Think of yourself as a landscape composition. How to write a composition

1. How to write an imaginary landscape composition A: "Introduce a landscape".

When introducing a scene, there are usually two situations. One case is that the natural scenery of a place is properly interspersed in the narrative of the note author. For example, the article "Grassland" depicts the beautiful scenery of grassland landscape to set off the brotherhood between Mongolian and Han nationalities ... This kind of scenery description accounts for a small proportion in the full text, and what can be written is often only a part of a certain scenery, or just a certain scenery or one or two specific scenery in this place.

On the other hand, the whole article mainly talks about a certain natural scenery, and there are many such narratives in primary school Chinese textbooks. Song, do you remember any articles? Yes, yes, almost all of them.

A: Then tell us about it. B: For example, the landscape of Guilin, the wonders of Jingbo Lake, the colorful ponds, the underwater world, the bird's eye view of the sky, the Golden Flower Shuanglong Cave, the Summer Palace, the beautiful Xiaoxing 'an Mountains, the seaside and the rich Xisha Islands ... A: Not bad, not bad.

You remember very clearly that these words and general travel articles are all about introducing and describing a landscape. Of course, the scope of scenery description varies greatly, but the purpose of writing is to show readers the beautiful and spectacular mountains and rivers of the motherland and express the author's praise and joy for the scenery of his hometown, mountains and rivers of the motherland, natural environment, social environment and living place. Primary school composition training also requires children to learn to write a scene.

Today, we focus on the second situation of landscape writing-the full text focuses on depicting landscapes-to discuss how to guide primary school students to "introduce a scene". Okay？ C: Well, every time primary school students see beautiful articles or wonderful scenery clips, they can't help but "tut-tut" and sometimes even read aloud.

Why? Just because these beautiful scenery writing articles can bring people into a beautiful and charming situation, such as rough sea, towering mountains, mirror-like West Lake, crystal-clear Lijiang River, singing brook, sky with flowers and birds, colorful ponds ... These scenery make children feel novel and beautiful, so that they often envy the authors of these articles, and they often think, if it is myself, I can't write it because I am too ambitious. B: This situation is not unique. Some children just shout "beautiful", "lovely" and "charming" in their articles because they don't know how to describe the scenery. Some children eat some words and fragments from Travel Notes in their own compositions, but they don't know how to express the real scenery in life and the real feelings when watching the scenery. A: Let's talk about the basic method of "introducing a scene" for primary school students.

What's your opinion? B: In my opinion, there are many kinds, levels and colorful natural scenery, and the observation and attention of primary school students need to be developed. If you look at the scenery from east to west, it is difficult to grasp the characteristics of the scenery, and the composition is inevitably chaotic, unorganized and not specific. So first of all, we should guide students to observe and describe the scenery in a certain order. There are three main ways and sequences of primary school Chinese texts.

One is in the order of spatial transformation. Description of scenery is generally a narrative observation of scenery. We can guide students to choose a foothold of description, that is, a fixed observation point, and observe and describe in order with the movement of the eyeball.

C: This method is most commonly used to guide primary school students' composition, just like shooting the camera lens from left to right or from front to back, from top to bottom or from far and near. The author of the third grade Chinese textbook "San Tan Yin Yue" observes and describes the indoor furnishings, and the author of "Rain" observes and describes the rain scene outside the house in this way.

A: You remember clearly that you were right. It can be described in the order of spatial transformation, and it can also be described by the steps of the observer. C: This is often called "changing scenery".

A: Yes! This method is often used for visiting, sightseeing and observing complex environment. In real life, eye movement and foot movement are often described together, and examples are also given in this paper. Observing the scenery in this way can better grasp the characteristics of the scenery and leave a relatively complete and concrete impression on the whole scenery and the main scenery.

So this method is basically used to guide students to write travel notes. Song, tell me about the other two.

B: Good! The second is to observe and describe according to the order of scene categories. For example, in the article Landscape of Guilin, the water of Lijiang River is described as "quiet, clear and green", then the mountains of Guilin are described as "strange, beautiful and dangerous", and finally the beauty of landscape is described as "a picture scroll".

