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What is a good beginning and end of argumentative writing in high school?

First, students often have the following problems when writing: the introduction at the beginning is too common to attract readers' attention; Examples often pile up materials and ignore analysis; After giving an example, the troops often withdraw hastily, and it is difficult to enhance the social value of the topic. The composition time of college entrance examination is short, and candidates are nervous. We must have a "certain method" to make a good work in the examination room. This paper introduces a "universal" method to manage the overall structure of argumentative writing-the five-character "Ding Gan Kun", that is, "citation, reason, matter, connection and conclusion". "Quote" means to draw an argument; "Reason" is the basic truth contained in the explanation and demonstration; "Things" is an example, analysis; "Lian" is explained by connecting with social reality; "knot" is to create a good ending and wrap up the full text.

Please read an argumentative essay on "Look". [Disease Text] Stay alert

There's always someone to look forward to. When we are looking for it, we will feel dejected because we are afraid of not seeing the figure of hope, so we have to stand silently and pass our eyes to the distance. Even if it becomes a stone of resentment, the heart will not change.

Seeing is the greatest test of friendship. The friendship after reading is the real friendship. Watchers in the long river of history have created many beautiful myths.

Cowherd and Weaver Girl are a pair of lovers who help each other. Work together, eager to see, Tanabata and other bridges meet.

And Nv Ying finally found the body of her husband Shun in Junshan. In the depths of their feelings, they shed tears and turned into two mountains, guarding Junshan, the cemetery of a generation of emperors.

"Jun is like a rock, concubine is like Pu Wei, Pu Wei is as tough as silk, and the rock has no shift." Jiao Zhongqing and Liu Lanzhi, who were not together, finally got married. Peacock flies southeast, wandering for five miles, looking into the distant eyes, how can he be willing to leave?

They watch their friendship and are praised by the world for their watch. Their watches are full of bitterness and happiness at the same time. If a person can care for several people at the same time and be cared for by several people, he will never be lonely. If he can "know everything about the world and care about it" and is willing to take risks for all the people in the world, he is undoubtedly a great watchman.

Before going on the road every time, we should also thank those tireless watchmen, who gave us the motivation to move forward and let us know how to watch the world with our lives.

■ Pulse

The introduction of the first paragraph of this article is too common, so it is necessary to introduce the image and lead to the central argument. Secondly, in this paper, four materials are put together for a general analysis, which is suspected of piling up materials, and each material should be briefly analyzed. Finally, the article ended hastily without discussion, which seemed hasty and lacked twists and turns. It is suggested that the original text be revised as follows.

Modify the text: be vigilant

(Introduction) Snow Lotus in Tianshan Mountain, gazing at the blue sky and white clouds with deep affection for thousands of years; Penglai breeze listens to the sound of blue sea and waves with an eternal attitude; Feng Dan of Qixia is eagerly looking forward to the return of birds and magpies.

(Richard) Perhaps the world is full of watchful eyes, and perhaps watchful eyes are the most touching eyes in the world.

Seeing is the greatest test of friendship. "Lu Yao knows horsepower and sees people's hearts for a long time." The friendship that keeps watch over time is the true friendship. Watchers in the long river of history have created many beautiful myths.

(Things) (added after the case of "Cowherd and Weaver Girl") Because they are more beautiful than Xia Yun.

(Added after the case of E Huang and Nv Ying) Because of watchfulness, love transcends time and space and becomes more noble.

(Added after the case of Jiao Zhongqing and Liu Lanzhi) So, with love birds's singing, the world is warmer.

If a person can care for several people at the same time and be cared for by several people, he will never be lonely. If he can "love all over the world, his heart is in the world" and he is willing to think about the whole world, then he is undoubtedly a great watchman. Wang Shunyou and Huang Borong watched the motherland and people. Aren't they the most touching watchers on the land of China?

When life is frustrated, can we feel the distant support and encouragement? Parents, friends, or both. Before every trip, we should also thank those tireless watchmen, who gave us the motivation to move forward and let us know how to watch the whole world. With a watch, the dark road will cast the dawn of hope, and the rain and snow of life will no longer be cold.

