How to write a close-up composition

1. Write a close-up of the scene. The teacher just walked out of the classroom. The classmate who just expressed disappointment with the teacher suddenly changed. Some picked up books and threw a perfect arc into the air, shouting, "Yeah! Yeah! So much for the best things in the world! " Students who are not good at English usually use "verygood" to express their happy mood at the moment.

As a result, students get together in groups of three or five, some chat, some play chess ... The classroom suddenly becomes a mess. At this time, the class cadre stood up and shouted: "Stop it!" Even threatened: "I will remember whoever makes trouble and sweep the floor for three days."

The shout worked, but after three minutes of silence, the classroom became lively again, even several times louder than before. At this time, no matter how the monitor's "golden voice" is called, the students can't hear it.

I can't help it, the monitor muttered. After a while, heavy footsteps sounded in the corridor, and the students suddenly quieted down and held their breath, as if the air had solidified.

A classmate accidentally dropped his pen on the ground, making a crisp noise, which caused his classmates to be nervous. Footsteps are getting closer and closer, obviously coming to our classroom.

When a figure appeared at the door of the classroom, everyone was relieved and gave a "haha" laugh. It turns out that this is not the head teacher, but the "late king" in the class.

He was so puzzled when he saw us burst into laughter that he had to laugh with us.

2. Write a scene close-up in the bustling crowd and turn around and see him. Very thin, very nice, dark blue striped coat, light blue jeans, a pair of big brown leather shoes. This seems a bit funny. But he walked briskly and didn't procrastinate. It gives people a very real feeling, with a shallow smile at the corners of the mouth and notes rippling all over the body, like a flowing song. Even if you don't have to get close, it looks like spring breeze from a distance. It turns out there are such men in the world.

I heard that he plays music. I just know that not every so-called artist should have long hair fluttering. Isn't the elegance rippling in his bones the best interpretation of music?

At the wedding scene, he smiled and sprinkled fireworks on the beautiful figure of the bride. At this time, a friend brought some magical fireworks. When he pressed the button, the fireworks would "bang". He happily handed the scattered fireworks to the children, grabbed the magic fireworks himself, bowed his head and banged on the organ, muttering, "This is much more fun than small fireworks." To your surprise, an "artist" in his thirties has such a naive side.

3. Give your class a close-up and write an essay. 5. We are going to graduate. In a blink of an eye, we changed from an ignorant child to half an adult. Over the past six years, we have lived together day and night, sharing weal and woe, and that deep friendship will never be forgotten. We will bid farewell to the familiar grass and trees in the school and our beloved teachers and classmates. Although my heart is extremely sad, I sincerely hope that one day, we can be together again.

Graduation? What is this? It's something that makes me sad and look forward to. Because of it, I want to leave my friends and campus who have laughed and cried with me; Because of it, it wants me to go to the future life journey. Although graduation is very sad and unpleasant, it should be experienced in life, so I have to face it.

4. Ask to write a composition describing this scene. The scene description includes close-up and panoramic description. Last week morning, the weather was exceptionally clear, and white clouds were floating in the blue sky of Wan Li. The school held the 13th school sports meeting.

Ushered in a cheerful and wonderful school sports meeting. Early in the morning, all the teachers and students came to the playground. Some of them decorate venues, some decorate clothes and some put sports equipment. They were very busy, and the originally silent stadium suddenly became lively.

With the announcement of the official start of the sports meeting, all classes of teams entered the stadium in turn. At this time, the March suddenly sounded, and one class after another lined up in neat formation and strode to the rostrum.

They are all well-dressed, smiling and strutting, showing the unique vigor and vitality of young people. When the conference announced the official start of the sports competition, the whole stadium suddenly boiled and cheers came one after another.

Watching the athletes in the track and field field fly away from the starting point like rabbits and rush to the finish line like sharp arrows, attracting the audience present. Whether the players win the first prize or not, they will be praised and encouraged by the audience.

Because in the hearts of the audience, these athletes have played an indomitable and tenacious spirit of sports. They are heroes in sports and "Liu Xiang" in technical schools. Women's 800m and men's1500m are events that test athletes' physical strength and perseverance.

Although not as exciting and exciting as sprinting, it is definitely more touching than sprinting. In the competition, players have to face not only physical tests, but also psychological tests.

The athletes who participated in this project truly embodied the spirit of hard work and never giving up, and gave us much richer feelings than their achievements. Look at the athletes in the track and field, all rubbing their hands and showing no weakness.

In order to get better results, high jumpers do their best and never give up even if they fail. They took firm steps towards the goal and jumped again and again.

