How to judge the problem of "two sides and one side"

When is it right to modify both sides of a sick sentence? Generally speaking, there are two sides and one side is wrong, but I did a question today that is correct. When you say the word "one side" itself contains both positive and negative meanings, it is not a bad language but correct. For example, like "what's the result", the result here itself contains good results and bad results, which have two sides. And the word "success" has only one side. 20 1 1 Among the ill sentences in the National New Curriculum Standard Volume 14, there is a special case of double-sided ill sentences.

14. Among the following sentences, there are no ill sentences (3 points).

A. The quality of personnel training is an important factor to measure the success of a university, and vigorously improving the level of personnel training is a strategic issue in the reform and development of higher education.

B. In order to better improve the service quality, we must adhere to the people-oriented principle and create a harmonious waiting environment and pleasant humanized service for passengers to the maximum extent.

C This new cold medicine has been tested in more than 400 cases in hospitals in Beijing, Shanghai, Nanjing, Hangzhou and Kaifeng, and 80% of them are really effective.

D. As the celebration is just around the corner, the school requires all teachers and students to pay attention to etiquette and treat guests warmly, so that alumni who come back from all over the country to attend the celebration will feel at home.

A: A.

Analysis: improper collocation of B coordinate words should be "providing happy and humanized services"; C preposition error, "after" changed to "through"; Improper collocation of subject and predicate, add "the patient" after "80%"; D, the structure is chaotic, and it is changed to "Let the alumni from all over the country go back to their alma mater to attend the celebration" or "Let the alumni from all over the country go back to their alma mater to attend the celebration".

2. The following sentence is () (1993)

A, this cultural station has become a place to educate and help backward youth, save and train young people who have lost their footing, and has been commended by superior leaders for many times.

B, whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life, the key lies in accelerating the training and bringing up a group of specialized technical personnel.

C. Do you know how much work bees do in a catty of honey? According to scientists' statistics, bees collect about 500,000 pollen for every catty of honey brewed.

D Mr. Kan Kan, although his voice and smile have not changed, the wrinkles around his eyes seem to imply the hardships and unhappiness of these years.

(The correct answer is that the sentence "training young people who have slipped" in sentence D is not properly matched, and the sentence "and training" should be deleted, which cannot correspond before and after, and there are affirmations and negatives in front; After B, there is only affirmation, and the phrase "500,000 flowers" cannot be used to modify "pollen" by deleting "no" or changing "want" to "can"; C, you should add "flowers" after "500,000".

5. Among the following sentences, () (1996) is not bad and has a clear meaning.

Units with advantages in professional research and experiments have the obligation to send lecturers, accept visiting scholars, hold training courses and provide assistance to other cooperative units.

B, whether to cultivate "four haves" new people is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.

C, everyone is generally angry that the ranger exposed the problem that the Forestry Bureau took the lead in smuggling timber.

D. For a few incidents of disrespecting sanitation workers' labor, making troubles without reason, or even beating and abusing sanitation workers, the relevant departments promptly criticized and educated them and dealt with them seriously.

(The correct answer is A. This long sentence "A" has many additional elements, which should be simplified and removed. The main part of the sentence is "look at the additional components, the meaning of the sentence is very clear." The word "can" in item B means "can" and "can't", but the following text only says one side and loses attention. In item C, "generally feeling very angry" should be "the problem of timber smuggling led by the Forestry Bureau", while the original sentence is "the ranger exposed the problem". Obviously, the object of "anger" is the wrong one. This is because the attributive of "question" in the sentence is unclear. If you add a word "de" after "ranger exposure", the meaning will be clear. The object of "criticizing education and dealing with it seriously" in item D is "event", and the predicate and object can't correspond one to one, such as "educational event". If it is changed to "for a very small number of people". There is nothing wrong with criticizing education and dealing with it seriously. )

6. The following sentence is () (1997)

First, in order to fully promote the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig breeding industry, the county held three technical training courses for breeding pigs.

B, when they encounter difficulties, they are not depressed, but gain strength from everyone's trust and concern and establish confidence to overcome difficulties.