Secondly, rhinoceros horn was considered supernatural in ancient times because there was a white line running through it. Li Shangyin felt it. He said, "Although my body doesn't have bright wings like a phoenix, I feel the harmonious heartbeat of the sacred unicorn", which is a metaphor for the spiritual harmony and induction between the two lovers. Metaphor can also be called "spiritual connection" in an article. We not only regard it as a rhetoric and language art, but also use it to run through the whole text and manage the structure of an argumentative essay. In other words, a metaphor is used throughout, and a metaphor is used at the end, so that it can run through the whole text and connect all parts skillfully. This metaphor runs through the whole text, and its structure is compact and seamless.

A philosopher said, "Beauty is the perceptual manifestation of ideas." In argumentative writing, when emotional metaphors are used to express ideas, aesthetic feeling will naturally arise. When students write in this way, they often have the following problems: (1) The metaphor is abrupt and cannot be inferred; You can't run the metaphor through to the end, just like a string of beads is broken, which has no overall aesthetic feeling; Image and thought are separated, and the combination of form and god cannot be realized; This connection is unnatural and cannot be realized naturally. Let's look at the following exercise on the topic of "indifference".

■ [Pathological text]

Indifferent is chrysanthemum.

Indifferent as a chrysanthemum, it makes people aftertaste for a long time.

Indifferent and self-cultivation.

Watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, rolling with the clouds outside. Indifference makes flowers bloom brilliantly, and flowers end up sad; Let the clouds roll gorgeously, and the clouds are free and elegant; Let Mount Tai collapse in front without changing color.

Decorate with moss dyed green, render with curtain grass color, feed on wine, and make the humble room your home. You can tune the pipa and read Jin Dian; You can read without asking for answers; You can shout, "What are bells and drums, delicacies and treasures? I hope I will never wake up after getting drunk, and then whisper, "Don't care about the poor, don't care about the rich."

The humble room is quiet, with no strings and no workload, and it is very comfortable both physically and mentally. Travel and swim, release white deer, and Xiu De due to indifference. So cultivated, the body is like a chrysanthemum, and the fragrance is full of room.

Indifferent to Zhi Ming.

When fishing in Weishui, Zhuangzi said that he wanted to be a turtle dragging its tail in the mud.

Sailing and sailing, joseph banks put aside the comfortable aristocratic life and even smashed countless gold, just because he was indifferent, just because he was seeking knowledge, just because he wanted to explore the green world.

Worry about the world first, and enjoy it later. Aside from their own interests, people who live in temples are worried about themselves, while those who live in rivers and lakes are worried about their husbands.

Aren't they noble Jin Ju? Take indifference as Mars, start a prairie fire with wind, and burn ambition with the potential of starting a prairie fire.

Don't care about distance.

He has wealth, but he still cares about the people. Walking on the cliff, he opened a door of hope from the isolated cliff and let the poor villagers lean out to enjoy the prosperity of the world. He reappeared the spirit of Gong Yu moving mountains and danced on the indifferent stage.

When you cross the sea, you show your true colors. When a person is indifferent to life and death, he really becomes a chivalrous great man. The huge waves of three in and three out, and the calmness in the face of danger all stem from the indifference of the mind.

Out of the camera, out of the play or real or fake characters, he is the real Pu Cunxin. He has no hype, no scandal; He doesn't put on airs or play big cards. He smiled, he acted, and he built a protective net against AIDS with his hands in obscurity. He touched you and me.

Isn't it just chrysanthemum? The fragrance of chrysanthemum moistens people's hearts. Poor people don't care about poverty, such as chrysanthemum elegance; Sages do not pay attention to official career, such as chrysanthemums; The rich are indifferent to wealth, while celebrities do not rely on the trend of flattery, such as chrysanthemum heart. Sowing an indifferent seed for life and cultivating the chrysanthemum of life, we really enter the high realm of life pursuit. Self-cultivation is a leaf, ambition is a flower and ambition is a fragrance.

■ Pulse

Metaphor is used in the original text, but there are several problems. First of all, the metaphor at the beginning of the article seems abrupt, giving people the feeling that it is a bit far-fetched. It should be the transition from chrysanthemum to indifference, which is natural. Secondly, when discussing each part, clear your mind first, and finally take chrysanthemum as the "bright tail". Being indifferent to self-cultivation and aiming high has nothing to do with chrysanthemums. In this way, the ideas and images discussed are not organically unified, and the truth of being a human being should be derived from the characteristics of chrysanthemums, which will naturally follow. At the end of the article, the attitude towards the rich and the poor is repetitive, and the last paragraph is not closely related to the previous paragraph. The last sentence has the feeling of adding more leaves, so we should try our best to take care of it. In addition, the main body of the article is a parallel relationship as a whole, and the metaphor of chrysanthemum is not fully used to visualize the idea. In fact, we can establish a metaphorical argument by dividing subheadings. Then in argumentative writing, thoughts will appear in the form of perceptual metaphor, which will naturally produce aesthetic feeling. According to the adjustment mentioned above, many words must also be changed to make the language style of the full text look natural. It is suggested that the original text be revised as follows.

