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When it comes to writing in the examination room, many people have an inertia thinking that there is a fixed test-taking routine and students must write according to the pattern. But in fact, in recent years, the composition proposition and marking of Chinese subjects in Shanghai college entrance examination are actively guiding candidates to express their true feelings and write insightful opinions. Today, some senior three candidates are specially invited to recall the examination papers. Therefore, we are presented with different interpretations of the same topic, and the characteristics of "post-90 s" students' independent thinking and broad vision are fully demonstrated through words. The composition in the examination room can actually be wonderful!

First article

From important to more important

There are as many people in the world as there are definitions of "importance". Everyone is doing what he thinks is important, whether it is stability in this world or the pursuit of fame and fortune, but if you stand higher, maybe you will find that there are always more important things in this world.

It is difficult for people to get rid of selfishness, so what they try to do is often what they think is important, and the immediate interests are the foundation of living. But have you ever asked yourself, do you think the important meaning really comes from your heart, rather than the decisions made by the outside world for you? In today's materialistic world, does the meaning of "importance" need to be re-examined?

In this standards-oriented society, people always think that "value" can be measured by some simple standards, such as: cars, houses, tickets ... realistic materials are very important; Ideal, personality, soul ... don't seem so important; The heart of heaven and earth, the lives of the people, and going to a holy school seem to have nothing to do with themselves, and naturally there is nothing important ... But Liang Wendao said that in his view, the more important things in life are to believe in ideals, listen to the call of the heart, even if you do something seemingly useless and spend some seemingly useless time, all this is to keep an opportunity to surpass yourself outside the known. Some great changes in life come from these more important things. More important things may not be important for the time being, but they are by no means eternal; Maybe it's not important to individuals, but it doesn't mean it's not important to groups.

More importantly, don't forget to live, don't live in the world around us, don't live a boring life itself because of blind pursuit, but stand up from the heavy historical dust, raise your head from trivial daily life, bow to your inner self, live a warm and real life, believe in your ideals and realize them. What's more important is not to succumb to the corner of reality, but to believe in yourself, take the world as your own responsibility and forge ahead at your pillow.

Looking back on China a hundred years ago, the sages have lost their way. They are divorced from the common concept of "importance" in the minds of ordinary people. I believe there are more important things. They built an arsenal to resist foreign aggression, established a school that hoped for the future, and introduced Mr. Desai, which brought the light of rejuvenation to this ancient nation. Now that the hand of time has fallen on our generation, can we still pick up those more important things?

Difficulties in reality are inevitable, but there must always be someone who can shoulder the mission and work hard for it, so we can't be cynical and complain that nothing can change. We should look for the most ardent faith, believe in ideals, and burn the lamp, even if it is only the light in the sky, we will not give up halfway.

It is true that more important things need to be watched, but the important things we have determined at this moment also need to be completed. Only by doing important things well can we have the ability to think and practice those more important things, so as not to fall into the danger of emptiness.

We have nothing but clinging to "more important" things, such as spirit and ideals. In the process of pursuit, difficulties may be accompanied by suffering, but the vigorous mind will never be sealed by the dust of life.

Comment on this year's Shanghai college entrance examination composition questions. The focus of studying students is not epistemology, but actually a question of values. In recent years, the younger generation's group pursuit of financial real estate, civil servants and other positions reflects a biased social value orientation to some extent. In the bustle of tens of thousands of people vying for the "single-plank bridge", "more important things" are often left behind. However, the young author of this article can take the famous words of Zhang Zai, a philosopher in the Northern Song Dynasty, as his cultural ideal and ask about the value, meaning and spiritual inheritance of life, which shows his unique consciousness and feelings. It is the most gratifying thing for me to see that there are still outstanding students among the post-90 s students who can inherit the essence of Confucianism and the spirit of the May 4th Movement.

The second article

Which is more important, fish or bear's paw?

I often think of Mencius' remarks about fish and bear's paw, life and righteousness. In the world, it seems that there are always more important things besides important things. It is not only the turbulent and controversial Warring States period that has such a difficult choice. The more important and important fork in the road will always exist, and you often can't have your cake and eat it.

The pressure of life now is invisible but everywhere. Out of helplessness, in the pursuit of stability and utility, people gradually weaken their temper and emotions, often try to do what they think is very important in front of them, turn a blind eye to everything that happens outside the window, and just seek a comfortable life.

It is true that a stable life is generally regarded as an important "fat fish" by modern people, and there is always a more important "bear's paw" in a pluralistic society, which requires us to make "more important" choices.