The third is to observe the description in the order of delay. This method is called "time series method" and "time lapse method".

The time series here can be year, month and season, such as morning, afternoon, evening and night of a day, spring, summer, autumn and winter of a year and so on. The purpose of this observation and description is to capture and express the different characteristics of the scenery in different periods and reflect the overall beauty of the scenery more comprehensively.

Answer: It is very specific to instruct students how to observe and describe the scenery in turn. What I want to emphasize is that in teaching practice, students should be guided to flexibly choose and determine the order of observation and description from the purpose of writing and the actual situation of scenery.

After guiding students to "introduce a scene" and solving the problem of orderly observation and description, the focus should be on guiding students how to observe and describe the scene carefully. This should be done from three aspects: first, students should be guided to discover and describe the color characteristics of the scene. We often say to observe and describe colorful scenery. The so-called "color" refers to color, and "posture" refers to posture.

Any landscape has its own unique shape and color. For example, Guilin's mountains are "strange", "beautiful" and "dangerous", one after another "rising from the ground" and "unconnected with each other", "dangerous peaks stand tall and rugged", while Daxinganling is "rolling and stretching for thousands of miles".

2. Imagine yourself as a flower. Today, I finally ushered in another growth in my life. I stretched hard and bloomed under the blue sky. The breeze gently brushed my cheek, and the smoke from the distant village also rose.

Looking at the birds in the sky, I think if only I could fly like a bird! In this way, I can fly freely in the sky, meet those strange scenery in different seasons and everywhere I want to go, and make more friends on my own journey ... (write down the benefits of being a bird)

In this way, I have been immersed in the envy of birds for the next day, feeling that I am a useless and humble little flower. This idea makes me long to be a bird in the sky.

Until one day, when the rainstorm came, a group of small ants carrying food ran towards me quickly. When they came to my feet, they gave a long sigh and said, "There must be this to shelter us from the wind and rain! Otherwise, we won't be exhausted! " Hearing this, I smiled knowingly. It turns out that I also have my own value-I can help weak ants.

After the rain stopped, the little ants left, leaving them alone.

When I was sleepy in the warm sunshine, I was awakened by a girl's laughter. It turned out that there was an outing in front of him. They enjoyed delicious food and chatted happily together. Dad asked his daughter, "If you had a Latin magic lamp in front of you, what kind of wish would you make?" The girl replied mischievously, "I want to make this little flower, because it is beautiful, and I don't have to do my homework every day …".

After listening to the little girl, I feel very lucky. I live a carefree life as a whole and can help others. You don't have to worry about a lot of tedious homework all day, and you won't be compared with other children by your parents. ...

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3. How to write a composition about the autumn scenery in 400 words about the autumn scenery in my hometown.

Maybe it's because I was born in autumn, maybe it's because my name is related to autumn, maybe it's because autumn is the harvest season. I have a special feeling for autumn, especially in my hometown. The charming autumn colors of my hometown flash across my mind from time to time.

My hometown is in a ravine, where there is no noise, prosperity and abundance of the city. Surrounded by towering green hills. Now is the harvest season. Rows of fruit trees on the mountain are bent by fruits. People in the village come to the mountain to pick fruits with baskets, and their faces are filled with the joy of harvest.

There is a maple forest in the mountains. Walking on a path full of fallen leaves and enjoying this autumn masterpiece, I feel a little more comfortable. Look! There are some butterflies dancing there! I saw the butterfly spinning in the air and then flying to the ground. A gust of wind is another "butterfly flying picture"! How beautiful! I walked over gently, trying to catch some Qiu Die as specimens, but when I got closer, I realized that they were just maple leaves, but they were just as beautiful, weren't they?

"Ding Dong ... Ding Dong ..." Who is playing the piano? I walked to that place with doubts. Oh! It turned out to be a small pool. Take a sip of the pool water. Well, the water in my hometown is very sweet ... At the foot of the mountain, rows of antique huts come into view. It's time for dinner, and every household has lit cigarettes.