The level of savings absorbed by C savings office plays an important role in the growth of national liquidity, so mobilizing urban and rural residents to participate in savings is an important means to accumulate funds.

D, I am always silent at ordinary times, but when I talk about my favorite major at academic conferences, I become much more active and talkative.

(The correct answer is that C.A. "promotion" lacks an object, but it should be "promotion of pig raising technology". B "don't be depressed" and "build confidence to overcome difficulties" should be done step by step. Obviously, the wrong conjunction "but" caused the mistake. You can use "and" instead of "but". D "exceptionally lively and talkative" is an error caused by the use of adverbials and complements expressing degree, and one of "exceptionally" and "much" can be deleted. )

18, (05 National Volume 1) Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is

A. Since the birth of 1993 Beijing University Student Film Festival, more than1100,000 people have attended the movie.

B. The Municipal Education Commission requires that the daily necessities and bedding in the student apartments of each school should be chosen by the students themselves, and shall not be uniformly equipped.

Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is undoubtedly of great significance for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.

D this year, the shortage of power supply and demand will be eased, and the phenomenon of power cut will be reduced accordingly, but it is still tight on the whole.

Although answer D seems verbose in expression, compared with other options, there is no principled error. Item A lies in the contradiction between "accumulative" and "exceeding", and should be changed to "accumulative 6.5438+00,000 person-times" or "exceeding 6.5438+00,000 person-times". The mistake in item B lies in the improper juxtaposition of concepts, and "daily necessities" should include "bedding". The mistake in item C lies in improper response before and after. The two sides of "whether" don't match the "significant" behind.

19. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is (2006 National Volume 1).

A. The Qinghai-Tibet Railway runs through Qinghai and Tibet provinces and across the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. It is a strategic railway trunk line connecting Tibet and the mainland.

B this time-honored food factory is small in scale, but it is very particular about the selection of materials and processing, and the food it produces has always been trusted by new and old customers.

C. At the press conference, the spokesman of China National Tourism Administration denied whether to accept tickets for seven red tourist attractions such as Tiananmen Square.

D. The central government will expand the provision of textbooks to students from poor families in compulsory education stage year by year, and the local finance will also set up special funds for aiding students.

Analysis item a. B should be changed to "highly dependent on new and old customers". Item C "Rejection" is not clear-"Whether to accept the ticket". Item D lacks entries, and "scope" is added after "free textbooks".

5. Two aspects do not correspond to one aspect (2004)

(1) Investment environment, service quality and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of regional economy. (National Volume C, Question 6, Item A)

The first three places all talk about two aspects: good and bad, good and bad, high and low, while the latter only talks about one aspect: healthy development and inconsistency. We should add "whether" before "health".

(2) The language of literary and artistic works is good or bad, not because it uses a large number of gorgeous words and terms of a certain industry, but because it uses words in a place. (Fujian Volume, Question 5, Item C)

There are two aspects of "good or bad" in front, and only "use" and "use in place" in the back. These two aspects do not correspond. Can be changed to "whether to use" and "whether to use in one place".

The Revised Outline of College Entrance Examination Chinese Ill Sentences clearly stipulates six language diseases, such as improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete redundancy of components, chaotic structure, illogical and unclear meaning. Among the sentence types with improper collocation, one is "two sides and one side". In general, two-faced words like "neng" and "whether" appear in front, and there must be corresponding two-faced words behind them, but in a special case, there are two-faced words in front and no corresponding two-faced words behind them.

For example, 1: Whether students' personal quality can be steadily improved and whether they can adapt to the rapidly developing social environment in time depends on the intensity of education reform in our education department.

Explanation: The word "can" in the sentence is a double-sided word, followed by two matching words. The word "strength" has two meanings, namely "great strength" and "small strength". Whether the personal quality can be steadily improved is restricted by the education level. This sentence is correct.

For example, quality is the life of engineering, and carefulness is the guarantee of high-quality engineering. Whether we are serious and responsible for the project construction is directly related to the quality of the project, so we should think carefully and be cautious.