I think the most important thing is to be true to yourself before dealing with the world. The portrait of Master Hongyi carved by Mr. Wu Weishan is thin, with a feeling of coldness in the world and full of vicissitudes. Master Hongyi's first half life can be described as colorful and full of flowers. The rest of my life is like a landscape painting for everyone. The mountain is cold and thin, plain and clean, and safe. He is frank, so he has a rich inner temperament. Take off the hypocritical mask of utilitarian society, I am lonely for me. In Master Hongyi's view, the life of "mixed sorrow and joy" is more exciting than the previous life.

Of course, I can't live alone. I am a social person and a member of society. Kong Ziyun: "The benevolent loves others", and is close to parents and everything in the world. Inner love is especially important. Once upon a time, were we too busy making a living to take care of our parents who were already covered with frost? Have you ever neglected the fallen old man around you because of your selfishness? Does the fast-paced life make you forget the creatures and scenery around you? I think of the man who knelt down to shoot flowers, Loy. A movie "The Dust Settled" made him famous, but he was not tempted by the fish of fame and fortune, so he resolutely gave up the fish and took the bear's paw and his inner love. He invited the whole group to drink, wearing a hat askew and singing Tibetan toast songs. In Mexico, I want to buy a coral necklace for my mother to satisfy the dream of a Tibetan woman.

You can't have your cake and eat it. Facing the stable and utilitarian fish and your true nature, I take the "more important" bear's paw! What about you, dear friend?

Comments Candidates endow "fish" and "bear's paw" with a new concept of the times, and make a choice that they think is "more important" between "fish" with stable utility and "bear's paw" with true temperament. Based on the reality of today's society, this paper thinks and understands the remarks of the sages and has its own experience. The discussion in the article is like a conversation between friends about the past and the present, which is calmly imposed on others without preaching. It can be seen that speculation must be "reasonable", but at the same time, we must also pay attention to "restraint."

The third article

There is always "which is the most important" in my heart.

1994 The Pulitzer Prize-winning photo "Hungry Sudan" was a sensation. It recorded such a picture: a thin African girl was dying, lying on the ground, unable to move. Behind her, a vulture is eyeing, waiting for an opportunity to pounce ... This photo quickly attracted the attention of the whole world. But at the same time, it also attracted public doubts and criticisms: Why didn't photographer Carter lend a helping hand? As a dedicated photojournalist, Carter instinctively pressed the shutter, which brought him the highest achievement in his career, but it also became the root of his later suicide. Because as a person, the remorse of conscience has been pestering him and making him miserable.

This cruel story tells us that different people have different understandings of "important things". The same person will make different judgments on "important things" in different situations or at different stages of life. Such examples abound in life. Some people choose a stable and plain life path and envy their peers who have made great achievements through adventure, but they may not know that the latter also have a dull feeling when their career is difficult and almost collapsed. Some people neglect filial piety when they struggle for their careers when they are young. When people reach middle age, although they have a successful career, they can only look at the relics of their loved ones and sigh. It can be seen that when people do what they think is important, they often neglect more important things intentionally or unintentionally, without knowing it at that time. Therefore, while persistently pursuing a goal, we also need a voice to constantly remind ourselves: "There are more important things!"

The "only child" who is cared for everywhere in our generation is happy, but we are also "unfortunate"-we often don't know how to compromise and empathize, and are obsessed with personal gains and losses. If we go out of the family, out of the campus and look at the outside world, we will find that many people are still suffering and need help and care. Often think about "there are more important things"? May help us stay away from the swamp of egoism. Compassion for others will dispel the dark clouds of our personal troubles. Because we will find how small they are compared with the vastness of the sky!

"More important things", like the bright stars above us, are sought after but hard to reach. It is not something that an individual can comprehend in a moment, nor is it eternal. It is not advisable to be too persistent and forget the road under our feet, but we will not lose the ability of self-reflection because of asking ourselves from time to time, and we will also have respect for others and the world.

The comments on this article can't touch sensitive issues, but they are profound and thought-provoking. In today's exam, such an article can give full play to its advantages, which is both stable and eye-catching.

The example given at the beginning adds a lot of color to the article. Is it important to be a journalist's professional ethics or a person's ethics? Suddenly, the abstract "important and more important" has become a heavy, serious and realistic interpersonal problem. In fact, many students have seen this news picture, but why can't they remember it during the exam? This is the sensitivity accumulated by reading and thinking. Using the impact of the sense of picture is a very useful composition technique. Students should learn to write such an artistic argumentative essay.