Revised text: unbeaten chrysanthemum

Look at the elegant state of chrysanthemums by the flowing water of a small bridge, read chrysanthemums indifferently in the wind and rain, and remember the leisurely rhyme of chrysanthemums when the wind blows away. Its fragrance always reminds people of the interest of a gentleman.

Kikuchiya

Life should also be like a chrysanthemum, pursuing the elegance of a gentleman in plain.

Watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, rolling with the clouds outside. This flower should be white chrysanthemum, bright and elegant; That cloud should be a white chrysanthemum in the sky. The clouds are light and the wind is light. Whether to stay or not is unintentional. Do you want to lose face? Taishan collapsed in front of it, and its face did not change color. This is the wind of a gentleman, the elegance of a gentleman.

The life of a gentleman is elegant and elegant, decorated with moss green and grass. They live on wine and call their humble home. They can tune the pipa and read Jin Dian; You can read without asking for answers; You can shout, "What are bells and drums, delicacies and treasures? I hope I will never wake up after getting drunk, and then whisper, "Don't care about the poor, don't care about the rich." They sit at the table, with no paperwork, no pressure and comfortable body and mind; Looking around the room, there is nothing but a bottle; Travel around the mountains, fly white deer and live on the green cliff. The cultivation of a gentleman is only my virtue and fragrance, full of elegance, like white chrysanthemums, full of exotic fragrance, elegant and dry.

Pale chrysanthemum

Jin Ju is in full bloom, silently guarding the pure land.

A gentleman's heart is as light as a chrysanthemum. He sticks to his inner peace in the face of fame and fortune and is indifferent to his own ambitions.

When fishing in Weishui, Zhuangzi said that he wanted to be a turtle dragging its tail in the mud.

Sailing and sailing, joseph banks put aside the comfortable aristocratic life and even smashed countless gold, just because he didn't want to become rich, he just wanted to explore the unknown green world and climb the pure land of truth.

Worry about the world first, and enjoy it later. Putting aside your own interests, you will worry about your people if you live in a temple, and you will worry about your king if you live far away from the rivers and lakes.

Aren't they refined Jin Ju? Stand indifferently, leave indifferently, stick to beauty and make the world brilliant.

Kikuyuki

Danju is in full bloom, and the exotic fragrance is far away.

Thirdly, hierarchical structure is a common structure in argumentative writing. Its characteristic is that analysis is like peeling bamboo shoots, layer by layer, from shallow to deep, step by step, until the essence is revealed.

Some students often only talk about one, not the other, or only talk about phenomena without revealing the essence, or only discuss problems with unclear methods ... This argument is not high, dynamic, profound and thorough.

Only by dividing the central argument into several sub-arguments, from simple to complex, step by step, can readers be guided to "climb the peak" and broaden their horizons until they have a panoramic understanding of "extraordinary, magnificent and extraordinary world outlook", thus opening their eyes. Please look at this classmate's composition, which is entitled "Sentiment Poetry".

■ [Sick Text] Feel Poetry

Some of us always complain to God: We gave Tao Yuanming a colorful paradise, but let him shuttle through dust and waste gas every day; Yu Dafu left him a poetic autumn, but when he looked up, his eyes were covered with bricks. I gave Li Lewei a "castle in the air" that exists in the secular world but is full of fairy tales, but I only gave myself a cold wall ... Is there really no poem in real life? No, actually, we also live in a poetic place. As long as you spread your thoughts and release your lofty sentiments, you can feel infinite poetry.

Su Shi's life is a poetic life. Even after the frustration of officialdom, he didn't let his life lose its poetry. He cares about mountains and rivers, sometimes "bamboo shoes are lighter than horses, and a misty rain will eventually lead to his life", and sometimes "a reed is like a reed, and the earth is at a loss." This poetic life is left to future generations with infinite reverie.