Analysis: The "whether" in one sentence should be coordinated with the "quality" in the following sentence. "Whether" is a two-sided word and "quality" is a word, but "quality" has two connotations, namely "high quality" and "low quality", which is also true.

With these two special cases, I think we should not "take it for granted" when reviewing for the exam. Sometimes "thinking set" will make us make wrong choices. Therefore, we should be cautious, thoughtful and cautious in the face of any problems.

Challenge questions:

Can you correctly judge the following sentences, which are correct and which are sick?

1. The quality of students has an important influence on their adaptation to society after leaving school. Therefore, improving the quality of students in an all-round way is the foundation of education.

The reason for students' misjudgment may be that they don't know the hidden word "influence" clearly. "Influence" is a two-sided word, which has both positive and negative meanings. Like (5), there are no words.

Students' lofty aspirations play an important role in their success. Therefore, it is an indispensable part of education to motivate students to set up their ambitions scientifically.

Here, "high and low" refers to "two sides", while "function" seems to only talk about one side, but in essence it refers to two sides, because "function" is a hidden "two sides" word, which can be positive or negative, and its semantic expression is not chaotic, which conforms to grammar and logic.

3. The bank's verification of the repayment ability of customers who apply for car purchase is an important content in deciding to issue loans.

"Decision" should include two situations: one is to send and the other is not to send, so the logic of adding "whether" after "decision" should be rigorous.

Whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.

The "fundamental task" and "ability" are two sides, and the "can't" has been removed.

Whether sustainable development can be achieved is a big issue related to the vital interests of future generations. We must never do anything wrong to future generations. No matter "can" or "can't", sustainable development is "related to the vital interests of future generations". There is nothing wrong with this sentence.

The meaning of the third clause in Example 5 is very clear. The implication of "can't do things that are bad for future generations" is that "sustainable development must be realized and the vital interests of future generations must be considered". There is nothing wrong with this sentence.

6. The level of savings absorbed by savings offices plays an important role in the growth of national liquidity, so mobilizing urban and rural residents to participate in savings is an important means to accumulate funds. ("Important role" can include both positive and negative aspects, so it has two sides of "high and low". )

7. The international players who have participated in the Top Ten World Cup know that winning or losing a ball is not only related to personal face, but also to the honor of the motherland. (×)

"Win or lose" and "face" are two sides, and "honor" is a glorious reputation and a side.

8. Whether our city can seize the opportunity and develop rapidly in the strategic planning of western development depends on accelerating the training of a group of talents. (×)

"Whether" and "accelerating cultivation" are two sides of the coin.

Message 1: Say the word "two sides"

In a special test to distinguish sick sentences, many students judge the following sentences as sick sentences:

(1) The quality of students has an important influence on their adaptation to society when they leave school. Therefore, improving the quality of students in an all-round way is the foundation of education.

The reason is that "quality level" means "two sides", while "important influence" only means "one side", which is not well coordinated and the meaning is not properly matched.

In fact, this sentence is not a sick sentence. The misjudgment of students reflects that some students have a superficial understanding of this kind of sick sentences, or stick to the rules and cannot use what they have learned flexibly.

In Chinese vocabulary, some words have only one meaning: they can be positive, such as Gao, You, Shi and Ying. It can also be qualitative, such as "low", "poor", "not" and "should not". There are also some words with both positive and negative meanings, such as "high and low", "good or bad", "whether" and "should not". When we use these words to make sentences, if we match one-sided words with two-sided words, it will cause confusion in meaning expression, which is what we often call improper collocation. For example:

(2) Teachers must not ignore the advantages of students' liveliness.

(3) The transformation of poor students depends on whether teachers really understand the inner world of students.

(4) Whether the learning method is correct is one of the important factors to improve students' performance.

These three sentences are all guilty of improper collocation. Because of the improper collocation of "one side" and "two sides", the meaning before and after is illogical. (2) In "liveliness and inactivity", there is only one side between "two sides" and "strength". (3) "Transformation" is about one side, and "understanding" is about two sides. (4) Whether it is correct or not has two sides, and the important factor is only one side. The faults of these sentences are not difficult to identify, and generally can't be wrong.

