Six observation methods of writing composition

1. When we observe things, we call where we stand a foothold. Fixed-point observation is to fix our foothold and observe in an orderly manner, that is, from near and far or from far and near, from high to low or from low to high, from left to right or from right to left. When observing, the author's foothold cannot always change, but must be fixed on a basic point. So fixed-point observation is adopted. First of all, we should pay attention to choosing a good observation position. Photographers take pictures, painters paint, choose lenses and describe objects, all of which pay great attention to the choice of a foothold. The choice of foothold is often related to the success or failure of a photo or a picture. The same is true of writing articles. "From one side of the mountain, the distance is different." The same thing is expressed in different positions, and the "orientation" and "angle" of observation are different. The effect expressed is very different. According to the characteristics of things and the needs of observation, choosing the most ideal foothold is the primary problem of whether fixed-point observation can achieve good results. For example, * * *' s "Qinyuanchun Changsha" vividly shows the vibrant southern autumn scenery. One of the important reasons why the author can express his lofty sentiments in autumn scenery and seize their rich business from the vast scenery is that he successfully used the fixed-point observation method. Secondly, fixed-point observation must be carried out in a certain order. Because all kinds of scenery are in a certain spatial position, it is impossible for us to make many scenery come into view together when observing, and it is impossible to describe many scenery at the same time when expressing. Pay attention to a reasonable observation order when observing. The advantage of fixed-point observation is that the foothold is fixed, and it is easier to concentrate on observation and reach a certain depth. Especially when observing the specific scenery of a certain place, a certain point and a certain side, it is easy to grasp the sound, expression and morphological characteristics of things. In fact, in writing, the author's observation is always chosen for the purpose of expression. The problem is how to make the observation point achieve the purpose of writing reasonably and skillfully.

2. The observation method of China characters, a little more, I am eager to see a version:

Learn to follow up and observe.

Follow-up observation (also called follow-up observation) refers to continuous, repeated and repeated observation of something in life or someone around you (this observation is generally not completed once or twice), so as to obtain specific and detailed composition materials. This is the primary stage of learning to observe and developing the habit of paying attention to life.

4. Learn to observe directionally.

Directional observation (also called focused observation) is a directional, selective and focused observation of many people or things in life, so as to obtain specific and detailed composition materials. This is the second stage after "follow-up observation". Learn to observe and form the habit of paying attention to life.

3. Learn to observe at random.

Random observation is to observe at any time and place in your own life, face the colorful world, and capture people, events and scenes in all aspects of life in time, as well as events that you accidentally see, hear and think of.

3. Classified observation composition When I was in the fifth grade, people said that ants knew their direction by smell and ants knew their direction by sunlight. When ants leave their nests, they leave a smell along the way when they arrive at their destination. When ants want to go home, they will go home by this smell. But what if ants forget to leave a smell? Well, that's definitely impossible, because ants have become a habit. But what if we stop the smell of ants? What will happen to ants? Then let's take a look at the following experiment!

I bought a bag of mothballs from the store, quite a lot. I took my "deadly weapon" bag and came to my grandmother's house, a land of feng shui. Because my grandmother has a yard with many ants. When I came to my grandmother's house, there happened to be two bunches of hemp leaves in the yard, which attracted many ants. As soon as I open the hemp leaf, my God! This ant is really dazzling and countless! It's really an ant mountain and an ant sea! But this swarm of ants really made me feel bad, and goose bumps fell all over the floor. Okay, let's get down to business. Now my experiment will officially begin. When I looked intently, it was an outdated ant. Ants ran around looking for it, but they didn't find their own ant team. It seems to say, "Where are the ants in front of me?" Why am I the only ant left? "As soon as I saw this ant, I quickly took out my' deadly weapon' moth pill from my bag and drew a line in front of the little ant without hesitation. Seeing the "enemy" in front of him, the little ant realized that he was outnumbered, and quickly took the best road with thirty-six tricks and changed a direction. And I, the general leader of the enemy, quickly arranged my troops in front of the little ants. And this little ant saw the enemy reaching out to it again and ran in the other direction, and this little ant's escape was really funny! Also formed a beautiful arc! I saw the little ant walk away and drew a "sealing line" in front. The little ant saw that he had only one exit left, so he ran and ran. Hehe, you can't outrun me. I unhurriedly drew a satisfactory full stop to this originally defective square-the last line of the square, the last exit of the little ant. Now, the little ant is desperate, but it is still fighting for it and running around. But I still didn't play my moth pill. I watched, and the little ant didn't move in the middle, didn't move. I thought this poor little ant was tortured to death by me, and I blew it back to my "army" directly. Who knows, as soon as he saw his relatives and friends, he suddenly came to life. It seems to say to his long-lost relatives and friends, "I miss you so much!" A big event happened to me before. You won't believe it. I experienced a life-and-death experience. I cleverly pretended to be dead when my life was at stake, and the little master in this room saw my pity and blew me back. I'm smart! Come on, go to my house and I'll tell you what just happened! " After that, it led some ants back to the nest. I'm glad to leave. Now, I have a composition to write!

