Close-up composition 600 junior one

1. The composition "Close-up during recess" 600 words "Ding Lingling" rang a crisp courseware. The students' faces were full of excitement, and they became very upset. They all want to leave their chairs for forty minutes quickly. Only the teacher said, "Class dismissed!" These two sacred words, the students cheered loudly "yeah!" At first glance, the classroom is almost empty.

Where have all the students gone? Let's go outside and have a look-the playground, which was already deserted, was already deserted. After class, the playground became lively. In front of the basketball stand, there are always several "slam dunks" shooting and watching basketball flying all over the sky.

What about the other students? It is impossible for all the students to play basketball, so what are they doing? Looking from the other side of the basketball court-I saw a long queue in the canteen ... the canteen earned too much this day!

What about some classmates? They can neither play basketball nor be so greedy, so what are they doing? They must be reviewing in the classroom. They must be students with good academic performance.

But sometimes, the precious ten minutes after class will be "occupied" by ruthless teachers. As the name implies, it is the teacher who drags the class.

Forty minutes later, the bell rang for the first time, and the English teacher was still there saying, "The abbreviation of that, this is, this abbreviation is not this, because …" Because the bell rang once, the students could not help but become anxious. I speak English, teacher. Can you speak faster? We must play basketball after class! It's been three minutes now!

Finally, after another five minutes, the teacher finally announced the class was over. Now there are only two minutes before the next class, and the plan to play basketball has also been ruined. ...

"Ding Ling Ling" is another crisp * * *, the precious ten minutes are over, and the hard forty minutes are coming …

2. Unforgettable scene with close-up of 600 words accompanied by crisp "click" sound, a beautiful scene was taken into the lens, colorful life condensed between squares. Photography is my hobby after school.

On Sunday, I walked down the street with my camera. Old people, young girls and innocent and lively children form a harmonious and beautiful picture. What should I take? The magnificent buildings and bright flowers are really beautiful, but the idea is not novel.

Ah! Yes, it's crunchy. Guess what I took? Hands, in front of the science and technology bookcase of Xinhua Bookstore, there are countless pairs of hands holding, holding and holding books. Slim, stout, * * *, bronzed by the sun ... When this scene appeared in front of me, I felt a force pushing me. Are these hands just holding books? No, they are picking up the golden key to the treasure house of knowledge. How touching! Seeing these countless hands, you can naturally think of the smiling face of your master. What a pleasant smile.

There are mistakes in the 600-word composition from the close-up

No one is perfect, everyone makes mistakes.

When a fool makes a mistake, he blames others, regards the mistake as the natural enemy of life, and trudges in a gloomy world.

When making mistakes, wise men think calmly, regard mistakes as turning points in life and soar in the bright and vast sky.

I want to be a wise man when I make mistakes.

Many times, we will make mistakes for some reasons, which will lead to different paths. There are countless crossroads in life, and countless choices are often based on one mistake. If we never make mistakes, our path will be smooth to the end-"death". Then, how boring life will be! If you don't stand in front of the crossroads, you will miss a lot in life.

People who meet by chance because of a mistake always occupy a place or even an important position in our lives; Because of a mistake, things we encounter often become very important in our lives. We call the people and things we meet providence and "fate". Isn't it because of "mistakes" that we pursue that essence?

Over time, many seemingly correct things turned into wrong results. On the contrary, the seemingly wrong result turned out to be correct. From Aristotle's geocentric theory to Copernicus' Heliocentrism, and then to Newton's law of gravity, scientists have been trying and discovering in mistakes. "Mr. De" and "Mr. Sai" were once regarded as deviant remarks during the period of great social change, but now they have become our development goals. Mistakes breed them. Mistakes mean development. This is because change is the main theme of the world, and everything changes with time, so neither wrong nor right is absolute. If there were no mistakes of that year, how could there be today's correctness?

Therefore, we should dare to face mistakes and laugh at the mistakes in life. We long for freedom and comfort, so we always complain about all kinds of disappointments in life. We pursue perfection, so we always complain about all kinds of mistakes in life. However, there is a distance between "freedom" and "living", and there is also a distance between "living" and "standing up". If we only pursue life, we won't make mistakes. Keep breathing. But if we want to live with our heads held high, we can't help but make mistakes. We will learn from mistakes again and again and then set foot on a new level. Therefore, face life optimistically and treat all kinds of mistakes as life experiences again and again, and your world will be beautiful!

If there are no mistakes, we can't stand the wind and rain, and we can't understand the preciousness and richness of life, and we can't understand the beauty and profusion of everything in the world.

Mistakes are not ugly, mistakes are not terrible. The ugly thing is not to face mistakes, and the terrible thing is not to correct them.

