On August 28th, 1937, Japanese invaders bombed Shanghai South Railway Station.

First, understand the job requirements.

The photo below is 1937.

Eighth year

28 th month

Japanese invaders bombed Shanghai South Railway Station and were photographed by reporters. Look at the photos carefully and think about why the child is crying. Where are his parents? What could have happened then? What is the future fate of this lonely child? Contact the people and scenes in the photo and write down what you see and think. The content should be specific, the sentences should be fluent and express your true feelings.

Second, fixed-point practice methods

How cruel war is-it will make some people lose their lives, make some people displaced, and cause havoc to civilization, and children in war are even more unfortunate. The photo in front of us is about war and children in war. Children, do you know what happened to children in the war?

Please carefully observe this photo about the war and write this composition carefully around the theme of "accusing the war of aggression and loving peace"!

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Look for information and understand the historical background.

Most students were born more than half a century after the war and lacked understanding of the war. Therefore, this exercise allows us to review history, collect information and pictures about this war and crimes committed by Japanese aggressors, read books and movies about War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, broaden our horizons, enhance our perceptual knowledge of this war, and create conditions for better completion of this exercise.

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Observe the photos in an orderly way around the subject.

To watch this war photo, we should grasp the main body of the photo-the crying child in the photo and make a comprehensive and detailed observation in a certain order. How to observe?

First of all, grasp the main part of the photo and pay attention to the main information conveyed by the photo. This photo caught the attention of the boy sitting on the ground crying: he cried sadly and his isolation was worrying.

Then around this central figure, according to the order from subject to environment and from near to far, watch all parts of the photo one by one and make a comprehensive and detailed observation.

You see, the boy is sitting curled up in the middle of the bombed railway tracks, surrounded by the bombed railway station. The platform building collapsed, the steel frame was crumbling, and the wall in the distance was broken. It was miserable ... from near to far, from people and things, let's talk about 60.

This photo taken many years ago has a clear and profound understanding: this photo of war trauma reveals the bloody crimes committed by the invading army in China!

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Expand your imagination and explore the cause and effect.

This photo is only a specific scene at a certain historical moment, but it is not the whole history. We can't see the whole picture of how the invaders bombed and slaughtered innocent people. Therefore, students must open their hearts, boldly imagine and explore the cause and effect. According to the people and scenery photographed in the photo, imagine the story related to the photo: How did the child in the photo get to this place? Why is he crying? What about his home? What about his parents? Why is this place empty? Is anybody there? What are the houses, overpasses and railways in the photos? Can this child survive? What is his future fate? Think it over first, then say it out, and then write it down.

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Describe in detail and express your true feelings.

Students should focus on children when writing, whether from the perspective of children or from our perspective, and set off the tragic situation and fate of children with bleak scenery. Homework should be written in a certain order, you can write people first and then scenery; You can also write down the content of the photo first and then imagine what might happen before; Finally, imagine the future fate of children.

The content should be concrete and vivid, and truly reproduce the tragic scenes of those wars. You can use various expressions, and between the lines, you should reveal hatred for the invaders, sympathy for children, love and yearning for peace.

Third, the coach's idea of practicing.

Thinking 1

-The exercise begins with a photo description, the middle subject leads to rich and reasonable imagination, and the end points to the center (don't forget the national humiliation and revitalize China! )。

Idea 2

-At the beginning of the exercise, the background of the times (time and historical events) is pointed out, the middle subject reproduces the specific scene of that year, and at the end, it gives advice to the initiator of the war!

Idea 3

-homework flashback at the beginning, write "I" current living conditions; Secondly, recall my miserable childhood; Then, describe a new old man who took in "me"; Finally, describe the happy life after liberation and my call for peace.

Fourth, read excellent examples.

Example 1

a photo

Xiao Wei

When I held this photo, I was filled with emotion. When I was a child, I always heard my mother repeat this sentence: "The Japanese are so bad that they have lost their humanity!" (point out time and historical events. )

When I saw this photo, I saw the scene at that time. This is the diagram of 1937.

