some people are afraid of suffering, that is, they lack the correct "bitter optimism." In ancient times, people with lofty ideals "worried about the world first, and then enjoyed the world." This is amazing, many times more noble than those who are busy only for personal enjoyment and don't want to suffer for others. * * * Effective soldiers work hard for the happiness of the people of the motherland and mankind. This is even more lofty "bitter optimism." The reason is that they have established an ideal world outlook of capitalism. Ostrovsky said, "Every day I live means fighting great pain." But when he made brilliant achievements in his creation, he was ecstatic and concluded: "Nothing makes people feel happier than overcoming all kinds of pains." "Steel" warrior Liu Qi and living Lei Feng Zhang Haidi, they overcame it. As young students, we can't struggle for personal enjoyment, and we have overcome many difficulties in today's study. The key point is to learn our lessons well, master our skills and serve the motherland and people wholeheartedly in the future. This requires us to have the lofty ideal of capitalism, so as to correctly handle the relationship between bitterness and pleasure on the long road of life. Young friends, happiness always comes after people. Let's take pleasure in suffering and make painstaking efforts to contribute to the prosperity, recreation and happiness of the whole nation.