Old people love photographic copywriting.

In fact, your chances of winning the prize in this exercise are slim. Although the old man has good manners, the background is not vague enough, the characters are too dark, and the clothes have no details.

The table in the lower left corner is a failure and eye-catching.

There is something wrong with the composition, it is too empty and there are too many useless things. Cut it off:

The most terrible thing is that the elderly smoke, which is incompatible with health. What we advocate is that the elderly should be healthy and provide for the elderly.

My humble opinion for reference