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There are often some details in life that we ignore, and some things fall short because of one detail; In life, we are often moved by some details, thus realizing the love and warmth of this world. What are the details in life that you will never forget? Have you ever been sad about some details? Have you ever been moved by some details? What do you want to say most in the face of details?

Please write an article on details.

Requirements: ① Self-made topic ② The style is not limited, about 3,800 words.

Writing instruction

Details are tiny components of the whole, or links that are easily overlooked in the system. In a sense, life is made up of details, and we often pay a heavy price for not paying attention to some details, such as misspelling a word or miscalculating a number. We will often be moved by some details, such as a warm word and a subtle move. Behind the details is life, emotion and action. Rivers and seas do not choose small streams, so they can be deep. "What is said is the importance of details.

Thought is the most important factor in the success or failure of topic composition. Some candidates think that the topic composition can be done as long as it does not deviate from the topic. In fact, topic composition needs profound thinking just like other compositions. If you want to have profound thoughts, you must understand the connotation of the topic, put the topic in the context of reading, life and society, do some serious thinking, and then find an ideal angle to write.

In Wang Zhongqiu's book "Details Decide Success or Failure", there is a thought-provoking example. Shanghai Metro 1 Line was designed by Germans, and Line 2 was designed by ourselves. Shanghai is located in East China, and the terrain is only a little higher than the sea level on average. In summer, rain often traps some buildings. German designers noticed this detail, so every outdoor exit of the subway 1 line was designed with three steps to enter the subway entrance. You must go up three steps and then get down to the subway station. These three simple steps can prevent rainwater from flowing backwards in rainy days, thus reducing the flood control pressure of the subway. In fact, the flood control facilities on the 1 line have almost never been used. Because of the lack of these steps, Metro Line 2 was flooded in rainy days, which caused huge economic losses. We often think that Germans are a bit rigid, but it is precisely because of their rigorous and meticulous work attitude and habits that they pay attention to details.

Our traditional thinking has always thought that details are not important, and "big things are not trivial" was once a word we were proud of. Some people say that in China, there are many people who want to do big things, but few people are willing to do small things; We don't lack great strategists, what we lack is excellent executors; There is no shortage of various management rules and regulations. What is lacking is to implement the rules and regulations to the letter. These words deserve our deep thought. It is necessary to change the shortcomings of impetuousness, dabbling, and not asking for a very good solution, and advocate paying attention to details and doing small things with details. ...

In terms of content, we can write trivial things, ordinary but lasting touching details, stories about great men who pay attention to details, bad consequences caused by neglecting details in a market economy, and success brought by paying attention to details. All details can be transferred to the pen. But remember, these details must be meaningful, interesting and closely related to social life. Never write details for the sake of writing details.

In writing, it can be written as prose, narrative, argumentative and novel. However, when combining materials, it is necessary to highlight the details, either by selecting several life segments to highlight one or several details, or by taking a certain detail as a clue to conceive; If you write an argumentative essay, you must have a clear point of view, grasp the details of a certain aspect and make a reasonable argument.

In short, no matter what form it takes, we should focus on the topic properly, expound the deep connotation of "details" and show positive value orientation.

[Example 1]

It is often only the details that move people.

Xia Jingjing, Class 3, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

Details are mother's greetings when she comes home from school, father says "go to bed early" when he finishes his homework, the teacher asks you whether you understand or not, and the detailed notes handed over by a friend after he is ill. The details are small, but very touching.

We are all just ordinary people, and sometimes we can only be considered mediocre. Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series.

Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament. It's just the details, not only the details, but also the affection behind the details themselves.

Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, the two snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if they had caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas in a casual moment. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course they have walked together and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". What cool and affectionate details.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back.

We can't hope that life will be great, we just want to make the details better. "In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in details, just like mothers, fathers, teachers, friends and lovers.

[Brief comments on examples]

This is an exam composition, with a score of 57. The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life come into our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. Through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, the details are further highlighted, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun. The full text is fluent in writing, beautiful in sentences and endless in meaning.

[Example 2]

Anatomical details

Hu Wenwen, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province.

Once, when a meteor crossed the starry sky, I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story. But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life.

The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success. Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm.

Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. Zhu Ziqing's details are looming in the background. The details are hidden in the background. Affection is hidden in "I miss my dear ones more every festive season", friendship is planted and blossomed in the details, and love is nurtured in the details. ...

Accumulate small details in your study and pay attention to small details in your work, and your life will be more substantial and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been trying to find your miracle and ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, and with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope. One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn the nourishment of life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life!

[Brief comments on examples]

We can't ignore the details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should grasp the details, dissect the details and light the fire of hope in life. The full text is profound and full of power.

[Example 3]

Details-the source of beauty and eternity

3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

People say, short as morning dew, fleeting when the sun clears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day. The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power.

We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the blocks that make up the pyramid, which are the sleepers when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny. Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people.

There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity. But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there were no complicated calculus and exquisite syllogism, only thousands of seemingly ordinary calculations, inferences and proofs. Every calculation, inference or proof itself is very small, but it is these tiny details that have contributed to the breakthrough and leap in the history of human science. There is no success without details, and there is no eternity without details.

Some people say that details are just a fragment in the evolution of things, which is true. But even so, who can deny the meaning of the details? Can a thing or thing give people a sense of beauty without any details that make it up?

Chernyshevski famously said: Beauty is life. In other words, beauty is made up of bits and pieces in life, and details are the source of beauty. "There is moonlight in the pine forest, crystal stone in the stream, whisper of the washerwoman coming home in the bamboo forest, and lotus leaves in front of the fishing boat." Every sentence in Wang Wei's poems is just a general description of the scenery, no matter which one is not a famous sentence. But together, they form the realm of painting in poetry, where poetry and Zen blend and scenes are intertwined.

