How to review questions for material composition

Methods for reviewing topic of material composition

The idea of ??article depends on the topic of review. If the examination of the topic is unclear, then the conception will be inaccurate; if the conception is not accurate, deviations and digressions will occur. "If you lose one move, you will lose everything." This is the truth.

1. Principles for review of material composition

①Principle of integrity

Read the materials provided carefully, and truly understand the center and essence of the materials. Don’t just grasp The fragments that live in it replace the whole with parts. Of course, it is correct and necessary to pay attention to the statements that play a key role in the material, but it must be done within an overall framework. Such as this composition material, choose your own angle based on the following materials:

A great sculptor completed a very perfect sculpture. Someone asked her: "How did you carve such a perfect sculpture?" The sculptor replied: "Actually, the statue was there originally. I just removed the extra corners." In fact, in life, you are the statue. Just remove the "excess corners." You can achieve a perfect self if you "angle", and the outstanding sculptor is yourself!

How should we "review" this material?

Some students I grabbed the key word "sculpting myself" and used this as a topic, with the intention of "I work hard to shape myself", "I shape myself by reading more", "I shape myself by choosing good friends", "I cultivate myself to be noble" Sentiment to shape oneself" and so on. Some students even went so far as to say: "I don't need to get rid of my own shortcomings, because every successful person has shortcomings and mistakes." Is this okay? No! Only grasping the "fragments" of the material itself to formulate an idea, without being able to accurately It would be biased to grasp the true intention of the person who asked the question. Since it is a topic review, it should be reviewed comprehensively and the material should be analyzed as a whole, rather than divided and cannibalized and one-sided. If we analyze the above material as a whole, it is not difficult to find that in addition to the phrase "shape yourself", "removing unnecessary corners" is also a very important message. "Only by removing the 'superfluous corners' can you create a perfect self" is the central connotation of the material. Choosing articles around this point is already half the battle.

Another example is this composition material. You can choose your own perspective based on the following materials:

Luojia Mountain in Wuhan City is the seat of Wuhan University. There is a famous cherry blossom garden on the mountain. Every year during the cherry blossom season, there are many tourists. I always see some young friends wearing kimonos taking photos among the cherry blossoms. Once, a young Korean student studying in Wuhan was very puzzled when she saw this. She said to her instructor: "Why do they wear kimonos to take pictures? We also have cherry blossoms in Korea, but no one wears kimonos to take pictures with them. Like." Her mentor smiled bitterly and was speechless.

Judging from the instructor's "wry smile" and "speechless", this material shows the instructor's dissatisfaction and contempt for the young people who were photographed in kimono. The instructor's voice reflected the author's intention and the main theme of the material, which was to criticize those Chinese young people who were photographed in kimono, criticize them for their admiration for foreigners, the decline of national dignity, and the lack of national values. There are four objects involved in this material. They are: one is a tourist, the other is a Chinese youth, the third is a Korean youth, and the fourth is a mentor. These four objects appear as four angles of the material. The second and fourth angles best express the theme and intention. In the second and fourth angles, if we take a negative view and point out that "wry smile" is a manifestation of closed-mindedness, we can thus prove that if China wants to go global and enhance friendship among people of all countries, it must emancipate its mind. Although this literary meaning is new, it does not conform to the subject of the material and the intention of the proposer. Therefore, in daily composition training, we should guide students to correctly grasp the relationship between angle and topic. If you blindly seek novelty and "rebound Pipa", you will only misunderstand the meaning of the raw materials.

②Multi-perspective principle

Multiple materials contain two or more meanings. Therefore, when analyzing the materials, you must use divergent thinking and quickly list the opinions derived from the materials. 2 to 5, and then find an analytical angle that is beneficial to your writing. For example, for such a composition material, choose your own angle based on the following materials:

There was a man from the state of Lu who was good at weaving linen shoes, and his wife was good at weaving white silk. They wanted to live in the country of Yue, so someone said to them: "You will be extremely poor." The man from Lu asked him what he meant, and the man said: "Hemp shoes are worn on the feet, but the people of Yue are barefoot. For those who walk, white silk is used to make hats, while Yue people wear their hair loose. The specialties of you and your wife are useless in Yue. How can you not be poor?"

