Comment on Liu's Sunrise, a junior middle school Chinese

Growing up, climbing mountains to watch the sunrise has always been a fascinating thing for me.

Cut to the chase. Point directly to the topic and lead to the object to be described.

Taste the word "charm" and point out the profound influence of sunrise on me and my yearning for sunrise.

The sunset glow has the beauty of sunset glow, and ancient poets have left many beautiful poems in this respect, such as "the smoke in the desert is straight, the long river sets the yen" and "the flag of the rising sun sets, and the wind whispers in A?vagho?a", but no matter how good the poem is, it always feels bleak. It's better to climb the steep cliff of Qifeng, or stand at the top of Haiyan, face the diffuse sky, observe the scene of a great birth in an instant, and see how fire, heat, life and light come to the world together. But for a long time, I didn't have a chance to watch the sunrise, so I could only enjoy it from books. (1) Why did the author write Sunset? )

This paper analyzes and compares the different scenes and feelings of "sunset" and "sunrise", and highlights the significance of sunrise.

The taste is set off by the "sunset" and the sunrise is rendered.

"Beauty" means that the sunset also contains beauty.

The underlined sentence quotes the poems of Wang Wei and Du Fu, trying to express the majestic scene of the sunset and arouse reverie.

Bleak is always about how I feel about the sunset.

Heine once described watching the sunrise from the broken peak:

We watched without saying a word, and the crimson ball rose in the horizon, and a hazy winter light spread. The mountains seem to be floating in a sea of white waves, and only the peaks are clearly visible, making people think that they are standing on a hill. In the middle of the flooded plain, only pieces of dry soil are exposed here or there.

The article quoted Heine, a great German poet, for his wonderful description of sunrise.

The tastes of "crimson" and "white waves" are clear, while "mountains" and "sea" give people a hazy and ethereal feeling.

Heine wrote about climbing mountains to watch the sunrise, and wrote about the characteristics of foggy scenery.

Turgenev, who is good at observing natural scenery, gave an incisive description of Hidesaku:

..... When the sun rises in the morning, there is no fire cloud that has rolled up all day, and it is surrounded by a faint rose morning light. The sun, not violent, not as hot as it is in a suffocating dry day, nor as purple-black as it was before the storm, but with bright and soft light, faintly floats from behind a long and narrow cloud, appears, and then hides in the faint purple fog around it. On both sides of the highest clouds, they shine like shiny snakes and as bright as dazzling silverware. But, look! The jumping beam moves forward again, flying upward with solemn joy, holding out a round of Asahi. ……

Turgenev described the magnificent scene of sunrise on the great plains with accurate metaphors.

Taste Turgenev carefully photographed the "Rising Sun" with close-up technology.

"Rose" and "deep purple" describe the beauty and change of colors.

The phrase "with bright and soft light" gives people a warm and soft feeling.

"Like a shiny snake" and "like dazzling silverware", the metaphor is novel and appropriate, vividly showing the dynamics of sunrise, and seeing light spirit in exquisiteness.

But the sun rises, just like the new things in life, at the moment of its initial germination. But it is not easy to be seen. If you see it, you must climb high, see far and have a keen eye. From my personal experience, the opportunity to watch the sunrise has come to me several times, and it will come true soon.

Section analysis is a transitional section connecting the preceding with the following. The author continues to elaborate on the understanding of sunrise.

Taste "self-awareness" and the transition will be natural and smooth.

Once in India. We started from Delhi, passed through Mumbai, Hyderabad, Bangalore and Cochin, arrived in Trifandun, and then took a three-hour bus ride along Coconut Tree Road to Komolin Point, the southernmost tip of India. This is a famous place to watch the sunrise. Because from here to the south pole. It is an endless, green ocean with no land in the middle. So this cloak became the first messenger to see the sun. It is not difficult for people to imagine how spectacular it would be if the magnificent sky and the vast sea rose from the night before dawn and lit the first torch. We are only here to watch the sunrise. But after listening to the waves all night, I woke up in the morning and there was a gray cloud in the east. At this time, the sea breeze blew our skirts, and a roll of waves patted our feet, making a soft sound. Seems to feel sorry for us.

Experience analysis of watching sunrise in Cape Comoros scenic spot.

Taste "We are from Cape Comollin" and write about the great charm of watching the sunrise.

"It's not difficult ... spectacular", the author imagined and described a magnificent sunrise scene, trying to create momentum for the following.

Gray not only describes the natural scenery, but also shows the author's true mentality at this time.

"Hey ... sorry." This sentence is beautiful and poetic, vividly writing out the author's regret that he didn't see the sunrise.

Another time was to climb Huangshan Mountain. It is also a good place to watch the sunrise. Because the lion forest in Huangshan has a peak. Unfortunately, people's eyesight is not so good. Otherwise, overlooking Jiangsu and Zhejiang from here, heading for the sea is also counted. This kind of terrain, as long as you look at the spring water of Huangshan Mountain, is very obvious, just like an unrestrained white dragon, directly discharged into Xin 'anjiang River and Fuchun River, and entering the sea through Qiantang River. When I arrived at Huangshan Mountain and started climbing the mountain, birds and flowers were singing and the weather was fine. After listening to the weather forecast, I also said that there has been no change for two or three days. Unexpectedly, the result was the same as Xu Xiake's experience: "The dense fog filled the lion forest, and the thicker the wind …" I only listened to the wind and rain all night, but of course I didn't see the sunrise.

Duan Yan wrote that Huangshan did not see the sunrise because of the bad weather.

The first part: the writer's yearning for watching the sunrise. The author is ready to pave the way from the beginning, first writing his childhood love and yearning; Then compare the different scenes and feelings of "sunset" and "sunrise"; Then through the description of two celebrities to show the glory of sunrise: finally, the following examples of sunrise failure are listed.