Tao Yuanming's Fall into the Dust Net by mistake, when the flattering wind and dirty air around him blocked his bright eyes of "pleasing charm", he resolutely broke through Peng Ze and planted chrysanthemum poems at the foot of Nanshan Mountain and under the east fence. Dawn Blooms tidied up his poetry and "took the Moon Lotus home". The day when he got rid of officialdom and returned to the countryside was the beginning of his painstaking creation and detailed description of poetic life.

In fact, life is like climbing a mountain. If you only concentrate on climbing the mountain and only care about the ultimate goal of the top of the mountain, then the flowers and plants around you along the way will be regarded as obstacles and the singing of birds will be regarded as interference. All these poetic scenes will be blocked by your narrow mind. Therefore, a cup of bitter tea can also taste a poem.

Helen Keller, a great woman who lives in a quiet, flat and poetic world, "listens" to the trickle of songs flowing through her fingers, "watches" the red flowers and green grass, blue sky and white clouds around her, and scatters love into people's hearts. She opened up her own poetic world and decorated this warm world with poems. Therefore, people who don't like poetry will not find that the world is full of poetry. Open your heart and you will find that the world is full of poetry.

Rodin said that there is no lack of beauty in life, but a lack of eyes to find beauty. Just like the ancient city of Fenghuang, it settled in a corner, and generations of Xiangxi people turned a blind eye to its simplicity and tranquility. Shen Congwen, who came out of the border town, took a tube of Tuojiang green and a petal of mountain flowers and painted a poetic border town painting, vividly showing the phoenix to the world; The strange, beautiful and handsome Zhangjiajie has been sleeping in the eyes of the villagers for many years, but it was unveiled by a Hong Kong photographer with his keen eyes. The loud "click" sound merged into a moving poem, which shocked the hearts of the world.

Yes, open your eyes and have a good look at the infinite poetry around you. When I got up in the morning, I saw a bird flying outside the window and dropping dew on the tree. What a beautiful picture! On my way to school, I saw a new leaf on the tree by the roadside. What a wonderful sight it is. Looking from a distance, a white sail on the opposite river shines in the sun, which is refreshing ... you will find that our life is full of poetry everywhere.

Poetry is a feeling that seems far away from you, but as long as you feel it with your heart, poetry will always accompany you and stay in your heart.

■ Pulse

"Poetry" is a very meaningful topic, and "emotion" has its own depth. Therefore, the feeling of poetry is very suitable for the layout of hierarchical structure, so that the poetic "feeling" is deepened step by step from the outside to the inside, which not only answers what kind of life state is "poetic", but also expounds how to feel the poetic life.

From ancient times to the present, from others to their own examples, many poetic life States have been listed, but the essence of poetic life has not been seen through these phenomena, thus the specific methods of feeling poetry have not been refined. The article chooses typical examples, which are simply piled up and mixed together. For a time, Su Shi never lost his poems, while Tao Yuanming created them. After a while, I felt poetry from the process of climbing the mountain, and Helen Keller created poetry; After a while, Shen Congwen and Hong Kong photographers found that poetry ... was illogical and disorganized, so the discussion lacked strength and depth. It is better to form a hierarchical structure according to the logical order of "discovering poetry-appreciating poetry-creating poetry", which not only refines the specific methods of feeling poetry from poetic life, but also makes people feel a higher realm of life step by step from shallow to deep. Such a structure, its significance gradually appears, its purpose gradually becomes clear and fascinating, which makes readers' feelings spiral up and finally obtains a richer rational understanding of "feeling poetry" It is suggested that the original text be revised as follows.

Change the text, it feels very poetic.

Some of us always complain to God: We gave Tao Yuanming a colorful paradise, but let him shuttle through dust and waste gas every day; Yu Dafu left him a poetic autumn, but his eyes were covered with bricks; Give Li Lewei a "castle in the air" that exists in the secular world but is full of fairy tales, but only give yourself a cold wall ... Is there really no poem in real life? No, actually, we also live in a poetic place. However, if you want to feel poetic, you must polish your eyes, open your heart and paint the poetic sky with your heart.

To feel poetry, we must first polish our eyes and discover the infinite poetry around us. The ancient city of Fenghuang, located in a corner, has been ignored by Xiangxi people for generations. Shen Congwen, who walked out of the border town, painted a poetic border town painting with a tube of Tuojiang green and a petal of mountain flowers, which was vividly displayed in front of the world. Zhangjiajie, surprisingly beautiful and handsome, has been sleeping in the eyes of villagers for many years. However, a Hong Kong photographer opened its desolate and cold silence with his keen eyes, and the loud "click" sound merged into a moving poem, which shocked the hearts of the world.

