Observation method of writing composition

1. The observation method of Chinese writing is a little more urgent.

I have seen a version:

1. Learn to follow up

Follow-up observation (also called follow-up observation) means continuous, repeated and repeated observation of something in life or a person around you (this observation is generally not once) This is the initial stage of learning to observe and form the habit of paying attention to life.

6. Learn to observe directionally

Directional observation (which can also be called focused observation) is to observe many people or things in life in a directional, selective and focused way, so as to obtain specific and detailed composition materials. This is the second stage after "follow-up observation", learning to observe and developing the habit of paying attention to life.

13. Learn to observe at random

Random observation is to observe at any time and place in your own life in the face of a colorful world, and capture people, things, scenery in every corner of your life in time, as well as events that you accidentally see, hear and think of. 2. composition fixed-point observation method 3 words

When we observe things, we call the position where we stand a foothold. Fixed-point observation method is to fix the foothold and carry out observation in an orderly manner, that is, from near to far or from far to near, from high to low or from low to high, from left to right or from right to left, etc. When observing, the author's foothold can never change and must be fixed at a basic point. Therefore, using fixed-point observation method, First of all, we should pay attention to choosing a good observation position. Photographers take pictures, painters paint, choose lenses and depict objects, all of which pay great attention to the choice of a foothold. The choice of a foothold is often related to the success or failure of a photo or a picture. The same is true for writing an article. "When viewed from the side of a mountain, the distance is different." The same thing is expressed in different standpoints, and the "orientation" and "angle" of observation are different. The effect of expression is very different. Choosing the most ideal foothold according to the characteristics of things and the needs of observation is the primary problem of whether the fixed-point observation can get good results. For example, * * *' s "Qinyuanchun Changsha" vividly shows the vibrant southern autumn scenery. One of the important reasons why the author can express his pride in autumn scenery and seize their abundant business from the vast scenery is that he successfully uses the fixed-point observation method. Secondly, Fixed-point observation must be carried out in a certain order. Because all kinds of scenery are in a certain spatial position, it is impossible for us to make many scenery come into view together when observing, and it is impossible to describe many scenery at the same time when expressing. When observing, we should pay attention to a reasonable observation order. The advantage of fixed-point observation is that the foothold is fixed, and it is easier to concentrate observation and reach a certain depth. Especially in the observation of specific scenery at a certain place, a certain point and a certain side, It is easy to grasp the sound, facial expression and morphological characteristics of things. In fact, in writing, the author's observation is always selected for the purpose of expression. The problem is how to make the observation point reasonable and ingenious to meet the purpose of writing. 3. Write a composition on natural observation (24 words)

Cactus is a desert plant, and its tenacious vitality makes me admire it. Let's take a look at its introduction!

The whole body of cactus is dark green. If you look closely, you will find clusters of small white thorns on its oval thick stems. This little thorn is its leaf. If it pricks you, you will be "ouch" for a while. This may be a weapon for it to protect itself.

Although the cactus is ugly in appearance, it is better than Bai Mudan if it is opened, as if it is decorating itself. One after another, the small flowers as white as jade also give off a fragrance, which really makes people want to pick one. But at this time, the small thorn will remind you that "only watch, no hands!"

Although the flowering period of cactus is very short, it will wither after only one day, but its life is very vigorous. No matter whether it is "scorching in the sun" in summer, as long as it is planted in the soil, it will be fine if it is left unattended for a few days. Even in the winter when it is "freezing and snowing", it will not change color and grow tenaciously.

cactus is a cactus cactus, which is a general term for the spherical species of cactus plants. It is not only varied and complicated, but also unique and colorful. It is a pearl in a hundred gardens.

In terms of taste, you can cultivate some kinds of cactus, such as Jinhu, Fei Peony, Dragon Ball and Moon Palace. However, those ordinary cactus also have a "taste". They have strong habits and are easy to cultivate. Flower pots, clay pots, porcelain pots, purple sand pots and plastic pots can all be used, and the fertilizer is the residue of plant ash, Taomi water and yogurt. I hope you don't underestimate the cactus. Although the variety is ordinary, the flowers are still beautiful and won't disappoint. However, what makes people sigh is not the beautiful flower season of cactus, but the breeding period of its big ball and small ball. Watching those small balls adsorbed on the mother gradually change from small to large, the deep maternal love is also very emotional. When the melons are ripe, these young balls will leave their mother's body and open up their own world. Although they are silent, those who like to plant cactus will certainly not turn a blind eye to all this (it's just that I am stupid and can't describe them). A horizontal couplet is depicted as follows: the baby falls to the earth. I think it's not only vivid, but also full of pun and fun.

haha, there are actually many varieties of cactus, but I can't introduce them one by one here. 4. What observation methods do you know about composition?