This ant and I are really predestined! I hope I can see that clever little ant again when I come to grandma's house next time. Honestly, I don't know which one. Ha ha. From this experiment, I not only saw the cleverness of small ants in danger, but also saw the excellent quality of ants, which is worth learning! Goodbye, little ant!

4. Write a composition on natural observation (240 words). Cactus is a desert plant, and its tenacious vitality makes me admire. Let's take a look at its introduction first!

Cactus is dark green all over. If you look closely, you will find clusters of white thorns on its oval thick stem. This little thorn is its leaf. If it stings you, you will "ouch" for a while. This may be its weapon to protect itself.

Although the cactus looks ugly, if it is open, it is better than Bai Mudan, as if it is decorating itself. Flowers as white as jade are also fragrant, which really makes people want to pick one. But at this time, the small thorn will remind you "just look, don't start work!"

Although the flowering period of cactus is very short, it will wither in only one day, but its vitality is very strong. Whether summer is "scorching sun" or not, as long as it is planted in the soil and left unattended for a few days. Even in the "freezing and snowing" winter, it will not change color and grow tenaciously.

Cactus is a cactus, which is the general name of spherical species of cactus plants. It is not only varied and complex, but also has unique and colorful shapes. It is a pearl in a hundred flowers garden.

If you pay attention to the taste, you can plant some kinds of cactus, such as Jinhu, Feipeony, Dragon Ball and Moon Palace. However, those ordinary cacti also have a "taste". They have strong habits and are easy to cultivate. Flower pots, pottery pots, porcelain pots, purple sand pots and plastic pots are all acceptable. The fertilizer is the residue of plant ash, Taomi water and yogurt. I hope you don't underestimate cactus. Although the variety is common, the flowers are still beautiful and will not disappoint people. However, what makes people sigh is not the beautiful flower season of cactus, but the breeding period of its big balls and small balls. Watching the little balls attached to the mother gradually change from small to big, the thick maternal love is also very touching. When the melon is ripe, these young eggs will leave the mother's body and open up their own world. Although I am silent, people who like to grow cactus will certainly not turn a blind eye to all this (I am just stupid and can't describe it). A horizontal couplet depicts the following: the baby fell to the ground. I think it is not only vivid, but also full of puns and fun.

Haha, there are actually many kinds of cactus, so I won't introduce them here.

5. Write a composition about autumn at a fixed point, with 300 words in autumn.

Time kept flowing forward, the weather gradually cooled down, and the noisy cicada was blown away by autumn, replaced by the whine of crickets in the cracks in the slate under the steps at night. Ah! That lovely autumn has finally come.