Eighth year

28 th month

The Japanese aggressor troops bombed Shanghai South Railway Station and were photographed by reporters.

A poor child, sitting in a pile of ruins, covered his face with dirty hands and cried sadly. The prosperity around him turned into ruins in an instant. He was very sad-because he lost his home and his closest relative, he silently shouted: "Dad … Mom … where are you …" He looked around, looked at the brick with confused eyes, and moved it with immature hands: "Mom … Mom, don't leave me!" "There is no hope in his eyes. If he is sensible, he will definitely think: Why, my family, my relatives? Yes! Where did the little boy's relatives go? It turned out that when the Japanese plane bombed, the mother used her whole body to protect her child, and unfortunately she was killed and the child survived. Later, he was seen by a photographer and sent to an orphanage. Describe the benefits of action and psychology properly. )

At this time, I remembered what my mother said to me: "The Japanese are so bad that bad gains and losses lose humanity!" " "Yes, I always feel that the Japanese have no children and relatives? Don't they know the sense of crisis and the fear of losing loved ones? Did they just kill some innocent people with knives and guns? I hate Japanese invaders, they are full of blood and ambition! Now they are not like other countries: they love and embrace peace. (Express opinions and ask powerful questions. )

So far, the Japanese, led by the Japanese Prime Minister, have refused to acknowledge history and the harm they have done to other neighboring countries. They only play with fire and set themselves on fire.

Japanese, please cherish the lives of others and make your own contribution to world peace. (Finally, some suggestions are given. )

Alibaba treasure:

This paper describes the children in the film in detail, flying the wings of imagination, recreating the scene at that time, making people cry, describing the evil of war and looking forward to peace. The beginning clearly points out the background of the times, and the end gives advice to the initiator of the war; The rhetorical questions and exclamations in this paper express strong feelings.

Example 2

Lucky war orphans

Wangmingda

Jason, have you seen the photo in this newspaper? Mr. William asked his son with black hair and eyes. The son shook his head and looked at his father doubtfully.

"Look carefully, who does this child look like?"

Young Jason looked at the yellow newspaper full of Chinese characters and looked puzzled. "Who is this child who is sitting in the middle of the ruined railroad tracks and is covered in blood and crying? Dad asked, he must be someone I know. But I have no such friends. Maybe it's my mother's relative. My father once told me that my mother is from China. She's dead. I have never heard my father say that I still have relatives in China. "

"Dad, who is this? I don't know him. Is it from mom's house? " Jason asked.

"Son, when you grow up, it's time for me to tell you the truth." Mr. William looks very miserable. Obviously, he made such a decision after some ideological struggle.

"Dad, what are you going to tell me?" Jason asked in great surprise.

"Son, the child in the newspaper photo is you."

Jason turned pale and trembled all over. "no! Impossible! "

"He is you! Please listen to me! " Mr. William looks calm.

"You are a child of China, and your parents are from China. They are at 1937.

Eighth year

28 th month

Japan bombed Shanghai and was killed. You are a survivor of the explosion. My wife and children will leave war-torn Shanghai for Nanjing by bus. Unfortunately, they also died in that bombing. I was in Shanghai at that time. I didn't accompany them to the station because I had something to deal with, so I escaped the disaster. Later, I saw the photos published in the newspaper, and finally got in touch with the newspaper and adopted you from the newspaper. Your name was Wang Zhenhua, and you were only three years old. I couldn't find your date of birth, so I filled in 8.

28 th month

Today is your birthday ... "Mr. William's face became very heavy and he stopped suddenly.

At this time, Jason's eyes have been blurred by tears.

"I finally took you out of Shanghai and came to Hong Kong ... Jason, now that you have grown up and graduated from college, it's time to know the truth."

"Dad, thank you for telling me the truth! One day, I must go back to China and Shanghai. I want to contribute to the people of China not being bullied by others. " Jason said very firmly.