Oh! Poetic and picturesque, the beauty of dreams-the rhyme of autumn, the soul of mountains!

4. How to write a landscape composition? There must be some natural scenery around you, right Observe them carefully, write down their characteristics, and add a little imagination to make the composition more vivid, vivid and concrete! ! Masterpiece 1: The towering green hills, the vast blue sea and the deep and broad blue sky are charming natural scenery.

Yue Wumu, who drinks Huanglong, Wen Tianxiang, who is famous in the history of Qing Dynasty, and Su Dongpo, who are both excellent in poetry and prose, are all dazzling cultural landscapes. Historical Records, Li Sao Wu Yun, Preface to Lanting and Poems of Taibai are profound and mysterious spiritual landscapes.

The world is full of wonders, and all beings are crouching tiger, hidden dragon. Colorful natural scenery, dazzling cultural scenery and unfathomable spiritual scenery are really "all kinds of red and purple contend for the wild".

However, in this world of "flowers are more and more attractive", instead of "how can I tell, through all these clouds?" We should be "not afraid of clouds covering our eyes", be proud of the majestic Mount Tai, the precipitous Mount Lushan and the beautiful Emei, bully the weak and fear the hard, cross the river into the sea, dare to challenge ourselves and shout out our calm, powerful, sonorous and beautiful voice: I am a landscape. If you write wisely, you can't escape from the corpses everywhere; Han Xin seeks more, and it inevitably rains but it pours; Zi Xu is good, but he can't escape the neck knife; Qu Yuan is loyal, and it is inevitable that his body will sink. Yue Wumu is clever and brave, but it's a pity that he didn't give full play to his talents.

Their tragic experience gives people a feeling of "but before he could conquer, he was already dead, and the heroes cried on their coats". Although they failed, they are also rare and beautiful scenery, showing the world experiences and lessons. Sunshine is always after the storm. How can you see the rainbow without experiencing the storm?

Wuxiang Hou strategized and won thousands of miles; Zhang Zifang learned a lot, and Wen Tao was good at martial arts. Zhao Zilong shot Cao Bing with a silver gun on Changbanpo, and Zhang Yide roared and hissed in front of Dangyang Bridge, making Beikou lose his soul. Zhuge Liang in the valley above stunned Sima Yi with a fire, and Lu Boyan was blinded by a pile of stones in five villages and towns beside the fish belly.

Their success makes people have a heroic spirit of "except the king's affairs in the world, making a name for themselves before and after death". Falling red is a landscape, "falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more"; Lotus is a kind of landscape, "The lotus leaves are infinitely blue the next day, and the lotus flowers reflect different colors in the sun"; I am a landscape, the world has changed because of me, and the world is proud of it.

Masterpiece 2: The scenery here is unique. I stopped to see the beautiful scenery here. When I saw the beautiful scenery here, I couldn't help but stop. Because the scenery here is really charming, it keeps me here with eyes that can generate electricity.

I was shocked at once, because I had never seen such a lively and energetic beauty. Its beauty is intoxicating, fascinating and amazing! Look at the cherry blossoms, they are in full bloom.

They are nameless cherry trees: some are pale pink, like shy red cheeks; Some branches are red and white, like a peach blossom; Some trees are white. They all look pale, as if they were ill. Cherry blossoms are all kinds, holy as lily, pure as lotus, gorgeous as sunflower and delicate as rose.

I blossom, they laugh, I blossom, they scream. Cherry blossoms are helpless, gorgeous and extraordinary.

People have dedicated "sinking fish and falling geese, closing their eyes and feeling ashamed of flowers" to the four beauties (The Story Of Diu Sim, Shi, Wang Zhaojun), but I prefer to dedicate them to the flowers in front of me, the thousands of beloved cherry blossoms! I approached the cherry blossoms and bloomed fragrant. It is said that cherry blossoms are light and fragrant, but once in full bloom, they are brighter than peach blossoms and more fragrant than plum blossoms.

I smell the flowers and appreciate the cherry blossoms carefully. Cherry blossoms have five petals, each of which is white with a hint of pink.

