The results came out, and the composition was described in detail.

1. Write a composition on the topic of "After the results come out", describe the scenery and feel happy. The school had its first monthly exam.

The whole school is immersed in a happy and tense world. Alas, I finally finished the exam.

The students are as happy as if they had taken stimulants, let alone how happy they are. Although I finished the exam, I was still uneasy and didn't know how it went.

The body relaxed, but the heart failed to relax. In this way, on the day of handing out the test paper, I sat in the classroom with a praying heart waiting for the report card. When the teacher handed out the grades, I was stupid and froze for a while. I can't see out of the window, as if time is still, I can't hear any sound and I can't see anything. All I can think about is how to face my mother at home. My grades have dropped rapidly, and my mother will be very disappointed. At this time, I despair of myself.

What should come will always come, and what should be faced will always be faced. I dragged my heavy body to the door and stopped. I don't have the courage to set foot in this house. I thought my mother would take care of me day after day. I didn't have the courage. But time waits for no one. It's almost 6 o'clock. If I don't go home, my mother will be anxious, so I am forced to set foot in the house. Tears soaked my eyes when my mother greeted me with a smile. When I saw a trace of disappointment in my mother's eyes, I tried my best not to cry, but I finally lost control and threw myself into my mother's arms. My considerate mother encouraged me to say, "Never mind, I didn't do well in the exam this time. It's no use trying again next time. I want to find my own mistakes and correct them, make myself better and more perfect, find the learning method that suits me best, and strive for good results in the next exam. " In this way, with the encouragement of my mother, I began to find my own shortcomings, make a study plan, and strive for good grades in the next exam.

2. A detailed description of the night when the results of the senior high school entrance examination came out.

"Written expression" is often the last item, and it is unwise for some students to spend the last few minutes in writing in a hurry. Generally speaking, there is plenty of time for the English senior high school entrance examination everywhere. Take Suzhou as an example, the English test takes 100 minutes, but the average examinee can complete the paper in 60~80 minutes. Of course, this requires candidates to work harder and think more about "written expression".

Candidates should first understand the order of voluntary admission of the Admissions Office before filling in the "Volunteer Allocation". At the time of admission, "zero volunteers" came first, and "quota allocation volunteers" came last. After the admission of "zero volunteers" and "quota allocation volunteers", they will enter the "one to fifteen volunteers" admission. The above three columns of volunteers can be filled in in the experimental demonstration high school, so candidates should not only consider their own strength, but also pay attention to their admission order when choosing these three columns of volunteers. If the candidate is admitted to a school with "quota allocation volunteers", then other volunteers will naturally fail. If the "quota allocation volunteer" is not filled in or not accepted, it will not affect the admission of other volunteers.

3. Write a detailed description of 100 words after seeing the results of the Chinese test paper. From what angle should I be a Chinese teacher? You are also speechless with this question. Is it a detailed description of the analysis of the test paper or a detailed description of a small composition on the test paper? So what are the requirements of the essay, and should you describe it in detail? The question is not clear, how to answer it? Generally, a detailed description of a person is mainly written from his appearance, language, manners, movements, psychology and other aspects. Test paper analysis, first summarize the progress of this exam, and then analyze the shortcomings in detail. Generally, it is an analysis of one problem after another. For example, a big question "word" is wrong, which can be analyzed as that the basic knowledge on weekdays is not very solid. Why did this happen? Is it subjective or objective? After the analysis, we will put forward reasonable rectification measures, that is, checking for leaks and filling gaps. In fact, the analysis of test papers can help students understand the shortcomings in repetition, which is conducive to their self-analysis and self-correction.

4. The detailed description of the composition details is the mother's inquiry after school. Dad said that he would go to bed early after finishing his homework. The teacher asked you if you knew the look in your eyes after finishing the question, and the detailed notes handed over by his friend after he got sick.

Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.

Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.

Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course they have walked together and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.

"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.

Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.

The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.

The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.

But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.

Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.

One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.

The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.

The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.

Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.

But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.

5.200-word detailed description composition "After the test paper is issued" After the test paper is issued,

The examination papers will be distributed today. How many points can I get? My heart is like fifteen buckets of water-seven ups and eight downs.

