The Task-driven Composition of Teacher Zhang, a Good Person in Changchun

This paper expounds the characteristics of task-driven and its application in material writing.

Learning focus

Master the essentials of task-driven material composition writing

First, import:

Compare the first idea of writing "students cheat" in two compositions with the same material (which paragraph is more suitable for students' judgment and analysis).

Material topic A female teacher found that there were 28 students in her Grade Two class. In order to finish a biology homework, she copied ready-made materials from the Internet. She thinks that these students are of low quality and plagiarize others' labor achievements, giving them zero points. Parents think that the punishment is too heavy and have put pressure on the school to demand a heavy sentence. The school was overwhelmed and forced the teachers to submit. She stuck to her decision, rebuffed it and resigned. After the matter was reported by the media, it aroused social concern. Some people praised it, others questioned it.

What do you think of these things? Please comment from any angle of teachers, parents or schools, show your attitude and expound your views.

Student composition

The first part:

What is honesty? Honesty is a good character that everyone must possess. A person stresses honesty, that is, he (she) stresses civilization and credibility; Popular everywhere; People will ignore the existence of a dishonest person. Therefore, each of us should be honest. In real life, we don't lack anything in our life. What we lack is people's heart and honesty, which allows people to find opportunities and conditions for honesty. Some people just want others to be honest, and it is difficult for them to be honest with others. In today's civilized development, it is more important to reflect the integrity of personnel, but the result has disappointed you. So, from now on, we should be honest. We should do what we say, not what we say. As the saying goes, "keep your word, keep your word, keep your word …".

The second part:

Twenty-eight senior two students, regardless of their honesty, copied ready-made materials from the Internet to cheat their teachers just to finish a biology class assignment. This lack of honesty seems to be only a problem for students. In fact, the reason can be traced back to family and society, but it was exposed in school. The lack of honesty is the result of the lack of multi-party education. In my opinion, although female teachers are a little strict, they should also be strict with plagiarism, which is not only related to the future of students, but also to our purpose of teaching and educating people. ?

Which of these two paragraphs is more appropriate, conception or writing?

The first paragraph: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (divorced from the task, only talk about "integrity")

The second part: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (closely related to the task, with a clear position)

No matter which angle you choose, students, teachers, parents or schools should first make clear whether they are tolerant or severe in the case of "student cheating" given in the materials, and focus on the materials closely, instead of starting a new stove regardless of the task.

Students' views-With the help of keywords such as "plagiarism" in the materials, the following views can be established:

1. It is not advisable for students to cheat (it is not advisable for students to "copy").

Honesty is more important than academic performance.

3. Citizens' honesty education should start from adulthood (student days).

Teachers' Views-With the help of keywords such as "Insist on your own decision, sternly refuse, resign and leave" in the materials, the following views can be established:

1. Be a principled educator.

2. "Make a statement, make contributions and establish a career" is far more important than "achievement" and "score".

3. Be an independent citizen who is thoughtful, responsible, dignified, able to make correct decisions and dare to sacrifice personal interests.

Parental perspective-With the help of "understanding" keywords in the materials, the following viewpoints can be established:

1. It is not advisable to indulge children in cheating. We can analyze the contradiction between parents' love for their children and their reason. It is understandable to love children if you are poor and carry on the family line, but it is not advisable to hide evil people and shelter evil people. "Touching the Dragon and Talking about the Queen Zhao" says: "Parents love their children and have far-reaching influence. "Children plagiarize and cheat, not to reflect on their children's mistakes, but to' oppose' the teacher's practice and then' pressure' the school. The result will only encourage children to cheat, which may ruin their lives.

Parents should set an example for their children to be honest. ?

Task-based writing is a new type of Chinese composition in 20 15 college entrance examination. Task-based writing aims to pay attention to reading ability, writing ability, especially thinking ability. Students are required to read the materials on the basis of reading and write according to the task instructions, so reading ability and understanding ability are required when reviewing the questions.

◆ The so-called "task-driven material composition" is to enhance the pertinence of writing by adding task-based instructions on the basis that the original materials arouse candidates' thinking and stimulate their writing desire, so that candidates can identify key concepts in real situations and demonstrate them in multi-dimensional comparison.

Review 20 15 National Volume II for College Entrance Examination

Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)

The selection of contemporary figures produced the last three candidates: Dali, who was keen on learning and thinking, determined to innovate, made great contributions to solving the mystery of life science, and led the team to the forefront of international academics. Lao Wang, who loves his job and is dedicated, has practiced his unique skills, turned ordinary technology into perfect art, and embarked on a road of "great country craftsman" from vocational high school students to welding masters. Xiao Liu, who loves photography, travels across mountains and rivers to capture the beauty of the world. His blog won the admiration of netizens: "You brought us a taste of the world" and "You helped us keep our beautiful homesickness".

Of these three people, who do you think is more elegant? Please combine the content and significance of the material to reflect your thinking, weighing and choice.

It is required to choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style and draw up a good title; Don't copy, don't copy. ?

First of all, grasp the characteristics of the three materials and prepare to answer "Who is more elegant".