Autumn is more prosperous than spring. Spring with flowers and trees is beautiful, but the fruitful autumn colors reveal the joy of harvest. Autumn is more colorful than summer. Although the summer with dense branches and leaves is charming, the autumn colors of golden leaves and green trees are even more refreshing. Autumn is more energetic than winter. Snow-capped winter is lovely, but the golden autumn with fragrant melons and fruits is more colorful. Autumn came to the Woods. From a distance, yellow leaves fall in pairs like golden butterflies. Tired of flying, they landed on my shoulders, head and feet. Brought my thoughts from green summer to golden autumn. As soon as I turned around, another peach leaf fell beside me. I bent down to pick it up and held it in my hand to study it carefully. What a special autumn leaf! It hasn't come yet, it has completely faded, and it still exudes a strong aroma. Autumn came to the orchard, persimmon bent down, bent down, and the branches were about to break. Sister litchi was so fat that she broke her clothes and showed her bulging white belly. Huge apples are covered with branches, showing sweet smiles, or shy or bold. The girl in autumn came to the farmland, and the corn was very happy. It specially changed into a new golden dress, grinning and showing golden teeth. In order to make themselves more beautiful, tomatoes put lipstick on their faces; The potato may have been too excited to break its green mouth and show its yellow tongue. Autumn has come, and the garden has become a paradise for chrysanthemums. They may like this heavy gold and choose to bloom their beauty in autumn. Chrysanthemums come in many colors: yellow, pink and white. . Big flowers and curly petals are like a little girl with curly hair. Visit the chrysanthemum garden or enjoy a pot of colorful chrysanthemums alone, and slowly indulge in that fragrance. Autumn brings gold to the earth and cotton-like clouds to the blue sky. Autumn wind, as cool as water, dyed the world yellow with chill.

I like this crisp autumn season!

I like autumn with flowers and leaves and flat chrysanthemums.

I like this unique and splendid autumn scenery.

6. Composition My Home (sequential observation) 1. Home is accommodation, home is care, home is home, home is the sunshine in everyone's heart, which contributes seven colors of light.

The prodigal son of Tianya takes home everywhere, and home is amorous feelings and romance; Students, the motherland is home, home is a pilot of love and care, adventure, heaven and earth is home, and home is dignity and honor. "She mended it carefully and thoroughly, fearing that it would delay his coming home."

Home is missing and warmth. "Chai Men smells dogs barking and returns to people in the snowy night."

Home is warmth and destination. "The moon stars are rare, and the black magpies fly south."

I just can't find the desolation and depravity of my home. "Three times around the tree, what branches can you rely on?"

I am confused and sad that I can't find my home. The hut was broken by the autumn wind, which was a sad and pity to lose my home.

When homesick, the moon is the only scenery, the stars are the only language, tears are the only letters from home, and memories are the only way to go home. When you are homesick, the sunshine in your heart will give off colorful light. It's sweet to be homesick in the dead of night. The moonlight in my hometown caressed my head. It's beautiful when I miss home, and Liuer in my hometown holds my hand. There are tears when homesick, but tears are accompanied by tears; When I feel homesick, I really want to do something for my family, no matter how far away from home.

Home is a round of sunshine in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Home is a small umbrella that stays on a rainy night, so that people wandering in a foreign land can get the shade of home; Home is a lamp in the dark, which brings the lost navigator back to the warm harbor; Home is the milk candy in the mouth, so that people who drink Huang Lian for a long time can taste the sweetness of life; Home is a rainbow flying in the sky, so that people everywhere can see the beauty of the world. Everything can't grow without sunshine, and people can't grow without sunshine.

Because sunshine gives people care, care and happiness. So is home.

2. School-My home My school-Jinhua New Century School, with beautiful environment, is located at the foot of Wucheng Mountain not far from the city center. She is a boarding school that trains students with high IQ, high quality and high skills, and strives to implement "all-round quality education", with "Excellence, Excellence and innovation" as its goal and "three things (all for students, all for students and all for students)" as its purpose.

My school is beautiful. I feel honored and proud of my school. I love my school so much! When I came to school, the first thing I saw was the school gate with a golden key embedded on the top. Shine in the sun! When you see it, you will know that "New Century School" is the key to open the treasure house of knowledge, the key to open people's beautiful hearts, and the key to open all-round quality talents in 2 1 century ... The flowers of the motherland grow here and the sun of the motherland rises here in the new century! I love my school because of its beautiful environment! The campus in the new century is like spring all the year round.