Look at one, it has unique beauty; Look at a tree, it has an open beauty. Flowers bloom like the sky, and the fragrance of flowers overflows all over the world.

KINOMOTO SAKURA has an admirable unique style of diligence, hot pillow, fortitude and persistence. Close up, they are clustered and the fragrance of flowers is even more charming.

Flowers are like groups of lovely dolls, scrambling to let people watch their gorgeous style! Look at the peach blossom standing next to the cherry blossom. It's beautiful. They are smiling at me, looking from a distance, shining like the golden red sun in the sky.

The peach blossom after the rain is so fragrant that people will be ecstatic when they smell its fragrance. A good sentence: "Welcome the lotus before the wind falls, and the peach blossom is beautiful after the rain!" " "These peach blossoms, you won't let me, I won't let you, there are clusters of clusters, one by one. It's really varied and strange! Peach blossoms, like apricot blossoms, are pale red and are blooming every day! Its trunk is a little bent and inclined like a capital letter Y.

Its leaves are strip-shaped, oval and green. Its Kobanawa leaves are evenly scattered on the branches, and like a green welcoming pine in the distance, it is welcoming guests from afar; Not far away, like the same graceful and dancing girl.

A few days later, the peach blossoms faded, and you stood under the tree as if it were raining, emitting a faint fragrance. I am like a Momo petal dancing in the wind, but I don't want to fall to the ground. I really want to fly for a while.

When the petals fall, the little bee flies to tell me how much delicious honey it collects in a day, and the bird flies to the tree to tell me its happiness in a day. I can't wait to tell them that I am very happy and happy at this moment, and we all congratulate each other with joy. When my dream was completely completed, I found: I am not a flower, I am enjoying it! I remembered the peach tree the other day.

There are countless branches on the peach tree, and the pink peach blossoms on the branches are all in bloom. Every petal is crowded together, like a little girl's bright smiling face, so cute! There are lilacs over there. Those green leaves are hidden among thousands of flowers.

They are so small that they don't stand out at all. They are also clusters, some are white, small and exquisite, and some are golden and elegant.

They give off a charming fragrance, which makes people fascinated and linger under the lilac tree. There are also several tall and beautiful cycads.

Cycas are surrounded by sharp, spiny and spiny cycas.

5. There is always a scenery that belongs to you. How to write "You stand on the bridge and watch the scenery, and the people watching the scenery are watching you upstairs." Whenever I read this sentence, those beautiful and profound memories in my heart, like the orange desk lamp by the bed, warm all the stories with nostalgic soft light. Perhaps, everyone has a unique scenery in their hearts, which belongs only to their own beauty.

Cambridge, which is plated with sunset on the He Kang River, belongs only to Xu Zhimo; In the watermelon field at night, the figure of a strong teenager belongs only to Lu Xun. In the best memories, they pinned their most cherished childhood joy. Through the most unforgettable scenery, we can always think of some people who have gone through our lives. They may just come in a hurry and leave in a hurry. But they teach us to grow and love. They are the most beautiful scenery in my life.

I have seen "Golden Rose" many times, and Shamei's persistence moved me and troubled me. "If only someone could send me a golden rose." Susanna's words made him pay in silence for half his life. His love for Susanna is not only family, but also far more than love. She is the scenery he loves. Although she never understood his love.

A person without love in his heart is insensitive. It is Samei's persistent and selfless love, which has poured tenderness and yearning for the golden rose. Without crazy, unrequited efforts, our proud story will look pale and powerless. Some people never want others to love them, but they never want to love the people in the past. There is no room for seagulls in the sky. Why are seagulls required to be attached? Learning to love is a kind of happiness.

The most beautiful scenery in my heart is only the sunflowers blooming by the campus lake. Without huge flowerpots and full fruits, they are not beautiful, but they are vigorous and warm bright yellow, like a sword shooting into my eyes. Without their innate elegance, they still live proudly. When the dead sunflowers were shoveled away, we all felt sorry: when can we see these strong sunflowers again? They left a colorful landscape painting in my memory, carving my soul all the time.