In fact, some seemingly one-sided words are actually two-sided. Let's call it "hidden double-sided words". For example:

(5) Students' lofty aspirations play an important role in their success. Therefore, it is an indispensable part of education to motivate students to set up their ambitions scientifically.

Here, "high and low" refers to "two sides", while "function" seems to only talk about one side, but in essence it refers to two sides, because "function" is a hidden "two sides" word, which can be positive or negative, and its semantic expression is not chaotic, which conforms to grammar and logic. Look again (1) Why do students misjudge? The reason may be that they don't know the hidden word "double-sided" and "influence" clearly. "Influence" is a two-sided word, which has both positive and negative meanings. Like (5), there are no words.

When we use the words "one side" and "two sides", we should correspond to each other. For example:

(6) Whether the content is correct or not is the primary criterion to measure the quality of an article.

(7) In the past, strong women were often looked down upon, but in the era of reform and opening up, they were eagerly "favored". It is between this kind of "white eyes" and "love" that they realize the contempt and respect of women in society.

(8) The ineffectiveness of the measures taken has an important influence on whether the education front can win the "curriculum reform" movement.

This is an example of the correct use of "two-faced" words, and special attention should be paid to the use of some hidden "two-faced" words.

Let's briefly talk about the modification of non-relative sick sentences. You can use the method of "increase or decrease", or change the word "both sides" from "one side" to "one side", or change the word "one side" to "both sides". For example:

(9) Whether the computer industry can develop rapidly and drive related industries depends on accelerating the training of a group of specialized talents.

You can change the word "whether" to "one side", or you can add "whether" before "acceleration" and change "one side" to "both sides". (9) It can be changed to "The key to the rapid development of computer industry and the promotion of related industries lies in accelerating the training of a group of specialized personnel". Or become "whether the computer industry can develop rapidly and drive related industries, the key lies in whether it can accelerate the creation of a group of specialized talents."

When teaching "double-sided" words, we should also distinguish them from the compound words with partial correction in ancient Chinese, such as:

(10) Work hard day and night.

"Diligence" means one side and "rest" means two sides, which is allowed in ancient Chinese, because "rest" is a compound word with partial meaning, and "rest" is an auxiliary word, just a complete syllable.

Data 2: Discrimination of Unilateral and Bilateral Mismatched Sentences

The analysis and modification of ill sentences has become a necessary question in the college entrance examination in recent years because it examines the ability of candidates to accurately and standardize the use of Chinese. There are two main angles to examine ill sentences in college entrance examination, one is structure and the other is content. One kind of improper collocation is "improper collocation of one side and two sides", because it is sometimes difficult to distinguish the characteristics of structure and content. Now do a simple analysis, so that candidates can identify this kind of sick sentences simply and quickly.

(1) whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life depends on accelerating the training and bringing up a group of specialized technical talents.

(2) The bank's verification of the repayment ability of customers who apply for car purchase is an important content in deciding to issue loans.

There are two cases of "yes" and "no" in the example (1). The decisive factor is that "it can speed up the training and bring up a group of specialized technical talents" and "yes" should also be taken care of. Obviously, the two sides of this sentence don't match one side. We should remove the word "want" and add "can", or remove "can" and add "want". In example (2), the decision-making should also include two situations according to the repayment ability, one is to make a decision, and the other is not to make a decision, so the logic of adding "whether" after "decision" should be strict and the overall situation should be taken into account.

In college entrance examination training, we often guide students to grasp the law. If there are two words like "can" or "whether" in a sentence that need to be distinguished, we should pay attention to the fact that one side and both sides often do not match. But since it is "frequent", it does not rule out some special circumstances, so it is not absolute to take care of both sides.

(3) Whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.

(4) Whether sustainable development can be achieved is a big issue related to the immediate interests of future generations. We must never do anything wrong to future generations.