This spirit of constantly surpassing oneself is a huge personal wealth and a solid cornerstone for going higher and further in the future. Players participating in the shot put competition compete with each other and get farther and farther.

The shot put in their hands seems to have turned into a wishing ball full of hope, constantly chasing their dreams. The sports meeting showed the students' youthful demeanor and tested their physical and mental practice.

It exercises physical strength, activates life, enhances personality and youthful vitality, and gains a smiling face and mental outlook. All the athletes have made achievements in this sports meeting, displayed their elegant demeanor, carried forward the spirit of friendship first and competition second, found more glory and dreams in the competition, and created more beauty and glory in the competition.

5. Unforgettable close-ups How to write a composition I am an amateur photographer. I photographed my classmates' emotions, words and deeds, the beautiful environment of the school and the ever-changing changes in my hometown ... but more importantly, I photographed the footprints of my classmates' growth. Lens 1: Every time I see a photo in front of my desk, I think of one thing. It was a Saturday afternoon. When I went shopping, I saw a woman pulling a car not far from me, holding the bridle in one hand and the railing in the other, pulling hard on the slope of the bridge. This car is loaded with heavy goods. She was panting with fatigue, but she couldn't pull the car. At this time, two little boys playing by the bridge saw this situation, quickly put down their toys, walked two times in three steps, and helped the woman pull up the cart without hesitation. The car runs freely on the bridge slope. Two little boys in red scarves are pushing and running behind the car. I quickly pointed the camera at them ... looking at the woman's fading back, two little boys and I smiled at each other and felt happy.

Oh! It turns out that helping others can make people happy! Scene 2: "Crack", I quickly took this group of shots: Han Peng took the donations and materials from his classmates with tears in his hands. He was so moved that he didn't know what to say. After a long time, he looked up and choked up and said, "Thank you for your help. I ... I will study hard ..." As a small photographer, I soon discovered this story. It is decided that the school brigade will launch a fund-raising activity for Han Peng. The donated pens and stationery floated to Han Peng like snowflakes. Boxing love, love, warms Han Peng's heart. Every day, his classmates accompany him to do his homework, play and frolic.

Han Peng lived in a big family full of love, bathed in the sunshine and rain of the Party, and he showed a long-lost smile ... The students wrote a poem "Dedication of Love" with love. Lens 3: On a sunny afternoon, the school launched a public welfare activity to completely eradicate the breeding ground of SARS, and a red flag caught people's eyes. The students are going to clean the street with cleaning tools. Look, the students are all studying in full swing. The student sweeping the floor over there is like a little tiger, bending over, holding the broom with both hands and sweeping hard. The garbage has been moved to the trash can. The students are full of energy, especially the boys, scrambling to go to work and bravely shouldering the heavy burden. A little face is like a ripe apple. Students in this class, Qi Xin and Qi Xin, work together and have the courage to undertake; The students in that class are not to be outdone, but Qi Xin keeps pace with each other. Under the guidance of the teacher, the students studied so hard and methodically, which attracted the praise of the pedestrians in the street. I am satisfied with this "public welfare labor map". I also took many such shots, recorded the growth footprints of my classmates, and more importantly, I saw the golden hearts of my classmates and the shadows of qualified citizens through it.

6. How to write a good composition? First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice", which explains the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.

"Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".

Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.

There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards.

The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the common spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully.

(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.

Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials.

Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery.

The article written in this way is flesh and blood. (3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation.

Opinion is the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial.

Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful.

"One more miss, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens.

So you can see the essence through the phenomenon. It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.

The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms. In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand.

Second, to write a good composition, first learn to observe that Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" for literary youth: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more. Here, "seeing more" means observing more.

This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing. Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise your own observation, as if it were second nature. "

It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable. Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time.

This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with eyes". Broadly speaking, more practical observation refers to mobilizing all the five senses of people: listening with ears, feeling with the body and, more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that the observation will be more delicate and profound.

(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process. As the saying goes, a good memory is better than bad writing.

Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things. (3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation.

Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles. Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write.

May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice. Third, if the meaning is high, the meaning will be better, that is, to establish the center and intention of the article.

So what problems should the article pay attention to when expounding ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first meaning of the article. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration. (2) Intentional singleness "The thing of composition is singleness, specialization is success, and dispersion is stupidity."

No matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed. An article should explain both this problem and that point of view, and it is ambiguous to ramble.

In fact, if you want to cover everything, it is definitely not in place. Moreover, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if we express the center through several things, we should stick to the center, keep the same goal, pay attention to the combination of materials and centers, and let all the forces contained in materials point to the center. (3) The idea should be novel. Don't follow the crowd, the novel angle is the core of composition innovation.