1. Horizontal conception : In the process of thinking about the problem, the thinking follows the directions told by the raw materials to the readers.

No matter what we do, we cannot be divorced from reality. The advantage of this idea is that it can closely follow the basic tendency and main points of the material, so there will be no deviation or diversion from the topic.

2. Reverse conception: think about the problem of raw materials upside down and question the raw materials from the opposite angle.

Because the Yue people are barefoot and have their hair loose, there is a huge market for shoes and hats, and we can conclude that the Lu people may not be poor. This requires Lu people to dare to try, dare to take risks, and dare to reform.

3. Extended conception: Based on the known content of the raw materials, make reasonable associations with the raw materials and carry out appropriate reasoning and extension.

"You can't do business at a loss", "How can you get rich without using your skills" and other opinions.

4. Analogy idea: through association, the known content of the material and other contents outside the material are connected and considered from here to there, and the similarities are found.

When running an enterprise or doing business, we must base it on local production, consumption, customs, and other conditions, as well as needs and possibilities. This requires us to consider motivations and benefits, and to exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses, in order to make money in a sound way.

③Principle of clear restrictions

Compared with topic compositions, the review purpose of material composition is very restrictive, and the purpose of the material must be clearly defined to determine the purpose. For a material like this, choose your own perspective to write an essay based on the following materials:

A boy who grew up in an orphanage asked the director pessimistically: "What's the point of living for an unwanted child like me?" What?" The dean handed him a stone and said, "Tomorrow, you can sell this stone, but it is not really for sale. No matter how much others pay, you must not sell it."

The next day. , the boy squatted in the corner of the market. There were really many people wanting to buy that stone, and the price was getting higher and higher. In the evening, the dean asked him to take it to the gold market to sell it tomorrow. In the gold market, someone actually offered to buy the stone at a price ten times higher than yesterday.

Finally, the dean asked the boy to go to the gem market to sell the stone. As a result, the price of the stone increased tenfold from yesterday, and it was even spread as a "rare treasure".

The dean said to the boy: "The value of life is just like this stone, a very inconspicuous stone, but its value has been increased because of your cherishment."

When conducting composition training, many students use "cherishing" as the topic, writing "cherishing friendship", "cherishing time", "cherishing happy life", "cherishing learning opportunities", etc., which are biased. As long as we conduct a comprehensive and in-depth analysis, we will understand that the main theme of this material is the topic - "As long as you value yourself and cherish yourself, your life will be meaningful and valuable." The material has a better understanding of "cherishing". Specific restrictions.

④Principle of Tendency

Some materials describe an event objectively and explain things or phenomena without any subjective feelings, colors and ideological tendencies; some materials are just right. On the contrary, when describing, explaining or commenting on something, the author's emotional tendency is clearly revealed, so that we can start from the emotional tendency of the material to evaluate the topic. For such a material, you can write an essay based on the following materials:

When Venus with a broken arm was displayed in front of people, it attracted countless bad guys. They come up with all sorts of fantastic ideas for reconnecting broken arms. Venus's lost arm is like a trap full of temptation. But so far no design has achieved universal admiration.

The emotional bent of the material is very evident. The derogatory words such as "a meddlesome person" and "a flock of ducks" are palpable. He has a negative attitude towards trying to reattach a broken arm, but he has a favorable attitude towards Venus with a broken arm. Based on this, we can conclude that we should let nature take its course and not impose our own views on others. If you don't pay attention to analyzing emotional tendencies, the intention is: Persistence is victory or don't be afraid of difficulties when studying books. It obviously deviates from the meaning of the question.

How to review the topic of material composition

How to quickly review the meaning of the question is the key to the success of material composition.

Question review method: look for keyword syntax. The main idea of ??a piece of material is sometimes reflected in the text. Grasping these words can often get twice the result with half the effort.

