Eye description composition guidance

1. Writing teaching with "eyes" as the writing theme.

First, create language highlights

1. background: poor grades, at home, facing my father's eyes.

I dare not look up at the deep wrinkles on my father's face. I dare not look up at the strands of white hair on my father's head, nor dare I look at his red eyes. If you are wrong, you should look up and face it bravely. I'm convincing myself. I suddenly looked up and met my father's eyes. I felt his sadness and helplessness in his eyes, I read his confidence and high hopes for me, and I realized my responsibility-to repay my father.

2. Background: Poor grades, in the classroom, facing the teacher's eyes.

Facing the poor 35 points, the angry eyes of the teacher and the slightly sarcastic eyes of my classmates, I can only lower my head and let the teacher give me the "storm" and the cynicism of my classmates. I can't wait to get out of the classroom at once to avoid this time. "Men should strive for self-improvement, don't bow their heads, don't shed tears", a voice rang in my ear. The familiar voice belongs to the teacher. I suddenly looked up and found the teacher's eyes full of encouragement and smile, like forgiveness and understanding for a naughty child who made a mistake. "I was wrong, teacher. I will live up to expectations next time." I squeezed a weak voice through my teeth.

3. Background: Tug of war, in the playground.

Frequent shouts make people impatient, and anxious eyes stare at the thick well rope. I'm thin, lucky to be a bystander and worried. I secretly looked at the teacher's eyes, which clearly read out anxiety and expectation, and blessed and encouraged the members of our class, hiding a kind of confidence and strength to win. "9. 1, come on, come on!" I shouted in despair and drowned out all the voices. This cry comes from the teacher's eyes. "Hard work can win", and I believe that miracles will happen.

The red rope swings from side to side and never stands in line easily, giving it too much "care". The sound of refueling is like the waves of the sea, rising higher and higher, as if to drown the whole playground. The players in our class were absorbed in pulling the rope and pulled back desperately. A pair of feet stepped on the ground, as if they were fixed on the ground, and their eyes had infinite power, like lava just ejected when a volcano erupted.

Judging from the above examples, we must have concrete and vivid details in our writing in order to make our composition flesh and blood. Therefore, as far as the topic of "eyes" is concerned, it is the key to portray the expression and psychological description of the characters. For the description of the eyes, we must not downplay it. Such an article is empty and devoid of true feelings.

Students, I hope you can imitate examples and try to write two wonderful expressions and psychological descriptions.

Writing skills:

The results have improved, facing the proud eyes of parents;

When our parents were laid off, we found their melancholy eyes;

Second, the writing material tips

1. When tug-of-war, the teacher's eyes said that he was anxious, and the students' eyes said that they were hard; Victory is the pride of the collective. At this moment, the teacher's eyes are happy and the students' eyes are proud.

2. In the clear river, fish swim freely, their eyes are full of happiness, the eyes of children playing by the river are naughty, and the eyes of women washing clothes by the river are happy; Times have changed and the river has turned black. What is in the eyes of fish, children and adults?

It's another year of green grass. The old man walks the bird with a cage every day. Happiness is written on his face, and excitement shows his eyes. Bird watchers are mostly praise and excitement, and chatting is unrealistic. However, I found that the first day, the bird's eyes were helpless, the second day, it said it was painful, and the third day, it said it was endless. . . . . . . A few days later, the old man didn't come again.

The idea of composition selection should be novel and ingenious, and the "small" things in life should be selected to reflect the "big" theme. When writing "eyes" in life, you can write "when you want to peek at other people's answers in the examination room, the eyes of teachers and classmates, your psychology." . . . . . " ; You can write "When someone accidentally bumps into you, your angry eyes meet the sincere apology eyes of the other person.". ".。 . . . 。" ; You can write "the eyes of your classmates when they ask you questions and get help." . . . . "It must be remembered that the secret of material selection is to see" big "from" small ".

2. How to write a composition about eyes? My teacher has a pair of bright, determined and divine eyes, which can penetrate our thoughts and gain insight into our hearts.