Colorful flowers, colorful, is a "sea of flowers." There are all kinds of flowers in the big flower bed in the center of the campus: iris, lilac, marigold … it will dazzle you! The promenade is covered with wisteria. They are like a bunch of upside-down grapes. They are naughty and cute! There are many beautiful flowers in front of the school sports art museum! Red, green, yellow, purple ... everything, can not help but attract butterflies to dance, bees humming and singing, a lively! In the early morning, the teaching building was covered with a layer of bright sunshine, and the students read aloud in the classroom; At night, the teaching building is covered with twinkling stars, and students concentrate on self-study in the classroom at night; After the lights were turned off, the slow evening breeze accompanied us into a sweet dream country ... I love my school because it is fully equipped! The school has two teaching buildings and a sports art museum, and the school is fully equipped.

The laboratory has all kinds of animal and plant specimens and complete experimental equipment; The electrochemical room has a complete set of equipment such as recording, video recording, projection and slide show; The dance studio is spacious and bright, and the floor-to-ceiling mirror can clearly show the dancer's Ana figure ... I love my school because it is warm as home! At school, there is an amiable "grandma principal" who is nearly seventy years old. From morning till night, she is found in every corner of the campus. She always cares about us and loves us! Here, there are hard-working gardeners who impart knowledge to us, open up a treasure house of knowledge for us, let us roam freely in the ocean of knowledge, and cultivate us from an ignorant doll into a young pioneer with culture, ideals, morality and discipline! Here, there is our life teacher, who is with us in our daily life like my mother, be caring and attentive! Here, there are dear classmates. We are United, progressive and friendly like brothers and sisters ... The new century is my home! I love my school, not only because of its beautiful environment, complete facilities and warmth, but more importantly, the school has created a generation of "all-round and high-quality" talents! Schools often carry out various activities, which not only enrich our knowledge, but also broaden our horizons. The school is constantly carrying out teaching reform.

In class, the teacher asked us to use our brains to study and carry out group discussions; After class, the teacher instructed us to set up a "second class". Therefore, the teaching quality of the school is constantly improving! Due to the development of educational reform, I actually fell in love with the most troublesome Chinese class! Today, I also like writing! The school attaches great importance to the cultivation and development of our all-round quality.

We arrange exercise time every day, and there are eye exercises between classes to protect our eyesight. The school has carefully arranged a nutrition package for us, and added milk, snacks and fruits between classes ... so, our bodies are all great! What makes me proud is that the school is a high-grade school, with three teaching departments, namely kindergarten, primary school and junior high school, 28 classes and 1000 teachers and students. The school was rated as "Jinhua Civilized Unit and Excellent Private School in Zhejiang Province" and recommended as "National Advanced Private Primary and Secondary Schools" by the Education Bureaus of all districts and cities and the Provincial Education Department.

I believe that the development prospect of the school will be more brilliant! I love my school, and I am proud to study in such a school! 3. English composition: My home I have a happy family. My mother is a hardworking person. She often cleans at home. My father.

7. Method of observing composition [Method of observing composition] Life is the source of writing, observation is the way of writing, and observation is the method of writing. Only through careful observation at ordinary times can we lay a good foundation for writing. So how can we make a careful observation? Students can start from the following aspects. First, when looking at the picture composition, we should observe it from the whole to the part, and then from the part to the whole, that is, we should first understand what is painted on the picture, then know what is the key painting, and then further observe the specific characteristics of each part to find out the connection between each part. You can contact the picture in an imaginary way and return to the whole on this basis. Make yourself have a comprehensive and profound understanding of the overall situation. Second, observe the still life according to the spatial orientation characteristics, that is, from far and near or from near and far, from top to bottom or from bottom to top, from inside to outside or from outside to inside, from left to right or from right to left. Third, when observing people, carefully observe a certain order of their appearance. First, choose people who are familiar with you and have efficient characteristics as the observation object, and then make progressive observation from the aspects of body shape, appearance and clothing. Fourth, to observe animals, we should carefully observe their appearance and activities. Take eating as an example, all kinds of small animals eat differently. For example, squirrels are "half-standing, holding with two small claws and eating with relish"; The little pigeon is fed by the mother pigeon, that is, "The mother pigeon puts a few grains of rice in her mouth, and then feeds them into the little pigeon's mouth grain by grain ..." 5. Observing plants can be observed in the order of their own growth laws (germination, long leaves, flowering and fruiting), or from the aspects of flowers, leaves, stems, roots, shapes, colors and tastes. Observation should not only be meticulous, comprehensive and in-depth, but also use a variety of organs to feel and experience, grasp the characteristics of things and understand the essence of things.