4. The close-up composition is 600 words. In my opinion, since it is news, it must be true and credible. At the same time, news is a way to spread information, which requires conciseness.

News has a certain structure, which is roughly as follows: title (topic)-introduction (usually the simplest thing to say)-text (that is, the details of news)-summary (that is, the end)

Writing news is very different from writing in school Chinese class. As long as the words are fluent, the narrative is clear and the writing is beautiful, it is a good composition, which does not necessarily require truth, nor is it for publication. News is a report of recent facts, which should face readers and consider their interests, and also has the task of publicizing the party's policies. The genre of news is also relatively clear, and writing also has its own requirements. Let's start with three main news genres. First, putting on airs before writing an article is the basis of all writing. Before you start writing, you must think about what to write and determine the central idea, which is usually reflected in the topic. However, in the manuscript, it is often seen that the title does not match the content or the topic is small. Then I have to think about how to write, put on airs for the article, what to say first, and then what to say. What kind of material to use at last, and so on. However, in the submission, many articles obviously lack thinking about the structure, and the phenomenon of digression, improper details and repeated phrases is very serious. These two points should be self-evident for news writing, but in this respect, there are too many problems, including some full-time journalists, which often ignore these most basic writing requirements. I speak fluently, but I don't understand. Therefore, when talking about specific writing, first, please think for yourself: what do I want to write and how am I going to write it (including using various materials). Second, news writing is the most common news genre. Its purpose is to report the latest facts and propaganda to readers in concise and objective words. The objectivity principle of news does not allow journalists to comment or make judgments in it. Even if they want to report and publicize something, they should "speak with facts" and choose the facts to report. Journalists can't comment on the news. Fact news generally adopts an inverted pyramid structure, that is, the whole news arranges narrative levels and paragraphs according to the importance according to all aspects of a fact, thus forming the following "top-heavy" or "anticlimactic" reporting structure: 1. Introduction. The most important or wonderful part of the fact, or the most important and wonderful words of the key point of the fact, should be regarded as the first language. 2. Materials that further explain or illustrate the facts mentioned in the introduction. These materials are arranged in order of priority and can be divided into several paragraphs. 3. The necessary background materials are also arranged in order of importance. 4. Secondary auxiliary materials. If such news is abridged from behind, leaving only an introduction or even a sentence, it can still exist independently. And tell the reader clearly what happened. Obviously, the lead plays an important role in news and must be written well. There are four main types of guidance: factual guidance: general guidance; Descriptive introduction; Delay in advance. We should decide which one to adopt according to the specific situation. There are two key points to grasp: to understand the key points of reporting facts; Find verbs or phrases that can impress readers and guide them to continue reading in time. The introduction generally involves the following four aspects: 1, which briefly tells readers specific and clear facts; 2. The time when the fact happened; 3. News sources; 4. Place of occurrence. Other common news structures, as well as cumulative interest structure, time series structure, summary structure, etc. Thirdly, communication writing reports the facts in detail and eclectically, thus forming another major news genre-communication. Communication and * * * have the same feature, that is, to comprehensively report the recent facts in the way of narration, description, lyricism and discussion. Both events and people should be reported frequently. Through people's activities and thoughts, facts are generally perceptual, which is the charm of communication. Communication and cooperation are more flexible than news, which allows journalists to express their tendencies (of course, some communications can also be reported objectively), but it is not easy to write well, because it requires more solid writing skills. Communication needs a very clear theme, and refining the communication theme is usually the key to the success of communication. This requires an in-depth analysis of the characteristics of facts. Understand the background and spirit of the times. From this aspect, we can see the author's analytical ability and ideological level. The types of communication structures are flexible and diverse, and there are three common types: 1, and the "one-stop" type, that is, the vertical structure in time. 2, "broken watermelon" type, that is, the horizontal structure in space. 3, "peeling bamboo shoots", that is, from simple expression to deep development.

5. Unforgettable close-up composition Unforgettable close-up

Life is like a tortuous movie, and it is a colorful life with wonderful small shots. I love life, and I also love those small lenses, which have educated and inspired me. However, I prefer the small lenses in the aquarium.

In the early morning, the door of the aquarium opened, and there was a sea of people in front of it, as if to flood into the aquarium. Not to be outdone, I rushed in like a tiger. The original dark aquarium suddenly became brightly lit. As soon as they entered the hall of the aquarium, all kinds of people poured into the sea lion performance. The host said that he would choose a lucky audience to perform with the sea lion. I saw my uncle sitting next to me, staring at the screen with his hands clenched, expecting his seat number. (because the lucky audience is sorted by seat number. The aunt sitting next to me, wearing glasses, struggled to open her eyes and looked at the spinning numbers. "Stop" the host shouted. The screen stopped quickly, as if it understood what the host said. I looked at the screen and screamed, "How could it be me!" "Congratulations to the lucky audience" I thought: Congratulations! I feel dizzy. What if it eats me? I'm really unlucky.