Although his young face is engraved with traces of time; I'm tired of writing on his gaunt face, but the teacher's bright eyes make in my heart forever shine ... How many nights, all the lights went out, and the desk lamp on the teacher's desk was still on, giving off tireless light. Reviewing a mountain of homework every day, not to mention, it is also a headache, which has to be a torment for teachers. At that time, the teacher's eyes were full of helpless and tired eyes.

Teachers, like our good friends, often talk to us. The teacher always looks at our strangers with friendly eyes.

Teacher, do you remember some time before the next semester in grade seven? During that time, my grades suddenly dropped, and almost every exam could not exceed 100. Even 100 was out of my reach at that time. Whenever I am absent-minded in class, it seems that your eyes are looking at me, and I seem to see that your eyes are full of disappointment.

Later, you chatted with me like a friend, hoping that I could return to my original excellent self. At that time, I looked up into your eyes and saw that your eyes were full of hope and expectation.

After returning home, I reflected on myself and made up my mind to study hard. Since then, my grades have been excellent, and you have a knowing smile, and there is no lack of happiness and joy in your eyes.

You always tell us the main points of the exam, but we don't want to make progress, just want to have fun, and you will always be very upset about it. A few days before the first monthly exam this semester, you took several classes to tell us about the calculation problems, just hoping that we wouldn't lose points on the calculation problems during the exam.

However, you were really sad when you came to check the calculation problems of our evening study. It took us so long to teach us calculation problems, and as a result, only a dozen students in the class can do them all right. It's really disappointing.

At that time, I seemed to see tears in your eyes, telling your helplessness and sadness. Standing on the podium, facing us disobedient students, sometimes you don't know what to do, but you always hug us with your broad mind.

In the face of our mistakes, you seldom accuse us face to face. You always educate us with magical eyes. There is a song that sings well: "When the wind leaves the back, candlelight will sway memories into children's figures, and the setting sun will make the teacher's soul dignified ..." Perhaps this is just a ditty, which does not reveal all the connotations of being a teacher, but at least we feel the sacredness and greatness of dedication from it.

You are like a candle, igniting yourself and inspiring students; Your eyes are like sunshine, illuminating our hearts. Your eyes are small, but bright, and seem to have a magical power.

When I am proud, it is your eyes that make me ashamed; It is your eyes that cheer me up when I am discouraged. When I encounter difficulties and setbacks, when I lose confidence and stop, I seem to see your firm and bright eyes again, which is urging me, encouraging me and giving me confidence and courage to overcome difficulties! Teacher, we will never forget your eyes full of air and strength.

3. Composition describing people's eyes. He is about our age, his mouth is always slightly open, his eyes are shining with confused and dull light, and he looks straight ahead, wearing a pair of jeans that have faded a little, a white shirt with no pattern and a white towel around his neck. The strange appearance seems to tell people that he is an abnormal human being.

In middle school, every time we went to the basketball court near our school to play basketball, we always saw him. He stood stiffly under the basketball stand, making no noise and rarely moving around, just staring at us, and his empty eyes made people unable to understand his mind.

At first, being stared at by such a strange person made me feel uncomfortable and bored. I tried to ask him to leave several times, but seeing his dull eyes, I felt really unable to communicate.

After a long time, I got used to him and stopped paying attention to him. He seems to have integrated into the surrounding scenery and become a part of the stadium. "He didn't come to steal, did he?"

A friend's joke caught my attention. Indeed, our clothes, mobile phones and basketball are all placed under the basketball stand at will. He always stands by and often picks up the basketball on the ground to touch it. Is it because some annoying people who often haunt here, such as the old lady who steals our drinks and sells them, can't help but attract my attention?

When he saw her again, his dull eyes were more insidious. As expected, I caught him once with my basketball ready to escape.

"Put it down!" I snapped. He looked at my eyes, a little surprised, then full of injustice, his mouth slightly shaking, awkward.

"hypocrisy!" I even began to suspect that he was a recidivist. He put the ball down slowly with both hands, turned around slowly and walked away.

Later, when I went to play basketball, it was hard to see him again ... One evening, when I came home from school, I passed by the basketball court and saw her throwing a worn-out football at the basket alone. It is better to throw than to throw, because his movements are too stiff.