As Rodin said, there is no lack of beauty in life, but the lack of eyes to find beauty. Perhaps, finding them needs a pair of aesthetic eyes closely related to culture, taste and accomplishment, which seems out of reach, but what's the harm? When I got up in the morning, I saw a bird flying over the window and dropping dew on the tree. On the way to school, I saw a new leaf on the tree by the roadside, trembling slightly; At first glance, a white sail on the opposite river shines in the sun ... Open your eyes wide, do you see the infinite poetry around you?

Feel the poetic life, but also open your heart and enjoy the poetry in life. Life is like climbing a mountain. If you only concentrate on climbing the mountain and only care about the ultimate goal of the top of the mountain, then along the way, flowers and plants will be regarded as obstacles, birds will be regarded as interference, and all these poetic things will be blocked by you.

In fact, a cup of bitter tea with an open mind can also produce poems. You can see that Su Shi, after the Wutai Poetry Case, can still tolerate all things and misfortunes in the world with an open mind, and his impetuous heart is gradually calmed down, so he has the leisure of "a reed is like a reed, at a loss" and the detachment of "a bamboo stick shoe is lighter than a horse, and a misty rain is a lifetime". It was when he let go of the frustration of officialdom that he gained something and really felt the infinite poetry of life. So, open your heart, the poem is in your fingers.

To feel poetic, we need to paint the poetic sky with our heart and create a poetic life. Tao Yuanming, when he fell into the dust net by mistake, was surrounded by the wind of flattery, and the dirty air blocked his bright eyes of "watching the court with pleasure". He resolutely broke through Peng Ze, planted chrysanthemum poems at the foot of Nanshan and under the east fence, sorted out his poems in the morning, and the moon lotus came home. The day when he got rid of officialdom and returned to the countryside was the time when he created and carefully described his poetic life.

Another example is Helen Keller, a great woman. She lives in a quiet, flat and poetic world, but she "listens" to the gentle songs that trickle through her fingers, "watches" the red flowers and green grass, blue sky and white clouds around her … and then scatters love into people's hearts. She opened up her own poetic world and decorated it with poems.

Poetry is a feeling that seems far away from you, but as long as you are willing to discover, enjoy and create, poetry will always accompany you and stay in your heart.

Fourthly, the fan-shaped structure is like a folding fan, which can be opened and closed freely with a certain point at the top of the handle as the hinge. The sub-argument and the central argument of the discussion are in a fan-shaped state. Under the premise of sticking to the central idea, the author can think for thousands of years and see through Wan Li. When writing, it can be roughly divided into two situations: (1) decomposing arguments. Sub-arguments are parallel and in a parallel relationship. Separate several parallel sub-arguments from the central argument, which in turn supports the central argument. Some candidates often deviate from this track when arranging this structure, either several sub-arguments do not belong to the same angle, or there is a cross-inclusion relationship between several sub-arguments, so the written article does not form a reasonable plate structure, and it is not a logical article. (2) The juxtaposition of arguments. For example, Mr. Wu Han's article "Talking about the Spirit of Bone" puts forward the central argument that "China people have the spirit of bone" at the beginning of the article, and then the author discusses it from three angles: based on the story of Wen Tianxiang's refusal to demote the Yuan Dynasty, the argument is demonstrated from the angle of "wealth cannot be immoral"; With the story of out-of-touch, this paper demonstrates the argument from the perspective of "being poor and motionless"; Based on the story of Wen Yiduo angrily denouncing the enemy, this paper demonstrates this argument from the perspective of "power and unyielding"

Please look at the following examinee's composition on "Motion".

■ [Sick article] moved everywhere

Moved like a pair of gentle hands, gently plucking the strings in our hearts, those lingering notes have the lightest body, and the breeze gently falls into every inch of land.

The touch of the sky

I often think of a lonely bird. It hissed in the stormy waves, threw the stone in its mouth into the rough sea, and then flew to the shore like lightning. ...

Later people called it jingwei. I don't know how much perseverance it takes. The weak birds are in sharp contrast to the roaring sea. However, even if it is doomed to tragedy, it will never give up. When the inner rock cracks the gap, emotions arise.

The touch of the ocean

The ocean is sometimes our friend and sometimes our enemy. I think, if the ocean has feelings, it will be shocked by something, such as the fisherman many years ago and the fish.

