600-word composition in the sixth grade of primary school: taking pictures.

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This composition is about 600 words in grade six of primary school. The title is "Taking Pictures". Everyone is welcome to contribute. Taking pictures at 6 o'clock last night, I suddenly said to my mother, "Shall we go out and play for a while?" So the family came to the Thousand Lily Photo Studio together. As soon as we entered the door, we were warmly received. A beautiful sister poured us tea. What's more, dad and she are good friends. Do you think she will serve us more thoughtfully?

Drinking good tea and chatting, my sister helped me choose a beautiful makeup artist. I like her very much. She makes up very carefully, even a hair needs to be combed well. Then she started taking pictures. Maybe she's too nervous to cooperate with the photographer. She is either stiff or her facial expression is not rich and unnatural. I had no choice but to ask the photographer to design the action for me, but then I remembered a good action, which felt quite good. In fact, it is not difficult to swing!

Maybe I was so excited that I forgot to change. By the time I remembered, I had taken many photos. I hurried downstairs. I didn't expect my sister to have the clothes ready. After wearing it, I am much more beautiful and my heart is more beautiful. Then I continued to take pictures, because I put on beautiful clothes and felt more confident. Crossing your legs for a while, posing for a while, and sticking your ass for a while. I'm so happy. The photographer thinks I've improved a lot. The last suit I changed was a Japanese kimono. I didn't expect kimono to suit me very well. I like it!

Finally, I learned this action from TV: a stride. On the way home, I was still wondering when I could take pictures again, hehe!

Maybe this is because girls love to brag!

Teacher's comment: This composition describes an interesting experience of a young author taking photos in a photo studio. The author makes the cause, process and result of the incident clear, so that readers can understand the whole process. In particular, the process of taking pictures is described in detail, so that readers can see the unnatural "I" that they enjoy from the beginning to the end. The composition language is fluent and clear, and the little author's language expression ability is very good, which vividly reproduces the fun and fun of taking pictures. (Xue Le China: Teacher Rodina) 20 10-4-8 10:27:00