Alibaba Treasure: Orphans in the war can be rescued, stay away from the war and grow up smoothly. This is really a blessing in disguise. This kind of imagination is bold and reasonable, and it is full of the author's deep sympathy for the compatriots who suffered in the war. The author tells the story in the way of character dialogue, which promotes the development of the plot, makes the narrative clear, uses the language accurately and is very vivid.

Example 3

A letter from heaven

Qin xiaotian

Dear children:

Hello!

My name is Fulai, and I have been in 1937.

Eighth year

September 29(th)

Japan bid farewell to this world and is now in heaven. I am the little boy crying in the photo. (identify the author)

Seventy years have passed, but I will never forget that scene. 1937

Eighth year

At the beginning of the month, it was said that the Japanese were going to occupy Shanghai. eight

28 th month

In April, my family of four prepared to take a train to my grandparents' home in the countryside to take refuge. The Japanese plane is coming, and I don't want to walk to the railway station like this. I only heard a few loud bangs. Eyes flashing with white light, ears buzzing, as if pushed by some force, I don't know anything. The cause and process of the event. )

I don't know how long it took to open my eyes. I saw the railway station gone, the railway became like a twist, the house fell down, the overpass fell down, my parents disappeared, my brother disappeared ... There were many people under the brick, some lost their arms, some lost their legs, some were bleeding, some were moaning ... I was scared to death and cried and said, "Dad-"I thought: They must have been blown up and buried under the rubble. I was so sad that I kept crying and shouting ... (recreate the tragic scene of the war. )

Later, someone carried me into a house, where people in white clothes came and went, and people with blurred blood were lying on the bed. I'm hungry and lonely, my body is burning and dizzy, and I seem to weigh a thousand pounds. In this way, after I was in a coma for a day and a night, I never woke up and died in the shouts of people. What a terrible war! Young life was taken away! )

Son, more than 70 years have passed, and I have been watching our motherland from the sky. Now, our motherland is strong, and no one dares to invade our motherland anymore. How happy your lives are. Children, please remember that I was deprived of my young life by the invaders, remember the humiliating history of our motherland, study hard and work hard to make our motherland stronger! If you fall behind, you will be beaten. If you really want to fight. )

Wish the children.

Learn and progress!

Fulai

four

20th of this month

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Alibaba treasure:

The little author is novel and unique in the form of letters. The full text is imaginative, rich and reasonable, and describes the disaster brought by war and the great harm brought by Japanese aggression to China. The author's last appeal is thought-provoking

V. Small basket of materials

The attention of the public has deeply touched the twists and turns, and the heart is dying, and the people are in trouble.

Heavy casualties, inhumanity, courage, sadness and unity, shocking people.

Life-and-death struggle, lack of materials, heavy blockade, wading through mountains and rivers, fresh in my memory, reborn from the ashes, and new students are household names.

The whole country is not far from jubilation, and it is famous at home and abroad. The blood spilled will always be remembered in history.

War and smoke, indomitable, magnificent mountains and rivers, dedicated to saving lives, towards one national disaster after another.

Fight bloody battles without hesitation. Swallowing mountains and rivers was rampant for a while.

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From 193 1

"Nine years"

September 18 "to 1945.

Japan was defeated and surrendered in, Japan 14.

In the war of aggression against China in, countless inhuman war crimes were committed, resulting in a loss of 3,500 yuan for China.

Ten thousand casualties, 1000.

The direct loss exceeds 10 billion USD, 5000.

Indirect losses of more than one billion dollars.

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During the War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression period, the Japanese aggressor troops carried out the "Three Lights" policy in the anti-Japanese base areas. In Huoxian County, Shanxi Province alone, the Japanese army swept 1025 into the base area.

Second, burned down the house.

, kill 1204.

People. Due to the frequent and large-scale sweeping, nibbling and cruel "Three Lights" policy of the Japanese army, 194 1

In, the population of the base area changed from 1.

Drop to 5000

Under ten thousand.

△ 1937 8

June 26

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Several Japanese planes circled over Shanghai South Railway Station. The bomb fell from the sky and the loud explosion was deafening. The explosion caused smoke and flames. ...