Learn to choose materials according to the characteristics of the topic, know how to judge the topic, and know that there is a "selection" process in selecting materials, but when the topic of composition is in front of you, you don't know where to start and where to choose.

This phenomenon is quite common among students. This requires students to master the ability to choose materials according to the characteristics of the topic.

(1) For topics that define the center, such as "Remember a person who is not afraid of difficulties and makes progress": First, we should accurately and profoundly understand the meaning of key words that reveal the center in the topic, and make clear what is meant by "not afraid of difficulties and making progress"; Then, according to the center defined in the topic, consider the writing objects (3~5) and determine the writing objects; Then, collect materials extensively (arrange 3~5), and select the best composition materials that can best express this center. (2) For topics that do not directly define the center, but define the center scope, such as My Relatives: First, we must find out how big the scope of the central idea is, who are our "relatives", who are not "relatives" better than relatives, and what qualities and characteristics these "relatives" have, and determine the writing object and the central idea to be expressed; Then, according to the limited scope of the topic, I extensively recall what materials I have to express the central idea within this scope; Finally, choose the best and most convincing material to write from the many materials that come to mind.

(3) For topics that have nothing to do with the center at all, but only limited the scope of material selection, such as "Remember a thing between mom and dad": First of all, think about what materials can be written within the limited scope of the topic, that is, what happened between mom and dad; Then think further, what is the meaning of each material; Finally, discard the materials that are meaningless or can't determine the central idea, and choose a material with the clearest understanding and deepest experience from the materials that are meaningful and can determine the center. 5. Write a composition about autumn by fixed-point observation. 3 words

Golden autumn

Time keeps flowing forward, and the weather gradually cools down, and the noisy cicada is blown away by autumn, instead of it, it is the plaintive cry of crickets in the slate cracks under the steps at night. Ah! That lovely autumn has finally come.

Autumn is more prosperous than spring. Spring with bright flowers and trees is beautiful, but the fruitful autumn colors reveal the joy of harvest. Autumn is more colorful than summer. Although the summer with dense branches and leaves is charming, the autumn colors with golden leaves and trees are more refreshing and pleasant. Autumn is more vibrant than winter. Snow-covered winter is lovely, but the golden autumn with fragrant melons and fruits is more colorful. Autumn has come to the Woods. From a distance, yellow leaves fall like golden butterflies in pairs. They are tired of flying and fall on my shoulders, head and feet. Brought my thoughts from green summer to golden autumn. As soon as I turned around, another peach leaf fell beside me. I bent down to pick it up, held it in my hand and studied it carefully. What a special autumn leaf! It has not come yet, and it has completely faded green, still emitting a strong aroma. Autumn came to the orchard, persimmon bent down and bowed, and the branches were about to break. Sister Litchi was too fat and broke her clothes, revealing a bulging and white belly. Huge apples are covered with branches, showing sweet smiles, either shy or bold. Autumn girl came to the farmland, corn was happy, it specially changed a new golden dress, grinning, revealing golden teeth; In order to make themselves more beautiful, tomatoes put lipstick on their faces; The excitement of the potato may be too high, which broke its green mouth and exposed its yellow tongue. Autumn came to the garden, which became a paradise for chrysanthemums. They may like this heavy gold and choose to bloom their beauty in autumn. There are so many colors of chrysanthemums: yellow, pink and white. . The big flowers and curly petals are like a little girl with curly hair. Wandering around the chrysanthemum garden or enjoying a pot of colorful chrysanthemums alone, slowly intoxicated by that fragrance. Autumn brings golden color to the earth and cotton-like clouds to the blue sky. Autumn wind, as cool as water, dyed the world yellow with a chill.

I like this crisp autumn season!

I like autumn when there are simple chrysanthemums with flowers and leaves.

