How to write a group photo?

When writing a character article, sometimes it is necessary to describe more than one object, but a group, which requires group image description. The description of group image should skillfully unite a group of people through the artistic organization of materials, thus reflecting their respective ideological outlook and personality characteristics.

In order to achieve the goal of reflecting people's group image, we should pay attention to the following points when optimizing the material combination:

1, cleverly set the "Yan Wen". People have eyes, and so do articles. The literary eye refers to the connection point of the article's conception. It is an ever-changing role, which controls the changes at the beginning and end of the article. To write group portraits, it is necessary to skillfully set up a "literary eye" to stick the characters together like adhesive.

2. Grasp the clues that bind all the characters. Writing a group of characters can neither describe them in detail one by one, which makes the article bloated and cumbersome, nor just talk in general terms, which makes people unable to obtain specific images. So it is necessary to find a clue to connect all the characters in series.

3. Prioritize and prioritize. Do people occupy the same position in the article when writing group photos? That's not true. As the saying goes, "Red flowers need green leaves, and green leaves are redder." In a group of people, some are the main characters in the article, and some are the secondary characters in the article. Who has the final say is determined according to the needs of the central idea of the article, and the secondary characters always set off the main characters.

4, point and surface combination. Describing group images is not a simple addition of several images, but a somewhat comprehensive description. Groups should be displayed on the writing surface, typical characters should be highlighted on the writing point, and groups should be reflected through the description of typical characters. If there is no overall description and overall narrative, it will not give people the impression of "group portrait" On the other hand, if there is no description of typical characters, it will become abstract and empty, lacking appeal.

Do people occupy the same position in the article when writing group photos? That's not true. In a group of people, some play the leading role in the article, and some play the supporting role in the article. It is decided according to the need to express the central idea of the article.

The human body is supported by the skeleton, and so is the article. If the central idea of the article is compared to "soul" and the material is compared to "flesh and blood", then the structure is the "skeleton" of soul and flesh and blood.

Therefore, students should further consider its structure after they have the materials about people.

Do you want to write a composition?

After the meal

My father is a very busy man, because he is the director of Nanjing Education Bureau, and he is often too busy to go home for dinner. It is rare to have dinner at home today, and the whole family is very happy. Everyone talked and laughed while eating, which was very lively.

After dinner, grandma began to clean up the dishes and chopsticks. Everyone says there are many old sayings, but my grandmother doesn't like nagging. She is diligent. After dinner, she quickly cleared the table, put the dishes in the pool, turned on the tap, added some "white cat" detergent and washed the bowl. Mom quickly mopped the floor and the room was cleaned quickly. I am a lazy boy. My first "task" after dinner is to run to my room and watch TV. Just after watching the cartoon today, I heard my mother calling me again and again in the living room: "Xiao Yong, stop watching TV and do your homework!" "My mouth muttered, reluctantly walked slowly to the table and began to do my homework.

The busiest is my father. After dinner, he put down his bowl and sat by the telephone. Talking about work with others endlessly. I saw him holding headphones in his left hand and recording in his right hand, as if he could not finish it 24 hours a day.

"Jingle bell ..." The doorbell rang and an old man came in. He is a tall man, wearing a hat and a black coat. His hair under the brim of his hat has turned gray and his face is covered with wrinkles. He is still carrying a big bag in his hand. Seeing my father, I nodded and greeted him with a smile: "Hello, Director Zhang! Let me ask you a favor ... "Dad put down the receiver and turned to him gently. "What can I do for you? Please sit down and say. " "The salary grade of our school left me behind. I am an old teacher and ready to retire. Why did you leave me alone? You are the director, give a comment. " I heard some of their conversations intermittently and thought: Dad is a director, how can he manage every school well? This man is really.

After a while, I heard the old teacher say, "Director, please accept these supplements as a token of my appreciation!" " The old man said, putting the bag on the table. Dad patiently said to him, "I must take a closer look at your salary." You have to take it back. First of all, we are all party member. Second, I can't help you if I receive something. Hearing this, the old man quickly pushed away his father's hand and said, "No, you can have it! """no! No, old comrades. "Dad said, and picked up the gift to the old man. The old man put things on the table again. Finally, my father took the gift in his left hand and the old man in his right hand. When he saw him go downstairs, he was still talking about something.

Looking at the back of the old man, I remembered a paragraph written by my father beside the telephone at home: "It is the party's requirement for cadres and my code of conduct not to accept any gifts." Please don't embarrass my mother, wife and children. "Yes, that's what dad said and did the same.

In short, if you want to write a good composition about family life after dinner, the most important thing is to observe carefully. In this composition, the author noticed the characteristics of his family and wrote the images of all the characters. There are four people in the family, mainly dad, and "I" is one of them, but he doesn't write in detail, but he has his own personality characteristics-"little slacker" with strong language expression.

This should be ... =. =