Example (3) is a sick sentence, and one side does not conform to both sides, and example (4) is speechless. There is no problem with the collocation of the first two sentences. Whether it may be an uncertain aspect, "it is related to the future and destiny" and "it is related to the interests of the body" are also uncertain aspects. If the first sentence is "can be cultivated" and "can be achieved", then "future and destiny" is good and beneficial to the vital interests of future generations, and vice versa. However, the third clause in example (3) does not match the first clause. Is it "the fundamental task of the education front" that "it is impossible to cultivate new people with four talents"? The mistake is obvious. The meaning of the third clause in Example (4) is clear. The implication of "can't do things that are sorry for future generations" is that "to achieve sustainable development, we must consider the vital interests of future generations". There is nothing wrong with this sentence.

Another example is:

(5) Whether a person can succeed in his career depends on internal factors.

(6) Judgment is a way of thinking that affirms or denies that something has a certain nature.

(7) There will be a second interview in a week, and whether he is admitted or not will determine his life.

(8) Facts have repeatedly proved that innovation ability and innovation ability are decisive factors in the world economy and scientific and technological competition.

(9) The quality of photography and poetry writing are determined by one's thinking and artistic accomplishment.

(10) The recently released mobile phone market survey report shows that whether the broken mobile phone can be repaired conveniently and satisfactorily is an important factor leading to the quality disputes of mobile phones.

Among them, sentences (5), (6), (7) and (8) are correct, while sentences (9) and (10) are sick sentences. In the fifth sentence, "whether you can achieve something" are two uncertain aspects, "can" or "can't"; "The key lies in internal factors", which is also uncertain. If internal factors play a role, we can succeed, otherwise we can't. So this sentence is matched in content. The sixth sentence defines "judgment" and points out two forms of judgment: positive judgment and negative judgment. Positive judgment is a way of thinking that affirms something has a certain nature, while negative judgment is a way of thinking that denies something has a certain nature. If we only rely on the corresponding requirements in structural form, it is easy to mistake the word "whether" for "yes", which will lead to ambiguity and repetition. The "admission or not" in the seventh sentence includes "admission" and "rejection". How to decide her life is uncertain. If she is admitted, her future life will develop smoothly in a good direction. If she doesn't pass the exam, she will go through hardships and encounter difficulties. So the content is also corresponding before and after. The eighth sentence has the same meaning. The meaning of "ideological and artistic accomplishment" in the ninth sentence is definite, which means "ideological and artistic accomplishment", and can only match the meaning of "shooting well" and "writing with flavor" in the previous article, so the word "high and low" should be added after "ideological and artistic accomplishment" in this sentence. In the sentence (10), the word "whether" should be added before "causing disputes".

Through the analysis of the above sentences, it can be seen that whether one side and two sides match, not only according to whether the words in the text structure correspond, but also according to the content to analyze whether the internal relations between the sentences before and after are consistent, so as to truly grasp the root causes of this kind of sick sentences and achieve a temporary solution.

Discrimination of "One Side and Two Sides" Sentences in the Transformation of Ill Sentences

In the modification of sick sentences, it is often easy to confuse whether the front and back sentences correspond as a type. The following are two aspects of analysis.

(A) "one side and two sides" sentence

In obvious sick sentences, just pay attention to the key words between the preceding and following sentences.

Whether you have a firm will or not is the key to a person's career success.

The political situation of stability and unity is the key to the success of China's socialist modernization.

In case 1 and case 2, "existence" and "success", "political situation of stability and unity" and "success or failure" do not correspond completely.

The following sentence is more complicated:

Whether you can achieve something depends not on your grades, but on your ability.

Whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life widely depends on accelerating the training and bringing up a group of professional and technical talents.

In the third example, the first two sentences are correct, and "whether" and "strong ability" cannot match. Example 4 is rather confusing. Whether it is necessary to go to all walks of life, and the phrase "speeding up the training and bringing up a group of professional and technical talents" in the latter sentence cannot be matched with "whether". For such a sentence, we must analyze the relationship and semantics between the sentences and judge whether all the sentences are collocated correctly.