Question review method: the method of tracing cause and effect. The emergence, change and development of anything have its internal or external reasons. Therefore, it is an effective method to read and analyze the causal connection of materials and start from the cause to the idea.

Materials: The crow envied the eagle's ability to swoop down from the mountain and catch the lamb, so he imitated the eagle's swooping posture and practiced hard. One day, the crow felt that he had practiced very well, so he swooped down from the tree, trying to catch the goat and fly up. However, his body was too light, and his claws were entangled in the wool, so he could not fly no matter how hard he flapped his wings. stand up. As a result, he was caught by the shepherd. When the shepherd's child asked what kind of bird it was, the shepherd said: "This is a bird that has forgotten its name." The child touched the crow's feathers and said: "It is also very cute!"

< p>Why does the crow fail to catch the goat? Because it ignores its own conditions (its body is too light and its claws are not as sharp as the eagle) and blindly imitates the eagle. How can it not fail? Starting from the reason, we can think of it as: blindly imitating others is like imitating others. , will inevitably lead to failure. It is important for people to know themselves. Know yourself. Everything is based on reality. Of course, the reason can also be analyzed from the child's praise of the crow, "It's also very cute!" Because it is not willing to be an ordinary crow, it wants to transcend, it dares to challenge and try, and its courage is commendable! From this point of view, It is easier to write new ideas. It can also start from having the courage to try but also being practical.

Question review method: contact with the actual method.

Materials: People always admire the spirit of the "thousand-mile horse" who can travel thousands of miles and move forward courageously; people also admire the spirit of the "old scalper" who never stops plowing. However, some people always feel unsatisfied and always want to complement each other's advantages with "Qianlima" and "Old Scalper", thereby deriving "Qianlima"-style "Old Scalper" or "Old Scalper"-style "Qianlima".

This material talks about people's attitudes towards "thousand-mile horses" and "old scalpers". If the animals in the material are related to human society, students will naturally find out the main theme of the material: blaming people for failing to be perfect. .

Question review method: understand the implication method.

Materials: A snail who wants to accomplish something earth-shattering. At first it wanted to travel east to Mount Tai and climb to the top of the mountain, but after calculation, it would take at least 3,000 years to realize this plan, so it had to reluctantly give up this plan. Later, it wanted to climb south to the Yangtze River to take a look at the rushing river, but calculated that it would take at least 3,000 years. The snail knew that his life was very short and couldn't help but feel very sad, so he refused to do anything and finally died in the weeds.

This fable is divided into two levels: the first level tells about a snail who is too ambitious and has inappropriate ambitions. As a result, two "grand" plans were ultimately aborted due to impracticality; the second level talks about The snail never recovered and eventually died in the grass. Based on the above analysis, it can be seen that there are two reasons for the snail's tragedy: first, unrealistic aspirations; second, unwillingness to be down-to-earth and unwilling to realize the value of one's life by doing ordinary things well.

Materials: If the pony wants to cross the river, he first asks Uncle Niu if he can go across. Uncle Niu said the water was very shallow and could be crossed. The pony was preparing to cross when suddenly the squirrel told him that the water was too deep to cross and one of his companions had drowned the day before yesterday. Xiao Ma ran out of ideas and went back to ask her mother. Mom told it to think more and give it a try. As a result, the pony passed by. The water was neither deep nor shallow, just above the knees.

Positive: 1. Independent thinking is a valuable spiritual quality

2. Correct behavioral guidance comes from independent thinking

3. Only by believing in yourself can you get out The Valley of Blind Obedience

4. Only through more analysis and comparison can you distinguish right from wrong

5. True knowledge comes from practice, and truth comes from practice

6. Trying is the beginning of success, only if you dare to try will you succeed

Considerations: 1. Following what others say, you get yourself into trouble.

2. People who lack independent spirit can only play the role of dependence and clinging

3. People whose brains grow on other people’s heads are sad

4. Blind obedience has no way out