The ball fell, chased unsteadily, and couldn't wait to throw the ball again. The afterglow of the sunset dyed the stadium slightly yellow, and it was unspeakable to see his funny figure shuttle through the empty stadium.

Later, I heard from people around me that he had congenital dementia. His parents took him everywhere for medical treatment, but in vain, they lost confidence in him and let him wander around every day.

When I saw him again later, I deliberately avoided his eyes, and my self-reproach came to my mind. Maybe he never wanted to steal; Maybe he is just a child who loves basketball as much as we do.

Later, when I entered high school, I rarely passed by the stadium and never saw him again. But his lonely figure and unforgettable eyes will remain in my memory forever.

—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— In the street, my father stared at my eyes and said that I didn't protect my eyes properly.

I saw pity in his eyes. He has always regretted that his eyes bulged out because of wearing glasses. I know this very well.

But looking into my father's eyes, I seem to regret what I did to myself. Finally, the eyes of concern reached the optical shop, and I was overwhelmed by the dazzling glasses frame.

But I made a clear choice. I went to the optometry first, and then my father stood next to me. I didn't see his eyes, giving people a kind of unspeakable warmth. There seems to be a smell of rice. The amazing eye optometry results came out. The optometrist said that my left eye increased by 150 and my right eye increased by 100.

At this time, my father's face was full of surprise. While scolding me for not caring for my eyes, I couldn't help sighing.

I was very unhappy when I looked at that. Poor helpless eyes. After checking the light, I'll pick out the frame. There are so many frames here, but the prices are different. At this time, the waiter there introduced me to an expensive spectacle frame. I looked at the price and was disappointed. At this time, my father was by my side, and I looked into his eyes. I know he thinks it's expensive, too. I hope I don't choose such an expensive one.

I said some ugly prevarications. But the waiter was very enthusiastic and kept taking me to that expensive glasses frame.

Under her guidance, I successfully took a fancy to a more expensive spectacle frame. I felt good at that time, and I showed my heart.

In the eyes of my father, there seems to be some dissatisfaction. Our family is not a wealthy family. We shouldn't have bought such glasses frames at all. Later, in his eyes, I knew he acquiesced, but his eyes were full of helplessness. At this time, I seem to be at a loss to write, silently watching the waiter take the eye frame.

There is a strong regret in my heart. I'm a little afraid to look my father in the eye. I know it's irreversible, so I can only make a fuss about it on camera.

Another waiter took us to the camera area. As soon as I got up, I watched the cheapest lens first, trying to make up for the loss on the frame so as not to make my father like that. But the waiter was not satisfied with my choice. She kept telling me how good those lenses were, but I found that those lenses were expensive, and my father seemed to be persuaded. Finally, the waiter kept telling me that those lenses were suitable for me, but they were the most expensive! I cursed in my heart that the waiter was so cruel that he didn't stop until he killed us.

My father seemed to be persuaded at once, so I stole a look at him. In his eyes, I am also making a choice. Finally, I met him. He frowned and was cruel. The lock said, "Good! Just him. " The vacant eyes have left the optical shop and walked in the street. Dad didn't say anything all the way, just walked silently. Needless to say, those eyes are blank, which makes me feel very sad. I silently vowed all the way that I must study hard, otherwise I am really sorry for my father.

I can't seem to forget that blank look in my life. Dad, dad, I ...