What kind of person to be, what kind of building to stand on and enjoy the scenery in your mind. There are waves under the bridge, and the scenery on the bridge is beautiful. It is the eternal beauty in our hearts that has always made us flesh and blood and thoughtful people.

The scenery in my heart needs magnificence. A flower and a world, a leaf and a bodhi. Simple things contain the simplest and purest emotions. The scenery that only belongs to us must be fresh and meaningful to ourselves, filled with faint fragrance, reminding us of the most beautiful memories and feelings in our hearts at all times. Even a small flower can make the whole world beautiful.

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6. How to write a landscape composition [train of thought analysis]

The answer is as follows.

[Problem solving process]

How to write scenery?

1. Scenery description should be in azimuth order, from near to far, from far to near, from top to bottom, from bottom to top, from inside to outside, from outside to inside, or from middle to around, orderly, with clear priorities and proper details.

4. It can be written according to the types of scenery, such as mountains, water and flowers and birds; Waterfalls, rocks, peaks and caves; Pavilions, pavilions, etc. Write down the light, color and taste of the scene; It is necessary to write about its static state, its dynamic state and its environmental atmosphere.

Observe carefully and describe the scenery of different seasons, don't make it up, write it by your own imagination.

4. Landscape writing can also write people and things in detail. If people, scenery and things are combined to write, the composition can be more touching. Tonight in the Country is a good example.

5. When writing a scene, don't forget the relationship between yourself and the scene, but consciously write your own feelings and feelings, which will make people feel immersive when reading. Don't Ye Shengtao's "Remember Jinhua Shuanglong Cave" have such characteristics?

6. Appropriately and correctly quoting the poems and songs of predecessors describing scenery can also add color to the composition. This requires you to read more and accumulate more at ordinary times, and don't look for it when necessary.

7. How to write an article describing the scenery? One: Natural scenery is the crown scenery.

Beautiful and charming; Soft and pure; Noble and elegant. The scenery is beautiful, intoxicating and fascinating, and it can even be said to be "fascinating".

However, what is the most attractive scenery? Is it innocence? Are you helping others? Is it a hard number? Or meticulous care? Or ... no, it's not. This is a unique landscape created by nature. However, which scenery is the crown? Perhaps, it is better to wait and see than to meditate! Wind, passing by; It is raining; Flowers, blooming; Grass, swaying.

The wind is flying; It's raining lightly. The wind blows over the earth and everything on the earth wakes up.

Rain falls on the earth, and everything on the earth is full. Spring breeze and spring rain are in full swing under the guidance of spring.

Spring flowers and spring grass create a beautiful scene under the caress of spring. Flowers create splendor and fragrance; The grass gives people a quiet and elegant feeling.

This wind and rain sketch is fresh and lively enough. The dark night hangs down, covered with stars and decorated with endless gems.

Stars, sparkling; Moon, be quiet. The stars give off colorful light, and the moon casts a Yin Hui.

Bright and dazzling stars shine in the dark, but there is no lack of purity. Yin Hui, sown by the moon, pours into the clear lake.

The lake glowed with a faint silver light, reflecting the jade plate in the sky. It looks elegant and fresh, but there is no lack of brilliance. This "Sky, Blue Star and Moon on Langya Lake" is pure and elegant enough.

The rain stopped, leaving only a few clouds in the blue sky. The sun came out, bright and bright, reflecting the blue sky and white clouds, which was particularly beautiful.

However, when the color bridge was built in the west, everything was eclipsed in front of it. The rainbow bridge is so gorgeous and slightly glowing. Red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue and purple shine on each other in the sun, emitting brilliant brilliance.

This brilliant blue sky and bright rainbow cloud picture is gorgeous and soft enough. How beautiful! The beautiful scenery is fascinating and intoxicating

These beautiful scenery have extraordinary charm and attract people. So what kind of scenery is the most beautiful? It's actually hard to choose.

Because all kinds of scenery have their own advantages and disadvantages. Elegant, casual, gorgeous and beautiful, together show a beautiful face and charming demeanor.