It was Cao Xueqin's painstaking management and meticulous carving that made the immortal Dream of Red Mansions. Without his originality, how can the images of Jia Baoyu and Sister Lin be so deeply rooted in the hearts of the people by showing the characters' personalities in countless details?

Details are the source of beauty, which makes every tree and stone shine; Details are the saints of time, making fleeting things eternal. Friends, let's seize every detail of life and let life show its due glory!

[Brief comments on examples]

Life is short, everything is a moment, and there is a warning from the beginning. Where can I find a tree to freeze eternity? The author found the tree of details. Beauty is life, and details are the source of beauty. In this way, the author will have a good support for his writing, and then he will explain it, and everything will be logical. The full text is exquisite, beautiful and concise.

In fact, a good narrative can't be without wonderful details. The place that can best express the theme should be written to the extreme. How to do it without writing details? We also do things. Small details often reflect a lot. They reflect our style and our people. Our success or failure is often reflected in the details. There is a book called details determine success or failure. There is a composition topic in the 2005 college entrance examination: critical. Is to let you see the big picture from the small.

You used to capture details around the theme, but now you have to capture details first, and then reflect the theme. If you capture a detail, you can finish the work. This is undoubtedly an intensive training for your ability to capture details, because if you can't capture a detail, you really don't know how to write this composition. If you can't capture a detail, you will undoubtedly get a miserable score.

Example:

A drop of dew can reflect the whole sun.

Author: Sun

A senior reporter left Hong Kong and went to Wuhan for an important meeting via Shenzhen.

That day, when he went through the exit formalities in Hong Kong, it went smoothly. After the formalities, the Hong Kong man in uniform tidied up his papers politely, and then returned them to him from behind the big glass-with both hands, saying, "Thank you." The informant found it very useful and set off in a good mood.

When going through the entry and exit formalities in Shenzhen, the reporter handed the documents into the big glass with both hands. Similarly, the formalities were quickly completed. However, when the Shenzhen man in uniform returned his certificate, he threw it out instead of handing it out. He eagerly said, "Next!" " The senior reporter packed up the newspaper and hesitated a little, vaguely missing the feeling of being in Hong Kong.

The reporter was invited to attend the 3rd World Chinese Media Forum in Wuhan, and the local government arranged the highest standard reception. On the day of the meeting, there were many people at the venue and the staff were very busy. The reporter felt a little thirsty and motioned the waitress to pour a glass of water. As a result, the waitress whispered, "Wait a minute." The reporter was very surprised. Why can't mainland waitresses be polite when guests ask for tea?

This senior reporter is Mr. Chen Xitian, the current editor-in-chief of Hong Kong Commercial Daily. He is the first person to report Comrade Xiaoping's southern tour, and he has super insight. Teacher Chen felt the differences in soft environment among Hong Kong, Shenzhen and Wuhan, which happened to have a certain corresponding relationship with the degree of economic prosperity. He believes that Hong Kong is an international metropolis with the best soft environment quality; Shenzhen is a new coastal city, followed by the quality of soft environment; Wuhan is an inland metropolis eager for development, and the quality of soft environment is even worse. All these feelings stem from the details that Hong Kong people "make friends", Shenzhen people "abandon" people to do business, and Wuhan people have no principle to make people "wait".

Details "theme composition and model essay.

Wang Junfeng 224233, Tangyang Middle School, Dongtai City

Read the following text and write as required.

A small courier company is called "hot wheels". The courier rushed from the north to the east, sweating and panting. In order to ensure the safety during SARS, he wore a mask when meeting customers according to company regulations. He took the express in his hand and gave it to the customer. "Thank you for waiting, please keep it." The small "hot wheels" company was able to win customers because it successfully grasped the details.

Exercise requirements: Please use "details" as the topic. Candidates can use or not use the above materials in the article. They should decide their own ideas, choose their own styles and draw up their own topics, not less than 800 words. Plagiarism is not allowed.

At that moment, I really wanted to cry.

Yang Junmei, Class 3 (12)

I am infatuated with the warmth of sunshine, but it burns my eyes. I tried to smile, but some crystals still fell between my fingers. Are these tears? Will I die for this? ...

This is not my first cat, but it is the first cat I will never forget. It has its own litter of kittens, and it doesn't like to run around as much as before. It always lies quietly in the "small house" we designed for it. Seeing their "family of four" always makes me feel unspeakable. It licks its baby from time to time. Usually my keen eyes are gentle only at this time. During that time, the first thing I did when I came back was to see my cat. The kitten hasn't opened her eyes yet, because she is too young to live on her mother. When I was still immersed in their joy, I just didn't expect that they suddenly fell ill and came so fast that I couldn't accept it. At first, they didn't eat or drink, but they refused to leave the kitten. We all like it very much. No matter what we call it, it won't go. My mother bought some fresh fish specially and made it with the best seasoning. It just smelled it and didn't want to eat it. It hasn't eaten or drunk for two days, but it still insists on feeding the kitten. The situation is getting worse and worse. I often bleed in my mouth and can't walk. I don't know how sad I am when I look at it. I've been crying. Hold it. Mother put it in one room, but put the kitten in another place, so that they were separated so that it wouldn't breast-feed the kitten. It struggled in my arms and refused to part with the kitten, but it lost its strength. It leans against the closed door, calls in a hoarse voice, and looks at us begging, which is the most delicate and pitiful gloom in the world. But in order to keep it alive, I am still cruel. I didn't let him go to the kitten's room. I have cried. I don't know why I always want to cry. I dare not look into his eyes again. I don't want to see his weakness for the time being. God, please save my cat! Please help it!

The next day, I got up early to look, but I didn't find it. I'm in a hurry