4. Write an article on "Unforgettable Eyes". Unforgettable disappointed eyes will never forget those eyes. Sadness mixed with surprise, loss mixed with confusion, doubt mixed with doubt, helplessness mixed with crystal tears. One weekend afternoon, the sun shone on the floor through the window, vaguely seeing red, yellow and purple. The street is very quiet, only some unknown birds are heard. A girl's voice full of milk broke the silence: "Zhu Xiaowen, come down and play." I remember once, a person called me so innocently, standing under the building, laughing and laughing ... "Yan Qianjin, come down and play!" " "Ok, wait for me." This is the way of continuous dialogue between the two of us. I don't know how many times I shouted, but I never felt tired. I fell in love with staying at home until the fifth grade. Every time she asks me to play again, it's not like before ... One day in the fifth grade, the weather was particularly sunny and the sun was industrious, hanging in the sky. Through the green bamboo leaves, the sun shines on the computer. I had a stretch and then slowly turned off the computer. I walked slowly to the living room and the phone rang tacitly. I rushed over and grabbed it. The man over there paused and said, "Come out to play?" It was her. I was silent for a long time and thought, it's really troublesome to change clothes. I'm going to play the fast girl. Alas … after thinking about it again and again, I still couldn't overcome the temptation of TV, so I casually said, "I won't go, my homework hasn't been finished yet." "Oh …" she said softly, but I heard her disappointment. In the afternoon, when my parents came back. She said I didn't finish my homework, and my parents said, "I finished it on Saturday." That night, I stood downstairs in her house, and she gave me a look, mixed with disbelief in sadness, confusion in loss, disbelief in doubt, tears in helplessness … I will never forget that look. That night, I learned a lot …

5. How to describe "eyes" 1? Eye description is an important aspect of shaping characters.

3. Explore the rich inner world of the characters from rich eyes.

Teaching emphasis and difficulty: show the inner world of characters through eye description. Teaching process 1. Introduce a new lesson

Appreciating Cai Qin's song Your Eyes, everyone is eager to have a pair of bright and beautiful eyes. Eyes are the windows of the soul, and the description of eyes is an important aspect of shaping characters.

Qing: confused, hazy, melancholy, clear, happy, angry, kind, numb and pure.

Summary: Most adjectives describing eyes can be used to describe people's psychological activities, and the description of eyes is actually a description of psychology.

2. Show the students' exercises (these exercises are the last time I practice writing, and the teacher has reviewed them before class)

Student A: He looked at me in pain, helplessness and despair.

Student B: His eyes are always so kind and kind.

3. Show excellent eye description.

Example 1: He opened his eyes wide, and the pain gurgled out of his eyes, like a gushing spring, spilling all over the floor, soaking the dust on all pedestrians' feet, turning it into solid glue and firmly sticking to their hurried steps.

Example 2: His face is full of sadness, and his eyes are full of sadness. He is as deep as a well and bottomless. It seems that all the sadness and desolation in the world have been crushed by it. As long as you touch it, it is doomed in an instant.

Through the description of the eyes in the example, we feel a desperate and sad person, a person who is in trouble in life. Through his eyes, we can see his miserable inner world. Delicate eye descriptions often use some rhetorical devices.

Third, students practice writing in class.

1. This photo is very famous. Hope the big-eyed girl of the project, please pay more attention and describe it carefully.

2. Show students how to practice writing in class.

Homework: Title: Her eyes

Invite an introverted girl to the stage. Please observe her "eyes" and touch the eyes of this classmate with your delicate heart. Please use some rhetorical devices to describe her eyes.

6. There should be comments on the composition about eyes. The tall and thin figure, the habitually frowning face, and those caring eyes staring at me are unforgettable-at the corner of the road, when he looked at me, he immediately turned around, got on his bike, disappeared into the crowd and never looked back.

But I still recognized the look, the look I knew. Suddenly, a very wonderful feeling flowed all over my body-I love playing basketball. After school, I rushed into the stadium and "fought" with my classmates, and I accidentally hurt my knee. It's good to meet dad on the way home from work. "Take me home, I really can't walk in pain!" Dad hurriedly got off the bus, looked at my wound in surprise, stared at it for a few seconds, frowned and said, "This little injury is nothing. If you want to play ball, you have to pay the price and walk home by yourself! " "I thought it was just a joke, so I consciously sat on the bus. Unexpectedly, my father pushed me away and rode away quickly, leaving a sentence at a distance: "Walk home by yourself. "

My father is an only child. I always thought I was the darling of my parents, but I never thought that my father left me coldly when I needed help most. I looked at his distant back and then at my bloody knees. A cool breeze blew, and a terrible pain ——————— "I walked home by myself?" I am angry and wronged in my heart.

"Tiger poison is not food! I-I'm not going. " But just think about it, what if the wound is inflamed if you don't clean it right away? It's not yourself who suffers, so why bother yourself! So I held my breath and limped home. However, before I walked a few steps, I looked up inadvertently, but I saw my father's figure at the intersection. It suddenly dawned on me that although my father rode fast, he didn't ride far. In a corner not far from me, he guarded me with his eyes. Just because of the look out of the corner of his eye, I seem to understand another meaning of his sentence and understand him.