The test papers have been distributed. Oh, carelessness again, really. Especially what shouldn't be wrong is wrong. There was a question mark, but I wrote a full stop. Besides, I haven't taken the composition test this time, otherwise my grades will be even worse, because the composition is my problem, and I have to deduct three or four points every time. So I decided to finish my homework quickly in the future and leave more time for extracurricular reading to improve my reading and writing skills.

Actually, I am not satisfied with this exam, because that question can be correct, but I made a mistake because of carelessness. Alas, it is careless to use straw as a lamp.

It's hard to fight! ! ! ! ! (_)/~ ~ Bye.

6. How can there be a detailed description of the fragment or composition? About 400 words, 10 skipping competition. Today, it is a skipping competition that can improve speed and gain reputation. Everyone can resist their feelings and duel with class 5 1.

At first, President Chen shouted from class to class, hoping to come to our class quickly and slowly. Time is racing against my ideas. Soon, President Chen said, "Please gather under the big banyan tree in Class 52."

I feel like I'm playing drums. Bang bang bang.

No amount of relaxation can stop my heart. At first, the boys jumped around, and when the teacher blew the whistle, they twisted their necks like crazy cats, but in the end, they were as tired as a dog sticking out its tongue.

The teacher suddenly said, "There are still ten seconds." People are starting to freak out again.

After the dance, it's the girl's turn. I looked at the sky as if nothing had happened. But I still have to face it, so I have to walk slowly to the place where I jump rope. I looked at my cousin. She looked relaxed.

I looked at the teacher again, and he was all smiles. I thought: I must win glory for my class. I won class 5. 1.

The teacher added, "Let's try first." Just jumped a few times and then stopped.

The teacher said he was ready first, and then blew the whistle. We will show rabbits jumping around.

Jump faster and faster. Within a few minutes, my whole hand was stiff, and the rope in my hand was like a sledgehammer, pressing me hard. I really didn't have the strength to shake it.

No matter how fast I jump, I can only show the tortoise jumping method, and the more I jump, the slower I jump. The teacher suddenly blew his whistle.

This is the end. I am like a deflated balloon, and my whole body is soft.

I sighed and said, "It's finally over." The two sisters who helped me count also reported the results to Teacher Fan.

Then the teacher asked us to go to class. Be reasonable.

I finally understand a sentence now: where there is a will, there is a way.

I failed in the exam. I walked out of the examination room with a 400-word report card for my parents. I only feel that the air becomes dignified and the surrounding sounds become blurred. I've been preparing for it for a long time. Why? However, I am disappointed, disappointed, as if there is a heat flow coming out of the box. However, I can only do this. I want to talk to someone, but I don't know where to start.

Walking on the way home, looking up at the sky, the sky is still so blue, the clouds are still so white, and the birds are still so cheerful ... It seems that I am the only one who can't extricate myself from the sad atmosphere, and I have failed the exam and been criticized. Looking up at the sky, everything is a beautiful scenery, but in my eyes it seems to be a black and white painting. The scenery in front of me and the antenna are constantly interlaced, and my head is about to explode! It's sunny in front of me and rainy in my heart. My chest is blocked by something, and I can't breathe. I walked with heavy steps and staggered, but I couldn't fall to the ground. The whole portrait looks very chaotic, as if floating in the void. Come to a fork in the road, two roads can't see the end, but it's terrible. Will my life be like this one day? Be at a loss ...

8. The 800-word "character" in the composition described in detail by students is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' practice are often thousands of people, which are neither personalized nor vivid. The whole article looks dry, boring and lacking in appeal. After reading these works carefully, we will find a common problem: we often just blindly pursue the complete writing of one thing, ignoring the vivid, concrete and nuanced detail description.

Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images. Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, the characters lose their flesh and blood. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene." As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances."

The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details. In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. " The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger it" and then think deeply about the national inferiority?

Not only China writers, but also foreign writers. Like Balzac's Eugénie? Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gold-plated cross to his lips to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture to hold the cross in his hand, and this last effort killed him." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the description of details that makes the characters vivid and vivid. The characters are vivid, the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.

Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical. It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life. Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent". In the dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce coldly looked at the wandering * * *, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever. Capture the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine!