Composition My good father

My father's name is Zhu Kaihong. He is 40 years old. He has short hair, thick eyebrows, bright eyes, small nose, big mouth, small ears, thin body and good spirits every day. He walks with his head held high, which is very elegant.

Dad speaks very gently, and dresses neatly and gently every day. I like watching stocks, studying stocks and working in a securities company.

Dad is very concerned about my study. In study, he checks and signs my homework every day. Whenever I get 100, my father will sign his name and say, keep working hard, son! Whenever I get more than 90 points in the exam, my father will sign and say, son, keep cheering! Dad is so busy every day, but he never scolds me or hits me loudly. He will only severely criticize me when I do something wrong or have fun. I know my father is so busy every day, so I want to be a good student to repay my father and make him stop worrying about me. I finally did it. I have been a monitor, and I share my worries with my teachers at school every day, so that teachers can eat less snacks. So my father often praises me in front of my friends. Every time I eavesdrop, I will secretly enjoy myself in the room for a long time, hee hee hee!

Listen to the teacher: you should have a grateful heart from an early age. I gave a speech at the last Thanksgiving school. I have a grateful heart. I want to thank my father for accompanying me through every process of learning and growing up. I love you, my good father!

My father's name is Kim. He is very handsome. Sometimes he has a big temper, sometimes he is small, and sometimes he is gentle and irritable. But my father is a very economical man. He works in Xintaihua in Mizoguchi. Due to poor management, Xin Taihua has not been paid for a long time. Our family can only rely on my mother to make money. My father doesn't spend money recklessly. He doesn't smoke or drink with others. Dad usually teaches me to study, helps me check my homework and plays with me when I am tired of studying. My father is a good father. My mother's name is Chen Lihong. She is chubby. She is in poor health. If she is angry, she will faint. My mother works in Taixi Coal Preparation Plant in Mizoguchi. She is a chemist and works very hard. The salary is less than 1000 yuan. It's not much, but the arrangement made by her mother is very reasonable. Mom and dad have a good relationship. Once mom and dad quarreled, and mom fainted on the ground. Dad put his mother on the bed and slept for a while. Mom woke up, mom apologized to dad, and mom and dad made up again. My parents love me very much. They take good care of me and I love them.

I have a good father. My father is a driver. He works very hard every day just to earn more money to support his family. My father is very tired every day. Every morning, my father goes out before I go to school and can't go home until evening. However, dad never said he was tired in front of us.

Today is Sunday. I get up early to help my father squeeze toothpaste and pour face wash water. I think dad won't have to squeeze toothpaste and wash his face when he gets up, so he won't be so tired. My father is also a very strict father. No matter what exam, if I don't do well in the exam, I am very afraid that my father will look me in the eye because I am afraid of people, but my father won't hit me and always helps me correct the wrong questions.

This is my good father, and I think I will honor them when I grow up.

My good father

My father is of medium height, basking in the sun every day, and his face is dark.

My father is a busy man. He gets up before 5 o'clock every morning and takes out his broom, mop, stove, etc. Put them away. Then, grab a few mouthfuls of rice, push a cart of fruits to the market, and go home for dinner around 1. After dinner, I have to buy goods at once. When I get home, I have to go to Xizhou Village to sell them at once.

Father is busy all day, and he is all for our better life.

Dad is so hard, I must study hard and repay my father when I grow up.

My good father

As far as I can remember, he left an unforgettable impression on me. He has a handsome round face, strict eyes, a straight nose, a bright red mouth and two rows of shiny teeth. He has a bad temper and a scary temper, but I think he is still my good father, because he still has a lovely side, such as his seriousness in making things. Once, he went.

Teacher's comment: The title is clearly marked "Good Dad", but the text first writes about Dad's "bad" temper. Then, the little author changed his pen and wrote that Dad still had a "likable side". This kind of writing technique, which wants to promote and suppress first, greatly enhances the appeal of the article and is worth learning from. This is a good start, but unfortunately the teacher didn't see the complete ending. I don't know if it was the carelessness of the young author who didn't upload the article completely or if he couldn't write it in the middle of his creation. Whatever the reason, the teacher hopes that you can finish this article and look forward to reading your masterpiece. Come on!

A good father who moved me.

July of 20 10, when the trees were shaded, the window was green. I am very happy, because I received an invitation from the kiness Organizing Committee of Shanghai Great World to participate in the performance of "Celebrating the World Expo and Creating a kiness Record for Thousands of Electric Drums". Although the scorching sun in Shanghai now, it can't stop my desire to go to Shanghai. You know, I have never been to Shanghai, and I have never been to the Expo Park, not to mention getting together with little drummers from all over the country. I am very happy. Dad heard my laughter and came over on crutches. You know, he broke his leg in an accident a few months ago, and his athletic father suddenly became much quieter. His eyes always look out of the window involuntarily, and he looks like a man who has lost his mind. Unfortunately, the X-ray film just taken shows that the bone didn't heal as fast as expected, and his mood is extremely bad these days. "Is there any good news?" Dad picked up the notice when he sat down. "Nothing, Dad ... this is an invitation ..." Dad didn't look at me, just stared at the notice. "Do you really want to go?" "Yes ..." "..." "I can go alone without my mother. I can do it. " When I said this, I obviously lacked self-confidence, because I had no experience of traveling alone. Dad didn't answer me, propped himself up on crutches, walked slowly past me until he reached his study, and then gently closed the door. For several days, none of us took the initiative to talk about going to Shanghai, and I also felt that the trip to Shanghai might be ruined. After all, dad needs family company at this time. The weather is getting hotter and hotter, but my mood is gradually slipping. No reading, no playing. The deadline for registration is coming. It was my birthday. I'm disappointed. This is the first time I am unhappy on my birthday. Dinner is over. The birthday cake is on the table, but I don't want to eat it at all. Dad asked me if I really wanted to go to Shanghai, and I said yes without looking up. Dad handed me a bag from behind, saying it was a birthday present for me. I opened it in a hurry At that moment, I really couldn't believe it. In front of me were air tickets and train tickets to and from Shanghai, not only mine, but also my mother's. I don't know what to say at once. My tears are disappointed, but they are happy. "What about you?" "Don't worry, just these days, you won't starve your father." "But if mom wants to go with me ..." "Just beat your drum and take more photos of the Expo, remember?" I looked at my father, who looked at me affectionately, with a rare smile on his face in recent months. On weekdays, in my eyes, how ordinary dad is! However, today, my father is so great in my eyes! My father really touched me! He is so brave and strong! I deeply feel that my father loves me more than himself, preferring to suffer for himself and creating opportunities for me to see the world and learn. Dad, in the future, I will repay you with my grades.

I hope I can help you, and I hope I can adopt it satisfactorily.