So natural scenery is the crown! Chapter 2: The majestic green hills, the vast blue sea and the deep and broad blue sky are fascinating natural scenery. Yue Wumu, who drinks Huanglong, Wen Tianxiang, who is famous in the history of Qing Dynasty, and Su Dongpo, who are both excellent in poetry and prose, are all dazzling cultural landscapes.

Historical Records, Li Sao Wu Yun, Preface to Lanting and Poems of Taibai are profound and mysterious spiritual landscapes. The world is full of wonders, and all beings are crouching tiger, hidden dragon.

Colorful natural scenery, dazzling cultural scenery and unfathomable spiritual scenery are really "all kinds of red and purple contend for the wild". However, in this world of "flowers are more and more attractive", instead of "how can I tell, through all these clouds?" We should be "not afraid of clouds covering our eyes", be proud of the majestic Mount Tai, the precipitous Mount Lushan and the beautiful Emei, bully the weak and fear the hard, cross the river into the sea, dare to challenge ourselves and shout out our calm, powerful, sonorous and beautiful voice: I am a landscape.

If you write wisely, you can't escape from the corpses everywhere; Han Xin seeks more, and it inevitably rains but it pours; Zi Xu is good, but he can't escape the neck knife; Qu Yuan is loyal, and it is inevitable that his body will sink. Yue Wumu is clever and brave, but it's a pity that he didn't give full play to his talents. Their tragic experience gives people a feeling of "but before he could conquer, he was already dead, and the heroes cried on their coats". Although they failed, they are also rare and beautiful scenery, showing the world experiences and lessons.

Sunshine is always after the storm. How can you see the rainbow without experiencing the storm? Wuxiang Hou strategized and won thousands of miles; Zhang Zifang learned a lot, and Wen Tao was good at martial arts.

Zhao Zilong shot Cao Bing with a silver gun on Changbanpo, and Zhang Yide roared and hissed in front of Dangyang Bridge, making Beikou lose his soul. Zhuge Liang in the valley above stunned Sima Yi with a fire, and Lu Boyan was blinded by a pile of stones in five villages and towns beside the fish belly. Their success makes people have a heroic spirit of "except the king's affairs in the world, making a name for themselves before and after death".

Falling red is a landscape, "falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more"; Lotus is a kind of landscape, "The lotus leaves are infinitely blue the next day, and the lotus flowers reflect different colors in the sun"; I am a landscape, the world has changed because of me, and the world is proud of it. Appreciating the beautiful scenery of nature, the gauze-like fog gradually dispersed in the morning. With the first ray of sunshine in the morning, we drove to Sanqingzhai Natural Scenic Area, which is known as "the suspected dinosaur turned over this mountain".

I stared at the scenery outside the window all the way. The trees on the roadside are arranged neatly, like an army being inspected, showing the temperament of a soldier, while the outline of the distant mountain is still hazy, leaving only a vague silhouette in the fog. Seeing this scene reminds me of the mountains in ink painting, and the hazy beauty is vividly described by the painter.

After a muddy but muddy journey, we came to the foot of the mountain. On this muddy roadside, the water from the reservoir slowly flows out, and the crystal clear water keeps pace with each other, flowing happily, like that cheerful music.

With this comfort and tranquility, we began to climb the mountain, but the gurgling sound of running water still lingered in our ears for a long time ... When we set foot on the thorny mountain road, we were not interested in seeing the scenery on both sides, but only focused on walking. On the winding and rugged road, there are stones of different shapes and naturally growing plants under our feet, and there is no obvious road at all. At this time, the person who walked in front has walked out of a narrow road deeply and shallowly. Then I thought of what Mr. Lu Xun wrote in Hometown. "In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. "

After climbing a certain distance, a continuous mountain came into view, and the mountains were shrouded in fog, which seemed mysterious and beautiful. Another nap, and the scenery in my eyes changed a lot.

Looking at the mountain again, the fog has gradually receded, and a mountain shaped like the word "mountain" is clearly and truly presented in front of us. At this time, we feel closer to nature and have to admire the ingenuity of nature. Everything is natural, and everything is the true beauty presented by nature. Let the mood.