The couplet is: fly to the sky, fly to the sky, earth-shattering, reveal the secret of dragon-cutting.

Couplet: Flying in the sky, flying in the air, earth-shattering, revealing a trick to cut the dragon.

1. Tian Fei Langkong uses metaphorical rhetoric to enhance the vividness and vividness of the work and stimulate the readers' rich imagination.

2. Only a group of diving movements, the reporter used seven metaphors, including similes and metaphors, such as "turning three times in the air like a whirlwind", "like a light and straight arrow" is a simile, "Lv Wei flew into the air with a gentle pedal" and "the fairy falling from the sky" is a metaphor. The famous mural "Flying" in Dunhuang painted a flying fairy, while the reporter used the title "Flying" to describe a diving girl as beautiful as a fairy. Wonderful metaphors not only increase the literary grace of close-ups, but also make the movements more visible and sensible.

3. "Flying in the Sky" is a special report, published in Guangming Daily1982165438+1October 25th, written by Fan. Only a close-up of more than 540 words. The reporter skillfully used more than 100 verbs, which can be called a classic news model for more than 30 years. Reading it again today, I still feel that the game is as full of energy and so real and touching as it happened yesterday. Not only let us know the news, but also have aesthetic value, so the work won the first prize of national good news.

She stood in front of the 10 meter high platform, calm and elegant, with white clouds floating overhead and birds passing by her. The movements of white clouds and birds show the tranquility and elegance of Lv Wei before taking off. )

2. In an instant, her slender and wonderful body seemed to be lifted by the air, lined with blue sky and white clouds, just like "flying" in Dunhuang paintings. (Using metaphor, vividly wrote the beauty of Lv Wei's soaring)

3. Several strings of white bubbles hugged the fairy who fell from the sky, but the quartet was quietly shocked. (personification, blending with water when writing water, highlighting small splash; The fairy echoed the description at the beginning of the jump and responded to the topic)

Flying in the air? The first paragraph is about the elegance and tranquility of Lv Wei before takeoff. Its function is to quickly convey the nervousness before the critical moment to readers, create an atmosphere of tension and expectation, attract readers and pave the way for the wonderful diving of Lv Wei below.

Pushing the whole feature film to a climax will also highlight the theme of athletes' struggle for glory for the motherland.

Original text:

She stood in front of the 10-meter-high platform, calm and elegant, with white clouds floating overhead and birds passing by her. This is the moment when the 8,000 spectators in Dhaka Dora Swimming Pool are eagerly awaiting and holding their breath.

Gently relax your arm and hold it high. I saw Lv Wei gently push them away and fly into the air. For an instant, her slender and beautiful body seemed to be held up by the air, lined with blue sky and white clouds, just like the "flying" in Dunhuang murals.

Then, she rolled forward for a week and a half, and at the same time rotated three times in the air like a whirlwind, acting like a meteor, natural and unrestrained. 1.7 seconds seems particularly generous to her, allowing her to leisurely show off the graceful lines of her body, from the fingers stretched forward to the toes stretched straight.

Before the audience could react from the dazzling, she had spread out like a light and straight arrow and "pa" into the blue waves. Several strings of white bubbles hugged the "fairy" falling from the sky, but the water in all directions was quietly surprised.

"wonderful! Wonderful! " A foreign reporter standing next to us jumped up. At this time, the whole swimming pool was boiling. The sober audience expressed their sincere appreciation for their favorite athletes with deafening applause and cheers.

Lv Wei's wonderful performance pushed the atmosphere of the swimming pool to a climax. Her action "5 136" made several judges score 9.5 points.

This 16-year-old girl from China won the gold medal.

When an Indian audience learned that this girl was the youngest rookie in China diving training team, they were amazed. He said: "Great, you have too many talents in China!"