That must be the most incredible battle in the ocean. The fisherman caught the big fish and let go of the paddle with both hands, but the boat was still moving forward-it turned out that although the fish was hooked by the hook, it didn't mean to surrender. Fishermen are deadlocked with fish whose strength is beyond imagination

The fisherman named Santiago became a symbol. That's the most unforgettable story about the ocean. The surging waves are moving emotions.

Touch of the wall

A man dug up the wall to decorate his house, only to find a live gecko with its tail nailed. The man wants to know how he can survive with his tail nailed. How does it prey? When another gecko with food appeared, the man suddenly realized.

After listening to this story, my eyes lit up. It turns out that the sun is not far away, because love is always there.

I think, whether it is the blue sky, the vast ocean, or a corner close at hand, there are touching seeds buried.

We will feel happy when we are touched everywhere.

■ Pulse

The corresponding concepts of "sky" and "ocean" should be "earth" instead of "wall", so the three angles selected in the original text did not form a reasonable sector, which became a serious injury in this paper (the selected example is also illogical, because the gecko can escape even if it breaks its tail). The revised article should involve "land, sea and air" and highlight the theme word "everywhere" from three levels of the same angle. In this way, three cases can be stitched into an organic whole to discuss the same central argument together. The underlined words should be modified as follows.

Change the words to the touch of the earth

The earth has the widest mind. When we give our hearts to the earth, we can feel a faint touch, just like the melancholy young man who pushed a wheelchair over the wet soil many years ago, and his heart was embedded in the rutted soil. He later became famous in the world with an article "I and Ditan". Time is like water, but there is a force that is constant, because it is because the earth is frank and moving.

I think, whether it is the blue sky, the vast ocean or the vast land under our feet, there are touching seeds buried.

We should feel happy when we are touched everywhere.

Five, the so-called article structure refers to the collocation and arrangement of the various components of the article. Transition is the most basic structure of argumentative writing. The beginning is the beginning, raising a topic or pointing to an idea; Undertaking is to undertake and discuss around topics or viewpoints; Turn, that is, change, after the discussion, change the angle and further discuss the point of view; Combination is the end, in which opinions are summarized or solutions are proposed.

In students' practice, they often can "ascend", "inherit" and "combine", but they can't make a beautiful turn. Some students think they have proved their argument, so why bother? I don't know that a beautiful "turn around" can make the argument more substantial and the reasons more sufficient, thus making the point more prominent. For example, if we can talk about it from the perspective of history and real life, the content of the article will not only be more comprehensive, but also more convincing. For another example, if the example method is used up and the reason can be explained in another way, then the article is both factual and reasonable. In a word, the article has reached a higher level with an easy "turn". Please look at the following example.

■ [Sick Text] Reject temptation

The alarm clock has been ringing for a long time, but I just can't bear to climb out of the warm bed and think, "It doesn't matter if I sleep a little longer." When I got up with a yawn and a stretch, I found that more than half of the morning reading time had passed.

There will be a math exam tomorrow, but the magazine in my hand is so beautiful that I threw a pen and plunged into the novel. As a result, the next day's exam was "Hang the red lantern high".

There is a price reduction promotion in the shopping center. I was secretly happy and bought a lot of "cheap and good" things. Who knows that they are "beyond the golden jade, they are defeated", which really makes me complain.

We are punished for sleepiness, ashamed for laziness, and regretful for greed. In a word, we are tempted. There are too many temptations in life, and we are still young. We can't give up tomorrow's beauty because of temptation, nor can we stop moving forward because of temptation. Therefore, we must refuse the temptation.

(5) Temptation is like a jar of old wine, which can give us a hearty pleasure and a mess; Temptation is like an online game, which can give us bizarre stimulation and also give us a sense of emptiness in wasting time.

6. Faced with the temptation of wine, games and dreams, people like Zhang Zishan, Hu Changqing and Chen Xitong forgot their initial vows, abandoned their pursuit of self, abandoned their sense of responsibility and became sinners of the people. What's more, some so-called scientific researchers who refine white powder for drug lords, some so-called economists who sell dog meat for individual corporate giants … They were tempted and human beings paid the price of bloodshed.

There are too many temptations in life, and those who can't resist them will eventually fall under the pomegranate skirt of temptation, even endangering society and mankind, and become sinners of history, so we should be a thoughtful person and a will person.