In fact, in the process of reviewing the college entrance examination, many schools have done such a topic as "down-to-earth, looking up at the stars". However, even if it has been done, in the narrative, it is still necessary to judge the accumulation of ideas and the tempering of language roots. The language of this article is concise and elegant. The 800-word essay talks about social phenomena from the issue of human relations, and then talks about "Our Generation", which is flowing and very delicate, reflecting the excellent writing control ability of young authors.

The fourth article

Responsible, not blind.

We are all just mortals in the world.

I think most people have a heroic dream in their hearts and dream of saving the world. There are indeed too many shortcomings and injustices in this world. Negative news is always endless, enough to drown people, and people can't wait to rush to find a solution, but their ability is really limited, so they become more impatient, more uneasy and more anxious.

There is no shame in admitting that you are limited. Sometimes, when you try your best to do the important things in your heart, you are helping to solve the "more important things" in others' hearts.

It is certainly good to have the mind and ambition to help everyone in the world, just as Lu Xun abandoned medicine for the future of China, and deeply influenced several generations with his sharp brushwork. Just like Hus, president of Prague University in the15th century, he devoted himself to the religious reform in order to awaken people's ignorance. Even if he was brutally burned at the stake, he had no regrets. For the sake of more important things for all mankind, they take their own bodies as guiding stones and take us into a brighter new world.

There is no shame in not having such a mind or ability. Have you seen the Dalian bus driver who saved the lives of all the passengers on the bus, and the primary school principal who died in the American school shooting? They are just faithfully performing their duties, but they have done their work to the extreme, made the most important thing at the expense of their own lives, and saved the hopes and support of many families.

The people who are most fearful and worthy of our vigilance are those who are incapable and blindly fantasize. Czech writer President Javier put it well, "Blind fanaticism turns rationality into dust and life becomes simple. It seems that trying to save suffering is actually increasing suffering. When it is finally discovered, it is often too late. "

I thought of Safonarola and wanted to lead the people to overthrow the rule of medici family, who had been in charge of Florence for many years, for what he called "more important things". When he finally did all this, he burned a lot of art treasures in Florence, pushing religious extremism and asceticism, which made those who had supported him unbearable and turned to overthrow him. I can't simply comment on Safonora's merits and demerits. After all, he is too complicated, but it is undeniable that his blind fanaticism has set back Florence's literature and art for decades.

After all, people like Safonora are a minority, and more people in life are not blindly fanatical, but blindly anxious. This world bears a heavy load. The materialistic society gives us too many choices and desires. It seems that there are always more important things to do and better things to look forward to. But have you ever thought about how to do more important things if you can't do the things at hand well? The world is so big and there are so many choices, but few belong to us. However, as long as you go all out to do the most important thing in your heart, your life will definitely shine.

When commenting on the composition in the examination room, you should conceive a good article within a limited time, which not only reflects your unique perspective, but also reflects many years of reading experience and thinking. This book "Full of Responsibility but Not Blind" really belongs to this kind of masterpiece. The author believes that if we do the important things well in our own mind, it will also help solve the "more important things" in others' minds, and our ideas are unique. The opening sentence "We are just mortals in the world" tells us that people in the world are ordinary people, and both Lu Xun and the most beautiful driver are doing what they think is the most important thing. Is there nothing more important? Fame and fortune? Social status? Successful career? These external things seem important, but in fact they are just "clouds". In the noisy society and impetuous times, we are on the run, but the little author clearly tells us that as long as we go all out to do the most important thing in our hearts, life will surely shine with its own dazzling light.

The fifth article

More importantly, a pair of discerning eyes can judge.

In life, we are always doing what we think is important, but there are more important things in life. In my opinion, there is nothing absolutely important in the world, the importance is relative, and the important things need a pair of eyes.

What is the most important thing? Different people will give different answers. But no matter what you choose, you must make unremitting efforts and struggle for it and be responsible for your future. In middle age, Jobs went to India after suffering setbacks and was baptized there. In his view, adjusting mentality is far more important than hard work. He made the right choice and then stood at the peak of his career again.

Everyone has the right to do what he thinks is important, but don't forget the conscience and responsibility of society. When famous stars speak for fake and shoddy goods time and again, and when some celebrities use the earthquake disaster to promote themselves, I wonder if they have asked themselves, "Which is more important, money, reputation or social responsibility? Have you trampled on the bottom line of being a man in pursuit of what you think is important? " Indeed, judging what is important requires a pair of discerning eyes, but there are different levels of understanding of the word "important". How to treat "importance" depends on a person's chest and arms.