I remembered what he said to me: "Life is a long way. Parents can't lead you for life. When you learn to walk, you will inevitably fall, but you must get up from where you fell. If you are in trouble, you must learn to solve it yourself. You can't always depend on your parents. " This is a warm current rising quietly from my heart, and I began to feel that the wound was not so painful. My father's surprised expression and habitual frown after seeing my wound are unforgettable, but his eyes in the corner are even more memorable.

At this time, I unconsciously lost my anger and suddenly felt relaxed. On the way, my injured person was so conspicuous. Some kind people said "Never mind, little brother" and "Do you want me to take you home", but they were all politely declined by my father's famous saying "I can do it, I will just walk home myself"! I walked home quickly, opened the door and saw two small brown bottles on the table-one is hydrogen peroxide and the other is mercurochrome.

The door of the study opened a small crack. Maybe my father looked at me silently with concern, which impressed me deeply.

7. The author of the paper should have a paragraph describing the eyes. Eyes are the windows of the soul, so what is "eyes", do you know? Let me tell you, "eyes" are several extremely sharp "knives". Eyes are coming, so be careful!

Let's talk about the "first knife" first. That's the look in the eyes of the director of the Political and Educational Affairs Office: she is in charge of the discipline and health work of the whole school. She is a female teacher in her late fifties, but she is always full of energy. Her eyes are so sharp that she can't even hide a needle in the ground. If her eyes shoot at you from a distance, you should be careful. You should always remind yourself: go into battle lightly, take your time and behave well. Or what? Hum, the consequences you want to go.

Let's talk about the "second knife" first, that is, the eyes of an English teacher who will "cheat". Even I, a fearless person who dares to say and do things, will fade in English class. Although I have experienced countless painful tortures, I always like to stand up and answer questions when no one raises their hands. "Choose C:" I said confidently. The English teacher's inscrutable eyes slowly moved from the test paper to me: "Are you sure to choose C?" "er ... choose one!" Looking at the smiling face gradually floating on the teacher's face, my heart exulted: "I saved my life." "The correct answer is C." I'm dizzy!

The "third knife" is of course the sharp eyes of our class teacher. Behind the glasses, a pair of watery eyes are refracted by a concave lens, not to mention how sharp they are, which is simply "murderous". In class, he painted "axisymmetric" graphics and photographed the whole class with the corner of his eye. Suddenly, his big eyes let out a knife light from the top of the lens and directly hit the little A who was picking nails in the last row. Everyone held their breath and looked at Xiao A uniformly. The sudden silence overwhelmed Xiao, so nervous that he didn't know where to put his hand. Hey, little A, little A, who let you slip away?

Our Chinese teacher is a "smile hides a knife" type, and her eyes are like a gentle knife. Although he always smiles and has no "murder" in his eyes, don't be careless. Once gentle eyes "kill" people, there will be no lotus flower! He is eloquent and knowledgeable. He simply knows astronomy above, geography below, and talks about the past and the present, which fascinates you. As long as you follow his eyes, the invisible knife spirit has completely shattered your spiritual will, and you don't know it yet. What a magical knife!

Hehe, what's wrong? Are these knives powerful enough?

8. How to describe the teacher's eyes? You can write it down in your exam. You can't answer a question. The teacher saw you who wanted to see your classmates. He didn't name names, but smiled at you with warning eyes. You didn't read it.

But I can't write. I'm very upset. The teacher saw it and looked at you with encouraging eyes. When you didn't finish your homework, the teacher looked at you disapprovingly, which made you feel embarrassed.

You can write what you do and what kind of eyes the teacher looks at you. The above description is my personal experience, and I have written like this. You are writing a composition, aren't you? In fact, if the topic is related to the teacher's eyes, it is easy for you to draw out the teacher's kindness to you from the teacher's eyes, and it is best to have personal experience. You can combine the interests of several teachers to write a composition that is difficult to distinguish between true and false.