Taste "as long as it is obvious", write here to see the sunrise terrain of Huangshan in spring.

Where the prize is won, people have no "good eyesight"; "Birds singing and flowers smelling" is pleasant, while "the sound of wind and rain is all night" is regrettable.

However, I saw the most magnificent sunrise. However, it was not at the top of the mountain, nor at the seaside, but the plane flying from abroad to the motherland was flying high in Wan Ren. Now that I think about it, I can't help but marvel at this fantastic scenery. At the moment when I was unprepared and had no expectation, the universe showed its unparalleled brilliance and elegance to my eyes. When the motor took off, it was still a dark night below, but there was a glimmer of light swimming above. It is like a narrow dark red ribbon with a cold light blue morning light and a bright morning star hanging high above its head. The plane has been flying upwards, rising higher and higher, and I don't know how many clouds it has passed, far away from the dark ground. The plane seems to be afraid of waking the sleeping person, and the motor sound is particularly soft. The wings are smooth. This time, the red belt. But it is slowly expanding, like a red cloud and a red sea. Dark red light shines, it spreads to the sky, lifts the night sky farther and farther, and reflects them into red. What's next? But it is as black as a vast continent. This is a moment of alternation between morning and evening, a moment of alternation between the world that is about to pass and the world that is about to come. At first glance, the night seems endless. But in an instant, the cold morning light turned into magnetic blue light. The original Red Sea was surrounded by piles of dark blue clouds, and the miracle was born at this time. Suddenly, a thin parabola rose from the dark blue clouds. This line is bright red, shining with golden light, thrown up like a boiling solution, and then rushed up like a rocket. At this moment, I suddenly realized that this was the moment when generate came out of the night sky in bright daytime. Then several redder and brighter fragments flashed through several dark blue clouds. At first, I was surprised. I don't know what that is. When I looked again, several small pieces broke through the clouds, closely connected, merged and jumped out. So the sun has come out. Its crystal lamp is dazzling, the fire is generally bright red and the fire is generally strong. Unconsciously, all the shadows are immediately illuminated by it. In the blink of an eye, I saw that the wings of the plane were red. The window glass is red. Every sleeper in the cabin blushed. At this time, everything is very quiet, very quiet. The whole universe is as gentle and quiet as a mother who just gave birth to a baby, full of freshness and happiness. Looking down again, the clouds are like gray rapids, rolling away, letting light fall on the earth and making the whole world bright. I leaned back in the soft chair.

Taste the summary of "the most magnificent" and "the most magnificent"

The whole feeling of watching the sunrise this time is extremely wonderful.

Fantasy and incomparable describe the depth and influence of sunrise on me.

When describing Dawn and Xia Hong, the author uses weak verbs, such as "swimming", "unfolding" and "unfolding". When the sun rises, he uses strong words, such as "stand up", "flash", "splash", "burst" and "breakthrough", which are extremely magnificent and full of weather.

In the thick night, the range of "twilight" and "dark red" gradually expanded, forming "red clouds" and "red sea", until "the cold morning light turned into magnetic blue light", "piles of dark blue clouds", and then "redder and brighter", "crystal light is dazzling, fire is as bright as fire", and everything is red; Finally, "all kinds of red, gray, black and blue are gone, only the sky is blue." Under the author's colored crayons, the sunrise is really colorful and dazzling.

"They" refers to the night sky.

"Miracle" refers to the sunrise.

Starting from my unique feelings, I wrote a spectacular, magnificent and unparalleled sunrise. This is the alternation of morning and evening, the alternation of the world that is about to pass and the world that is about to come.

I fell asleep in bed. When we wake up, our plane is smooth and free, sailing to my dear motherland and the place where the sun rises. At dawn, all kinds of red, gray, black and blue are gone, only the sky above and below is blue. A few clouds in the sky are shining with silver light, like children's smiling faces. At this time, I deeply feel that this dazzling dawn is the magnificent scene of the new China; Seeing the spectacle of sunrise this time, I forgot to be happy, but entered a solemn thinking with joy. I am experiencing the most beautiful and profound meaning of the poem "We are the sun at six o'clock in the morning". (2) How did the author write about watching the sunrise from the plane? How does this description integrate with the author's feelings? )

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"I deeply taste the meaning of ... This passage is the climax of the article; It is also the climax of the author's feelings, full of passion and enthusiasm to praise our great motherland, which is full of vitality just like sunrise. I wish the motherland prosperity today and tomorrow, infinite beauty and flowers, and point out the theme of the article, which makes the "sunrise" have a unique connotation.

The second part describes the "most magnificent and magnificent" sunrise scene seen from the plane. According to the sunrise process, the strange changes of the sky, clouds and morning light at different times are described hierarchically. This part of the author saw the spectacular sunrise with his own eyes.

Quick answer check

(1) In the second natural paragraph, the author deliberately started writing and quoted ancient poems to touch the beauty of the sunset, aiming at comparing with the sunrise. Although the sunset is beautiful, it inevitably has a "bleak feeling", far less than the sunrise, because it is the birth of greatness, fire, heat, life and light. In contrast, the beauty of sunrise is better than the beauty of sunset. This contrast highlights the author's desire for sunrise. At the beginning of the tenth natural paragraph, the author praised its "majestic" characteristics and used the word "most" to express the beauty of the scenery. Next, the author writes the beauty of sunrise in the order of time and space, grasps the change of color and highlights its dynamic beauty. The author saw the scenery and felt happy from the magnificent scenery. He was amazed at the strange scenery, so the author had an association and entered deep thinking. I deeply feel that this dazzling dawn is the magnificent sight of new China. At this point, the author has integrated the magnificent scene of sunrise with the magnificent scene of new China and gained new feelings.