The novelty of the idea requires jumping out of the old box and not following the advanced thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective to avoid what others often write and what others have not written. Even the same writing object can always be cut from multiple angles. As long as we break the mindset, stand at the height of the times, avoid "vulgarity" and seek "difference", think from many angles and sides, or associate, or expand, or analogize, or reverse, which makes people unhurried, we can rank fifth.

7. Write a composition before writing a close-up Chinese class. My favorite subject is Chinese. I wasn't that interested in Chinese. Later, due to a class, I was gradually attracted by the charm of Chinese.

Before the bell rang, the teacher came in with a big smile. I whispered in my heart, "It's really cruel, even after class." Who knows, as soon as the teacher came in, he said, "I'm going to write today, but I'll play games before I write." I thought, "What's new?" The teacher asked each group to choose a strong person to take part in the competition. I muttered to myself again, "What do you mean?" However, it is difficult to disobey the teacher's orders. Everyone did as the teacher said, but I was the only one who buried myself in my seat and delved into math homework. In a short time, all the players in each group were selected, and everyone was full of energy, like a calf, eyeing. Then it dawned on me that the teacher asked us to wrench hard.

First of all, Huang, the representative of the first group, and Shen Haoran, the representative of the second group, came to the competition site. They are all heavyweights of equal strength. I don't know who can win this championship, and everyone's heart is tied. Everyone worked hard at the teacher's command. Due to insufficient preparation, Shen Haoran's hand was pressed down by Huang's hand from the beginning and almost reached the desktop. The cheerleaders in the first two groups shouted, Come on, cheer for the players in their own group. Seeing everyone working so hard to cheer for him, Shen Haoran decided to make the last stop. He blushed and tried his best. Huang saw that Shen Haoran couldn't hold on any longer, so he let go of his guard and looked like he was sure to win. Shen Haoran saw that the time was ripe, and when he was unprepared, he tried his best to press Huang's hand down and turn defeat into victory. Everyone was shocked to see such a dramatic result. Shen Haoran made a victory gesture and rushed down to hug his team members. The students in the second group are singing and dancing happily, while the students in the first group complain to each other. This may be the reason for their failure. The classroom is like a busy city. The students in the next class think that our teacher is not here! When the teacher saw us happy, he covered his mouth and secretly smiled!

"Ding Ling Ling ..." After class, everyone complained that the class was too short, and a lively and interesting composition was born in the laughter of the students.

This is really an unforgettable Chinese class. Since then, the * * * in every Chinese class has become nice.

8. What kind of composition should I write? The road from home to school is very short, but as long as I stay awake and walk back and forth from this road twice a day, I will always see "short shots", which is touching. You see, the little boy is standing uneasily on his father's frame, holding his father's shoulders in his hands and making faces; The woman selling vegetables on the roadside smiled lovingly, but she still didn't forget to remind her to be "careful". Under the scorching sun, an old man stepped on a special tricycle with a flower umbrella tied behind the seat. His old woman sat under a flower umbrella, just talking and laughing, and her toothless mouth never closed properly. In the cool evening breeze, an expectant mother walked in the field holding her lover's hand. Looking at the fresh and lovely vegetables, I rub my hands from time to time as if stroking my beloved child. After school, the road was slippery, and in a short time, the students' cycling team flowed out. The mainstream branches into small groups and gradually bends over to join in fun, kicking, chatting and dancing ... although I can't see her face clearly.

In the hot sun, it's a good idea, not as mellow as milk, chatting in your mouth,

Walking on the road, the little boy stood uneasily on his father's frame, but as long as he opened his eyes, happiness was in his heart, and happiness was around him, with endless aftertaste. It can be considered that she was once a beautiful girl and an old man. She was busy, propping up a new sky and students with delicate hands. Branches are divorced from the mainstream, which makes people feel: children, female bosses are slim and graceful, and kindergartens.

In the cool breeze in the evening, you are talking and laughing, because you never pay attention to the happiness around you: the author of this article observes life very carefully, and it is a short way from home to school; This smile is so naive, open your heart. ...

In a word, toothless mouth has not closed properly, but it can make people taste a faint fragrance, but she labored to chop chickens and girls in the beauty salon with her delicate hands, holding her father's shoulder with both hands, as if stroking her beloved child, and an expectant mother holding her lover's hand.

In the field, there was a loud noise, a farmer; The woman selling vegetables by the roadside smiled lovingly.

Life is calm, and that clever puppy always stands up on two hind legs. Soon, it made me feel the joy of life, drew pictures for us and flowed out of the student cycling team.