8. How about writing at home (in the order of observation)? In turn, home is the cradle of every child's growth and the harbor of every child's life. I have a warm, happy and harmonious home. I love my family.

I love my family, a happy and warm family. My parents' meticulous care for me made me deeply feel the warmth of home. Every time I come back from school, my mother is busy cooking good food for me in the kitchen. My father sits next to me and studies with me. Dad will patiently explain to me when I encounter problems that I can't. My mother is very concerned about my study. She was afraid that I was tired of studying and tried her best to strengthen my nutrition. Cook me a cup of hot milk every morning and cook for me all the time.

I love my family, a harmonious and happy family. In my family, it is always full of peaceful atmosphere, and our family of three always live in harmony. Mom and dad have a very good relationship and hardly quarrel. Dad speaks humorously and always makes my mother and I laugh. I am a very sensible and willful child, and I don't make my parents angry. If I do well in the exam, my parents will celebrate for me and take me to eat my favorite freezing point. I always pour a glass of wine for my parents first, because I know that my grades can't be achieved without the efforts of teachers and the cultivation of my parents.

I love my family, a family I can rely on. Whenever I encounter difficulties or grievances outside; It was my parents who helped me solve my difficulties, listened to my inner anguish and taught me how to face life and facts. They taught me that life will not be smooth sailing, but one should know how to face the challenges and tests of life. I love this warm and happy home, let love stay in my home forever.

9. Write a composition about small animals through dynamic observation and write a detailed action recommendation model.

My family has two goldfish, which were given to me by my father's colleagues. These two goldfish are red, and only the ends of their bellies and tails are white. My goldfish has three characteristics. The first point is that they have big black eyes on their heads. The second point is that their bellies are bigger than other fish. Although their bellies are big, they can move flexibly. Third, they have a big tail as beautiful as a peacock. Their tails are thin and transparent, and they are very pleasing to the eye to swing.

My little fish is very greedy. As soon as he saw me, he put his mouth out of the water, as if looking for something I wanted to eat. Mom told me;

"Don't keep feeding them, or they won't last." I didn't listen. Once I put a lot of food, and a small fish really died. I was so sad that I cried. The remaining small fish seem to be sad for the death of their companions. It fell into the water quietly, lost its vitality and didn't like food. I am very worried that it will die, too. Dad had to ask Uncle Liu for another one. Xiaoyu saw that his new partner really got better, and recovered his former vitality and playfulness.

Since then, I have fed the small fish two or three times a day, only a little at a time. Every time I go to the fish tank, they shake their heads and tail at me. When they see the food in my hand, they will be happier and their bodies will swing more happily. They will hold their heads high and stick their mouths out of the water. When I put my hands near the water, they will grab my food with their mouths. So I spread the food evenly on the water, and they kept scrambling to eat with their mouths open and their bodies kept turning.

Small fish sometimes get sick. Once I found a small fish with a white bubble on its head. It didn't like swimming very much, but just floated quietly. I quickly called Cui's father to ask. Knowing the reason, I went to buy medicine. Crush the tablets and put them in water. Change the water and put the medicine once a day until the white bubbles disappear completely. The little fish just returned to its former appearance.

My little fish is cute, but it is my good friend. Whenever I finish my homework, I will sit quietly by the fish tank and watch.

If the small fish are happy, they will swing their big tails and fins day and night and swim around in the water. When it swings its right fin, it will turn right, and when it swings its left fin, it will turn left. It can also play games. It will open its mouth and spit out bubbles, one, two, three, and entertain itself. Or click to attract attention and let people play with him. All because it's happy. If it is unhappy, it will hit its head against the glass while swimming.