I walked onto the stage in frustration. Oh, my God, sea lions are so big, but I am so small. How should I perform? I took the food out of the bucket and prepared to feed it, saying it was retracted again. But I thought: you can't be so humiliated! I looked at the host and felt uneasy. I reached out and turned my head back. Ah! The food was eaten! I cheered with joy.

Unforgettable lens, as clear as running water. I will always remember this unforgettable feeding record.

6.600-word sports meeting composition, grasping the close-up does not mean having it forever, and losing it does not mean not getting it back! The important thing is never to give up and make progress forever.

At the school sports meeting, I saw energetic and eager runners and basketball players with high spirits and enthusiasm. Seeing the long jumpers who are ready to go, I see the danger and tension in the sports field, and you fight for it! Looking at it, I feel like a learning field unconsciously. Take the running race as an example: a group of people are running on the runway, charging forward like wild horses. There will always be people in front and people behind, but what you have now doesn't mean you will have it forever. Take an athlete as an example. 50 meters before running, he rushed to the front, but suddenly he was knocked to the ground and stepped on several feet. He stood up tenaciously without hope, ran harder and bravely, and finally achieved good results. On the other hand, although the former leader's strength was not small in the later period, his self-esteem and self-confidence slackened, and as a result, he was surpassed by others at the same time, and finally only entered the top five!

In fact, this is the case in life and study. We should strive for what we don't have now and what we have lost, and don't relax what we have now! The most important thing is never to be satisfied and never to give up! If you stop fighting and settle for the status quo, if you are afraid of failure and give up your pursuit, you will lose the whole game.

After this sports meeting, I learned the experience and lessons from the sports field. I made up my mind: I must regain my lost academic leading position like the athlete I admire! On the road of learning, we must never stop and make progress forever!

7. Write a 600-word feature of My Classmate. Today is the weekend. The teacher left us a weekly diary yesterday. This weekly diary is an article about people. I thought about it for a long time, but I didn't expect it. At this moment, one thing flashed through my mind. Ah! I suddenly remembered my classmate-Xiao Ming.

Xiaoming has black hair, sparkling eyes and a glib mouth. I remember one time: on a clear Sunday morning in Wan Li, suddenly dark clouds were gathering, and the whole sky suddenly became dark. Suddenly, it rained heavily and we were out of school. Raindrops are scattered on the earth like broken beads. It rained harder and harder and merged into a stream. The wind is blowing fast. Leaves fall one by one. The students all walked home with umbrellas. The school gate is already crowded with people, bicycles and motorcycles are littered, and parents take their children home. This umbrella is attached to the umbrella. Xiao Ming is short, so he has to stand behind and wait for others to advance. At this time, a pupil behind was squeezed and fell to the ground. That pupil has been crying. The umbrella was also blown far away by the wind. Xiaoming hurried forward to help his little classmate. Unfortunately, Xiao Ming pushed too hard and slipped. Xiao Ming got up quickly and pulled his little classmate again. This time, Xiao Ming stood firm first, grabbed his little classmate's arm and pulled him up. The little classmate stood up slowly. At this moment, Xiaohong of our class ran to hold an umbrella for Xiaoming, and Xiao Qiang also picked up his classmate's umbrella in the distance. Wipe the mud off the little classmate and send him back to the classroom. It turns out that he is a preschool child. We also walked into our classroom happily. Seeing the mud on Xiaoming's body, the teacher asked Xiaoming with great concern, "Xiaoming, did you fall?" Xiaohong said, "He fell down because he helped preschool children." The teacher asked again, "Are you in pain? Xiao Ming smiled and said, "It doesn't hurt." The teacher praised him in class, and Xiao Ming smiled happily.

When the rain stopped, Grandpa Sun smiled as if to say, "This child is really sensible."

8. Unforgettable close-up composition 330 grids Speaking of swimming, I am very proud, because I can be regarded as a "swimmer"!

Swimming for the first time is my most unforgettable thing. It was the summer vacation of grade four, because many children can swim, and I am not to be outdone, so I went to learn to swim!

I put on my bathing suit and stood by the swimming pool. The water is clear and shallow. But for a beginner like me, it's still a little deep. Often there, the water is 1.8 meters deep! I'm only 1.4 meters tall.

After a while, a coach came and he began to teach me the basic movements of swimming. Lying in the water, I was nervous and practiced stiffly according to the movements taught by the coach. Spread your legs apart, stretch upward, make right angles to your body, and then come together. After doing this several times, I finally relaxed and did it much more smoothly.