Sometimes, "important things" are not unique, and there will be several important things at a certain stage. It is of course the most important for students to study hard and get excellent grades, but it is not the only important thing. Cultivating personal ability is as important as developing a correct outlook on life. Don't listen to things outside the window, concentrate on reading sage books, just like a frog sitting in a well watching the sky, enjoying only limited scenery. Therefore, appropriate participation in beneficial social practice activities not only regulates the body and mind, but also cultivates the ability. Why not? Learning is very important, so is ability. Doing several important things together in this way reflects the broad mind and vision of contemporary youth.

"Important things" are not static. Even the same person will change in different periods. This timely change also shows a person's wisdom and mind. "Looking back at the bleak place, there is no rain or shine", which is the open-mindedness of Dongpo laymen. Political storms will degrade him again and again, but Dongpo's optimistic attitude cannot be extinguished. He understands the importance of loving the people and helping the poor and the suffering of relegation, and the importance of preserving body and mind. Know what is the most important thing in different periods of life, change your mind in time and wave your sleeves, even if suffering is a song. What kind of wisdom and generosity this is!

There are many important things in the world, and we always need to judge with wise eyes. If we try our best to accomplish an important thing that is beneficial to society, then we have accomplished many important things in the world, and our life will be full and beautiful.

College entrance examination composition review is a kind of abnormal writing. The writing time is short, and the marking is also completed in a short time. Just like gymnastics in competitive sports, the referee will immediately highlight the main points after several sets of movements are completed. Therefore, candidates should increase the difficulty coefficient as much as possible within their own abilities and complete the movements in a standardized, coherent and elegant way.

The difficulty coefficient of this article is really high. The author sets the theme as "what is important and needs a pair of discerning eyes", and then a series of actions: what is the most important, different people will give different answers; How to treat "importance" depends on the individual's chest and arms; "Important things" are not unique, and will be different at different stages; "Important things" are not immutable, and how to change them requires wisdom; If you work hard to accomplish an important thing that is beneficial to society, you will accomplish many important things in the world. These sub-arguments are interlocking, advancing layer by layer, and the discussion is well-founded. It is not easy to write such an article in a short time.

Article 6

What are the more important things?

I am a dog lover, and I hate those who abuse and kill dogs for profit. So I am committed to animal protection and try my best to save and love those lovely dogs. However, when I was searching for some information about animal protection organizations on the Internet, I came across such a comment: Why should people save dogs? Why don't so many poor and helpless people in the world save them? This inevitably caused me to ponder. I think it is important to protect dogs, but it seems more important to help people who lead a miserable life. Then, how to choose and balance between them is a problem that we should always think about.

The seemingly more important things in the world are bottomless, and we can't do all the "more important things" well. So we should pay attention to what we think is important in front of us, step by step, and then look forward to what seems more important. Only in this way can we live a good life smoothly.

Like a small clerk. If he thinks about doing great things all day long, but has no intention to do his job well, he will not be promoted, but will be "fired" Monroe, commander-in-chief of Wu Dong in the Three Kingdoms period, was once an illiterate armed teenager. When everyone thought it was more important to help the master conquer the world, he devoted himself to what he thought was important. In this way, he studied hard behind closed doors, and Lu Su's sentence "Don't look at me for three days" proved that his choice was very correct. Later, crossing the river in white and catching Guan Yu was a "more important thing" after he studied hard. It is undoubtedly wise to succeed step by step like him. We should do the same, do the important things at hand first, and then do more important things.

However, the expectation and expectation of "more important things" is not desirable. We often say, "A soldier who doesn't want to be a general is not a good soldier." If that shop assistant doesn't have lofty goals, he will be a mediocre little shop assistant all his life. Jobs once said to Sculley, the youngest president of PepsiCo, "Do you want to sell sugar water all your life, or do you want to change the world?" Apparently, Sculley realized something like a dream. He has been doing what he thinks is important, so should he consider those "more important things", even things he never thought of before? Therefore, at the same time, we should also have the ability to predict and look forward to more important things and work hard towards this goal.

Fairy tales tell us that there are too many sorrows in this world for one heart to bear. And I want to say that there are too many "more important things" in this world, and we can't do all of them, nor can we do the most important thing at once. Only one step at a time, do what you think is important first, and then look at what looks more important, so as to do the important things well and then do the more important things well. ...

Dogs and lovers coexist. I will still devote myself to animal protection. When I have more financial resources and experience, I will try to do something more important at the same time.

Comments on this year's college entrance examination composition focuses on speculation. The author firmly grasps this feature and tries to find the relationship between "important" and "more important", instead of just talking about "more important things" according to the meaning of the material. The clever use of demonstrative pronouns and related words between paragraphs better embodies the word "speculation" The article completed in just one hour has clear thinking, concise language and rigorous structure, and the little things around him are handy with examples from all over the world, which reflects the author's thinking quality and expression level.

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