You see, the old master and the customer are pushing around for a few cents for the car repair fee, which makes me feel that my life is full. An old man stepped on a special tricycle, opened his eyes wide, and gradually walked in groups of three or five, pedaling under his feet and wearing a flower umbrella behind the seat.

We often complain that happiness is too far away from us.

In the nursery, please slow down your pace, which seems to melt all your worries and troubles, shake your long hair, my friend; Passing by happiness, you will always see a short shot. They may be a pair of laid-off workers.

In a simple shed garage, an old man squatted and looked at those fresh and lovely vegetables.

A young couple sells roast chicken for boys on the Gaodong Bridge.

After school, * * * strings slipped and won the giggles of the dolls. That's because you always look up to the sky for happiness. No coffee, no wine, you bend over and join in the fun, your eyebrows are dancing. ...

A girl just walked out of the beauty salon and reminded us to be careful, which was touching. But a quiet life is like a cup of fragrant teas, with profound insights, full of youth and beauty, and a full face of happiness and longing. She walks back and forth from this road twice a day, but she can feel that her heart is full of hope for life.

9. Write a composition describing the scene. Scene description refers to the description of life pictures centered on the activities of people at a specific time and place. Scene description is generally composed of "people", "things" and "environment", which is the basic unit of narrative works and the main means to portray characters, develop plots and express themes. Scene description is divided into character activity scene and situational atmosphere scene according to the description object; According to the description space, there are panoramic scenes and close-up scenes.

Wonderful scene appreciation

(1) The old man turned over and rode on a bare horse. The pony has never ridden a man, jumping around the yard, and my old head is holding its neatly trimmed mane. ...

The boy horse jumped wildly, jumping higher and higher, jumping harder and harder. The two hind hooves kicked back hard and kicked the snow high on the ground. My head stopped talking, my hand pulled my mane hard, and my face turned white with fear. The horse ran around the field and dozens of people couldn't stop it. Finally, I dropped my head on the ground. It rushed out of the crowd, ran out of the school and ran to the village road. Guo Quanhai quickly untied the green horse from the post, rolled over and rode it, driving the jade eye away. Speaking of which, my head fell to the ground and I couldn't get up for a long time. People around me kept laughing. Divide horses

(2) As soon as they passed the archway, a noisy human voice was mixed with the sound of machines and horns, and the whole dam site was displayed in front of them. This is a huge labor scene: a tall and neat "mountain" connects two hills together, a python-like hoist lies across the dam, and the gravel like a leg automatically flows to the top of the dam. There are people everywhere under the dam, and cars and bulldozers are driving in a hurry. . The general looked around as he walked. He was deeply excited by the sight of labor. ordinary worker

(3) The bus came, but it didn't stop. With great strength and atmosphere, several young people pushed straight into the bus. A few quick boys jumped left and right like monkeys, jumped up with a whoosh and blocked the car door. Many people are desperately squeezing, only seeing white hands, bronze hands, rough hands and soft hands, instinctively reaching forward and waving, all hoping to catch the door. "Cyclops" may be a "battlefield" and take the lead. Just as the door opened, his right hand grabbed the handrail on the door and jumped up. People are already standing on the doorsteps. His left hand slammed the crowd in the car, his right foot pushed back and his left foot quickly lifted. Pushed by the crowd behind him, he finally got on the bus as he wished. A fat sister-in-law just stepped on the steps with her thick and short right leg, and her left foot kept pushing outward. She twisted her fat body with all her strength, and her bloated hands clung to the armrest of the car door. No matter how hard she tried, the result was that * * * was squeezed by the car door, making her shout "My God!" "Crowding cars is really a different pursuit of fighting!

Crowd car

(4) "DuDu, DuDu, DuDu." Three crisp whistles pierced the silence of the whole valley and woke me up from my dream. It's three! Emergency assembly! At this moment, the barracks where we live can be "bombed". "Hey, where are my clothes?" "flashlight, take a picture!" "What time is it now? I haven't slept well! " "Don't bother, just three minutes!" ...... "Hey, come back, you are wearing my shoes!" "Hua!" "The bed collapsed." "What are you shouting? I knocked over the washbasin! " ..... At this moment, I can't be described as an ant on hot bricks. I finally put on my clothes at random, but I missed my backpack and my forehead was sweating. I fell, fell, and tossed it for two or three times, but it didn't break. Even the fingers were entangled in the panic. Finally, I simply gritted my teeth and tied the quilt. I shouldered it, jumped off the ground, dragged my shoes and rushed out of the door ... "emergency assembly"