The coach saw that I was doing much better, so he took me to the pool with a depth of 0.6 meters. The water didn't reach my thigh. The coach also taught me to pull the water on the spot: put your hands together, stretch forward, then slowly open them, and then you can swim forward with your legs and hands.

At this time, I am not so nervous and my heart is calm.

I'm moving forward like a new goal ...

I am very excited about swimming for the first time. I can swim!

9. Special Story: School Sports Meeting Composition 600 words In my colorful childhood, there are many memorable things, the most memorable of which is the fifth-grade school sports meeting.

"come on Come on ... "What's that noise? It turned out to be the track and field sports meeting being held in our school. The atmosphere was very lively, and cheers rang out from time to time.

The first item is grade skipping. As soon as the game password rang, I saw the whole class swinging and jumping wildly.

Everyone has a belief in his heart that he must win glory for the class. The rope in his hand is thrown faster and faster, and the pace at his feet is also accelerated. The speed is too fast for all the students to count.

One minute passed in the blink of an eye, and the students were all out of breath. Our class won the first place with the best results.

This year's school sports meeting, I was lucky enough to be selected to participate in the skipping competition. The venue of our competition is the campus gate.

All of us came to the campus gate to prepare for the game. "Prepare for the game! Quick, quick, line up. "

A classmate shouted. I also quickly "got into" the rope and prepared to jump.

"Three, two, one, go!" The voice reminds me that I jump with the rhythm. "30、3 1、32、33、34、35、36!" Finally we got stuck under "36".

Although there was a second time, I didn't jump the second time. Because it has been arranged, I will jump first, and then another person will jump.

"I have no shares. Let's go first. " I thought to myself.

I thought about it and came to the playground. The first is the men's 100 meter race.

Every player is very nervous, and the players in our class are no exception. Gunfire sounded, and Zhang Zhifeng of our class ran to the finish line like a gust of wind, far ahead.

"Come on, you are the best!" I thought to myself. Sure enough, he not only won the first prize, but also broke the record.

Then 200 meters, then 400 meters, and some are 800 meters. We men have got good grades, but women are not so good.

The athletes on the field struggled hard and the students outside the field enthusiastically supported them. At the same time, behind this tension and fierceness is the silent dedication of our teachers and referees.

Because of them, the order of the stadium can be maintained; Because of them, the school sports meeting was held smoothly. Efforts and dedication played a triumphant song on our playground! I believe our class will get good grades in the next sports meeting.

10. Writing a 600-word teacher composition requires features and things. My teacher has worked quietly in the education post for decades. She devoted her life selflessly to education and her students ... she was great. I remember it was a summer a year ago, and we were waiting for the teacher to come to class. Suddenly, a thunderbolt outside the window broke the silence of summer, stopped time, and thundered. The sky like a black pot is getting heavier and heavier, as if it were going to collapse, and there was another loud noise. The blame was cut and the rainstorm poured down like a waterfall. Raindrops shot at the earth like bullets ... Looking at the stormy weather, everyone said, "The teacher will definitely not come." So, we all picked up books and taught ourselves sadly. Soon, the teacher braved the rain. Suddenly, can you forgive me? "Looking at the teacher's wet hair and clothes wet by rain, I was excited and distressed ... flooded my mind. The teacher took out his textbook and told us about the class. There was a smile on her amiable face; That kind voice warms us like a mother ... it rains cats and dogs outside the window, but the classroom is full of literary heart ... For four or five years, the teacher has never missed half a class for us. This is our teacher, a conscientious teacher, a great and ordinary teacher! The teacher not only loves his work, but also cares about his students as much as his own children ... It was the final exam, and because of excessive tension, I made an old habit-convulsion. At this time, the teacher had just finished correcting a thick pile of homework. As soon as she saw it, she forgot her tired body for a day, and resolutely picked up more than 30 kilograms of me and went straight to the doctor. On the way, I fell on the teacher's broad shoulders, only feeling. It's a hot summer day. It's so hot that there is no wind at all. The asphalt road was almost scorched by the sun ... The teacher was tired, carrying such a heavy thing, and the scorching sun, she couldn't stand it! Sweat rolled down from her forehead. The teacher stopped suddenly. "Xiao Wei, please hold on for a while, it's almost ready. "The teacher asked with concern. From her tone, I could feel that she was trying to restrain her shortness of breath. I bit my lower lip tightly, fought back my tears and nodded. The teacher picked me up again and walked forward step by step in the hot sun ... why did the teacher work so hard? Why ... the sun is burning! You hide, don't let our teacher worry any more; Wind! Blow it, blow away the teacher's fatigue, and don't let her suffer any more ... This is our teacher, a teacher who loves students like children, a great and ordinary teacher! Ah! This is our teacher, who has devoted her life selflessly. He is ordinary, but not ordinary. I love my teacher, but I love her greatness more.