I like this unique and brilliant autumn scenery. 6. Fourth-grade composition training

[Fourth-grade composition training] Fourth-grade composition training topics: 1. Summer vacation travel notes, introducing the natural scenery or tourist attractions that impressed me the most during my summer vacation; 2. Observation diaries: such as wonderful words; 3. Colorful clouds; 4. Continuing to write fairy tales; 5. Dialogue with stationery. Stationery fairy tales 6. My favorite animals 7. Tour guide words 1. Bird Fossil Park 8. Tour guide words 2. World Heritage 9. Picture composition: Better than relatives 1. A letter to my parents 12. My growing story 1. Kindergarten 13. My growing story 2. Primary school 14. Imaginary composition, I think. 15. Winter. My mother and I came to Jiangcheng to watch the lights and have composition training in the fourth grade. The first thing that caught my eye was three lifelike "yellow cranes", one of which was flying around in the arc light. Every time they flew to the finish line, a group of "yellow cranes" flew out. They had white feathers, some black stripes on their wings and "a little red" on their heads. Some held their heads high, as if enjoying the night scene with flashing lights. Some fly high, as if to fly to the Yellow Crane Tower. Seeing these pretty yellow cranes, I can't help but think of Cui Hao's poem: "where long ago a yellow crane bore a sage to heaven, nothing is left now but the Yellow Crane Terrace, the yellow crane never revisited earth, and white clouds are flying without him for ever ……". Looking from the railing, the rolling Yangtze River water flows under your feet, and the colorful lanterns dress up the boats on the river very beautifully. These boats fluctuate with the river, and the lanterns on them keep flashing, colorful and colorful. The majestic Yangtze River Bridge, decorated with yellow colored lights, crosses the Yangtze River like a dragon. The steel beam on the Qing Chuan Bridge, decorated with colorful colored lights, hangs like a rainbow in the deep blue night sky, which makes people daydream. The composition training for the fourth grade in primary school. The TV tower standing on Guishan is not to be outdone, and it is also covered with colored armor, as if it were a rocket waiting for the sky. The scenery on the Bund is charming and unforgettable. During the summer vacation. I went to visit the East Lake in Shaoxing, China. The East Lake is beautiful. There are sparkling ripples on the crystal clear lake, and there are lotus leaves next to it. The big green lotus leaves set off the brilliant red lotus next to it. It's really a beautiful lotus leaf, and the lotus flowers reflect the sun in a different way! There are some ducks playing on the lake. What a harmonious scene! We took the Wupeng boat and rippled on the lake. When the boat drove to Taogong Cave, I gave a cry and heard a clear echo. I came to the second cave again: Xiantao Cave, the roof of which was shaped like a peach. The old man who sailed said that the roof of Xiantao Cave was a flat peach thrown from the sky when the Monkey King, the great sage of Qitian, made a scene in the Heavenly Palace. Finally, we came to the horn hole, and the wall of the horn hole showed blue and purple lines, colorful! After enjoying the East Lake, we came to a bush next to it. There were many flowers and plants in the bush. What a colorful scene! I love East Lake! How to write travel notes: 1. Shift observation. When we visit a scenic spot, we always watch it in different positions along a certain route, and make a detailed observation of the whole or part of the scenic spot. We usually call this observation shift observation. It is very important for writing to develop the habit of shift observation, and we must grasp the following points: 1. We must have a clear conversion order, that is, a certain tour route. For example, Beijing is sunny in October. One day. The cool autumn wind sent us to Jingshan Park. When we walked into the park gate and looked up, the red columns and yellow tiles of Wanchun Pavilion on the top of the mountain looked like a beautiful picture against the dense trees. At the foot of the mountain was a big flower bed, and the blooming chrysanthemums were colorful and varied like holiday fireworks. We came to the orchard along the mountain road. There were many kinds of fruit trees here. Begonia shook its round face and smiled at you. The big red apples are like fat dolls crowded together, pulling open the green leaves and looking out with a smile; The golden persimmon bent the branches. After leaving the orchard, we walked up the steps along the mountain road paved with bluestone and came to Wanchun Pavilion. Looking up, we could see the beautiful Beijing city. We used the method of "moving for a change" to analyze the mountaineering process: the flower beds at the foot of the mountain were colorful → the orchards on the roadside were fruitful → Wanchun Pavilion looked out and had a beautiful panoramic view. Exercise ① The way from your home to school, You are familiar with it. Now, please draw a "traffic map" which mainly indicates the direction of the school and your home, including the main streets, main buildings and natural and cultural places (such as rivers and squares). Please write a paragraph under the "traffic map" to describe how to get from your home to school and how to see more landscapes, and at the same time describe the main characteristics of these landscapes: ② Suppose you make an appointment with a friend. But he has never been to your school. Now, please tell him in the simplest terms how to find your classroom as soon as you enter your school gate. Write it down as follows: 2. Be good at choosing the angle of observation. For example, when we left the orchard, we walked up the steps along the mountain road paved with bluestones and came to Wanchun Pavilion. Looking up, we could have a panoramic view of the beautiful Beijing. Looking west. Beihai Gong.